英語教學(xué)課件：Unit1 Women of achievement Imitative Writing 模仿寫作

Unit1WomenofachievementImitativeWriting

模仿寫作林巧稚LinQiaozhi,,

（bear）in1901anddiedin1983.It(seem)shehadbeenverybusyinherchosencareer,_(travel)abroadtostudyaswellaswritingbooksandarticles.Oneofherbookswas(intend)forwomeninthecountryside.hardworkand(determine)aswellashergentlenature_gotherintomedicalschool.Shewas(kindness)and_(consider).LiQiaozhi,(devote)herwholelifetoherpatientsandchosenottohaveafamilyofherown,____________(respectandlove)bypeoplealloverthecountry.Herstorytoldusthatwomencanholduphalfofthesky.wasbornseemedtravellingintendeddeterminationkindconsiderate

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whoaspecialistinwomen’sdiseaseswasrespectedandlovedtravellingDoyouknowhowtodescribeaperson?name,age,appearance,occupation,achievement,hobby…假如你是班長，請根據(jù)下面的寫作內(nèi)容，寫一篇人物介紹，向即將到來的一個(gè)美國代表團(tuán)介紹你的化學(xué)老師。寫作內(nèi)容：1.化學(xué)鐘老師來自湖南,35歲左右，身體很強(qiáng)壯，戴著一副眼鏡；2對學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格，認(rèn)真?zhèn)湔n，認(rèn)真批改作業(yè)。3教學(xué)方法不同于別人，鼓勵學(xué)生思考，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的自學(xué)能力。4和學(xué)生打成一片，和藹可親，深受學(xué)生的愛戴和尊敬。步驟一：句子內(nèi)容的完整性

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化學(xué)鐘老師來自湖南,35歲左右。2.身體很強(qiáng)壯，戴著一副眼鏡；3.對學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格，認(rèn)真?zhèn)湔n，認(rèn)真批改作業(yè)。4.教學(xué)方法不同于別人，鼓勵學(xué)生思考，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的自學(xué)能力。5.和學(xué)生打成一片，和藹可親，深受學(xué)生的愛戴和尊敬。步驟二：句子所需的詞匯，短語，句型1MrZhong,fromHunan,35yearsold,2strong,with/wearapairofglasses3bestrictwith,preparehislessonswell,correctourhomeworkcarefullybedifferentfrom,encourage,develop,bekindto,…play…with…loveandrespect…步驟三：連詞成句，連句成篇

MrZhong,ourchemistryteacher,whoisfromHunan,isabout35yearsold.Heisstrongwithapairofglassesonhisnose.Heisstrictwithus,heprepareshislessonswellandhecorrectsourhomeworkcarefully.Histeachingstyleisdifferentfromothers;heencouragesustothinkanddevelopourabilitytostudybyourselves.Hehelpsus,caresforus,andisverykindtous;besides,heplaysbasketballandfootballwithusinhissparetime,soweallloveandrespecthim.步驟四：句子結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜性和句子內(nèi)容的連貫性MrZhong,ourchemistryteacher,whoisfromHunan,isabout35yearsold.Heisstrongwithapairofglassesonhisnose.Heisstrictwithusinourstudy;besides,heprepareshislessonswellandcorrectsourhomeworkcarefully.Histeachingstyleisquitedifferentfromthatoftheothers;moreover,healwaysencouragesustothinkhardanddevelopourabilitytostudyonourown.Heoftenhelpsus,caresforus,andisverykindtous;what’smore,healwaysplaysbasketballwithusinhissparetime---weallloveandrespecthim.Writingsteps:步驟一：句子內(nèi)容的完整性步驟二：句子所需的詞匯、短語、句型步驟三：連詞成句，連句步驟四：句子結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜性和句子內(nèi)容的連貫性成篇

Let'stry!WhatdoyouthinkofMissHuang?假如你是班長，請根據(jù)下面的寫作內(nèi)容，寫一篇人物介紹，向即將到來的一個(gè)美國代表團(tuán)介紹你的歷史老師。寫作內(nèi)容：1.歷史黃老師35歲左右，身高1.65米，身材苗條,裝扮入時(shí)。2.工作認(rèn)真，負(fù)責(zé)任，對學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格；3.自童年以來，她就決心成為一名老師，把一生都致力于教育事業(yè)。4.教學(xué)方法不同于別人，講課生動，經(jīng)常鼓舞學(xué)生。5.她樂于助人，關(guān)心學(xué)生，為人隨和，在課余時(shí)間常和學(xué)生一起打羽毛球，深受學(xué)生的愛戴和尊重。步驟一：句子內(nèi)容的完整性1.這位歷史老師叫黃老師，35歲左右。2.身高1.65米，頭發(fā)又長又卷，身材苗條,裝扮入時(shí)。3.對學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格，工作認(rèn)真，負(fù)責(zé)任。4.自童年以來，她就決心成為一名老師，把一生都致力于教育事業(yè)。5.教學(xué)方法不同于別人，講課生動，經(jīng)常鼓舞學(xué)生。6.她樂于助人，關(guān)心學(xué)生，為人隨和，在課余時(shí)間常和學(xué)生一起打羽毛球，深受學(xué)生的愛戴和尊重。步驟二：句子所需的詞匯、短語、句型1MissHuang,35yearsold,21.65meterstall,

withlongandcurlyhair,slimandsmart3bestrictwith,behard-working,beresponsible4sincechildhood,decidetodosth,devoteoneselftodoingsth5bedifferentfrom,livelyandinteresting,inspire,develop,helpsb,careforsb,beeasy-going,playbasketballwithsb,loveandrespect…步驟三：連詞成句，連句成篇

MissHuang,ourhistoryteacher,isasmartyoungladywithlongandcurlyhair,whois35yearsold,1.65meterstallandisveryslim.Sheisstrictwithus,andsheishard-workingandresponsible.Sincechildhood,shehasdecidedtobecomeateacherandshedevotesherselftoteaching.Herteachingstyleisdifferentfromothers;herclassesarelivelyandinteresting.Sheofteninspiresus.Shehelpsus,caresforus,andiseasy-going;besides,sheplaysbadmintonwithusinhersparetime,soweallloveandrespecther.步驟四：句子結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜性和句子內(nèi)容的連貫性MissHuang,ourhistoryteacher,isasmartyoungladywithlongandcurlyhair,whois35yearsold,1.65meterstallandisveryslim.Sheisstrictwithusinourstudy;besides,sheishard-workingandresponsible.Herteachingstyleisquitedifferentfromthatoftheothersandherclasssesarelivelyandint