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〔京津魯瓊專(zhuān)用〕2022版高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)題五書(shū)面表達(dá)層級(jí)三第一講應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作教案PAGE149-層級(jí)三題型應(yīng)對(duì)策略第一講應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作卷名年份語(yǔ)篇類(lèi)型主題語(yǔ)境主題內(nèi)容詞數(shù)/分值命題形式全國(guó)卷Ⅰ2022申請(qǐng)信人與社會(huì)向要舉辦中國(guó)畫(huà)展覽的倫敦美術(shù)館申請(qǐng)志愿者工作100左右/25分文字提綱2022建議信人與社會(huì)在中國(guó)家庭做客的習(xí)俗和餐桌禮儀100左右/25分文字提綱2022告知信人與社會(huì)教外國(guó)朋友學(xué)漢語(yǔ)和唐詩(shī)100左右/25分文字提綱浙江卷2022.6感謝信人與社會(huì)臨別之前向幫助過(guò)自己學(xué)英語(yǔ)的外國(guó)朋友表示感謝,并表達(dá)祝愿80左右/15分文字提綱2022.11求助信人與社會(huì)請(qǐng)航空公司幫助尋找喪失的錢(qián)包80左右/15分文字提綱2022.6求職信人與社會(huì)應(yīng)聘英語(yǔ)協(xié)會(huì)志愿者80左右/15分文字提綱2022.11邀請(qǐng)信人與社會(huì)邀請(qǐng)外教到家里一起過(guò)春節(jié)80左右/15分文字提綱2022.6邀請(qǐng)信人與社會(huì)邀請(qǐng)英國(guó)朋友登山郊游80左右/15分文字提綱一、題型特點(diǎn)高考應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作要求考生按照所給的情景材料組織內(nèi)容。文章既限定詞數(shù),又要求包含所有要點(diǎn)。它不同于翻譯,不能簡(jiǎn)單地將所有的要點(diǎn)逐一譯成英語(yǔ),而是一種指導(dǎo)性寫(xiě)作。高考應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作的命題形式主要是提綱式。二、文體特點(diǎn)主要表達(dá)形式包括日記、電子郵件、書(shū)面或口頭通知、發(fā)言稿等。從提供的命題場(chǎng)景看,很多是“涉外〞或應(yīng)用英語(yǔ)的環(huán)境,如申請(qǐng)參加國(guó)際夏令營(yíng)、邀請(qǐng)外教參加活動(dòng)、邀請(qǐng)美國(guó)朋友看中國(guó)的戲曲節(jié)目(感知中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化)、課外學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)等。三、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1.此題總分為15分,按5個(gè)檔次給分。2.評(píng)分時(shí),先根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。3.詞數(shù)少于60的和多于100的,從總分中減去2分。4.評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。5.拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)重要方面,評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。6.如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差以致影響交際,可將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。各檔次的給分范圍和要求檔次要求第五檔(13-15分)完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù):——覆蓋所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);——應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;——語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤,但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力;——有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊;完全到達(dá)了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的第四檔(10-12分)完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù):——雖漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn),但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;——應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求;——語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用根本準(zhǔn)確,些許錯(cuò)誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致;——應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊;到達(dá)了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的第三檔(7-9分)根本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù):——雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;——應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求;——有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解;——應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文內(nèi)容連貫;整體而言,根本到達(dá)了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的第二檔(4-6分)未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù):——漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容;——語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯工程有限;——有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響了對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解;第二檔(4-6分)——較少使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容缺少連貫性;信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者第一檔(1-3分)未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù):——明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容,原因可能是未理解試題要求;——語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯工程有限;第一檔(1-3分)——較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解;——缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容不連貫;信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者0分未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息:內(nèi)容太少,無(wú)法評(píng)判;寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清思維流程1.