【高中英語讀后續(xù)寫】情感描寫

第五部分寫作第三節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫：具象描寫突破五、情感描寫（一）“感到開心happy”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。1.概括描寫：當(dāng)媽媽親吻他時，他開心極了。Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,hewascheerful.具象描寫1：當(dāng)媽媽親吻他時，他開心極了，似乎他是在世界上最開心的人。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,hewasfullofjoyasifhe

werethehappiestpersonintheworld.具象描寫2：當(dāng)媽媽親吻他時，他開心極了，臉上堆滿笑容，燦爛的笑容照亮了整個房間。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：當(dāng)媽媽親吻他時，他開心極了，歡欣雀躍地跳起舞來。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,hewascheerfulthathisface

beamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.Whenthemotherkissedhimonthecheek,

hewascheerfulanddancedwithjoyandsweetness.2.概括描寫：他被這個表演逗樂了。Hewasamusedbytheperformance.具象描寫1：看了這個表演，他笑得合不攏嘴。(face)________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫2：看了這個表演，他咯咯地笑著，興奮得尖叫起來。(voice)________________________________________________________________________________(face)Afterwatchingtheperformance,hissmilebroadenedfromeartoear.(voice)Afterwatchingtheperformance,hegiggledandsquealedwithexcitement.具象描寫3：看了這個表演，他拍了拍手，高興得跳上跳下。(body)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(body)Afterwatchingtheperformance,heclappedhishandstogetherandjumpedupanddownwithjoy.（二）“感到滿意satisfied”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。1.概括描寫：他看著我，滿意地笑了。Helookedatmeandsmiledwithsatisfaction.具象描寫1：他看著我，滿意地笑了，比我期望的要多。________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫2：他看到我把任務(wù)完成了，滿意地笑了。________________________________________________________________________________Helookedatmeandsmiledwithsatisfaction.ThatwouldbemorethanIhaveexpected.Seeingmytaskfinishedgavehimasenseofsatisfaction.具象描寫3：他滿意地笑了，拍了拍我的肩膀，說：“好樣的！”________________________________________________________________________________Hesmiledwithsatisfaction,pattingmeontheshoulderandsaid,“goodjob!”（三）“感到興奮thrilled”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。概括描寫：當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮極了。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltthrilled.具象描寫1：當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮極了，不知道該說什么好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫2：當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時，她的眼睛里閃爍著興奮的光芒。________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮得心怦怦直跳。___________________________________________________________________________________________Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltsothrilledthat

shedidn’t

know

what

to

say.具象描寫2：當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時，她的眼睛里閃爍著興奮的光芒。________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮得心怦怦直跳。________________________________________________________________________________Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.（四）“感動moved”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。概括描寫：聽了這故事，她非常感動。Shewasmuch

moved

atthestory.具象描寫1：聽了這故事，她感動得一句話都說不出來。________________________________________________________________________________Shewastoomovedatthestorytospeakaword.具象描寫2：聽了這故事，她感動得哭了，一句話也沒說。________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：聽了這故事，她太感動了，以致于眼眶中充滿淚水。________________________________________________________________________________Movedtotearsatthestory,shefailedtoutteraword.Shewassotouchedatthestorythathereyeswerefulloftears.（五）“感到希望hopeful”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。概括描寫：我再次充滿自信和希望。Iamfullofconfidenceandhopeagain.具象描寫1：有時，當(dāng)我坐下來舉頭看一看，內(nèi)心再次充滿自信和希望。________________________________________________________________________________SometimeswhenIsitaroundandlookup,Iamfullofconfidenceandhopeagain.具象描寫2：展望明天，我們共創(chuàng)美好未來。________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：但當(dāng)我站在匹茲堡，我對未來充滿了希望。________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtotomorrow,wewillcreateabetterfuturetogether.ButbeinghereinPittsburgh,I’mhopefulaboutthefuture.（六）“感到悲傷sad”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。概括描寫：一聽到那個壞消息，她悲傷不已。Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltextremelysad.具象描寫1：一聽到那個壞消息，她悲傷不已，默默地站在那里，眼淚順著臉頰往下流。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Uponhearingthebadnews,

