專題29應(yīng)用文寫作之從微觀把握-低檔作文華麗升級

/32/32/專題29從微觀把握—低檔作文華麗升級目前，對于很多同學(xué)來說，都處于三檔作文，好點的處于四檔作文水平，從高考閱卷來看，這兩個檔次的考生人數(shù)也最多，短期內(nèi)如何讓你的作文由三級作文升級到五檔作文呢？體裁命題形式寫作主題2022新高考I卷應(yīng)用文邀請信寫郵件邀請外教進行一次訪談II卷應(yīng)用文邀請信寫郵件邀請外教進行一次訪談全國卷乙卷說明文投稿利用填表調(diào)查結(jié)果給報社投稿甲卷應(yīng)用文投稿以世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿2021新高考I卷應(yīng)用文投稿校刊youth慶祝十周年，向?？磉_自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福II卷應(yīng)用文投稿校刊youth慶祝十周年，向校刊表達自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福全國卷乙卷應(yīng)用文發(fā)言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”為主題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽甲卷應(yīng)用文征求建議征求外國朋友建議，哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人2020全國卷I卷應(yīng)用文投稿寫一篇以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題投稿參賽II卷應(yīng)用文日記寫一篇英文短文介紹上周末采摘活動III卷應(yīng)用文求助信給外教寫一封信，請幫忙指導(dǎo)『命題專家談高考』【考綱解讀】1.寫作文體文體不再拘泥于書信體，報道、通知等各種應(yīng)用文體，其他文體都有可能涉及。2．命題形式命題類型是半開放類，漢語提示簡潔，要點明確，任務(wù)具體，學(xué)生的可發(fā)揮性強。3．寫作主題主題涵蓋學(xué)校生活、社會生活、參觀旅行、人物介紹、課外活動和日常生活等方面，其中有關(guān)學(xué)校(學(xué)習(xí))生活和社會生活的主題比重最大。主題場景性和真實性突出，體現(xiàn)中外交流和“正能量”?！緜淇冀ㄗh】1.復(fù)習(xí)話題還是側(cè)重于社會關(guān)愛、友誼和親情中。以情感類話題復(fù)習(xí)為主，最好側(cè)重于學(xué)生的生活實際，反應(yīng)積極向上的社會主體即可。另外，個人的自我品德和修養(yǎng)提升也是復(fù)習(xí)的重點，這些都是和學(xué)生的生活息息相關(guān)。2.把握短文關(guān)鍵信息和語言特點的能力，重視開頭語的提示作用。段落開頭語的前后和上下銜接也很重要，考生需要注意整篇的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)來續(xù)寫構(gòu)思，理順上下文邏輯關(guān)系，短文內(nèi)語句要連貫、有序。3.注重細節(jié)，尤其是注重寫作視角。不能把平時背誦的心理描寫、環(huán)境描寫等好的句子照搬，要根據(jù)具體實際來選擇用哪種敘述方式。策略一練好衡水字體——五檔作文成功的保證書寫美觀是你達到五檔作文的先決條件，只有真正練好你的書寫，才能為高考作文高分打好基礎(chǔ)。字跡潦草、亂涂亂畫的作文是永遠得不了高分的。策略二要點內(nèi)容充實——打開思維、增加細節(jié)的技巧高考書面表達的題目，除了簡短的文字說明外，要求包括幾個主要內(nèi)容，也就是幾個關(guān)鍵詞。題目要求增加具體細節(jié)內(nèi)容，以使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。在內(nèi)容擴展上，目前存在的主要問題有：1．細節(jié)內(nèi)容與應(yīng)用文所要求的主要內(nèi)容無關(guān)，明顯跑題；2．打不開思維，沒有具體的細節(jié)內(nèi)容。針對這些問題，可以通過增加修飾成分及舉例等手段來打開思維，適當(dāng)增加相關(guān)細節(jié)內(nèi)容。主要有以下幾種方法幫助你擴展句子，寫出內(nèi)容充實的應(yīng)用文。當(dāng)然，在同一要點下，可以用到多個方法增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容。eq\a\vs4\al\co1(通過列舉或舉例)1．a(chǎn)s.../like...as.../like...例：其次，帶一個小禮物是個好主意。Second,itisagoodideatobringasmallgift，suchasabunchofflowersoraboxofchocolateiftheyhaveyoungchildren.2．forexample/instance例：如今，我們中的一些人在校園里養(yǎng)成了一些壞習(xí)慣。Nowadays,someofushaveformedsomebadhabitsoncampus.Forinstance,somestudentsleavethelightsoninthedaytime;someleavemuchfoodonthetableaftereating.3．...aswellas...例：這項活動一定會幫助我們反思三年的學(xué)校生活。Theactivitywillsurelyhelpusreflectonthethreeyears’schoollifeaswellaslookforwardtoabetterjourneyinthefuture.(2021·昆明市“三診一模”高考模擬)eq\a\vs4\al\co1(增加狀語成分)1．增加目的狀語例1：我們學(xué)校今天在表演中心舉行了一場音樂會。InordertoenrichthelifeofteachersandstudentsaswellaswelcomethecomingofSpringFestival,ourschoolheldaconcertintheperformancecentertoday.(2021·焦作市三模)例2：想試一試的請速報名。Whoeverwantstohaveatry,pleasesignupquicklysothatyoudon’tmissthechanceofbeingthewinner.(2021·西安中學(xué)高三第九次模擬)2．增加結(jié)果狀語例1：我得花很多時間做家庭作業(yè)。IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakesports.(2021·西安中學(xué)高三第六次模擬)例2：將安排一系列與環(huán)保相關(guān)的講座。Aseriesoflecturesrelatedenvironmentalprotectionwillbearranged,thusarousingpeople’sawarenessoflivingalow－carbonlife.(2021·濟寧三模)3．增加原因狀語例：我從小就夢想當(dāng)老師。IhavedreamedofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisasacredprofession.(2021·甘肅省第二次高考診斷)4．增加方式狀語Bydoing...，...例：但是，我們許多人都忽略了良好生活習(xí)慣的重要性。