仔細(xì)審題,明確寫(xiě)作要求一審文體。通過(guò)審題,應(yīng)了解題目所要求寫(xiě)的是電子郵件、通知,還是演講稿等。熟悉了文體要求即可確定全篇的寫(xiě)作格式與寫(xiě)作風(fēng)格及其段落結(jié)構(gòu)之間的邏輯關(guān)系等。二審人稱(chēng)與時(shí)態(tài)。仔細(xì)瀏覽題干要求之后,應(yīng)做到:上下文人稱(chēng)統(tǒng)一,時(shí)態(tài)前后照應(yīng)。三審要點(diǎn)。審題時(shí),務(wù)必弄清寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),如背景、人物、人物之間的關(guān)系、時(shí)間等。寫(xiě)作之前,不要盲目動(dòng)筆,要準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤地理解題意,弄清要求。力爭(zhēng)防止書(shū)面表達(dá)中的“三忌〞:文不對(duì)題、文不統(tǒng)一、言不得體。2.列出提綱,構(gòu)建寫(xiě)作框架審清題意后,再根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn),進(jìn)一步列出寫(xiě)作提綱,把握文章開(kāi)展的脈絡(luò),明確需要表達(dá)的主要內(nèi)容,以免因遺漏要點(diǎn)而失分。同時(shí),要整理好各要點(diǎn)之間的順序和層次、邏輯,初步形成文章的框架。3.連句成文,確定初稿列出寫(xiě)作提綱后,依據(jù)要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)寫(xiě)成文。擴(kuò)寫(xiě)時(shí),可運(yùn)用想象適度發(fā)揮,但不可隨意亂寫(xiě),要緊扣文字提示,進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意在明確表達(dá)文章主題的同時(shí),應(yīng)保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全面,但不能把漢語(yǔ)提示全部翻譯成英語(yǔ),也不要跑題,從而造成失分。4.反復(fù)核查,適當(dāng)調(diào)整修改初步成文之后,應(yīng)從文字到內(nèi)容細(xì)心檢查,著重看文章是否扣題、要點(diǎn)是否遺漏、句與句之間的銜接和過(guò)渡是否自然、層次是否清晰得當(dāng)、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否連貫且符合邏輯、語(yǔ)言是否得體流暢。同時(shí),還要注意有無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。考生應(yīng)盡量使用較豐富的詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu),同時(shí)還應(yīng)防止因過(guò)分追求語(yǔ)言的華美而忽略了內(nèi)容的表達(dá),盡量防止使用冗長(zhǎng)、繁雜且易出錯(cuò)的句子。5.細(xì)心通讀,完美收官適度修改以后,再通讀全篇,即從內(nèi)容到文字書(shū)寫(xiě)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)全方位仔細(xì)復(fù)查。養(yǎng)成書(shū)寫(xiě)完成后自我檢查的好習(xí)慣,是書(shū)面表達(dá)完美收官的重要保證。A(2022·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ)假定你是李華,暑期在倫敦學(xué)習(xí),得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國(guó)畫(huà)展覽。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者,內(nèi)容包括:1.寫(xiě)信目的;2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì);3.能做的事情。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:DearSir,IamLiHua,astudentfromChina,whoisstudyinginLondonduringthesummerholiday.KnowinganexhibitionofChinesepaintingwillbeheldatthegallerynextmonth,Iamwritingtoapplyforthechancetobecomeavolunteer.Ihavethefollowingadvantages.Firstofall,IspeakEnglishfluently,whichallowsmetocommunicatewithvisitorswithoutdifficulty.Second,asaChinesepaintinglover,Iknowalotaboutthisartform.Ifaccepted,IcanintroduceChinesepaintingskillstovisitors,whichcanhelpthemknowmoreaboutChineseculture.IthinkIamqualifiedtobeavolunteer.Pleasegivemeachance.Yours,LiHuaB(2022·浙江卷6月)假定你是李華,經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.表示感謝;2.回憶Alex對(duì)你的幫助;3.臨別祝愿。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:DearAlex,Hearingthatyouwillreturntoyourcountrysoon,Ifeelabitupset.Butmeanwhile,IwanttosendmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpwithmyEnglishlearning.IstillrememberwhatyouhavedevotedtoimprovingmyoralEnglishandEnglishwriting.Besides,youalsofranklysharedyourlearningexperiencewithme.Additionally,withoutyourhelp,IwouldnothavebeenatopstudentinEnglishandwouldnothavewontheEnglishSpeechContest.Allinall,wordsfailtoexpressmythankfulnesstoyou.Idohopethatyouwillhaveabrightfutureandthatourfriendshipwilllastforever!Yours,LiHua書(shū)信書(shū)信是人們?cè)谌粘I詈凸ぷ髦羞M(jìn)行交際的工具之一。書(shū)信寫(xiě)作在近幾年的高考作文中考得比擬多,所考的書(shū)信格式也比擬簡(jiǎn)單。但由于民族語(yǔ)言和習(xí)慣上的差異,英語(yǔ)信件在書(shū)寫(xiě)格式及表達(dá)方式上與漢語(yǔ)不大一樣,有些地方迥然不同。