如何取得作文高分-四級CET-4作文寫作精講(三)

如何取得作文高分

--CET4作文精講（三）DAIHuiEnglishDept.,SFLGDUT.Howevermeanyourlifeis,meetitandliveit;donotshunitandcallithardnames.Itisnotsobadasyouare.Itlookspoorestwhenyouarerichest.Thefault-finderwillfindfaultsinparadise.Loveyourlife,poorasitis.Donottroubleyourselfmuchtogetnewthings,whetherclothesorfriends.Turntheold,returntothem.Thingsdonotchange;wechange.Sellyourclothesandkeepyourthoughts.---HenryDavidThoreau.二、TYPE2解決問題型

題目：Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提綱：（1）為什么自行車在中國這樣普及（2）和汽車的比較（3）自行車在中國的前途.TYPE2解決問題型題目：CertificateCrazeonCampus1106提綱：1.現(xiàn)在許多人熱衷于各種證書考試；

2.其目的各不相同；

3.在我看來。.Nowadaaysthereisa"certificarecraze'oncampus.Thousandsarekeenonworkingforvariouscertificates,suchasCETBand4andBand6certificates,BusinessEnglisnCertificate,andotherdifferentprofessionalcertificates.

.Butwhyisthereissuchacraze?First,ithasmuchtodowiththefiercecompetitiveworkforcemarket.Itiswidelybelivedthatthemorecertificatesacollegestudenthasongraduation,thebetterchancehehasforadecentjob.Second,manystudentsjustwanttoprovethemselvesbyworkingforacertificate.Theyhavebeeninterested

inacertainfieldandhaveworkedhardonit,sotheywantacertificatetojustifytheirefforts.

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Ithinkthecertificatecrazeisgoodforboththesocietyandstudents.Whenstudentscombinetheirworkforsomecertificateswiththeiracademicefforts,theircollegelifewillbemorefruitfulthanotherwise.Inrecentyears,gettingacertificatehasbecomeanewcrazeamongcollegestudents.Justrandomlyaskastudentoncampuswhatheorsheisbusydoing;quitepossibly,youmaygettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.Whydoesthiscrazeappear?P1.Therearemainlytworeasonsbehindthisphenomenon.Firstofall,itistheemploymentpressurethatforcescollegestudentstogetmorecertificates.Withtheadmissionexpansionofcolleges,alotmoregraduateshavetofacethefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket.Howcanonemakehimselfmorecompetitive?Morecertificatesathand,maybe.Secondly,diplomaandcertificatesarestillimportantstandardsbywhichmanyemployersmeasureaperson’sability.Inordertoincreasethequalificationsforajob,thestudentscompelthemselvestorunfromoneexamtoanother.P2.P3Frommypointofview,weshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincecertificatesdonotnecessarilyproveone’sability.Beingcrazyingettingcertificationsblindlyisnothingbutwastingtime.Toconclude,weshouldfocusonimprovingourabilitybutnotgettingacertificateofnopracticalvalue..常用句子拓展B．觀點句型人們重視/看中/珍愛某物placeahighvalueonsth./treasuresth/cherishsth.增強競爭力sharpenone'sedge/enhanceone’scompetitiveness起...重要作用playacentralrolein/playachiefpartin對...有好處...paysoff/itpaysto../sth.isbeneficial(rewarding)對...有壞處...haveanegativeimpacton/doharm(damage)tosth.促進/提高/增強/改善giveaboostto/optimize/enhance/boost/accelerate減低/降低/影響decrease/decelerate/influence/haveanimpacton/haveeffectson.常用句子拓展結(jié)尾類A.引出結(jié)尾句型最重要的是-Lastbutnotleast/Onethingtobenotedis/TheultimateelementIhavetomakeis/Thegreatestsignificanceofallis/無論怎樣-Nomatterwhathappens,onethingisthat/Whateveroccurs,justbearinmindthat…/毋庸置疑-itgoeswithoutsayingthat…/Needlesstosay,…/Itisabsolutelydoubtlessthat…綜上所述，我們可得出結(jié)論是…Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Takingintoaccountallthesefeatures/Fromtheanalysisabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat….常用句子拓展結(jié)尾類B.措施類真到了該…的時候了Itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasison(好)/Itishightimethatweputanendtotheundesirablephenomenonof…(壞)