However,manyofusignoretheimportanceofgoodlivinghabitsbyeatingjunkfoodandstayinguplate.(2021·湘潭市一模)5．增加動詞－ing形式作狀語例1：歡迎對影片提出意見。What’smore,everyoneofyouwillbewelcometoparticipateinit，enjoyingmovie,havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourowncomments.例2：分享畢業(yè)典例活動細節(jié)。Knowingyou’reinterestedinourcominggraduationactivity,Iwouldliketosharethedetailswithyou.(2021·三明市“三診一?！备呖寄M)6．增加with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語例：表達希望WiththeChineseCultureCommunicatingEventapproaching,IdohopeyoucanhaveabetterknowledgeofChinesetea.eq\a\vs4\al\co1(增加定語成分)例1：介紹名人故事Besides,thestoriesofworld－famouspeoplearealsoattractivetome，whichhelpmelearnalotfromthem.例2：課前準(zhǔn)備，介紹唐朝歷史You’dbettermakefullpreparationsbeforeclassandhaveabriefunderstandingofthehistoryofTangDynasty，whichhelpsyoulearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.eq\a\vs4\al\co1(增加個人感受、評價、希望、倡議等)1．增加個人感受例：雖然這個暑假我覺得很累，但我為我所做的事情感到很高興。AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdidbecauseIgotaknowledgeoffarmingexperience.2．增加評價例：我想這樣的活動是必要的和有意義的。Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful，fromwhichIlearnthatweshouldhelppeoplewhoareintroubleifpossible.3．增加希望例：我堅信這是我一生中最難忘的午餐。(2021·焦作市第四次模擬)Iholdthefirmbeliefthatitwasthemostunforgettablelunchinmylife，becauseitmademeenjoythepleasureoflabor.4．增加倡議例：我從這次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到的是，愛護和保護我們的社區(qū)是我們的責(zé)任。WhatIlearntfromthisexperienceisthatitisourdutytoloveandprotectourcommunity.SotheChairmanofourschoolsuggestsourschoolholdaseriesofactivitiestocallonstudentstotakeactiontodoit.(2021·高三英語重慶全真模擬)【即時訓(xùn)練1】根據(jù)提示增加相關(guān)細節(jié)1．AsfarasIknow,Chinesetraditionalculture,includingpapercutting,guzhenandsoon,hasitsuniquecharacteristics.(including)(2021·全國甲卷)2．WhenIcamebackhome，Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.Andtheywereveryproudofme．(評價)3．AndthereisawidevarietyofactivitieslikethedragondanceduringtheSpringFestivalhere．(like列舉)4．Atlast,IhopetoplayChinesechesswithyousothatwecanmakeprogresstogether．(添加結(jié)果)5．Asforme,I’mpassionateaboutbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife．(添加原因)6．Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle－useproductsandsaveenergy．(forexample)7．WeholdthefirmbeliefthatthevisitorswillknowmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture，soIhopewestudentsshouldreadmorebooksaboutChinesetraditionalcultureinoursparetime．(so引導(dǎo)狀語從句)8．YuanLongping,anagriculturalscientistknownas“FatherofHybridRice”，developedtheworld’sfirstsuccessfulhybridricevarieties,whichincreasedriceproductioninChina．(which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)(2021·西安中學(xué)高三第五次模擬)eq\a\vs4\al()策略三詞匯升級——學(xué)會運用高級詞匯評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔次的要求中提到，“詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致”。高級詞匯就像一顆顆耀眼的明珠，為作文增添光彩，從而使考生穩(wěn)拿高分。eq\a\vs4\al\co1(具體化原則)所謂詞義具體化原則是指，寫作中盡量避免使用意義寬泛、模糊的詞，而要根據(jù)語境使用具體生動的詞。SogooddotheylookthatIthinkyoucouldbeinterestedinthem.→SoattractiveandalivedotheylookthatIthinkyoucouldbeinterestedinthem.(全國卷Ⅱ滿分作文)eq\a\vs4\al\co1(晚詞優(yōu)先原則)為了表現(xiàn)自己的語言功底，吸引閱卷老師的眼球，盡量用高年級階段學(xué)到的詞匯代替低年級階段學(xué)到的詞匯。Eventually,IwanttoknowwhichaspectsofChinesetraditionalculturearouseyourcuriositymost.→Eventually,IamstronglyeagertoknowwhichaspectsofChinesetraditionalculturearouseyourcuriositymost.