因此我們了解一些英語(yǔ)書(shū)信的正規(guī)寫(xiě)法還是非常有必要的。英文書(shū)信分為兩大類(lèi):公務(wù)信件和私人信件。公務(wù)信件是單位與單位或單位與個(gè)人之間來(lái)往的書(shū)信,可能是推薦信、求職信、入學(xué)申請(qǐng)書(shū)、邀請(qǐng)信,或詢(xún)問(wèn)、答復(fù)、反映意見(jiàn)(如投訴信)等的信件。私人信件是指親戚朋友之間的通信。一、書(shū)信的構(gòu)成高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)信的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)段和結(jié)尾語(yǔ)段1.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)段①(2022·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ書(shū)面表達(dá))IamLiHua,astudentfromChina,whoisstudyinginLondonduringthesummerholiday.我叫李華,是一名來(lái)自中國(guó)的學(xué)生。暑假期間我在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)。②(2022·浙江卷6月書(shū)面表達(dá))Iplantogoforanouting,andIwouldliketoinviteyoutoparticipate.我方案去郊游,我想邀請(qǐng)你參加。③(2022·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ書(shū)面表達(dá))Iamwritingtoinformyouofthecoursescheduleofthenextclass,whichisaboutpoetryoftheTangDynasty.我給你寫(xiě)信是想告訴你我們下次上課時(shí)關(guān)于唐代詩(shī)歌的方案安排。④(2022·全國(guó)卷Ⅱ書(shū)面表達(dá))I’mLiHua,oneofyourstudents.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutovisitthepaper-cuttingexhibition.Paper-cuttingisoneofChinesetraditionsandI’msureyouwilllikeit.我是您的學(xué)生李華。我給您寫(xiě)信邀請(qǐng)您參觀剪紙藝術(shù)展覽。剪紙藝術(shù)是中國(guó)的一門(mén)傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù),我想您一定會(huì)喜歡的。⑤(2022·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ書(shū)面表達(dá))I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinourschooltabletennisteam.Ihavebeentoldthatourschoolteamisrecruitingnewmembers.Knowingthatyouarekeenonplayingtabletennis,Iwonderifyou’dliketojoin.我寫(xiě)信主要是邀請(qǐng)你參加我們學(xué)校的乒乓球隊(duì)。我得知我們校隊(duì)正在招收新隊(duì)員。知道你喜愛(ài)乒乓球,我想知道你是否愿意參加。⑥(2022·浙江卷6月書(shū)面表達(dá))Hearingthatyouwillreturntoyourcountrysoon,Ifeelabitupset.聽(tīng)到你不久以后要回國(guó),我感到傷心。2.結(jié)尾語(yǔ)段①(2022·浙江卷6月書(shū)面表達(dá))a:Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.AndIdolookforwardtoreceivingyourreplyletterassoonaspossible.我真心希望你能參加,盼望盡早收到你的回信。b:Ifyouhavetime,youarealwayswelcometojoinus.如果你能有時(shí)間,歡送你能參加我們這次郊游。②(浙江卷10月書(shū)面表達(dá))Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!Bestwishes.盼望早日見(jiàn)到你!請(qǐng)接受我最美好的祝愿。③(2022·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ書(shū)面表達(dá))I’llappreciateitifyoucanreplytomyletteratyourearliestconvenience.如果在你方便時(shí)能盡早回復(fù),我將不勝感謝。④(2022·全國(guó)卷Ⅱ書(shū)面表達(dá))IwishthatyoucouldgraspthisopportunitytolearntraditionalChineseculturefurther.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.我愿您能抓住這次更深刻了解中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的時(shí)機(jī)。盼望您的回復(fù)。⑤(2022·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ書(shū)面表達(dá))a:Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.如果你能在方便時(shí)盡早回復(fù),我將不勝感謝。b:Ifyouwanttoapplyformembership,youarerequiredtofillintheapplicationformandsendanemailtopingpong@123.ThedeadlineisJuly20th.Iwishyousuccessinyourapplication!如果你想申請(qǐng)隊(duì)員資格,你需要填寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)表,并往pingpong@123發(fā)郵件。截止日期7月20日。愿你申請(qǐng)成功!二、書(shū)信的分類(lèi)(一)普通信件典題感悟假設(shè)你是李華,昨天你收到了美國(guó)筆友Jennifer的e-mail。她詢(xún)問(wèn)高考之后你的暑假打算,請(qǐng)你就以下內(nèi)容給她回一封郵件。1.出行方案:到海南旅游;2.讀書(shū)方案:讀兩本早就想讀卻沒(méi)有時(shí)間讀的小說(shuō);3.社會(huì)實(shí)踐方案:與一些同學(xué)參加保護(hù)環(huán)境的宣傳活動(dòng)。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;文體分析電子郵件/書(shū)信類(lèi)作文一般分為三段:第一段常常引出話題,在該篇文章中,話題為暑假及其安排;第二段為電子郵件或書(shū)信的正文,一般從幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)說(shuō)明或論述;該篇文章從三個(gè)方面具體說(shuō)明暑假方案內(nèi)容;第三段常常表達(dá)祝福、祝愿。參考范文DearJennifer,①I(mǎi)amverygladtohearfromyou.②Yes,IambusypreparingforthecomingCollegeEntranceExamination,afterwhichIwillhavealongsummervacation.③MynumberoneplanfortheholidaysistotakeatriptoHainan,enjoyingbeautifulnatureandrelaxingmytiredbodythere—youcannotimaginehowexhaustedIamnow.