英語高三一輪復(fù)習系列外研學案導(dǎo)學版文檔第三部分寫作導(dǎo)練案第四講word版含答案2

06/605/6/第四講用篇章技巧助力層級十一生動清晰的“時、語態(tài)”一篇文章的時態(tài)語態(tài)可以讓文章要點表述清晰，語言生動，段落有條理，能烘托語境，創(chuàng)設(shè)情境，使文章的語言活起來，亮起來。美句輸入一、時態(tài)一定要正確1.一般時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時和一般將來時。Thereisgoingtobeapaper－cuttingexhibitionintheFolkArtMuseumonSunday.(2017·全國卷Ⅱ·書面表達)星期日，在民間美術(shù)館將有一個剪紙展覽。2.進行時態(tài)現(xiàn)在進行時、過去進行時和將來進行時。Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinapaper－cuttingshowtobeheldthisSunday.(2017·全國卷Ⅱ·書面表達)我寫信是想邀請你參加本星期日舉行的剪紙展。3.完成時態(tài)現(xiàn)在完成時、過去完成時。I’msurethatitwillinterestyou，foryouhavebeenenthusiasticaboutping－pong.(2017·全國卷Ⅲ·書面表達)我肯定這會使你感興趣，因為你一直熱衷于乒乓球運動。二、用英語的被動語態(tài)寫作時可以多用被動語態(tài)，以使表達更生動。1.be＋過去分詞(be可使用各種時態(tài))或get＋過去分詞Theexhibitionwillbeheldfrom9：00amto5：00pmthedayaftertomorrowinFolkCustomMuseum.(2017·全國卷Ⅱ·書面表達)展覽將于后天上午9時至下午5時在民俗博物館舉行。2.情態(tài)動詞＋be＋過去分詞Internetvotingisunfair，andcan’tbetrusted.(2016·江蘇卷·書面表達)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票不公平，不能被信任。佳句輸出補全句子1.Thatweekend，wewenttoanearbyneighborhoodandgavethemawaytothepeoplethere.(2016·北京卷·寫作)那個周末，我們?nèi)チ烁浇男^(qū)把它們送給那里的人們。2.I’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou’veaskedforbefore.我已請他帶給你所要的油畫。3.I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutdonatingbookstoyourclass.我正寫信告訴你向你班贈書的情況。4.Theentrancetotheparkingplacewastoosmallandoftengotblocked.通往停車場的入口太小了，經(jīng)常堵車。5.Thisbooksellswellinourprovince，andthousandsofcopieshavebeensoldoutnow.這本書在我們省很好賣，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)賣出數(shù)千本了。6.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolinthepasttwoyears.我們的學校近兩年發(fā)生了巨大的變化。7.Ididn’tcatchwhatourteachersaid，becauseIwasthinkingaboutsomethingelse.我沒有聽懂我們的老師說的什么，因為我剛才在考慮別的事情。8.Iwilltellyouthetruthaslongasyoukeepittoyourself.只要你不告訴別人，我就告訴你真相。完美文章(記人敘事)利用恰當?shù)臅r態(tài)語態(tài)，結(jié)合中文提示補全短文并背誦1.AveryterriblerainstormhitourcityVillage.In2.ten市)lastnightandcausedhugemudslidesaroundWestVillage.Inthisdisaster，nearly2.tenhousesweredestroyed(十所房子被毀)andanofficebuildingwasruined.What’sworse，3.ithasalreadycausedonedeath(暴雨已造成一人死亡)，leavingfivepersonsmissing.4.Whentroublehappens(當困難發(fā)生)ataplace，helpcomesfromallsides.Soldiersweresenttohelpout.And5.alotofvillagerstriedtheirbesttohelp(許多村民努力幫助)searchforthemissingpersons.Itissaidthatthedirecteconomiclosscausedbythisheavyrainstorm6.addsuptomorethantenmillionyuan(總計一千多萬元).Througheveryone’sefforts，7.everythingwentonverywell/smoothly(一切進展順利).層級十二句順意暢的“過渡語”能使書面表達的整篇文章渾然一體的就是一些過渡性詞語的使用。這些銜接過渡性詞語在句與句之間、段與段之間起承上啟下、使文章前后連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、過渡自然的作用，從而提升了表達的層次，成為增分的亮點。美句輸入1.表示起始關(guān)系的過渡性詞語aboveall，tobegin/startwith，today，now，nowadays，atpresent，currently，recently，generallyspeaking，accordingto，withthedevelopmentof...等。Tostartwith，IhavebeenlearningandspeakingMandarinforabout17years.首先，我學說普通話已經(jīng)17年了。(2015·四川卷·滿分作文)2.表示時間順序的過渡性詞語firstly，firstofall，tobegin/startwith，then，later，intheend，finally，atlast，afterthat，afterwards，sincethen，immediately，suddenly，meanwhile等。Firstly，Ihavealwaysbeeninterestedinreadingbooks.Secondly，I’dliketosharemybookswithothersaswell.(2015·重慶卷·滿分作文)首先，我一直對讀書感興趣；其次，我也喜歡與別人分享我的書籍。3.表示并列關(guān)系的過渡性詞語and，or，also，aswellas，neither...nor...，notonly...butalso...，either...or...，not...but...等。