(2021·全國甲卷滿分作文)eq\a\vs4\al\co1(短語優(yōu)先原則)用短語代替不僅會使文章增加亮點，而且如果關(guān)鍵時刻思維短路，用短語湊字是一個很好的選擇。(1)形容詞變短語的方法：of＋同根名詞Furthermore,guzhengisverysignificanttoChinesefolkmusicleadingyoutoafantasticworldofmusic.→Furthermore,guzhengisofgreatsignificancetoChinesefolkmusicleadingyoutoafantasticworldofmusic.(2021·全國甲卷滿分作文)(2)動詞變短語的方法：同義短語替換know/realize→beawareofhelpsb→givesbahand/dosbafavouruse→makeuseof/takeadvantageofunderstand→figureout/makesenseofIfanyonehelpsyou，youshouldexpressyoursinceregratitudetohimorher.→Ifanyonegivesyouahand,youshouldexpressyoursinceregratitudetohimorher.【即時訓(xùn)練2】用高級詞匯替換加黑詞語1．Surroundedbygreentrees，thefarmisatthefootofthehillnearourschool.→Surroundedbygreentrees，thefarmis__located__atthefootofthehillnearourschool.(2020·全國卷Ⅱ滿分作文)2．Aimedtohelpustoknowtheimportanceofworking，anactivitythemed“Workingisthemostbeautiful”washeldlastweek.→Aimedtohelpustobe__aware__oftheimportanceofworking，anactivitythemed“Workingisthemostbeautiful”washeldlastweek.(2019·北京卷滿分作文)3．Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.→Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldtake__my__application__into__consideration．(2019·全國卷Ⅰ滿分作文)4．Rememberthatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.→Keep__in__mindthatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.(2019·全國卷Ⅱ滿分作文)5．Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool，wheremanysportsactivitiesareheldthere.→Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool，wherea__large__number__ofsportsactivitiesareheldthere.(全國卷Ⅲ滿分作文)6．Ibelievethatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.→I__am__convinced__thatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.eq\a\vs4\al()策略四句式升級——學(xué)會運用高級句式高考時，一篇書面表達中的句子如果都采用簡單句，肯定不能得高分，精彩句式的合理使用會使文章讀起來抑揚頓挫。固定句式(如with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)、強調(diào)句型等)、定語從句、現(xiàn)在分詞短語等都屬于較復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。這些結(jié)構(gòu)的正確使用，可以使文章的語言充滿層次感，從而較好地反映寫作者的語言運用能力。eq\a\vs4\al\co1(學(xué)會使用高級簡單句)1．運用介詞短語IntheSpringFestivalof2021,ManypeoplechosetospendSpringFestivalincitieswheretheyworkinsteadofreturningtotheirhometownstoreducetheriskofCOVID－19transmission.(介詞短語作狀語)(2021·許昌高三第二次質(zhì)量檢測)為了降低COVID－19傳播的風(fēng)險，2021年春節(jié)，很多人選擇在工作的城市過春節(jié)而不是回到家鄉(xiāng)。2．運用不定式短語ItprovidesuswithagoodopportunitytohaveabettercommandoftraditionalChineseculture.(不定式短語作定語)(2021·淄博二模)它為我們更好地了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化提供了一個很好的機會。3．運用分詞短語Youthcoversawidevarietyoftopicstoattractseniorstudents,leadingusintotheouterworld.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語)(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ滿分作文)《青年》題材廣泛，吸引高年級學(xué)生，帶領(lǐng)我們走進外面的世界。Onarrivingatthefarmlocatedinthesuburbofourcity,seaofvegetablescameintooursight,whichincludedcucumbers,tomatoesandsoon.(過去分詞短語作定語)(2021·濱州市二模)一到我們城郊的農(nóng)場，蔬菜的海洋就映入眼簾，有黃瓜、西紅柿等。eq\a\vs4\al\co1(學(xué)會使用高級復(fù)合句)1．a(chǎn)s和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句定語從句有多種形式，引導(dǎo)詞也有若干，但最容易掌握、最常運用的是as和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。(1)表達“正如……”這一含義時，我們常用as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，它常放在主句之前，有時也可放在主句之中或主句之后。常見的句式有：·Asweallknow.../Asisknowntoall...眾所周知……·Asthefamoussayinggoes...正如名言所說……Asweallknow，ourfriendslendusahelpinghandwhenweneedhelpandtheyhelpusgetthroughdifficultsituations.眾所周知，在我們需要幫助的時候，我們的朋友會伸出援手，并且他們會幫助我們渡過困境。