④Besides,IamgoingtoreadtwonovelswhichIhavebeenwantingtoreadbutcan’tfindtimetodo.⑤Finally,Iwilltakepartinanactivityaboutraisingthepublic’senvironmentalawarenesswithsomeofmyclassmates.⑥Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua亮點(diǎn)展示句②中的亮點(diǎn)較多:使用了較高級(jí)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句;準(zhǔn)確使用了兩種時(shí)態(tài)——一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí);短語(yǔ)bebusydoing形象地說(shuō)明了作者的現(xiàn)狀。句③用“—〞連接兩個(gè)并列句;在前一個(gè)分句中使用了非謂語(yǔ)的各種形式。句④中過(guò)渡詞besides巧妙地連接了一、二兩個(gè)方案,在which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句中含有but引導(dǎo)的兩個(gè)并列句。句⑤是個(gè)高級(jí)的簡(jiǎn)單句,其中含有一些高級(jí)詞匯,比方:raisingthepublic’senvironmentalawareness等。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)書(shū)信作文模板Dear________,開(kāi)頭:Iamextremelypleasedtohearfromyou.AndIwouldliketowritealettertotellyouthat________./Hownicetohearfromyouagain.Letmetellyousomethingabout________(正文內(nèi)容)Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience./Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.結(jié)尾:Bestregardsforyourhealthandsuccess.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply./Withbestwishes,I’dappreciateitifyoucouldreplyearlier.Sincerelyyours,________【跟蹤訓(xùn)練】假定你是李華,暑假期間,你的美國(guó)朋友Jeff將來(lái)杭州看望你,并和你一起生活兩周。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件,告知他以下事項(xiàng):1.兩周主要活動(dòng)安排;2.屆時(shí)杭州的天氣情況和需要帶的物品。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hi,Jeff,GladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoHangzhouduringthesummervacation.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:Hi,Jeff,Glad__to__learn__that__you__are__coming__to__Hangzhou__during__the__summer__vacation.I’msureyou’regoingtohavelotsoffunandlearnmuchaboutChineseculture.We’llmainlygotouringaroundHangzhouandplacesnearby.Iwillshowyouthebestpartofnaturalandculturalsites.Thatway,youmaygetaroughideaofwhatlifeinChinaislike.Itwillbehotduringthesummervacation,soyouonlyneedtotakesomeT-shirtsandshorts.Don’tforgetyoursportsshoesaswe’lldoalotofwalking.Looking__forward__to__your__arrival!Yours,Li__Hua(二)投訴信典題感悟假定你是李華,兩周前你從網(wǎng)上購(gòu)置的一套書(shū)蟲(chóng)系列讀物(BookwormSeries)昨天才到貨,且包裝破損,數(shù)量缺乏。請(qǐng)就此向網(wǎng)店客服寫(xiě)郵件投訴。要點(diǎn)如下:1.介紹購(gòu)物情況;2.反映存在問(wèn)題;3.提出解決方案。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Towhomitmayconcern,________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.LiHua文體分析投訴信作文一般分為三段:第一段闡述問(wèn)題發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)。在該篇文章中,作者簡(jiǎn)述了從網(wǎng)上購(gòu)置的一套書(shū)蟲(chóng)系列讀物昨天才到貨,且存在包裝破損,數(shù)量缺乏問(wèn)題。第二段對(duì)存在的問(wèn)題提出抱怨,并提出解決問(wèn)題的方案。本文作者提出退貨或換貨。第三段常常催促對(duì)方抓緊解決問(wèn)題。參考范文To__whom__it__may__concern,I’moneofyourcustomers.IorderedasetofBookwormSeriesonyourwebsitetwoweeksago,butIdidn’treceivethemuntilyesterday.Andmuchtomydisappointment,thebooksweresopoorlypackedupthatthecoverofonebookwastornandIfoundonebookmissing.I’msorrytohavereceivedsuchpoorservice.Ihopethatyoueitherreturnmymoneyordeliveranewsetofbookstome.Besides,I’dliketobeinformedoftheprocessofyourdealingwithmycomplaint.Looking__forward__to__your__reply.Li__Hua亮點(diǎn)展示本文使用了較高級(jí)從句、句式(so...that,find...missing,Andmuchtomydisappointment,I’dliketobeinformedof);準(zhǔn)確使用了多種時(shí)態(tài)——一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)等。過(guò)渡詞besides巧妙地引出要求對(duì)方正確對(duì)待作者的抱怨。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)1.文章結(jié)構(gòu)(1)首段:注意客氣禮貌a.自我介紹;b.引出投訴內(nèi)容;c.說(shuō)明目的要求。(2)主體:展開(kāi)說(shuō)明投訴原因、具體理由或后果,注意內(nèi)容充實(shí),符合交際習(xí)慣。詳細(xì)說(shuō)明情況,中肯提出問(wèn)題;提出改良建議,說(shuō)明希望如何解決;拓展題目?jī)?nèi)容,尤其要強(qiáng)調(diào)問(wèn)題不解決所帶來(lái)的后果。(3)尾段:提出解決方案,不用展開(kāi),注意公平、公正、禮貌原那么。表達(dá)強(qiáng)烈愿望,希望上述問(wèn)題得到迅速恰當(dāng)?shù)慕鉀Q;有時(shí)可就問(wèn)題的解決限定時(shí)間;對(duì)有關(guān)人員的努力表示感謝;希望盡快得到滿意答復(fù)。