Shefinallyearnedrespectofthem，whoeventuallybecameconfidentaswellaswell－behaved.(2015·廣東卷·滿分作文)她最后贏得了他們的尊重，他們最終變得自信，表現(xiàn)也不錯。4.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡性詞語but，yet，however，while，otherwise，onthecontrary，though，although，evenif/though，despite，inspiteof，regardlessof等。Somecompromiseswereunavoidable，butthevideoturnedoutperfect.有些妥協(xié)是不可避免的，但視頻結(jié)果是完美的。(2017·北京卷·書面表達)5.表示因果關(guān)系的過渡性詞語because，as，since，for，thanksto，dueto，asaresultof，so，therefore，asaresult/consequence等。Thankstotheassistanceofthelocalmedia，hehasfound32timetwinsacross13countries，with17malesand15females.(廣東卷·滿分作文)多虧當?shù)孛襟w的協(xié)助，他在13個國家找到了32對同年同月同日出生的人，其中17對男性，15對女性。6.表示遞進關(guān)系的過渡性詞語what’smore，furthermore，moreover，besides，what’sworse，stillless，tomakemattersworse，worsestill，on(the)onehand...ontheotherhand...，foronething...foranother(thing)...等。What’sworse，Idon’tcommunicatealotwithmyparentsandmyfriends.更糟糕的是，我不經(jīng)常和父母和朋友交流。(2017·天津卷·書面表達)7.表示列舉事實的過渡性詞語suchas，forexample/instance，take...forexample，thatistosay，asfollows，inotherwords等。Theplanforthedayisasfollows：Firstly，it’sacustomtohavedumplingsonthatday，sowe’llmakedeliciousdumplingswithourownhandsratherthanbuysomeforthem.(2015·全國卷Ⅱ·滿分作文)這天的計劃如下：首先，在那天吃餃子是一項風俗，因此我們會親手為他們做美味的餃子而不是去買。8.表示觀點的過渡性詞語inmyopinion，inmyview，frommypointofview，asfarasIamconcerned，asforme，personally等。AsfarasI’mconcerned，allourclassmateshavelearnedalotfromourcommunicationandthevariousactivities.(2016·天津卷·書面表達)就我個人而言，我的所有同學從交流和各種各樣的活動中學到很多東西。9.表示總結(jié)的過渡性詞語inshort，inbrief，inconclusion，ina/oneword，tosumup，allinall，onthewhole，ingeneral，actually等。Inshort，playingbasketballenrichesmylifeandmakesmemoreconfident.總之，打籃球豐富我的生活，使我更加自信。佳句輸出用過渡詞匯補全句子1.Firstofall/Tobeginwith(首先)，themostsignificantthingistosetagoal，workoutaplanandcarryoutyourplanstepbystep.2.Besides/Inaddition/What’smore/Moreover(況且)，listeningtosomesoftmusicdoesrelaxyourmoodandgiveyouanewstart.3.Ilostmywayintheforestandtomakemattersworse/worsestill(更糟的是)，itbecamedark.4.Therefore(因此)，Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.5.Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief(總之)，weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment.6.Otherwise(否則)we’llhavetoanswerforourselfishnesssoonerorlater.7.Swimmingnotonly(不但)benefitsourhealth，butalso(而且)helpsushaveastrongwill.8.Onthecontrary(正相反)，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime，butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.9.AsfarasIamconcerned(在我看來)，onlybystudyinghardatordinarytimecanyousucceedeventually.10.Therefore(因此)，Isuggestwegetupearlytocatchthebus.11.Actually(事實上),wecan’tsucceedineverythingwetry.What’simportantisthatweshouldstickatit.12.Inmyfreetime,Iwillcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchas(例如)swimming,runningandvariousballgames.13.Inoticedtheentrancewassmallandalmostblocked.So(所以)myclassmatesandIhadadiscussionandwroteareport.14.Inadditionto(除了……之外)readingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.15.Finally(最后),weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdoorsactivitiesfrequently.Theyarereallyhelpfultobuildupmybodyandenrichmyschoollife.完美文章(觀點對比類)選用適當?shù)倪^渡性詞語補全短文however，besides，meanwhile，personally，additionally，ononehand，ontheotherhand，asfarasI’mconcernedDeareditor，I’mwritingtotellyou