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讀后續(xù)寫微技能訓(xùn)練——情感描寫ZhanjiangCunjinPeicaiSchoolSophieFongHowdoyoufeelwhenyouseethesnakes?Whenseeingthesnakes,Ifeel...scared

frightened

terrified

讀后續(xù)寫微技能訓(xùn)練——情感描寫之“恐懼”ZhanjiangCunjinPeicaiSchoolSophieFongDonot“tell”me,but“show”meyourfeelingoffear.2020年7月高考浙江卷：遇熊脫險(xiǎn)Glancethegivenpassage,underline(劃線)thesentences

describingthefeelingoffearandlearnfromthem.Howtoshowyourfeelingoffearvividly(生動(dòng)地)?Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,herfacewasnearlydeadwithfright.Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfroze

rapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.herfacewasnearlydeadwithfright.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfrozerapidlybecauseoftheterrible

sight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.1.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.

(一陣恐懼襲來,將我緊緊包圍,我已經(jīng)無法動(dòng)彈)2.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.（我驚恐不已，感覺兩腿發(fā)抖，手心冒汗。）3.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.

(她一動(dòng)也不動(dòng)，嚇呆了)4.Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,herface

wasnearlydeadwithfright.

(嚇得面無血色）5.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfroze

rapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.

(我們感覺渾身血液都凝固了）6.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.

(我們喉嚨發(fā)緊，膝蓋發(fā)軟）無靈主語句肢體/動(dòng)作描寫神態(tài)表情描寫心理描寫肢體動(dòng)作描寫肢體/動(dòng)作描寫肢體動(dòng)作描寫Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.

Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.

Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,

herfacewasnearlydeadwithfright.

Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfrozerapidlybecauseoftheterrible

sight.

Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.

ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.無靈主語句肢體/動(dòng)作描寫神態(tài)表情描寫心理描寫Asisdescribedinthegivenpassage,therearemanyvividwaystoshowthefeelingoffear.vividwaystoshowfeelings……恐懼/害怕phrasessentenceswords(n./v./adj.)必備素材積累adj.afraid,frightened,feared,panicked,scared,terrifiedn.fright,fear,panic,terror,horror(beinn.;v.withn.)v.

frighten

terrify,scare,(sb.)freeze,(sb.’sheart)pound/beatIfeel/amfrightened.Iaminfright.Thesightfrightensme.Ifreeze

withfright.Myheartispounding/beatingwidlywithfright.adj.n./v.必備素材積累shake/tremblewithfear嚇得發(fā)抖getintoapanic陷入恐慌中standrootedtothespotwithfear嚇得呆若木雞tremble/shakealloverwithfright嚇得渾身發(fā)抖befrozen/numbwithfear嚇呆beseizedwithpanic/panicsetsin驚慌失措bescaredoutofwits嚇得魂不附體beopen-mouthedwithhorror嚇得目瞪口呆bedeadwithfright嚇得面無血色bestruckwithfear嚇壞了11(be)inacoldsweat一身冷汗Whenseeingthesnakes/Atthesightofthesnakes,I...Whenseeingthesnakes,/Atthesightofthesnakes,I...phrases必備素材積累(P1S1)Whenthatdogjumpedoutatme,

Ifrozewithterror,

tooscaredtomoveaninch.

那條狗突然跳出來沖向我，我嚇呆了，一動(dòng)也不敢動(dòng)。1.我站著不動(dòng)，嚇得不敢前進(jìn)，

也不敢后退。Istood

still,________________________________________sentences練能生巧：利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。tooscaredtomoveforwardorstepback.2.當(dāng)她以為自己把票弄丟了時(shí)，她著實(shí)驚慌起來。______________________________atthethoughtthatshe’dlostthetickets.4.聽到這個(gè)可怕的消息，我們驚慌失措。Hearingtheterriblenews,_____________________________________sentences練能生巧：利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。(P1S4)Hewasthrownintopanic,hishandsshakingwithfear.他一下子驚慌起來，嚇得雙手顫抖。(P2修辭S3)Panicbegantoboilinhisstomach.

Heshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.他恐慌起來。他渾身發(fā)抖，覺得如坐針氈。(P3S6)Panicconsumed/swallowedher.Shefeltthebloodinherbodycooled/frozerapidly.她十分恐慌。她覺得她的血液都凝固了。getintoapanic陷入恐慌中beseizedwithpanic/panicsetsin

驚慌失措2.當(dāng)她以為自己把票弄丟了時(shí)，

她著實(shí)驚慌起來。______________________________atthethoughtthatshe’dlostthetickets.ShewasthrownintopanicShegotintoapanic/Shewasseizedwithpanic4.聽到這個(gè)可怕的消息，

我們驚慌失措。

Hearingtheterriblenews,

_____________________________________sentences練能生巧：利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。wewerethrownintopanic.Wegotintoapanic.Wewereseizedwithpanic.3.我很害怕父親會發(fā)現(xiàn)我對他撒了謊。___________________________________thatmyfatherwouldfindoutIhadliedtohim.sentencesadj.:afraid/terrified/scared/frightened練能生巧：利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。Iwasafraid/terrified/scared/frightened(P2神態(tài)S1)

Janeturnedwhite/pale,

andalookofpanic/horrorcrossed/spreadacrossherface.簡臉色變得蒼白，臉上掠過驚恐的表情。(P2心理S4)

IsensedamanwasfollowingmeandIwasscaredoutofmywits.

我感到有個(gè)人跟著我，我嚇得魂不附體。5.他臉色蒼白，看上去嚇得魂不附體。______________________________________________________________________________________sentences練能生巧：利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。Heturnedwhite/pale,lookingthathewasscaredoutofwits.11(be)inacoldsweat一身冷汗(P2無靈S4)Frank’sheartraced/beat/poundedwidly/violentlywithfear.弗蘭克嚇得心狂跳。6.我一身冷汗，心臟也怦怦跳，透不過氣來。______________________________________________.Icouldn’tbreathe.sentences練能生巧：利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。Iwasinacoldsweatandmyheartwasbeatingviolently練能生巧：根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，用一句話續(xù)寫。描寫男孩看到“我”時(shí)的恐懼。

IthoughtIwouldcatchthechildandmakehimmyfriendbeforehewasoldenoughtobefrightenedofmyterribleface.我想我會抓住那個(gè)小孩，趁他還沒有長大到懂得害怕我這張臉，我要讓他成為我的朋友。

SoIcaughtthelittleboy,butwhenhesawmyface,...Iwouldcatchthechildascaryface動(dòng)作+情感詞匯神態(tài)+情感詞匯神態(tài)+肢體語言SoIcaughtthelittleboy,butwhenhesawmyface,...panicked;coveredhisface;screamedloudlyalookofpaniccrossedhisface;hiseyesfullofhorrorhisfacewasdeadwithfright;trembledallover

Jane與Tom兩人本來一起去露營。但兩人發(fā)生爭吵，Jane負(fù)氣一個(gè)人離開。走著走著，她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己到了一個(gè)無人之地。小試牛刀:

根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，用本節(jié)課所學(xué)的句子進(jìn)行一段話續(xù)寫。注意情節(jié)的合理性和連貫性。根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，用本節(jié)課所學(xué)的句子進(jìn)行一段話續(xù)寫。

OneweekendinJuly,

Janeandherhusband,

Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbya

lakeintheforest.Unfortunately,

onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.

Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,

JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”and

walkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,

Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.

Aftershehad

climbedtoahighplace,

sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.

Tohersurprise,

shesawnothingbutforestand,

farbeyond,

asnowcappedmountaintop.

Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.

“Help!”

Noreply.根據(jù)所給開頭續(xù)寫一段話：Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.

__________________________________________參考續(xù)寫：

Jane,extremelyfrightenedbythedarkness,feltherlegstremblingandherpalmss