英語Unit5Revealingnature表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案

Unit5RevealingnatureGuidedWriting表達(dá)。作文巧升格GuidedWritingbiaodanucWezqiacshezc;匚文體指導(dǎo)一觀察日忐本單元寫作項(xiàng)目是描寫植物生長(zhǎng)過程的觀察日志。［基本框架］.開頭(beginning)寫作目的；.主體(body)——植物成長(zhǎng)的過程；.結(jié)尾(ending)你的感受。［常用詞塊］growthconditionoftheplant植物生長(zhǎng)條件aholelargeenough一個(gè)足夠大的洞puttheearthbackinthehole把土回填到洞里upto20feetinlength長(zhǎng)度達(dá)20英尺selectproperseeds挑選合適的種子alightapplicationoffertilizer使用微量的肥料［常用語句］精彩開頭Doyouheiveanexperienceofplantingakindofplant?你有過種植植物的經(jīng)歷嗎？Letmeshareyouwiththeprocessaboutmyexperienceofgrowingwatermelon?讓我和你分享我種植西瓜的經(jīng)歷。Ioncelivedinthecountrysideandplantedsomegarlicinthegarden.我曾經(jīng)在鄉(xiāng)村住過，在菜園里種過大蒜。豐滿主體Checktoseeifthereareanylocalrequirementsaboutdigging.檢查當(dāng)?shù)厥欠裼嘘P(guān)F挖掘的要求。Takeasuitableshovelanddigaholethatis4-5timesthewidthoftherootball,morethanenoughsoitwillfit.用一把合適的鏟子挖一個(gè)比球?qū)?―5倍的洞，足夠大，這樣就合適了。Usethegardencultivatortoloosenthedirtal1aroundtheholetomakeiteasierfortherootstospread.用園藝耕耘機(jī)把洞周圍的泥土松掉，使根部更容易散開。余味結(jié)尾Seeingtheflowers,Iwastooexcitedtoexpressmyfeelings.看到這些花，我太興奮了不能表達(dá)我的感受。Ican'twaittoshowmygrandparentsthefruittreesIhaveplanted.我迫不及待地給祖父母看我種的果樹。Nopains,nogains.不勞無獲。升格示例假定你是正在英國(guó)留學(xué)的李華，在生物課上，老師要求同學(xué)們課后觀察一種植物的生長(zhǎng)過程，并用日志的形式將該過程記錄下來。請(qǐng)你寫一篇日志介紹草莓的生長(zhǎng)過程，內(nèi)容包括:.幼苗(seedling)植入土壤;.兩周后：幼苗葉子變大，呈傘狀；.一個(gè)月后：長(zhǎng)出花苞(bud)：.兩個(gè)月后：雌蕊(pistil)變成草莓，約5天后，草莓成熟(mature).注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。［學(xué)生習(xí)作］Strawberriesaremanypeople*sfavouritefruit.Somepeoplewanttoplantstrawberries.Thegrowthprocessofthemisprettylong.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgrowintolargerumbrella-shapedleavesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoilfortwoweeks.Onemonthlater,smallbudsbegintoappear.Ittakesabouttwomonthsforthepistilstogrowintorealstrawberries.Fivedayslater,wecanenjoyfreshmaturestrawberries.點(diǎn)評(píng)：.草藏生長(zhǎng)過程記述詳盡；.結(jié)尾處沒有涉及感受；.句與句之間的銜接還不太緊湊。［升格作文］Strawberriesaremanypeople*sfavouritefruitandsomepeopleevenwanttoplantstrawberriesbythemselves.Actually?thegrowthprocessofthemisprettylong.Hereismyobservationaboutthem.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgraduallygrowintolargerumbrella-shapedonesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoi1fortwoweeks.Onemonthlater,smal1budsbegintoappear.Thefollowingprocessisalittlelonger,takingabouttwomonthsforthepistilstogrowintorealstrawberries.Andfivedayslater,wecanhavefreshmaturestrawberries.Isn，titinterestingtowatchthegrowthprocess?學(xué)以致用假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你寫?篇短文，描述你種植綠豆(mung)的經(jīng)歷。.購(gòu)買種子，種在菜園里；.幾天后，綠豆長(zhǎng)出地面；.又過了幾天，長(zhǎng)出綠葉；.給綠豆?jié)菜L(zhǎng)得很好；.綠豆不斷生長(zhǎng)，三個(gè)月后終于開花結(jié)籽。注意：1.詞數(shù)：80左右;.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：長(zhǎng)出地面comeup；長(zhǎng)葉子comeinto1eaf；灑水sprinklewater；開花結(jié)籽gotoseed【參考范文】LastsummerIplantedsomemunginmygarden.FirstIboughtsomeseedsfromaseedman.Then1sowedtheminthegarden.Afewdayslater,Iwenttothegardenandfoundthemungwerebeginningtocomeup.Anotherfewdayspassedandthemungwerecomingintoleaf.NowandthenIsprinkledwateronthemso