高中英語瓶中求救Rescue in a Bottle公開課課件

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CurtisWhitsonhadrafteddowntheArroyoSeco,ariverincentralCalifornia,severaltimesbefore.Thisyear,CurtisWhitsonknewthewater-fallwascoming.Hefiguredhewouldgetoutofhisraftintotheshallowwater,getdowntherocksalongropesoneithersideofthefalls,andcontinueonhisway,ashehadonaprevioustrip.Butthisyearwasdifferent.Heavysnowandspringrainshadturnedtheusuallymanageablefallsintosomethingfierce.Andthisyear,insteadofhisfriends,Whitson’scompanionswerehisgirlfriend,KrystalRamirez,andhis13-year-oldson,Hunter.Asthethreeofthemapproachedthefallslateintheafternoonofthethirddayoftheircampingtrip,Whitsoncouldtellfromtheincreasingroarofwaterinthenarrowingcanyon(峽谷)thattheywereinserioustrouble.Therewasnowaythey’dbeabletogetdowntherocksasplanned.

“Thewaterwasjustroaringthroughtherewithtremendousforce,”recallsWhitson,45.Theyhadnosmartphoneservice,andtheyhadn’tseenasinglepersoninthepastthreedays.AndWhitsonknewthatthey’dbesharingthegroundtherewithrattlesnakesandmountainlions.Ashewasthinkingwhattodo,Whitsonhitonabitofluck---heheardvoicescomingfromtheothersideofthefalls.Heyelled,butthesoundoftherushingwaterdrownedhimout.

“Wehavetogetthesepeopleamessage,”Whitsonthought.Hegrabbedastickandpulledouthispocketknifetocarve“Help”init.Thenhetiedaropetoitsothepeoplewouldknowitwasn’tjustanystick.Hetriedthrowingitoverthefalls,butitfloatedawayinthewrongdirection.

“We’vegottodosomething!”Whitsonyelledtohisson.“Havewegotanythingelse?”Thenhespottedhiswaterbottle.Whitsongrabbeditandcarved“Help!”onit.Ramirezalsoremindedhimthathehadapenandpaperinhisbackpack.Whitsonknewitwasaslimhope.Buthewrote“6-1519:00Wearestuckhere@thewaterfall.Gethelpplease”andpushedthenoteintothebottle.Thistime,histhrowoverthewaterfallwasperfect.

“Allright,that’sallwecando,”WhitsontoldHunter.whowhenwherewhatProblem:Therewasnowaythey’dbeabletogetdowntherocksasplanned.Self-rescueHeyelled,butthesoundoftherushingwaterdrownedhimout.Hegrabbedastick,…carve“Help”..butitfloatedawayinthewrongdirection.Waitforrescueinvainhiswaterbottle,…carved“HELP”;histhrowoverthewaterfallwasperfect.Itwasaslimhope.Aproblem-solvingstoryHowThetoneofthestoryisbasedontherecallofWhitsonandmostofpartfocusesontheactionsofWhitson.Sothefollowingpassageneedstobeconsistentwiththatfeature,avoidingtoomuchdepictionofemotion.Focusonthedevelopmentofplotandlanguagecharacteristics.3劇情創(chuàng)作plot&languageuseParagraph1:Ittook30minutestogetbackupstreamtothebeachwherethey’dhadlunch.Paragraph2:

Thenextmorning,thehelicopterreturned.TimeplacecharactersEventsChangeinmoodBasicelementsAnightofearlyspringAtthebeachinthevalleyThefamily+ahelicopterHowthethreemuddledthroughthenightAhelicoptercameandwent.DuringthedaytimeInthevalleyThefamily+ahelicopter+rescuersHowweretheyrescued?Howdidtheyfeel?tired&anxious?Scared?Cheerful?Desperate?hopeful?excitinghappyexhaustedgrateful……AtwistinthestoryplotThefinalendngBreakbigparagraphsintosmallstepsaccordingtothedevelopment.Paragraph1:Ittook30minutestogetbackupstreamtothebeachwherethey’dhadlunch.Paragraph2:

Thenextmorning,thehelicopterreturned.Thehelicoptercircledaroundandleftthedarknessofnight&roaringwatercauseeffectWhitsoncomforted,“It’llbeback”Theyweregoingtospendanightthere.Theyheardthenoisesofahelicopter.Theycriedforhelpbutinvain.Thehelicopterspottedthem.causeTherescueworkerscametohelp.Thethreeenteredthehelicopter.Theyfoundthebottlesavedthem.Theworkertoldthemaboutthebottle./Theynoticedthebottle.ToTellAstoryTherescuewasinvain.TotellagoodstoryVisualizeyourparagraphwithdetaileddescriptionofthesurroundings,actionsandemotions.Paragraph1:Ittook30minutestogetbackupstreamtothebeachwherethey’dhadlunch.Theyweregoingtospendanightthere.Persons’stateSettingdescriptionTheyheardthenoisesofahelicopter.Persons’stateAhelicopterTheycriedforhelpbutinvain…...Persons’stateSettingdescriptionTired,scared…Happy,excited…Happy,desperate…The

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XChoosethedescriptioninaccordwiththeperson’semotion.Paragraph1:Ittook30minutestogetbackupstreamtothebeachwherethey’dhadlunch.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theyweregoingtospendanightthere.Tiredastheywere,theyhadtostrengthenuptospendanightthere.Theyheardthenoisesofahelicopter.Theyheardahelicopterhoveringabovethem.Theycriedforhelpbutinvain.Wildwithjoy,Whitson,Ramirez,andHunterflewoutthetent,wavingandyelling.Ending1:Thehelicoptercircledaroundandgotback.thedarknessofnight&roaringwaterUnfortunately,thedarknessandtheroaringwaterdrownedeverything.Whitsoncomforted,“It’llbeback”Whitsonconsoledhissonandgirlfriend,“It’llbeback.”Ending2:Thenight

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Thenextmorning,thehelicopterreturned.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________