2021年新高考1作文讀后續(xù)寫母親節(jié)禮物

2021年新高考1卷讀后續(xù)寫母親節(jié)禮物原文：閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Para2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.原文分析：when：Mother’sDaywhere:theirhome—kitchen—upstairswho:thetwinsJennaandJeff,theirfather,theirmotherwhat:ThetwinswantedtomakebreakfastfortheirmotheronMother’sDayandgaveherasurprise.Butitturnedouttobeafailure.人稱：第三人稱時態(tài)：一般過去時本文以母親節(jié)為線索展開，講述了雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff為了獻(xiàn)給母親一份美味的早餐，自己動手，做起飯餐來，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗，后來在父親的幫助下，獲得成功，他們把早餐獻(xiàn)給親愛的母親，媽媽非常感動的故事。合理的續(xù)寫：第一段：爸爸看到一片狼藉很納悶，雙胞胎解釋原因，爸爸提出幫忙一起做/指導(dǎo)孩子做，成功做出美味早餐，雙胞胎非常高興。第二段：媽媽收到孩子的母親節(jié)禮物，感動，幸福滿足，雙胞胎自豪。父親的吃驚疑惑及反應(yīng)：1.Atthesightofthemessinthekitchen，theirfatherrealizedwhathadhappened.2.Theygavetheirfatheranaccountofwhathappened.3.Totheirsurprise,fatherdidn’tscoldthembutpattedthemontheshouldersgently,comfortingthatitwould1

beallright.4.Learninghischildren’splan,thefatherwasmovedandfeltproudoftheiracts.Heofferedtohelpthemtocompletethesurprise.5.Itwasthemessinthekitchenthatsurprisedhimandhejuststoodtherewithoutaword.雙胞胎由害怕轉(zhuǎn)為喜悅：1.Theywereliketheantsinthepotswithhandsnowheretoplace.2.Jennadroppedherheadandhadasigh.3.Nosoonerhadthetwinsseentheirfatherthanagleamofhoperushedtothem.4.Aburstofhappinesssweptherlikeatidalwave，surroundingherlikethebrightestsunshine.和父親一起做早飯1.Thefatherstoodbesideandinstructedthetwinstodealwithalltheseproblemswithpatience.Everythingseemedtogetbackontrackafterawhile.2.Undertheirfather’sinstruction,theysmoothlyfinishedthebreakfast.3.Undertheguidanceofhim,theycleanedthemess,boiledtheporridgeandmadeanotherFrenchtoast.溫馨場面（媽媽的感動，幸福，孩子的自豪，父親用相機(jī)記錄下美好）1.“Surprise!HappyMother’sDay”criedthetwinsexcitedly,waitingfortheirmother’sreactioninanticipation.2.Theylookedattheirmother,eyestwinklingwithanticipation.Inthemeanwhile,theirmotherloweredherheadtoeatthattoastandutteredinanexcitingvoice“Yummy,thisisthemostdeliciousfoodI’vehad.”，Shewasbathedintheloveofherchildren.3.Shewasoverflowingwithhappinessandappreciation,andjoyfultearswelledupinhereyes.4.Themothertooktheminherarmswithhappytearsblurringhereyes.5.Theorangelightofrisingsunshonethroughthewindowintotheroom,makingthisscenemoremovingandwarmer.6.Seeingsuchmovingscene,shefeltshewasenvelopedwithasenseofprideandhereyesgleamedwithdelightandsurprise.Anditwasatthattimethatshefeltthekidshadgrownup.7.Thefathercapturedthepreciousmomentwithhiscameraintime.8.Itdawnedonthetwinsthatshowingtheirloveandgratitudetotheirbelovedonescanreallymaketheirday.Possibleversion1Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Catchingsightoftheirfather,Jenna’sgloomy(沮喪的，陰郁的）faceturnedintobigsmilewhileJeffwastryinghardtofightbacktears（忍住眼淚）.Confusedaboutwhathadhappened,thefatherdarted(急沖)tocheckJeff’shandandatthesametimelistenedtoJenna’sexplanationcarefully.Anexpressionofintense（強(qiáng)烈的，非常的）joyilluminating(照亮)thefather’seyesaftergettingtoknowthelovelyheartofhistwins,hepatientlyguidedthemtomakeanattemptonceagain.Withinhalfanhour,sweet-smellingporridgeandwell-bakedbreadwerelyingonadelicate（精美的，雅致的）plate,onwhichaheartwasdrawnwithsomeapplejam.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.“HappyMother’sDay,dearMom.”thetwinswhisperedtotheirmother.Withamber（琥珀色的）sunlightpiercing(穿過)throughthewindow,themotherhadadrowsy(昏昏欲睡的)lookatthetwinsandthenglancedatthefoodintheirhands,tearsmisting/blurring（使模糊）hereyes.Shequicklytookholdoftheplate,putitonthetable,andhuggedthetwinstightlyinherarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,mybabies.Youaremybestgifts.”Justatthatmoment,thefather2

tiptoedin,lookingatthesceneasifhehadthewholeworldhewanted.Lovemaybeclumsy(笨拙的),butbeautifulindeed.Possibleversion2Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Spottingthemessysituation,theirfatherunderstoodeverything.Insteadofblamingthemfortheircarelessness,theirfatherputon/woreabrightsmileandpattedontheirheads.“Doyouwanttogiveyourmotherasurprise?Letmehelpyoufixit.”Fathersaidwithamischievous(淘氣的，惡作劇的heads,theireyesshiningwithexcitement.Underthefather’sinstruction,theyfirstcleanedupthemess,andthentheyrespectively(分別地，各自地)tookresponsibilityforFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Withthe)twinkleinhiseyes.Hearingthewords,thetwinsnoddedtheirexperienceoffailure,theyaccomplishedtheirtaskperfectlythistime.Lookingattheinviting(誘人的，有魅力的)breakfast,theyweredeprivedof(被剝奪,失去)allpowerofspeechbyexcitement.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theinstantshenoticedthebreakfastwasbroughtinbed,aripple（漣漪）ofexcitementflashedthroughherface.Hereyeswanderedbetweenthebreakfastandthetwinsasifshewasaskingwhathappened.“HappyMother’sDay!”thetwinsexclaimedwithonevoice（異口同聲）.Themother’sfacebeamed（發(fā)光）andhershiningsmilelituptheroom.“Thankyoumyangles!Comehereandgivemeahug.”Thetwinsrushedintotheirmother’sarmsandjustatthatmoment,theirfatherstoppedbehindthem.“Hey!Lookhere!”Themotherandthetwinsturnedtheirheadssimultaneously（同時地）.“Click-click.”Usingthecamera,thefatherrecordedthememorablescene.WhataMother’sDaySurprise!Possibleversion3Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Withtearsinhereyes,Jennarantoherfatherandexplainedeverything.AfterconfirmingtheburnonJeff’shandwaswelltended（照料，照顧）,theirfathercheeredthemup,helpedthemcleanitupandpreparedthebreakfastall