(2)which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句which在引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句時，可以指代某個單詞，也可以代指整個主句，在從句中可以作主語或賓語。TointroduceChinesetraditionalculture,ourschoolwillholdathemeclassmeeting,whichwillbeexhibitedontheEnglishwebsite.(2021·全國甲卷滿分作文)為了介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化，我們學(xué)校將舉辦一次主題班會，并在英語網(wǎng)站上展示。2．what和that引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句名詞性從句包括主語從句、賓語從句、表語從句和同位語從句。其中what，that所引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句是寫作中常見的高級表達方式。what在名詞性從句中作主語、賓語、表語或定語，而that在從句中不作任何成分，只起連接作用。IsincerelyhopethatYouthcanmakenewprogressandthatmorereaderswillparticipateintheinteractionandsharetheirownstores.(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ滿分作文)我真心希望《青年》能有新的進步，更多的讀者參與互動，分享自己的店鋪。Whatyoutoldmeaboutyourcountrybroadenedmyhorizonsandarousedmyinterestinforeignculture.(主語從句)(2019·浙江卷滿分作文)你告訴我的關(guān)于你的國家的事情開闊了我的視野，激發(fā)了我對外國文化的興趣。eq\a\vs4\al\co1(學(xué)會使用特殊句式)1．強調(diào)句型強調(diào)句型的使用是為了突出強調(diào)句子的某一部分，它是一種比較容易掌握的高級表達方式。其構(gòu)成：Itis/was＋被強調(diào)部分＋that/who＋其他。Wecreatedaharmoniousatmospherewithsincerityandfaithfulness.→Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.2．倒裝句在寫作中倒裝句應(yīng)用比較廣泛，涉及的句型也比較多，包括部分倒裝和全部倒裝。常見的有：(1)“only＋狀語”置于句首時，句子用部分倒裝。Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwetrulyenjoythebenefitsofmoderntechnology.(2021·全國乙卷)總之，只有成為聰明的在線學(xué)習(xí)者，我們才能真正享受現(xiàn)代技術(shù)的好處。(2)none，neither，nor，not，never，hardly，little，seldom等否定詞，以及由no或者not構(gòu)成的否定短語，如notonly...butalso...，atnotime，bynomeans等置于句首時，句子用部分倒裝。Duringthewalk，notonlydidwebreathethefreshairbutalsoappreciatedthefantasticsurroundingviews.(2021·南陽高考模擬一)在散步的過程中，我們不僅呼吸了新鮮空氣，而且欣賞了周圍的美景。(3)在so/such...that...結(jié)構(gòu)中，當(dāng)so/such...位于句首時，其后的句子用部分倒裝。IntheForestPark，soattractivewasthelandscapethatallourstresswasrelieved.(2021·咸陽市高考模擬一)在森林公園里，風(fēng)景如此迷人，我們的壓力都減輕了?！炯磿r訓(xùn)練3】用高級句式升級下列句子1．Forexample，therearehugeamountsofreferencebooks.Iamoftenconfusedtochoosefromthem.(定語從句)→Forexample，therearehugeamountsofreferencebooksfromwhichIamoftenconfusedtochoose．2．IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.(強調(diào)句)→ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish.3．Theenvironmentwillneverimproveuntileverybodytakescareofit.(倒裝)→Notuntileverybodytakescareofitwilltheenvironmentimprove.4．Therearealotoftreesandflowersinourschoolandourschoollookslikeabiggarden.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))→Withalotoftreesandflowersinourschoolourschoollookslikeabiggarden.5．Theydidn’trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionuntilallthefishintheriverdiedout.→Notuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutdidtheyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.(倒裝句)→Itwasnotuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutthattheyrealizedtheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.(強調(diào)句)精做高考真題1．（2022·浙江·統(tǒng)考高考真題）假定你是李華，你校圖書館新開設(shè)“小組學(xué)習(xí)室”，請你給你的留學(xué)生同學(xué)Michael寫一封信，邀請他一同體驗，內(nèi)容包括：1.位置與開放時間；2.室內(nèi)設(shè)施和功能。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMichael,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearMichael,Goodnews!Recently,anewly-furnishedsection,consistingofeightGroupLearningRooms,hasbeenopentousstudentsinourschoollibrary.Locatedonthethirdfloorbesidetheonlinereadingrooms,itcanbeaccessiblefrom8amtill9pmthroughouttheweekdays.Thoseroomsareequippedwithmodernelectronicfacilities,allofwhicharelinkedtotheInternet.It’sreallyconvenientforustodosomegroupprojects.Whynotaskourgroupmemberstogoandexperienceit?Earlyreplyandwecanreserveoneroomforourproject.