初中英語中考作文指導(dǎo)(公開課)

中考英語書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練南陽十三中石巖議論文專練作文失分原因分析-----內(nèi)容：

1）偏題甚至離題如:Friend—MyfriendMyfamilylife—Myfamily

2）素材(例子)問題A:沒有典型性,不切合題目B:缺乏說服力,難以支持個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)3)意思重復(fù)、文章思路混亂缺乏層次感

語法-----1）名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)前后不統(tǒng)一

Examsarenecessarybecauseithelpsimproveourselvesinmanyways.

2）時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂不一致

Havingfamilyteachersareverycommonamongstudents.3）副詞位置或選用不當(dāng)

We

also

candosomethingforourparentstoshowourthanks.

4)表達(dá)隨意,中國式英語比比皆是

TherearealargenumberoftouristsvisitShanghaieveryyear.5）語言表達(dá)繁瑣或生硬

I’lltrymybesttostudyhard.Iwanttogetgoodmarks.(建議用inorderto連接)

Tobuythingsonlinemakesourlifemoreconvenient.(用Shoppingonline)

EndlesshomeworkletsmehavelittletimetodothingsIlike.----EndlesshomeworkalwayskeepsmetoobusytodothingsIlike.----IhavelittletimetodothingsIlikebecauseofendlesshomework.寫作指導(dǎo)basicstructure(基本結(jié)構(gòu)的安排)

DearMr.Know，

I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用說)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.

Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）

First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.

WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,

letalone(更不用說)answerthequestions

aboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.

Let’sgoforit!123465

basicrules(寫作考試規(guī)則)search（審）list（列）add(加:開頭和結(jié)尾)connect(連)beautify(美：諺語/例子)牛刀小試健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。審(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork

如何度假調(diào)查報(bào)告倡議假日休閑stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用

簡單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)。

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔、漂亮。Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)Writingskills（“寫”的技巧）方法一:善用詞匯

甚至善用高級詞匯Whichisbetter?他們在海灘上聽音樂。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.Whichisbetter?

我希望你能幫助我。AIwishyoucanhelpme.BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.Whichisbetter?他們很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.Whichisbetter?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很驚訝。AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.

我認(rèn)為學(xué)英語很有趣。

我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.方法二:活用多種句型Writingskills（“寫”的技巧）

她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…方法三:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞Writingskills（“寫”的技巧）1.表示并列或遞進(jìn):2.表示選擇:3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:4.表示因果:5.表示條件:6.表示對比:7.表示解釋:8.表示順序:9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào):10.表示結(jié)論:關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connectionwords)1.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示選擇:or,either…or3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示條件:if,unless6.表示對比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào):also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示結(jié)論:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connectionwords)Let’stry_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\AtlastHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)

Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)

Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.

Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)

Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

Proverb（諺語）/saying加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。鍛煉對學(xué)生有好處

Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise…Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英語俱樂部是學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

4.DoastheRomansdo.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。失敗是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

Enjoysomeproverbs

7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.

覆水難收。一天一個(gè)蘋果，醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。條條大路通羅馬?；畹嚼希瑢W(xué)到老。方法四:妙用引文和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“寫”的技巧）青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.

Forexample,

wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plant