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對(duì)于圖畫類議論文首先要把握其寓意，透過圖畫的表面內(nèi)容去把握本質(zhì):一是理解畫面意義;二是聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實(shí)生活進(jìn)行思考,透視圖畫隱含的意義;再次就是要正確選點(diǎn),即抓住一“點(diǎn)”,深入鉆研,講深講透;最后進(jìn)行合理的聯(lián)想和引申,表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法,這一點(diǎn)是和說明類作文的不同之處。文章通常采用三段式:第一段:提出論點(diǎn);第二段：根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容提出論據(jù),展開論證（也可以用兩段）;第三段:總結(jié)全文,得出結(jié)論（或提出相應(yīng)的建議）。

（南京市2011屆高三英語學(xué)情調(diào)研）上海至南京的城際高鐵（theintercityhigh-speedtrain）于2010年7月1日正式開通。請(qǐng)您簡(jiǎn)要描述以下兩張圖片的內(nèi)容,列舉人們對(duì)高鐵開通的不同看法（至少兩點(diǎn)），并談一談您的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;2.詞數(shù)：150詞左右；文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。OnJuly1st,Chinaopenedtheintercityhigh-speedtrainbetweenShanghaiandNanjing.

________________________________________________________1.文體信息：①文體：議論文;②語體：正式語體;③人稱：第一人稱;④中心大意：人們對(duì)城際高鐵開通的不同看法。2.主導(dǎo)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：①簡(jiǎn)要描述兩張圖片的內(nèi)容;②列舉人們對(duì)高鐵開通的不同看法;③談一談您的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。4.溫馨提示：審題時(shí)要把握好文章主線，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，用簡(jiǎn)潔的語言描述圖片。重點(diǎn)在于論述人們對(duì)高鐵的不同看法，行文盡量使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和句式，恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用連接詞。OnJuly1st,Chinaopenedtheintercityhigh-speedtrainbetweenShanghaiandNanjing.Ittakesaboutseventy-fiveminutesfromNanjingtoShanghaionthehigh-speedtrain.Passengersenjoysafeandcomfortableserviceduringthewholejourney.

Comparedwithotherformsoftransportation,thehigh-speedtrainhasmanyadvantages.Itprovideshigherspeedoftravelforitsusers.Inaddition,ithelpssharetheburdenofothertransportsystems.Lastbutnotleast,thehigh-speedtrainservicecontributestohelpingboosteconomy,tourismandtheexchangebetweentheprosperouscitiesalongtheline.

However,noteveryonethinkshighlyofthehigh-speedtrain.Firstly,theticketpricewillbeabout50percenthigherthanthefareforthe“D”trainsalongthesameroute,whichistooexpensiveforordinarywage-earners.Secondly,mostofthemaredesignedtomakestopsateverystation,socoveringthewholedistancewilltakenearlytwohours.

Inmyopinion,thehigh-speedtraincanbedescribedasafast,safe,comfortableandenvironmentally-friendlymeansoftransportation.Itwillbemorebeneficialtothedevelopmentofourcountry.

這是一篇典型的圖畫類議論文，文章中長(zhǎng)短句錯(cuò)落有致，使文章跌宕生姿，富于變化;整體層次清楚，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱正確，內(nèi)容表達(dá)流暢，語言地道，行文連貫。文章中使用了一些較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯，如:過去分詞作狀語Comparedwithotherformsoftransportation，非限定性定語從句whichistooexpensiveforordinarywage-earners；還恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧诉^渡連接詞，如：Inaddition,Lastbutnotleast,However,Inmyopinion等,不僅使行文流暢，而且使文章層次清晰。如能把下列句子加以優(yōu)化則文章能更上一個(gè)檔次：1....thehigh-speedtrainservicecontributestohelpingboosteconomy,tourismandtheexchangebetweentheprosperouscitiesalongtheline.→Itisthehigh-speedtrainservicethatcontributestohelpingboosteconomy,tourismandtheexchangebetweentheprosperouscitiesalongtheline.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)2....mostofthemaredesignedtomakestopsateverystation,socoveringthewholedistancewilltakenearlytwohours.→...mostofthemaredesignedtomakestopsateverystation，leadingtotakenearlytwohourstocoverthewholedistance.(分詞作結(jié)果狀語)常用句式：①Recentlythephenomenonof...hascausedpublic...concern,and...②Nowadays,itiscommonto...Manypeopledon’tlike...because...Besides,...③Onthecontrary,therearesomepeopleinfavorof...Theybelieve...Moreover,theythink...④Inaword,thewholesocietyshouldpaycloseattentiontotheproblemof...Ohefuture.OnJuly1st,Chinaopenedtheintercityhigh-speedtrainbetweenShanghaiandNanjing.Nowadaysthereisawidespreadconcernovertheintercityhigh-speedtrain.Aspartofthelong-termplanoftherailwaynetworkinChina.Thenewtrainservicewouldtakeseventy-fiveminutesfromNanjingtoShanghai.Somepeoplegofirmlyforit.Firstly,theythinkitprovideshigherspeedoftravelforitsusers.Secondly,ithelpssharetheburdenofothertransportsystems.What’smore,Itisthehigh-speedtrainservicethatcontributestohelpingboosteconomy,tourismandtheexchangebetweentheprosperouscitiesalongtheline.Justasapopularsayinggoes,“Everycoinhastwosides.”Somepeopleareworryingaboutitsdisadvantages.Firstly,theticketpricewillbeabout50percenthigherthanthefareforthe“D”trainsalongthesameroute,whichistooexpensiveforordinarywage-earners．Secondly,mostofthemaredesignedtomakestopsateverystation，leadingtotakenearlytwohourstocoverthewholedistance.Inmyopinion,thehigh-speedtrainisafast,safe,comfortableandenvironmentally-friendlymeansoftransportation．Itwilldogoodtothedevelopmentofourcountry．

Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat_________(文章討論題目）.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat___________（觀點(diǎn)一）.Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,________（原因一）.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,______（原因二）.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat_______（觀點(diǎn)一）.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeopleholdtheideathat______（觀點(diǎn)二）.Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand，_______（支持原因一的理由）.Ontheotherhand,_____（支持原因二的理由）.Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat________(觀點(diǎn)二).

AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat_______(觀點(diǎn)一或二).Itisnotonlybecause,butalsobecause____________(支持你觀點(diǎn)的理由).Themore,themore_________(結(jié)論).請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面四幅圖畫及提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇不少于120詞的英語短文。注意：1.描述圖畫中的內(nèi)容;2.從合作、團(tuán)結(jié)的角度談?wù)勀愕母邢搿⒖荚~匯：合作cooperation團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作teamworkOnepossibleversion:Inthepicturesabove,ananttriesinvaintomoveaworm.T