2.常用表達(dá)(1)首段①I(mǎi)amsorrytotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeaseriouscomplaint.很抱歉打攪您,但我必須鄭重提出投訴。②Iamsorrytotellyouthatthereshouldbecausetocomplainabout...我很遺憾地告訴你投訴有關(guān)……的事由。③Ireallyhatetocomplain,butonethingisreallydisturbingnow.我真的很討厭抱怨,但最近有一件事情確實(shí)令人煩心。(2)主體①I(mǎi)tarrivedontimethedaybeforeyesterday.ButwhenIcheckedit,Ifoundaholeinthemiddle.IwasastonishedbecausetheholewasobviousandIdidn’tthinkyoushouldneglectthisdeficiency(缺陷).它是前天按時(shí)到的。但是當(dāng)我檢查時(shí),我發(fā)現(xiàn)中間有個(gè)洞。我很震驚,因?yàn)檫@個(gè)洞很明顯,我認(rèn)為你們不應(yīng)該忽略這個(gè)缺陷。②Ihavedialedyourservicenumberforseveraltimesbutitwasalwaysbusy.我屢次撥打你們的效勞,但它總是占線。③Nowthisproblemkeepsworryingme.現(xiàn)在這個(gè)問(wèn)題一直在困擾我。④Toimprovethesituation,youcantakethefollowingmeasures.為了改善狀況,你們可以采取下面的措施。⑤Canyouchangeanewoneformeassoonaspossible?你們可以盡快給我換件新的嗎?⑥Iinsistyouchangeanewoneformeorgivemearefund(退款).我堅(jiān)持你們給我換件新的或者給我退款。(3)尾段①I(mǎi)thinkit’shightimethatyourealized...我認(rèn)為是你認(rèn)識(shí)到……的時(shí)候了。②Weknowthatyouarenotgenerallycareless,butweshouldlikeyourassurancethatthiswillnothappenagain.我們深知你們并不經(jīng)常出錯(cuò),但我們希望能確保這類(lèi)過(guò)失不再發(fā)生。③Imustwarnyouthatunlessyoudosomethingaboutthesituation,Iwillbeforcedtotakelegalaction.我必須警告貴方,除非對(duì)目前狀況采取措施,否那么我將被迫訴諸法律。④Frankly,Iamnotpreparedtoputupwiththesituationanymore.坦率地說(shuō),我不再準(zhǔn)備繼續(xù)忍受這種狀況。⑤Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldlookintothematterassoonaspossible.AndIamlookingforwardtoanearlyreply.如果您能盡快調(diào)查此事,我將不勝感謝。期待您盡快回復(fù)。3.寫(xiě)作流程圖eq\x(提出抱怨并表示遺憾)→eq\x(闡述問(wèn)題發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò))→eq\x(指出問(wèn)題引起的后果)→eq\x(提出批評(píng)及處理的意見(jiàn)或敦促對(duì)方采取措施)4.投訴信寫(xiě)作模板Dear________,①I(mǎi)am________(自我介紹).②IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintabout________.③Thereasonformydissatisfactionis________(總體介紹).④Inthefirstplace,________(抱怨的第一個(gè)方面).⑤Inaddition,________(抱怨的第二個(gè)方面).⑥Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit________(感覺(jué))to________(抱怨的方面給你帶來(lái)的后果).⑦Iappreciateitverymuchifyoucould________(提出建議和請(qǐng)求),preferably________(進(jìn)一步的要求),andIwouldliketohavethismattersettledby________(設(shè)定解決事情的最后期限).⑧ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,________【跟蹤訓(xùn)練】假設(shè)你是李華,因業(yè)務(wù)到廣州出差,于5月3日至5日住在一家知名酒店5016房間,空調(diào)不能調(diào)溫,也關(guān)不上,找效勞員處理,他不但不予處理,還恥笑你。你找經(jīng)理解決,她容許解決,但始終沒(méi)人修理。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封投訴信,就此種情況進(jìn)行投訴。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,Iamwritingtoyoutocomplainaboutyourhotel.Ihadaterriblestayinroom5016ofyourhotelfromthe3rdtothe5thofMay,whenIcametoGuangzhouonbusiness.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:Dear__Sir/Madam,__I__am__writing__to__you__to__complain__about__your__hotel.I__had__a__terrible__stay__in__room__5016__of__your__hotel__from__the__3rd__to__the__5th__of__May,__when__I__came__to__Guangzhou__on__business.Theair-conditioninginmyroomcouldnotbeturneddownorswitchedoff.WhenIaskedthereceptionstafftodosomethingaboutit,helaughedandtoldmeitwasbetterthanbeinghot.Iaskedyourfrontofhousemanagerandshetoldmeshewouldsendsomeonetomyroomimmediately.Noonecame.Asaresult,IwasverycoldeverytimeIwasintheroom.Infuture,Iwillnotbestayingatyourhotelagainandwillinformmybusinessassociatesoftheterribleservice.Yours__faithfully,__Li__Hua(三)建議信典題感悟假設(shè)你是李明,你的外籍同學(xué)Mike對(duì)于新高考的選課有一些疑慮,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封信,給Mike提幾點(diǎn)選課建議,內(nèi)容包括:1.考慮大學(xué)招生要求和未來(lái)開(kāi)展;2.考慮自身興趣和特長(zhǎng);3.多了解相關(guān)信息。