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，假定考生是李華，你校圖書館新開設(shè)“小組學(xué)習(xí)室”，請你給你的留學(xué)生同學(xué)Michael寫一封信，邀請他一同體驗?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累由……組成：consistof→bemadeupof位于：belocatedon→besituatedon與……相連接：belinkedto→beconnectedto預(yù)定：reserve→book2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Recently,anewly-furnishedsection,consistingofeightGroupLearningRooms,hasbeenopentousstudentsinourschoollibrary.拓展句：Recently,anewly-furnishedsection,whichconsistsofeightGroupLearningRooms,hasbeenopentousstudentsinourschoollibrary.【點睛】[高分句型1]Thoseroomsareequippedwithmodernelectronicfacilities,allofwhicharelinkedtotheInternet.（ofwhich引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）[高分句型2]Locatedonthethirdfloorbesidetheonlinereadingrooms,itcanbeaccessiblefrom8amtill9pmthroughouttheweekdays.（過去分詞作狀語）2．（2022·全國·統(tǒng)考高考真題）假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：1.節(jié)目介紹；2.訪談的時間和話題。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考答案】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封郵件邀請你的外教Caroline來你校的廣播站英語節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”做一次訪談。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累參加：attend→participatein建立：establish→setup幫助：aid→assistance許多：plentyof→alotof2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.【點睛】[高分句型1]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.(運用了where引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.(運用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句的省略結(jié)構(gòu))3．（2022·全國·高考真題）你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保護海洋的倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.What’smore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.【語篇解讀】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，就世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿，闡述海洋的重要性并提出一些建議?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累越來越：moreandmore→increasingly重視：placeimportanceon→attachimportanceto重要的：key→significant此外：what’smore→furthermore2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.拓展句：WorldOceanDay,whichfallsonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.【點睛】[高分句型1]Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.(運用了部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu))[高分句型2]Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.(使用了主語從句)挑戰(zhàn)名?？碱}1．（2023·四川南充·統(tǒng)考一模）假定你是李華,你的英國好友Peter準(zhǔn)備參加“元旦漢語詩歌朗誦比賽”,向你咨詢建議。請你根據(jù)提示給他回復(fù)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.朗誦選材;2.朗誦技巧;3.其他注意事項。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;；2.可以運當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearPeter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearPeter,IamdelightedtohearthatyouaregoingtoparticipateintheChinesepoetryrecitationcontesttobeheldinourschoolonNewYear’sDay.Iamwritingtooffersomeadvice,whichIhopemaybeofgreathelptoyou.ConsideringthatthecomingcontestisrelatedtoNewYear,you’dbetterchoosesomeChinesepoetrywiththethemeofbiddingfarewelltotheoldyearandwelcomingthenewyear.Whenitcomestorecitationtechniques,youaresupposedtospeakstandardMandarinandpayattentiontousingproperpronunciation,stress,intonationandspeed.Inaddition,practicemakesperfect.Therefore,youcan’tpracticetoomanytimesinadvance.Bytheway,Ihavecollectedsomeclassicpoemsthatfeatureblessingsforthenewyearandattachedthemtothemail.Ifthereisanyproblem,don’thesitatetocontactme.Hopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsiderationandlookforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國將準(zhǔn)備參加“元旦漢語詩歌朗誦比賽”好友Peter寫一封郵件給出建議，其內(nèi)容包括朗誦選材、朗誦技巧和其他注意事項。