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AhelpfulMexicanfamilyContinuationWriting12Textanalysis3Writingideas

WritingpracticeContents01TextanalysisStoryPlotwhenwherewhowhathowDuringthispastyearonthesideoftheroadIAMexicanfamily(father,mother,adaughter)AMexicanfamilyhelpedmefixmycarandrefusedmy20dollars.getasaw,cut,puthisjackontop,takethewheeloff,buyanewtireironOutliningthebasicinformation

Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK（千斤頂）,andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.wastiredofpeople’scoldness/indifferencedisappointedhopefulFiguringoutemotions

Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw（鋸子）fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron(撬車胎棒).Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.

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Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billintheman'shand,buthewouldn'ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.gratefulLastyear,theauthor’scarbrokedownthreetimes,andmostpeopleweretoolazytohelp.Theauthorwasverytiredofthis.Once,hiscarbrokedownagain.Hehadbeenontheroadsidefornearlythreehourswithoutanyonestoppingtohelp.Butjustashewasabouttogiveup,apassingMexicanfamilystoppedandofferedhelp.Summary02Writing

ideasPara.1:WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.Q1:

HowdidIrespondtothegirl’squestion?Q2:WhatfeelingsdidIhavewhenhearingthegirl’squestion?Surprised?Delighted?Embarrassed?Q3:Whogavethepaperbag(mentionedinPara.2)tome?

Q4:WhatdidIdobeforetheyleft(mentionedinPara.2)?

Para.2:Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Q1:Whatwascontainedinthepaperbag?Food?The$20bill?Anote?Q2:WhatdidIdoafterseeingthecontentsofthepaperbag?Q3:HowdidIfeel?Moved?Grateful?Guilty?Q4:Whatimpactdidthisexperiencehaveonme?WillIchangemyattitudetowardstheworld?How?

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Ipausedbriefly.Withmystomachrumbling(咕咕叫)A

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Withathoughtarisingthat…Itwasn’tlongbefore…“Hereyouare,”thegirlsaid,handing

apaperbagtome.Istaredfixedlyat…Para.

2Inapaperbagwere…SittinginmyJeep,Itookabiteof…Iwasmovedtotears

whenI…Tearsblurringmyvision.ItwasthefirsttimethatI…Fromthatdayon,everytime/whenever

…Ialwaysputmybestfootforwardto…Itwasfromthenonthat…WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.

NotuntilthendidIhearmystomachrumbling.Shakingmyheadawkwardly,Isaid,“Icangetlunchsomewhereonmywayback,”notwantingtobotherthewarmed-heartedfamilyanymore.“Waitaminute,sir,”thegirlstammeredinbrokenEnglish,sensingmyembarrassment.Inafewseconds,thegirlturnedup,withapaperbagheldtightlyinherhand.“Hereyouare,”shehandedittome.Ithankedthefamily,andthenwewavedgoodbyewithbestwishesforeachother.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.InsideweresomeMexicanfamily-madefoodandthe$20bill.IsatinmycareatingthebestfoodI’deverhad,tearsblurringmyvision.WhileIwaswaitingforhelpbeforeImetthefamily,Ihatedthisworld.ItwasthefirsttimeIhadnotbeensickofmycartroubleandfeltluckytohaveseenabeautifulheart.Fromthenon,whenevermeetingpeopleinneed,IhaveputmybestfootforwardtohelpthemlikethatMexicanfamily.Lexicialchunks厭倦……besickof費(fèi)心去做某事bothertodosth.

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