毋庸置疑，對于..問題，我們應(yīng)該給與更多重視。Thereislittledoubt/nodenyingthatfurtherattentionmustbepaidtotheproblemof…很必要的是我們應(yīng)采取有效措施來阻止事情的惡化。Itisindispensablethateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentopreventthesituationfromworsening..總結(jié)T2(問題解決型)命題特點提綱1出現(xiàn)一種現(xiàn)象/情況。提綱2出現(xiàn)“為什么”，“原因”,“解釋”，“例如”提綱3出現(xiàn)“如何解決”,“怎么辦”,“你的做法”.請根據(jù)提綱寫一段結(jié)尾。(7MIN)提綱：如何提高學校的伙食質(zhì)量。要求：按照TYPE2的模板，寫一個結(jié)尾，不超過50詞。.Homework:CreatingaGreenCampus140words.提綱:1)建設(shè)綠色校園十分重要2）綠色校園不僅指綠色環(huán)境3）為了建設(shè)綠色校園我們應(yīng)該。。。

.作文實用技巧(下)

1．用詞a.形象生動，多用實意詞和少用超高頻詞China’seconomybeginstoincrease/（）.soarPiracyhasbecomeaphenomenonthatcanbeseeneverywhere.Piracyhasbecomea（）phenomenon.prevalent/prevailing.挖掘身邊的美詞地名：南屏晚鐘，雷峰夕照，塞北，江南人名：齊白石，江小魚，李若竹，方喆人詞牌：西江月，如夢令，憶江南形容詞：繾綣，旖旎，娉婷，料峭愛情：關(guān)關(guān)雎鳩，在河之洲。。。盈盈一水間。。?！拔倚羞^許多地方的橋，看過許多次數(shù)的云，喝過許多種類的酒，卻只愛過

一個正當最好年齡的人?！?/p>

.“翩若驚鴻，婉若游龍，榮曜秋菊，華茂春松。仿佛兮若輕云之蔽月，飄飖兮若流風之回雪?！?/p>

--洛神賦，曹植.

“湖水悠悠漾愛痕，岸花搖影狎波翻。只容天女來修供，不遣阿難著體溫?！?所謂文化的意義，就是時空荏苒，千年之下，仍然能用相同的符號（文字、音樂、繪畫、建筑，以及一切與藝術(shù)相關(guān)的人類活動），呼應(yīng)你類似的美好感受，從而體味生之美好。人與動物最根本的區(qū)別，大抵就在這里。

.1．用詞b.詞語的感情色彩Iamfoolish,mysonis(),andmyex-husbandis().Silly,stupidWomenare()and();menareuglyandthin.homelyandslender.1．用詞c.準確ImustimprovemyEnglishlevel/（）.Thetrafficinbigcitiesisgettingmoreandmorecrowded/（）..1．用詞d.明白易懂Tobeathree-good/（）student,wehavetoworkhard.Excellent/all-round/versatileInanutshell/（）,IthinkthebestwaytoreadistoreadextensivelyInconclusion,toconclude,Allinall.2．句子

a.句法結(jié)構(gòu)牛津高階英漢雙解1064-1065：40/18SV/SVO/SP.日耳曼語系的句法名詞陰陽性：太陽，月亮，勺子，叉子，動詞變位，六種四個格位NGAD介詞多語序發(fā)音思維.2．句子b.意義表達和邏輯意義表達：邏輯：e.g.Smokingisdefinitelyharmfulnowadays,______,smokingbanisuniversalacrossthenation..2．句子c.位置和功能（主題句，段落主題句，總結(jié)句）d.連接–經(jīng)典連接。Firstly,…Secondly,…Thirdly,…Foronething,…Foranother,…Lastbutimportantly,…Inthefirstplace,…Inthesecondplace,…Finally,…Ononehand,…Ontheotherhand,…Firstofall,…Inaddition,…Consequently,…Tobeginwith,…what’smore,…lastbutnottheleast,…….T2問題解決型模板P1S1第一段：。。。正成為一個頗受關(guān)注的話題，在人群中引起熱議。Recently,題目hasbecomeacommoninterestamongpeople/universitystudents,whichinturnleadstoahotdiscussion.Presentlyagreatnumberofpeoplerecognizedtheimportanceof題目。.T2問題解決型模板P2S1第二段：什么原因使得大家如此關(guān)注呢？舉例：CertificateCrazeonCampus.HowtoBuildAGreenCampusOnlineShoppingHarmfulnessofFakeCommoditiesCheatinginExams.T2問題解決型模板P2S1Whatarethereasonsforpeople’sattentiontothisphenomenon?Whatonearthleadstosuchcraze?Whatarethereasonsaccountingforsuchphenomenon?Howmanyreasonscouldpossiblyaccountforthistendency?.T2問題解決型模板P2S2正（中）首先，XX問題的重要性在于。。。Firstly,thesignificanceof題目liesinthefactthatpeople/studentsareindesperateneedof一個綠色校園很多證書有效的英語學習一技之長inordertohaveaguaranteed環(huán)境/未來/明天。.T2問題解決型模板P2S3正（中）其次，擁有…也可以使我們更好的獲取知識。Obtaining/Having題目里的核心名詞（最好能用和題目不同的表述）canenableustogainabetterandmoreprofoundunderstandingof知識/環(huán)境/生活/社會itself。例如。。。TakeYYforexample..T2問題解決型模板P2S4正（中）最后，理解了XX的重要性可以幫助我們認清A和B的關(guān)系。Aunderstandingof綠色校園/外語的重要性/考證現(xiàn)象,finally,canmakeusmoreawareoftherelationshipbetween人類和世界學習與工作生活與健康學習和環(huán)境

