高考英語一輪備考：如何表達(dá)精彩的句子素材

高考英語書面表達(dá)在句子結(jié)構(gòu)方面得高分的評(píng)分要求是：應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu);語法結(jié)構(gòu)方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語言表達(dá)能力。在整篇文章中，要盡量使用不同的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，以避免重復(fù)。非謂語動(dòng)詞、名詞性從句、定語從句、虛擬語氣等，都屬于較復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。正確地使用這些語法結(jié)構(gòu)，便可寫出精彩的句子表達(dá)，從而提高作文的得分檔次。例如：1.使用非謂語動(dòng)詞一般表達(dá)：Allthewaywewerechatting，singing，laughing，andenjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.精彩表達(dá)：Allthewaywewerechatting，singingandlaughing，enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語）一般表達(dá)：Mr.Smithcameintotheclassroomandmanystudentsfollowedhim.精彩表達(dá)：Followedbymanystudents，Mr.Smithcameintotheclassroom.（過去分詞短語作伴隨狀語）一般表達(dá)：WhenhearrivedinLondon，hegavemeaphonecallimmediately.精彩表達(dá)：On/UponarrivinginLondon，hegavemeaphonecallimmediately.（動(dòng)名詞短語作介詞的賓語）一般表達(dá)：Whentheyfinallyreachedtheairport，theyfoundtheplanehadtakenoff.精彩表達(dá)：Theyfinallyreachedtheairportonlytofindtheplanehadtakenoff.（onlytodo...表示意想不到的結(jié)果）2.使用名詞性從句一般表達(dá)：Tooursurprise，theywonthechampionshipatlast.精彩表達(dá)：Whatsurpriseduswasthattheywonthechampionshipatlast.一般表達(dá)：Isuggestedthatweshouldchangethedate.Heagreedwithme.精彩表達(dá)：Heagreedtomysuggestionthatweshouldchangethedate.3.使用定語從句一般表達(dá)：InordertoimproveourEnglish，wearegoingtoholdanEnglishpartyinourschoolsnewgymandpartiesareoftenheldthere.精彩表達(dá)：InordertoimproveourEnglish，wearegoingtoholdanEnglishpartyinourschoolsnewgym，wherepartiesareoftenheld.一般表達(dá)：TheEnglishpartywillstartfrom7p.m.to9p.m.nextFriday.DuringthattimeyouwillenjoyEnglishstories，songs，poemsaswellasshortplaysattheparty.精彩表達(dá)：TheEnglishpartywillstartfrom7p.m.to9p.m.nextFriday，duringwhichyouwillenjoyEnglishstories，songs，poemsaswellasshortplaysattheparty.（介詞+which引導(dǎo)定語從句）4.使用狀語從句一般表達(dá)：Iwillnotbelievehiswords.精彩表達(dá)：Nomatterwhathesays，Iwontbelievehim.一般表達(dá)：Itmayrain.Youdbettertakeanumbrella.精彩表達(dá)：Youdbettertakeanumbrellaincaseitrains.5.使用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)一般表達(dá)：Wesufferedfromcoldandhungerinthosedays.Thedaysaregone.精彩表達(dá)：Gonearethedayswhenwesufferedfromcoldandhunger.一般表達(dá)：Tomdidntgotobeduntilhisparentscamebackfromwork.精彩表達(dá)：NotuntilhisparentscamebackfromworkdidTomgotobed.一般表達(dá)：Itgotusclosetonature，gaveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolworkandpromotedthefriendshipamongus.精彩表達(dá)：Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork，butalsoitpromotedthefriendshipamongus.6.使用省略結(jié)構(gòu)一般表達(dá)：Ihaventsucceeded，butIhopethatIcansucceed.精彩表達(dá)：Ihaventsucceeded，butIhopeto.一般表達(dá)：IfIamgivenmoretime，Iwilldoitbetter.精彩表達(dá)：Ifgivenmoretime，Iwilldoitbetter.7.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)一般表達(dá)：Hedidntattendthemeetingbecauseofillness.精彩表達(dá)：Itwasbecauseofillnessthathefailedtoattendthemeeting.一般表達(dá)：Hereallywrotetohisparentslastweek.精彩表達(dá)：Hedidwritetohisparentslastweek.8.使用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)一般表達(dá)：Springcomes.Thetreesturngreen.精彩表達(dá)：Withspringcoming，thetreesturngreen.一般表達(dá)：Theteacherenteredtheclassroom.Therewasabookinhishand.精彩表達(dá)Theteacherenteredtheclassroomwithabookinhishand.9.使用虛擬語氣一般表達(dá)：Hedidntfollowmyadvice.Sotheaccidenthappened.精彩表達(dá)：Ifhehadfollowedmyadvice，theaccidentwouldnthavehappened.一般表達(dá)：Theyaretalking.Theyseemtobeoldfriends.精彩表達(dá)：Theyaretalkingasiftheywereoldfriends.10.變換時(shí)態(tài)或語態(tài)一般表達(dá)：Thebellisringing.精彩表達(dá)：Theregoesthebell.一般表達(dá)：Werequireallthecontestantstospeaknomorethan5minutes.精彩表達(dá)：Allthecontestantsarerequiredtospeaknomorethan5minutes.練一練將下列句子改成精彩的表達(dá)。1.Thebusiscoming.2.Weshouldpaymuchattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.3.Weleftlate.Sowemissedthetrain.4.HespeaksGermanveryfluently.HemayhavestudiedGermaninGermany.5.Hefellasleepbutthelightwason/burning.6.Shedidntgotoworkbecausehermotherwasill.7.Themedicineisquiteeffectiveifitistakenintime.8.HereallyworkshardatEnglish.9.Theenvironmentwillneverimproveuntileveryonetakescareofit.10.Youcanborrowit.Butyoushouldpromisetotakecareofit.11.Paulgotfiredlastweek.Itobviouslymadehimfeelblue.12.Ifyoulikeanything，youcantakeit.13.“Wecantgooutinthisweather，”saidBob，andlookedoutofthewindow.14.Shewasbornandbroughtupinthecountry.Sosheisntusedtocitylifenow.15.Iwokeup，butIfoundeveryonegone.16.Whenwewerebathedinsunshine，wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.17.Ipaid$5forthebook.Thebookiswellworthreading.1.Herecomesthebus.2.Muchattentionshouldbepaidtoprotectingtheenvironment.3.Ifwehadleftearlier，wewouldnthavemissedthetrain.4.HespeaksGermanveryfluentlyasifhehadstudiedGermaninGermany.5.Hefellasleepwiththelighton/burning.6.Itwasbecausehermotherwasillthatshedidntgotowork.7.Themedicineisquiteeffectiveiftakenintime.8.HedoesworkhardatEnglish.9.Notuntileveryonetakescareofitwilltheenvironmentimprove.10.Youcanborrowitonconditionthatyoupromisetotakecareofit.11.Paulgotfiredlastweek，whichobviouslymadehimfeelblue.12.Youcantakewhateveryoulike.13.“Wecantgooutin