高考英語(yǔ)作文銜接升級(jí)專練

（四）銜接升級(jí)專練（限時(shí)30分鐘）A［題目要求］（2018?聊城一模）假定你是李華，你的外國(guó)朋友Lucy發(fā)現(xiàn)中國(guó)人很喜歡紅色，但是她不確定中國(guó)人在什么場(chǎng)合下會(huì)使用紅色。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封信，告訴她中國(guó)人對(duì)于紅色的理解和使用。要點(diǎn)如下：.中國(guó)人對(duì)于紅色的理解；.使用紅色的場(chǎng)合；.使用紅色的一些禁忌。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLucy,I,mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua添加銜接詞并升級(jí)加黑的銜接詞DearLucy,I,mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youmentionedthatweChinesepreferredbutyouareatalossaboutwhentouseit.Here,Iwilltellyousomethingaboutit.Yes,wedolikered,becauseredstandsforhappinessandgoodfortuneinourculture.①Therefore（因此）,youcanseepeoplewearredclothesandhangredlanternsinSpringFestival.Andtheseniorcitizensevengivetheirgrandchildrensomeluckymoneyinredenvelopes.Besides,youngcouplesalsodressredontheirtraditionalweddings.②However（然而）,besuretoavoidwearingredclothesduringsomesadevents,③suchas（例如）attendingfuneralsandvisitingsomepatients.Ifyoudoso,itisreallyrude.Ihopemyexplanationswillbeofuseforyou.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua［我來(lái)提升］將文中加黑詞匯升級(jí)becausefnthatBesides—Furthermore/MoreoverIf-Supposing/Suppose［積累練習(xí)］將下列銜接詞進(jìn)行升級(jí)infact—asamatteroffactbecauseof-onaccountof/due一to/owingto/thankstoassoonas—themoment/immediately/on（uponj+名詞although-despite/inspiteofinmyview-inmypointofviewB［題目要求］（2018.菏澤一模）假定你是李華，正在英國(guó)某中學(xué)做交換生，得知校乒乓球隊(duì)正在招收新隊(duì)員。請(qǐng)你給隊(duì)長(zhǎng)Mark寫封郵件申請(qǐng)加入，內(nèi)容包括：.自我介紹；.申請(qǐng)加入的原因；.期待回復(fù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMark,Yourssincerely,LiHua添加銜接詞并升級(jí)加黑的銜接詞DearMark,I,mLiHua,anexchangestudentinourschool.I'mwritingtoapplytobeamemberofourschoolping-pongteam.①In_my_opinion/As_far_as_I_am_concerned（在我看來(lái)），Iamawisechoicefortheteam.Firstly,Iamenthusiasticaboutping-pongandstartedplayingitinprimaryschool.Secondly,Ihaveplayedinseveralping-pongmatchesandperformedwell.Finally,itisplayingping-pongthatconnectsyourcountrywithminecloser,soI,dliketotakethischancetomakefriendswithmorepeoplewhoalsoenjoyplayingping-pong.②In_a_word/In_conclusion/In_summary/To_sum_up（總之），Ireallyhopetojoinyou.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.Yourssincerely,LiHua［我來(lái)提升］將文中加黑詞匯升級(jí)Firstly—Tobeginwith/TostartwithSecondly—Inaddition/What′smoreFinally-Lastbutnotleast［積累練習(xí)］將下列銜接詞進(jìn)行升級(jí)then-afterthat/afterwardssometimes—occasionally/onceina_while/fromtimetotimesuddenly—allofasuddenimmediately—inaflashcomingsoon—aroundthecornerC［題目要求］（2018?龍巖一模）假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，一些美國(guó)中學(xué)生將于元宵節(jié)到你校訪問(wèn)、交流，請(qǐng)給對(duì)方代表Mike寫封郵件，向他介紹活動(dòng)安排，內(nèi)容包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、項(xiàng)目如猜燈謎、吃湯圓、賞花燈等）。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：燈謎lanternriddleDearMike,Yours,LiHua下面考生作文中行文混亂、不分段，個(gè)別語(yǔ)句顛倒，并缺少銜接詞，請(qǐng)加以改正［考生作文］DearMike,DelightedtolearnthatyouandsomeotherAmericanstudentsarecomingtoourschoolattheLanternFestival,Iam,onbehalfofourschool,writingtoinformyouofourschool'sarrangementsforyourvisitsothatyoucanexperiencethistraditionalChinesefestival.Ihopethatallthiswillsatisfyyouandleaveyouagoodimpression.Asscheduled,youwilljoinChinesestudentsinsomefunactivitieslikeguessinglanternriddles,you'reexpectedtogivethestudentsaspeechonhowtolearnEnglisheffectively.Youwillbeinvitedtoeatsweetdumplings(Tangyuan).Youaresupposedtowatchthesplendidfireworksshowaswellasappreciatebeautifullanterns,whichisboundtogiveyouabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours,LiHua［改后作文］DearMike,..Delighted.tolearnthatyouandsome,otherAmerican.students,arecomingto.our.s.choolat.theLantern.Festival,.I..am,.on..behalf.of..our.,school,.rm..you.,of.our.school'sarrangements.for.your.visit.so.thatyou.can.experience.this.traditional.Chinesefestival.As.scheduled,.duringthe.daytime,youwill.join.Chinese.students.insome.fun.activities.like.,guessing,lantern,riddles,,and.you'.re..expected.Io..give..the..students一a.speech..on..how..to.learnEnglisheffectively..In.theevening,.you.will.beinvited.to.eat.sweetdumplings.(Tangyuan),.After…that,.you..are.supposed.to.watch..the.splendid.fireworks..show.as.well..as.appreciate.beautifullanterns,.whichis.bound.to.give.youa.better.understanding.of.Chinese.culture..I.hope.thatall.this一.will.satisfy.you.and.leave.you.agood.impression.Looking.forward.to.yourcoming.Yours,…LiHua［題目要求］（2018?河南安陽(yáng)一模）假定你是李華，你在某論壇上看到美國(guó)高中生Peter暑假期間想到中國(guó)來(lái)旅游并希望能找一個(gè)中國(guó)的高中生給他當(dāng)導(dǎo)游。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：.自我介紹；.你的優(yōu)勢(shì)條件；.希望與他同行。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearPeter,Yourssincerely,LiHua下面考生作文中行文混亂、不分段，個(gè)別語(yǔ)句顛倒，并缺少銜接詞，請(qǐng)加以改正［考生作文］DearPeter,I,mLiHua,ahighschoolstudentinChina.I'mgladtolearnthatyouwanttopayavisittoChinaduringthesummervacationandthatyouareinneedofaChinesestudentwhocanbeyourguide.Ithinknobodyismorequalifiedthanme.Herearethereasonsforit.Ihopetohaveagoodjourneywithyouinthenearfuture!IhavebeenlearningEnglishformanyyearsandIcanspeakitfluently.Therewillbenodifficultyincommunicatingbetweenus.IhavenotonlylearnedaboutmanyplacesofinterestinChina,butalsotraveledaroundtheseplaces.Iknowmuchaboutthemandcansharemyknowledgewithyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua［改后作文］DearPeter,…I：m_LiHua,a.high.schoolstudent.in一China」：m.glad.to.learn.that.youwantto.pay.avisitto一China.duringthe.summer.vacation.and.thatyou.arein