效率和經(jīng)濟.T2問題解決型模板P2S2（反）如：壓力山大，人與人的不信任、環(huán)境污染，作弊,假貨,食品安全問題。。。首先，XX是由于人們/學生們沒有真正意識到。。。的價值Inthefirstplace,theXXresultsfromalackofrecognitionofthetruevalueof…People,firstofall,failedtorecognizetherealvalueof…誠信健康學習知識產(chǎn)權(quán)例如：.T2問題解決型模板P2S4（反）其次，目前的生活方式/學習方式太過于強調(diào)實用性/功利性。Additionally,thetraditionalwayoflearning/livingemphasizestoomuchontheso-calledpracticality/function/efficiency/utility.例如。。。學鋼琴只是為了獲獎

建電廠只是為了發(fā)電盜版只是為了使用打工只是為了掙錢.T2問題解決型模板P3S1我們該怎樣做來支持/鼓勵/反對/制止這種現(xiàn)象呢？Toconclude,howshallwedotosupport/advocate/comeoutinfavorof…fightagainst/beagainst/opposetheabovephenomenon?.T2問題解決型模板P3S2一方面，政府/當局者/校方應(yīng)該制定清晰的政策來引導人們的認識Ononehand,thegovernmenttheauthorityuniversitiesshouldworkoutmorerelevantregulationstomakepeoplemoreorientedtotheimportanceofthisissue..T2問題解決型模板P3S3另一方面，公民/學生自己也要強化自己對。。問題的觸覺。Ontheotherhand,citizens/studentsthemselvesshouldalsoreinforcetheirownawarenessoferectingagreencampusharmfulnessoffakecommoditiesimportanceofEnglishlearningseverityofcheatinginexams.T2問題解決型模板P3S4只有兩方面努力結(jié)合好了，我們才能。。Onlybyachievingabalancebetweentheabovetwofactorsthejointeffortsoftheabove-mentionedfactorscanpeople/studentshaveabrightfuture..3避免中式英語改錯練習07061．Englishinterestingclub2．Thenumbersassociatedwithidentitytheftarebeginningtoaddupfastthesedays.3．Ifyoufinishthecourses,you'llbecomethesocialqueeninourparty.What’smore,inaddition,wealsocanproducesomesurveiner.4．You’llfellgoodwhenyoujoininourclub.5．Onlyneedaletterwithyourname,age,likesomething,goodatsomethingandsoon.6．Iknowsomeonecouldn'tunderstandourclub'smeanings.7．Ourclubisthebestclub.WhyIsaythat?8．Don'tlosemoretime.9．Ourclubisyourdevelopingroom.10.Somuchiswaitingforyourparticipatein..改錯練習

070611．Thebenefitsjoinourclubisyoucanimproveyourkilloftakingphoto.12．Ifamansows,heshallareap.13．Anewclub“PPT”14．Inourclub,therearemanynumbers.15．Thanyouhearthis,areyoumindmoving,16．“Welcometoourclub”,amansaid.17．Amanwhoisusefultothesociety.18．First,ifyoujoinourclub,you'llgetscorestogainacademicmarks,thescorescanhelpyougetscholarshiponahigherchance.Second,improveyourself.19．Ourclubwaitforyourtelephone.20．Areyoumoving?.改錯練習070621．YogacomefromIndonesia.22．Anythingisimpossible.23．Letusbuildheramorebrightfuture.24．Weveryveryhope…25．…forlovingstudyEnglishstudents,26．TheclubisaDengXiaoPingClub27．Wecannotbecomehe,butwecanstudyhe.28．Ourclubisclimethehillclub.29．Ourclubhaveaimportantthingwhichiseveryday.30．Youmustgotobedandgosleepingearly..P1:currently，XXplaysamoreandmoresignificantroleinourday-to-daylife/competitiveandchallengingsociety.AnincreasingnumberofpeopleshowgreatenthusiasmforXX..Theybelievethat…….P2:Xhasbroughtusalotofbenefitsbutcrea