高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)【高效課堂+備課精研】 建議信課件

建議信Observe必修一Unit1ReadingforWriting---AletterofadviceObserve定義：建議信是就某一問(wèn)題提出看法、建議或忠告。建議信結(jié)構(gòu)Para.1:簡(jiǎn)介自己，點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信目的或意圖；Para.2:提出具體建議并說(shuō)明理由，切忌泛泛而談、不走心的理由；Para.3:希望建議得到采納，期待盡早回復(fù)。注意：目的簡(jiǎn)明扼要，建議切合實(shí)際，理由具有說(shuō)服力，語(yǔ)氣要禮貌當(dāng)先。Writing假定你是李華，你的筆友Amy最近寫(xiě)了一封e-mail給你，表達(dá)了因體重過(guò)重帶來(lái)的煩惱。請(qǐng)你安慰Amy，并給她建議，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)安慰；2.給出建議；3.你的祝福。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。AppreciationDearAmy,

Iamterribly/exceedinglysorrytohearthatyouareworried/upsetaboutyourexpandingwaistline.SoIamdroppingyouthelinetoofferyousomepracticalsuggestionstohelpyouout.

Iunderstandquitewellhowyoufeel.Butnowadays,itisnotunusualforusteenagerstobecomeoverweight.Actually,thingswillimproveifwefollowthesuggestionsbelow./Includedhereareseveralpiecesofadviceworthyofyourattention.Forastart,itishighlyrecommendedthatyoumakeitaregularpartofyourlifetodosomeexerciseonadailybasis,duringwhichyourfatandcalorieswillbeburnedefficientlyandeffectively.Ontopofthat,itishightimethatyoushouldkeepabalanceddiet.Eatingmorevegetablesandfruitwillbeofgreatbenefittoloseweight.Lastbutnotleast,moreimportanceshouldbeattachedtoourinnerbeautyratherthanourappearance.Ultimately,itismysincerehopethatmyrecommendationswillworkoutforyou.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours,LiHua13‘Tomakeitspecific.Tomakeitconvincing.Tomakeitrelevant.Writing假定你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友英國(guó)交換生Lily正在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。她發(fā)郵件向你訴說(shuō)了她的困擾：不適應(yīng)新的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境，很孤單。請(qǐng)給她回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解，給予安慰；2.提出建議并說(shuō)明理由;3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.不要逐字逐條翻譯，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2.字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。Writing審題：題材寫(xiě)作對(duì)象人稱與時(shí)態(tài)要點(diǎn)建議信英國(guó)交換生Lily1．表示理解，給予安慰；2．提出建議并說(shuō)明理由；3．希望建議被采納并期待回復(fù)。第二人稱/一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)Writing構(gòu)思：第一段第二段第三段表示理解，給予安慰提出建議并說(shuō)明理由希望建議被采納并期待回復(fù)目的+安慰建議+理由希望+祝愿Goldensentences1.表示理解安慰的句式1)Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.

我十分理解你現(xiàn)在的擔(dān)憂和難過(guò)。2)Itisnotunusualforsbtodosth.But,doingsthis+adj.andmakesit+adj.

todosth.3)Iamterribly/exceedinglysorrytohearthat...4)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning/regarding/withregardto...

我寫(xiě)此信來(lái)表達(dá)我關(guān)于……的觀點(diǎn)。5)Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...，andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.

對(duì)于你來(lái)信問(wèn)我關(guān)于……的事，現(xiàn)提供幾條建議。Haveatry寫(xiě)信目的+意圖：得知你很難適應(yīng)新學(xué)校，我寫(xiě)信給你一些建議。我希望以下的建議能對(duì)你有所幫助。(分詞作狀語(yǔ)，把信息來(lái)源、寫(xiě)信目的和希望結(jié)合起來(lái))你的杰作：_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Knowingthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtothenewschool,Iamwritingthislettertoofferyousomepracticalsuggestionswiththehopeofhelpingyouout.Goldensentences2.提建議的句式①I(mǎi)recommendthat...②Itisstrongly/highlyrecommendedthat....③

Itishightimethat...④Itisessential/vital/crucialforsbtodosth.⑤IfIwereyou,Iwoulddosth.Inthisway,Ican...⑥Itmightbeawise/good/wonderfulideato...⑦Ifeelitwouldbebeneficial/helpfulifyoucould...⑧Youmightaswellconsiderdoing...⑨Whynotdosth?Howabout...?HaveatryA)建議+理由：我認(rèn)為你可能需要與其他同學(xué)盡可能多地進(jìn)行交流，這樣的話，你們就能更好地了解彼此。(inwhichcase引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句把行動(dòng)和結(jié)果緊密結(jié)合起來(lái))你的杰作：_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifeelitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldsparemoretimetohavenicetalkswithyourclassmates,

inwhichcaseyoucouldhaveabetterunderstandingofeachother.HaveatryB)建議+理由：我強(qiáng)烈建議多參加活動(dòng)，這些活動(dòng)通常涉及到與其他學(xué)生的團(tuán)隊(duì)合作和互動(dòng)，因此有助于發(fā)展友好的關(guān)系。(

Itisstrongly/highlyrecommendedthat...句型與定語(yǔ)從句，whose引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，thusdoing...結(jié)合，表達(dá)措施與結(jié)果)你的杰作：_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itisstrongly/highlyrecommendedthatyoushouldparticipateinvarietiesofactivities,

whoseperposesareoftenassociatedwithteamworkandinteraction,thushelpingyouformfriendship.HaveatryC)建議+理由：如果我是你，我會(huì)出去參觀一些旅游景點(diǎn)，品嘗當(dāng)?shù)孛朗?，這定會(huì)有助于你更快適應(yīng)新環(huán)境。(虛擬語(yǔ)氣與Inthisway...結(jié)合，表達(dá)措施與結(jié)果)你的杰作：_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IfIwereyou,Iwouldgoouttovisitsomeplacesofattractionsandhaveatasteofloacaldelicacies/food.Inthisway,Icanquicklysettleintothenewenvironment.Goldensentences3.表示祝愿句式1)Iamafirmbelieverthat...2)Itismysincerehopethat...3)Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.