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累建議：advice→suggestion期待：hope→expect幫助：help→assistance而且：Inaddition→what'smore2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inaddition,practicemakesperfect.拓展句：Inaddition,itisknowntousallthatpracticemakesperfect.【點睛】【高分句型1】IamdelightedtohearthatyouaregoingtoparticipateintheChinesepoetryrecitationcontesttobeheldinourschoolonNewYear’sDay.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Iamwritingtooffersomeadvice,whichIhopemaybeofgreathelptoyou.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）2．（2023·全國·一模）假定你是李華，美國“漢語橋(ChineseBridge)”網(wǎng)上冬令營組織方正在網(wǎng)上征集活動內(nèi)容，歡迎網(wǎng)友獻計獻策。請你給組織方寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的活動(至少兩項)；2.你的理由；3.你的希望。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dearcommitteemembers,I’mgladtoknowthat_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】Dearcommitteemembers,IamgladtoknowthatyouaremakingacallforeventsforyourChineseBridgeonlinewintercamp.First,I’dliketorecommendyouashortvideoabouttheoriginationoftheChinesecharacters.Fullofgreatfun,thevideowillarouseforeigners’interestinChinesecharacters.Secondly,youcanholdastorytellingcompetitiontospreadChineseculture.Thiscanfurthercampers’understandingofChina,buildingagoodbridgebetweenChinaandtheoutsideworld.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給美國“漢語橋(ChineseBridge)”網(wǎng)上冬令營組織方寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的活動（至少兩項）；2.你的理由；3.你的希望。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累首先：first→firstofall充滿：befullof→befilledwith想要做某事：wouldliketodosth.→feellikedoingsth.舉辦、組織：hold→organize2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Fullofgreatfun,thevideowillarouseforeigners’interestinChinesecharacters.拓展句：Thevideoisfullofgreatfun,whichwillarouseforeigners’interestinChinesecharacters.【點睛】【高分句型1】Thiscanfurthercampers’understandingofChina,buildingagoodbridgebetweenChinaandtheoutsideworld.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)【高分句型2】Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.(運用了if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)3．（2023·四川德陽·統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Mark發(fā)電子郵件告訴你，他最近容易發(fā)脾氣，嚴(yán)重影響學(xué)習(xí)和生活，請你用英語給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容如下：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．提出建議并說明理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMark,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearMark,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Actually,itiscommonforpeopletohaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong.Soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.HereI’dliketogiveyousomeusefultips.First,youcantalktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Itisagoodwaytoletyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplaygameswithyourfriends,forphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofbadfeelings.Third,keepoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國筆友Mark發(fā)電子郵件就他最近的情緒問題表示理解、給予安慰并提出建議?