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文DearMike,Iheardyou’vehadproblemswiththecourseselection.Herearesometipsthatmayhelp.Someuniversitieshavedifferentstandardsforprospectivestudents,includingwhichsubjecttheyshouldlearnduringhighschool.Soyouareadvisedtotakeuniversityrequirementsandyourfuturedevelopmentintoconsideration.Additionally,itisquitegoodifyoucandecideyourownfuturepathbasedonyourinterestsandadvantages.Formoreinformation,you’dbetteraccesssomerelatedwebsites.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyoumakeawisedecision.Sincerelyyours,LiMing寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)1.寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)(1)建議信的內(nèi)容:作者就有關(guān)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析,并針對(duì)這些問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和建議。(2)建議信的對(duì)象:①寫(xiě)給個(gè)人,就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn);②寫(xiě)給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu),就改良其效勞提出建議或忠告。注意:建議信要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、理由充足,具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。語(yǔ)氣和用詞要恰當(dāng),如果收信人是長(zhǎng)者,那么宜采用嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、謙虛、正式的語(yǔ)言;如果對(duì)方是親密的朋友,語(yǔ)言就可以親切自然一些。2.文章結(jié)構(gòu)(1)開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山,點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信的目的是提建議。(2)講清楚提建議的理由及應(yīng)采取的具體措施,層次清楚。(3)照應(yīng)開(kāi)頭,指出所提建議的意義,并發(fā)出號(hào)召或提出希望,禮貌結(jié)束全文。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)3.常用表達(dá)(1)開(kāi)頭①I(mǎi)’dliketogiveyousomeadviceontheproblemyouarefacedwith.②Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...③Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon...(2)正文①M(fèi)ysuggestionsareasfollows.②MayIsuggestthatyou...③Ireallyhopethat...④Whatabout...?⑤Howabout...?⑥IfIwereyou,Iwould...⑦Itwouldbebetterif...⑧Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou...(3)結(jié)束語(yǔ)①I(mǎi)fyoucouldtakewhatIsuggestseriously,youwould...②Ifyoucantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration,...③Ihopetheywillbehelpful.④Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/ideashelpful/useful.4.寫(xiě)作流程圖eq\x(說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的)→eq\x(介紹詳情、說(shuō)明原因)→eq\x(提出希望采納建議,并表示謝意,盼望回復(fù))5.建議信寫(xiě)作模板Dear__________,①I(mǎi)amwritingtoyouto...Itismypleasureto________(說(shuō)明寫(xiě)作意圖).②As__________,__________isgettingmoreandmoreimportant./Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernon__________(說(shuō)明現(xiàn)象).③As__________,Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyviewconcerning__________(引出建議).④Themainproblemin________isthat__________(建議的原因).⑤Ireallyhopethat________.Anothersuggestionisto__________(闡述建議的具體內(nèi)容).⑥I____________(表達(dá)愿望).⑦Thankyou!Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionshelpful.(表示感謝)Yourssincerely,________【跟蹤訓(xùn)練】假設(shè)你是Mary,你的好友陳潔最近因?yàn)榭荚囶l率過(guò)高,課業(yè)繁重,感到身體不適,嚴(yán)重影響了學(xué)習(xí)。因此,她發(fā)e-mail給你,尋求你的建議和幫助。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示予以回復(fù)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):1.健康合理的飲食;2.有規(guī)律且適度的運(yùn)動(dòng);3.……注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearChenJie,Ifeelsosorrytohearthatyouarefeelingbadthesedays._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,MaryOnepossibleversion:Dear__Chen__Jie,I__feel__so__sorry__to__hear__that__you__are__feeling__bad__these__days.Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtostayhealthyandkeepattentiveinclass.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.Healthyeatinghabitsareveryimportant.Soyou’dbetterhaveyourmealsontimeandkeepabalanceddiet.Then,takingmorningexerciseeverydayisanicechoice,whichhelpstobuildupyourbody.Youcandosomesportstorefreshyourselfifweatherpermits.Finally,don’tstayuptoolate;otherwiseyou’llsufferaloteverynight.Ibelieveitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldfollowmysuggestions.Hopeyou’llfeelwellsoon.Yours__sincerely,__Mary(四)邀請(qǐng)信典題感悟假定你是李華,得知外教Mr.Hall寒假不回國(guó),想邀請(qǐng)他到你家過(guò)春節(jié)。