Thanks.

請(qǐng)仔細(xì)考慮我的建議，謝謝。4)

Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions/proposalshelpful/useful.

希望我的建議對(duì)你有幫助。Haveatry祝福+期望：我真誠(chéng)地希望我的建議對(duì)你有幫助。如果還有什么我可以幫忙的，請(qǐng)告訴我。你的杰作：_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyouwillfindmysuggestionshelpful.IfthereisanythingIcando,pleaseletmeknow.Theletterofadviceis

writtento…個(gè)人領(lǐng)導(dǎo)學(xué)習(xí)考試壓力大難以適應(yīng)新環(huán)境過(guò)度使用朋友圈擔(dān)心疫區(qū)的朋友容易煩躁發(fā)脾氣（2014安徽卷）選擇旅游的路線（2017北京卷）外國(guó)朋友學(xué)中文（2008全國(guó)卷II，2015四川卷）…圖書(shū)館藏書(shū)問(wèn)題校園不文明行為（2011浙江卷）…ClassificationPractice假設(shè)你是校英文報(bào)編輯李華，近期收到一封署名為Anxiety的求助信，在信中該同學(xué)表示由于考試臨近壓力劇增。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)回信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示安慰；2.提出建議；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Para.2考場(chǎng)作文分析ComfortAdvice?orTip1Separatecomfortfromadvice.Para.2Morecomfortthanadvice!Tip1Separatecomfortfromadvice.考場(chǎng)作文分析交際得體性Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount.Para.3

希望+祝愿Ihopemysuggestonswillbebeneficial/helpful/practicaltoyouandyoucanovercomeyourstresssoon.Ihopemyadvicewillturnoutbeneficial.Mayyoubecomemoreconfidentandlessstressedinthenearfuture.Tip2Expressyourwishesaccordingtothecontext.佳作欣賞點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，使用了多種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等，使用了豐富的詞匯和表達(dá)。全文銜接緊湊，達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的，但是若能將最后的祝愿進(jìn)行調(diào)整的話，文章會(huì)更完美。佳作欣賞點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，使用了非謂語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、名詞性從句等多種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯及表達(dá)。全文銜接自然，基本完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，若能將最后的祝愿進(jìn)行調(diào)整，文章會(huì)更優(yōu)秀。參考范文DearAnxiety,

I’msorrytoknowthatyouareexperiencingatoughtimenow.Actually,everyonewillencountersuchaperiodwhentheyareundergreatpressure,sothereisnoneedtoworrytoomuch.

Inmyopinion,sharingyourfeelingswithyourfriendsisawisechoiceasyoucanremoveyournegativeemotions.Anothereffectivesuggestionisthatyoushouldtakemorephysicalexercise,whichcanliftyourspirit.Futhermore,itisbeneficialforyoutokeepanoptimisticattitudetowardslifeaboutyourfuture.

Ihopemyadvicewillbeofbenefittoyou.Mayyougetridofyourtroublesoon.

Yours,

LiHuaAppreciation假定你是李華，得知美國(guó)現(xiàn)在新型冠狀肺炎病毒肆虐，請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)筆友Mark寫(xiě)一電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表達(dá)近況；

2.提出建議；

3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：新型冠狀肺炎

COVID-19

流行病epidemic/pandemic參考范文DearMark，How’severythinggoingwithyou?I’veheardfromthenewsthattheongoingworldwideepidemicofCOVID-19strikes/hitsAmericahard.Butproactive/preventivemeasuresstillcanbetakentofightagainstiteffectively.Mytoptipistowearmasksandmaintainthesocialdistance,becausethevirusescanspreadfrompersontopersonincloseproximity.Itisalsoimportanttowashhandsregularlyandthoroughlywithsoap,whichcankillviruses.Dostockyourcupboardswithsomeextrafoodtolower/reducethefrequencyofhangout.

Ihopethediseasecanbeundercontrolsoon.Staywell!

Yours,

LiHuaTip2Expressyourwishesaccordingtothecontext.Appreciation假如你是李華，就讀于某國(guó)際學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你就本校圖書(shū)館英語(yǔ)藏書(shū)方面存在的問(wèn)題給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表明寫(xiě)信目的；

2.指出存在問(wèn)題；

3.提供改進(jìn)建議。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考范文DearSir,Ihopeyoudon’tmindmewritingtopointoutsomeproblemsconcerningthecollectionofEnglishbooksinourlibrary.Forexample,thenumberoforiginalbooksislimitedandtheEnglishnewspapersandmagazinesareoutofdate.Toimprovethecondition,Ithinknotonlycanweappealtostudentstodonatesomeoriginalbooks,butalsopurchaseacertainnumberofnewones.Besides,themagazinesandnewspapersshouldbeupdatedregularlytokeepstudentswellinformed.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.Bestwishes!

Yourssincerely,

LiHuaAppreciation假如你是李華，你的好友Jim在寒假期間癡迷于微信朋友圈，經(jīng)常發(fā)照片分享生活中的所有細(xì)節(jié)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，給Jim寫(xiě)