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累建議：tips→suggestions擺脫：getridof→remove提高：lift→improve繼續(xù)：carryon→goon2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Itisagoodwaytoletyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.拓展句：Itisagoodwaythatyoucanletyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.【點睛】【高分句型1】Actually,itiscommonforpeopletohaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong.（運用了it做形式主語以及關(guān)系副詞when引導(dǎo)的定語從句）【高分句型2】Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.（運用了動名詞短語做賓語）4．（2023·湖南岳陽·統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是中學(xué)生李華，在英國學(xué)習(xí)，擔(dān)任學(xué)校中國語言與文化社社長。近期，校學(xué)生會發(fā)布了舉辦“國際文化節(jié)”的通知，參加活動會有一個攤位進行宣傳，請寫一封郵件申請一個攤位。內(nèi)容包括：1.你的攤位名稱：中國茶藝展；2.具體活動安排。參考詞匯：攤位booth注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearStudentUnion,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerelyyours,LiHua【參考答案】DearStudentUnion,IamLiHua,presidentofChinalanguageandCultureSociety.IamgladtoknowthattheannualInternationalCulturalFestivalistobeheldsoon.Iamwritingtoapplyforabooth.ThenameoftheboothisChineseTeaArtShow,wherewewillintroducedifferentkindsofChineseTeaanditsbenefits.Chineseteaisconsideredasthemostbeneficialdrinkwithalonghistoryofplanting.Ithasbecomeagreen,healthyandpopulardrinkinourdailylife,throughwhichwecanenjoyahealthyandpleasantlife.BesidesstudentsvisitingourboothwillenjoydrinkingvariousChinesetea.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucantakemyapplicationintoaccount.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【語篇解讀】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校將舉辦“國際文化節(jié)”，要求考生給學(xué)生會寫信申請一個攤位對中國傳統(tǒng)文化進行宣傳?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累開心的：glad→delighted種類：kind→sort被認(rèn)為是：beconsideredas→beregardedas考慮：oaccount→oconsideration2.句型拓展合并句子原句：Chineseteaisconsideredasthemostbeneficialdrinkwithalonghistoryofplanting.Ithasbecomeagreen,healthyandpopulardrinkinourdailylife,throughwhichwecanenjoyahealthyandpleasantlife.拓展句：Consideredasthemostbeneficialdrinkwithalonghistoryofplanting,Chinesehasbecomeagreen,healthyandpopulardrinkinourdailylife,throughwhichwecanenjoyahealthyandpleasantlife.【點睛】[高分句型1]IamgladtoknowthattheannualInternationalCulturalFestivalistobeheldsoon.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）[高分句型2]ThenameoftheboothisChineseTeaArtShow,wherewewillintroducedifferentkindsofChineseTeaanditsbenefits.（運用了where引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句）5．（2023·四川涼山·統(tǒng)考一模）假定你叫李華，下周六你班要做義賣捐贈活動，請用英語給你的外籍老師Chris寫封郵件，邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動目的；2.活動安排(時間，地點及內(nèi)容)；3.期待他的參加。注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。參考詞匯：acharitysale義賣DearChris,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinacharitysaleinourschool.Withthepurposeofhelpingchildreninremotemountainousareas,weplantodonatesomeusefulstudyingitemstocovertheshortageoftheirstudyingmaterials.ThecharitysaleisscheduledonourschoolplaygroundnextSaturdayfrom8:00amto11:00am.Ourclassmatesintendtosellsomeusedclothesandshoesonthatday.Afterthesale,we’llgiveawaythemoneytothechildrenfordifferentschoolsupplies,whichincludebooks,stationeryandlearningmaterials.Knowingthatyouareawarm-heartedperson,passionateabouthelpi