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封信,內(nèi)容包括:1.時(shí)間;2.一同過(guò)節(jié)的家人;3.活動(dòng)。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文DearMr.Hall,Ihearthatyou’renotgoingtogobacktoyourcountryinthecomingwintervocation,soI’mwritingtoinviteyoutospendtheSpringFestivalwithmyfamilytogether.Ifyouconsideratelyacceptmyinvitation,I’llaskmyparentstopickyouupnextMondayanddriveyoustraighttomyhousewheremybrother,sisterandgrandparentswillallbein.TheSpringFestivalplaysasignificantroleineveryChineselife,sovariousactivitiesareindispensableinaddingflavortothefestival.We’llhaveabigfeasttogether,gatheringaroundthetableandprayingfornextyear’sgoodluck.Afterthemeal,aluckycharmredenvelopewhichcontainsluckymoneywillbegiventoeveryoneandsomeluckywordsaresaidtoeachother.Everythingwilloverflowwithhappinessthen.Isincerelyhopethatyoucanacceptmyearnestinvitationandcanreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.Yours,LiHua寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)1.寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)邀請(qǐng)信是邀請(qǐng)親朋好友或知名人士、專(zhuān)家等參加某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)時(shí)所發(fā)的邀約性書(shū)信。在國(guó)際交往以及日常的各種社交活動(dòng)中,這類(lèi)書(shū)信使用廣泛。2.文章結(jié)構(gòu)一般邀請(qǐng)信具有簡(jiǎn)短、熱情的特點(diǎn)。格式一般為:(1)首段:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山說(shuō)明寫(xiě)作目的;(2)具體交代情景:包括受邀請(qǐng)的人,邀請(qǐng)朋友干什么、地點(diǎn)以及具體的時(shí)間等內(nèi)容,并且強(qiáng)調(diào)為什么邀請(qǐng)收信人而不是別的朋友;(3)尾段:再次盛情邀請(qǐng);表示期待朋友的回復(fù)。3.常用表達(dá)(1)第一局部:說(shuō)明寫(xiě)作目的①I(mǎi)tiswiththegreatestpleasurethatIwritetoeagerlyinviteyouto...我懷著極其愉快的心情給您寫(xiě)信,誠(chéng)懇地邀請(qǐng)您來(lái)……②Itgivesmethegreatestpleasuretoinviteyouto...十分快樂(lè)能邀請(qǐng)您來(lái)……③Weshouldbeverygratefulifyoucould...如果您能……我們將不勝感謝。(2)第二局部:說(shuō)明事由及活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)和時(shí)間①WillyouandMrs.SmithgivethepleasureofdiningwithusattheBeijingHotelonSunday,Octoberthetenth,ateighto’clock?10月10日星期天晚上8點(diǎn)您和史密斯夫人能來(lái)北京飯店與我們共進(jìn)晚餐嗎?②TherewillbeadinnerpartytobeheldattheBeijingHotelonSunday,Octoberthetenth,ateighto’clock.WillyouandMrs.Smithcomeandjoinus?10月10日星期天晚上8點(diǎn)我們?cè)诒本╋埖昱e辦晚宴,屆時(shí)您和史密斯夫人能光臨嗎?③IhopethatyouhavenopreviousengagementandcanjoinusfortheEnglishEveningat7:00p.m.onFebruary1st.假設(shè)您無(wú)其他安排,敬請(qǐng)光臨我們?cè)?月1日晚7點(diǎn)舉辦的英語(yǔ)晚會(huì)。(3)第三局部:表示期待和感謝①I(mǎi)dohopethatyouwillbeabletocome.殷切希望您能夠光臨。②Weshouldbeverypleasedifyoucouldhonoruswithyourcompany.如果您能出席我們將欣喜萬(wàn)分。4.寫(xiě)作流程圖eq\x(發(fā)出邀請(qǐng))→eq\x(說(shuō)明事由)→eq\x(說(shuō)明活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)和時(shí)間)→eq\x(表示期待和感謝)5.邀請(qǐng)信寫(xiě)作模板Dear________,①Therewillbea________(內(nèi)容)at/in________(地點(diǎn))on________(時(shí)間).②Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.③Theoccasionwillstartat________(具體時(shí)間).④Thiswillbefollowedbya________(進(jìn)一步的安排).⑤Ataround________(時(shí)間),________(另一個(gè)安排).⑥Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.⑦RSVPbefore________(通知你的最后期限).Yourssincerely,________【跟蹤訓(xùn)練】假定你是李華,你校外教Smith任教期滿即將回國(guó),你們班同學(xué)將于明晚7點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)在校禮堂為其舉辦一場(chǎng)特別的聚會(huì)。請(qǐng)你代表全班同學(xué)給Smith老師發(fā)一封電子郵件,邀請(qǐng)他參加。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearSmith,Weareallsorrytohearthatyouwillleaveourschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wearelookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:Dear__Smith,We__are__all____sorry__to__hear__that__you__will__leave__our__school.Onbehalfofmyclassmates,IappreciateallyouhavedonetoimproveourEnglishandtoenableustolearnmoreabouttheoutsideworld.Youhavereallymadeagreatdifferencetoourlives.Toshowourgreatloveforyou,we’replanningaspecialgathering,andIsincerelyhopethatyouwon’tmissit.It’llbeheldfromseventoninetomorroweveningattheschoolhall.Besides,wehavepreparedsomeinterestingprogramsfortheparty.We__are__looking__forward__to__seeing__you.Yours,Li__Hua(五)抱歉信典題感悟假定你是李明,前幾天由于感冒發(fā)燒未能完成英語(yǔ)老師Mr.Chen布置的作業(yè),請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封信說(shuō)明情況。