2020中考英語作文熱點(diǎn)素材范文11 環(huán)保

第第頁共14頁第第9頁共14頁Wealsohelpedcleanupthecityparks.wefinishedallthework,wewereverytiredbutfeltveryhappyatthesametime.Inmyopinion,ifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,ourcitywillbecomenicerandcleaner!Onlybydoingthesesimplethingscanweprotectourenvironmentwell。Withthedevelopmentofindustrialization,moreandmorefactoriesarebuilt.Toprotectourenvironment,thegovernmentbegantolevyataxonthecompaniesandfactories.Lastbutnotleast,wecanshareourideaswithpeopletoletthemjoinus.Tohelpwithit,IpickupthelitterwhenIseeitonthefloor.Besides」alwayscollectbottlesandIneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenIleavetheclassroom.Onlyinthiswaycanwelivehappily.Ifwedon'tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-dropofus.Ihopeeveryonewillcareabouttheenvironment.Ibelievewecanmakeourschoolmoreandmorebeautiful.寫作模板Thetopicof①（主題）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②（支持A的理由一）Whatismore,③理由二）.Moreover,④（理由三）.WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,（支持B的理由一）.Secondly（besides）,?（理由二）.Thirdly（finally）,?（理由三）.Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧（我的觀點(diǎn)）.Thereasonisthat⑨原因）.Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.

必背范文（一）ibHjsis耕msi如疔菟削r全力以赴推進(jìn)壞保稅卅征I作2018年1月1日，我國開始向企業(yè)征收環(huán)保稅。這一舉措引發(fā)重慶人民的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)就此新聞，寫一篇評(píng)論。參考要點(diǎn)：政府征收環(huán)保稅有哪些原因；環(huán)保稅開征后重慶將會(huì)發(fā)生哪些變化；從個(gè)人角度說明應(yīng)為環(huán)保做哪些貢獻(xiàn)。要求：要點(diǎn)齊全，語言流暢；80—120詞，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。OnJanuary1st,thegovernmentbegantolevyataxon（征稅）thecompaniesandfactorieswhichcausepollution.PeopleinChongqingpaycloseattentiontoit.參考范文】OnJanuary1st,thegovernmentbegantolevyataxon（征稅）thecompaniesandfactorieswhichcausepollution.PeopleinChongqingpaycloseattentiontoit.Withthedevelopmentofindustrialization,moreandmorefactoriesarebuilt.Whilethefactoriesespeciallyironandsteelfactoriesarebadforenvironment.Toprotectourenvironment,thegovernmentbegantolevyataxonthecompaniesandfactories.Afterthat,therewillbelessandlesspollutionandthecitywillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Forusstudents,wecandosomethingtotheenvironment.Firstofall,asweallknow,someplacesarelackoffreshwater,sowe'dbettersavewater.What'smore,wecanplanttreesasmuchaspossible.Lastbutnotleast,wecanshareourideaswithpeopletoletthemjoinus.Onlybydoingthesesimplethingscanweprotectourenvironmentwell.【解析】題干解讀。本文屬于話題作文，主要講述我國向企業(yè)征收環(huán)保稅的原因以及這件事情以后重慶的變化。并談一下我們個(gè)人可以為環(huán)保做什么貢獻(xiàn)。注意時(shí)態(tài)的使用，且切記不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞、短語以及句型，使文章更加生動(dòng)。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。高分亮點(diǎn)：單詞短語：Withthedevelopmentofindustrialization,比較級(jí)and比較級(jí),especially,bebadfor,todo表示目的，beginto,firstofall,asweallknow,belackof,what'smore,asmuchaspossible,lastbutnotleast,sharesthwithsb等。高分句型：Onlybydoingthesesimplethingscanweprotectourenvironmentwell中“only+狀語"放句首，用半倒裝。點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如Withthedevelopmentofindustrialization,比較級(jí)and比較級(jí),especially,bebadfor,todo表示目的,beginto,firstofall,asweallknow,belackof,what'smore,asmuchaspossible,lastbutnotleast,sharesthwithsb等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，如firstofall,what'smore,lastbutnotleast等；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（二）學(xué)校的英語報(bào)就“爭做校園環(huán)保小衛(wèi)士”話題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿。談?wù)勆钪心愕木唧w做法、環(huán)境保護(hù)的重大意義以及你的環(huán)保倡議。要求：1.詞數(shù)80—100詞；短文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名和校名等信息；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示詞語：collectbottlesturnoffdutymakearealdifferenceGoodenvironmentisimportantforeveryone.【參考范文】Goodenvironmentisimportantforeveryone.Tohelpwithit,IpickupthelitterwhenIseeitonthefloor.Besides,IalwayscollectbottlesandIneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenIleavetheclassroom.Asstudents,Ithinkit'sourdutytoprotecttheenvironmentofourschool.Andeventhesimplestactivitiescanmakearealdifferencetotheenvironment.SoIsuggestweshouldreusebooksaslongaspossible.Andit'salsoagoodideatotakepartinrecyclingprograms.Ihopeeveryonewillcareabouttheenvironment.Ibelievewecanmakeourschoolmoreandmorebeautiful.【解析】試題分析：作文要圍繞要點(diǎn)展開寫作：具體做法，感受，建議。要符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確，要點(diǎn)齊全。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性.注意提示語collectbottlesturnoffdutymakearealdifference的運(yùn)用。注意作文的升華，提出環(huán)保的意義?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】Tohelpwithit,IpickupthelitterwhenIseeitonthefloor.Besides,IalwayscollectbottlesandIneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenIleavetheclassroom.l具體做法最好寫上三點(diǎn)，三點(diǎn)之間要有過渡。過渡不要頻繁使用first,second,third。這篇文章處理的很好，tohelpwithit,Besides,and。2.注意從句的運(yùn)用，比如時(shí)間狀語從句，定語從句等。（三）今年幾個(gè)世界大國首腦都參加了八國峰會(huì)，這次的主題是世界經(jīng)濟(jì)、能源問題和氣候變化。經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展離不開環(huán)境話題，能源使用必然污染環(huán)境，而氣候變化就是經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展和環(huán)境問題矛盾的產(chǎn)物。請(qǐng)寫一篇保護(hù)水的文章?！緟⒖挤段摹縄t'sourdutytosavewaterAsweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman,wecan'tlivewithoutwater.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.Butsomepeopledon'tcareaboutit.Theywastealotofwaterintheirdailylife.Evenworse,theypourdirtywaterintorivers.Theythrowrubbishintorivers,too.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.Onlyinthiswaycanwelivehappily.Ifwedon'tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-dropofus.四）人與環(huán)境是和諧相處的，我們生存在地球上，人是自然之子，而不能僅把人看作自然的征服者，大家都知道，人類只有一個(gè)地球，地球上的山山水水、動(dòng)物。植物是人類的細(xì)胞，如果我們把它損壞了，破壞了大自然的組織，等于消滅人類。因此，環(huán)境要與社會(huì)公德聯(lián)系起來，與實(shí)踐行為作為人格教育的一項(xiàng)重要內(nèi)容來抓。每個(gè)人都要履行保護(hù)環(huán)境的責(zé)任和義務(wù)，請(qǐng)寫一篇不少于80字的環(huán)保文章?！緟⒖挤段摹縃armonywiththeenvironmentisthatweliveinonEarth,whoisanaturalson,andnotonlytonaturalpersonsastheconqueror,asweallknow,thereisonlyoneearthandthemountainsonEarth,theanimal