shefeltextremelysadandstoodtheresilently,tearsrollingdownhercheeks.具象描寫2：一聽到那個壞消息，她悲傷不已，大哭起來，跑出了房間。________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：一聽到那個壞消息，她悲傷不已，抽泣著，雙手捂著臉。________________________________________________________________________________Uponhearingthebadnews,

shefeltextremelysad,burstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.Uponhearingthebadnews,

shefeltextremelysadandsobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.（七）“感到生氣angry”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。1.概括描寫：Sheldon聽了我的話很生氣。Sheldonfeltveryangryatmywords.具象描寫1：Sheldon聽了我的話很生氣，他用灼熱的目光怒視著我。________________________________________________________________________________Sheldonfeltveryangryatmywordsandheglaredatmewithburningeyes.具象描寫2：Sheldon聽了我的話很生氣，氣得沖出房間，狠狠地摔門而去。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：Sheldon聽了我的話很生氣，氣得說不出話來。________________________________________________________________________________Sheldonfeltsoangryatmywordsthathe

stormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.

Filledwithanger/furyatmywords,Sheldonwas

unableto

utterasingleword.2.概括描寫：她對我說的話很是生氣。ShewasveryangryatwhatIsaid.具象描寫1：她的臉頰變紅了，眉毛也縮了起來。(face)________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫2：她咬牙切齒向我咆哮。(voice)________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：她握緊拳頭，揣在身體兩側(cè)，使勁地蹬腳。(body)________________________________________________________________________________(face)Hercheeksturnedredandhereyebrowsnarrowed.(voice)Shegrowledatmethroughclenchedteeth.(body)Sheclenchedherfists,jammingthemintohersidesandstampedherfeetheavily.（八）“感到擔(dān)憂worried”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。概括描寫：他一直擔(dān)心英語考試。HehasbeenworriedabouttheEnglishtest.具象描寫1：他看完英語試卷，愁眉不展地抬起頭來。________________________________________________________________________________AfterreadingtheEnglishtestpaper,heraisedhisheadwithaworriedfrown.具象描寫2：他為英語考試緊張得半宿都沒睡著，憂心忡忡。________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：面對英語考試，他表面上很鎮(zhèn)靜，內(nèi)心卻十分擔(dān)憂。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HewassonervousabouttheEnglishtestthathelayawakehalfthenight,worrying.FacingtheEnglishtest,hehadanoutwardappearanceofcalm,butdeepdownhewasreallyworried.（九）“感到害怕frightened”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。概括描寫：一看到狼，Mac害怕極了。（2017年浙江高考卷）Atthesightofthewolf,Macfeltveryscared.具象描寫1：一看到那只兇惡的狼，Mac嚇得嗓子發(fā)緊，膝蓋發(fā)軟。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Macfeltsoscaredthat

histhroattightenedandhiskneesfelt

weak.具象描寫2：一看到那只兇惡的狼，Mac嚇呆了，不敢動彈。________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：一看到那只兇惡的狼，Mac有一種強(qiáng)烈的恐懼感，手掌都在冒汗，心怦怦直跳。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Macfrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Macwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror,hispalmssweatingandhisheartpoundingwildly.（十）“感到絕望hopeless”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。概括描寫：Tony感到很絕望。Tonyfelthopeless/desperate.具象描寫1：Tony感到很絕望，慢慢抽泣起來。________________________________________________________________________________Tonyfelthopeless/desperateandsobbedslowly.具象描寫2：Tony感到很絕望，覺得上帝把他遺棄在世界的一個角落里。________________________________________________________________________________具象描寫3：聽到這個消息，Tony托尼非常絕望，他把悲傷淹沒在酒里。________________________________________________________________________________Tonyfeltsohopeless/desperatethathefeltGodabandonedhimatonecorneroftheworld.Hearingthenews,sodesperatewasTonythathedrownedsadnessinwine.（十一）“感到震驚shocked”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。概括描寫：她吃驚地看了他一眼。Shegavehimashockedlook.具象描寫1：她眼睛瞪得大大的，吃驚地盯著他。________________________________________Hereyeswidenedandstaredathiminshock.（十一）“感到震驚shocked”的具象描寫練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。概括描寫：Shegavehimashockedlook.她吃驚地看了他一眼。具象描寫1：她眼睛瞪得大大的，吃驚地盯著他。________________________________________