內(nèi)容包括:1.表達(dá)歉意;2.說(shuō)明原因;3.保證補(bǔ)交作業(yè)。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右,信的抬頭和落款已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearMr.Chen,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiMing參考范文Dear__Mr.Chen,I’msorrytotellyouIdidn’tmanagetofinishthehomeworkyouassignedtheotherday,duetoasuddencoldfallinguponme.Iwasinhospitalwithacontinuousfever,whichthuspreventedmefromengaginginanyacademicactivity.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgrantmeanothertwodaysforthetask,asmyhealthisgettingbetter.IpromiseI’llfinishitintime.Hopingyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.Yours__sincerely,Li__Ming寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)日常生活中難免會(huì)出現(xiàn)一些過(guò)失,如失約、損壞東西等。遇到這種情形,應(yīng)及時(shí)寫(xiě)信致歉,以消除不必要的誤解,維系正常的關(guān)系。抱歉信除應(yīng)及時(shí)寫(xiě)之外,還必須寫(xiě)得誠(chéng)懇,歉意應(yīng)發(fā)自?xún)?nèi)心,決不可敷衍塞責(zé)。再那么,事情原委要解釋清楚,措辭應(yīng)當(dāng)委婉貼切。1.抱歉信結(jié)構(gòu)抱歉信通常包括三局部?jī)?nèi)容:(1)表示歉意,抱歉的原因;(2)出現(xiàn)過(guò)失的原因,提出彌補(bǔ)措施;(3)請(qǐng)求原諒。語(yǔ)言要誠(chéng)摯,解釋的理由要真實(shí)。好的抱歉信不僅會(huì)取得對(duì)方的諒解,還會(huì)增進(jìn)彼此的感情。2.抱歉信中開(kāi)頭段常用句式和套話Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyregret...我寫(xiě)這封信是想表達(dá)我的遺憾……Iamwritingtoapologizefor...我寫(xiě)信是為……抱歉。Iwouldliketogiveyoumyapologyfor...我想為……向你抱歉。Iamverysorrytosaythat...我很抱歉……Imustapologizeabout(not)doingsth...對(duì)于做了/沒(méi)做……,我必須抱歉。Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfor...請(qǐng)接受我對(duì)于……的真誠(chéng)抱歉。Iamwritingtosaysorryfor...我寫(xiě)信是想對(duì)……說(shuō)抱歉。Iamterriblysorry,but...我很抱歉,但是……3.抱歉信中結(jié)尾段常用句式和套話Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.我對(duì)于所造成的任何不便再次抱歉。Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.請(qǐng)?jiān)试S我再一次說(shuō)抱歉。Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.希望你們能夠接受我的抱歉,理解我的處境。Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.我真誠(chéng)地希望你能夠站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的抱歉。IwanttoletyouknowhowregretfulIamfeelingnow.我想讓你知道我現(xiàn)在感覺(jué)多么的遺憾。IamsorrythatIcan’t...buttrustthatyouwillbeabletounderstand.很抱歉我不能……,但我相信,你會(huì)理解的。4.抱歉信寫(xiě)作模板模板1Dear________,①I(mǎi)amtrulysorrythat________(抱歉的原因).②Thereasonisthat________(介紹原因).③Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.④Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.Yourssincerely,________模板2Dear________,Iamexcessivelysorrytosay/tellyouthat①________(直接表達(dá)自己不能實(shí)現(xiàn)先前的愿望或約定).②Now,Iamwritingyouthisletterofapologytoshowmydeepregret________(表達(dá)歉意).③Pleaseacceptmysincereapology________(誠(chéng)懇希望對(duì)方能接受抱歉).④Ifearyouaredispleasedat________(表達(dá)出自己的心情,并請(qǐng)求對(duì)方原諒).⑤Ihopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcusemefor________(過(guò)渡句).⑥Letmeexplain(開(kāi)始介紹抱歉的原因).⑦Thereasonformydelay/absencewasthat________(闡述自己當(dāng)時(shí)的處境和情況).⑧Ihadnowayoutbecause________(總結(jié)自己抱歉的原因).⑨Thereforeit’snotinmypowerto________(說(shuō)明自己的被動(dòng)).⑩Naturally,Iwanttosuggest________(希望下次再次實(shí)現(xiàn)愿望).Ishallbeobligedifyouwillkindlywriteandtellmewhenandwhereyou________(約定下次約會(huì)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)).WemaymeetagainandIhopetoseeyousoon.Sincerelyyours,________寫(xiě)好抱歉信的關(guān)鍵在于措辭要樸實(shí)委婉,語(yǔ)氣要誠(chéng)懇真摯,解釋要詳細(xì)明了。例如:“muchtomyregret〞,“I’mexcessivelysorry〞,“afe

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