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一、北京冬奧

1.(2022?北京東城?高三期末)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,你的英國(guó)

筆友Jim給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件,提到他申請(qǐng)2022年北京冬奧會(huì)志愿者落選,請(qǐng)你給他

回一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:

1.表示安慰;

2.建議以其它方式關(guān)注冬奧會(huì)。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】例文

DearJim,

I'mreallysorrytohearthatyoudidn'tmakeit.Itisnaturalto

feeldisappointed.However,thereisnoneedtoworry,asthereare

variouswaystogetinvolved.

Evenifyoucan'tcomeinperson,youcanlogontotheofficial

websiteorappstoenjoyliveorrecordedbroadcasts,whichallows

youtofollowtheeventsalmostinrealtime.Alsoyoucanfind

reportsoneverydaylifeoftheathletesinBeijing.

What'smore,theaudienceareencouragedtosharetheircommentson

socialmediawhileenjoyingthegames.Ithinkitmightbe

interestingtoshareyourthoughtsonlineandmeanwhileinteractwith

bothfansandathletes.

Ibelieveyouwillenjoyyourself,sohavefuninanewway!

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)筆友Jim回郵件安慰他北京冬奧志

愿者落選并建議其它方式讓他關(guān)注冬奧。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

不同的:variousfdifferent

參與:getinvolvedftakepartin

而且:What'smorefbesides

與止匕同時(shí):meanwhile—atthesametime

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句:rmreallysorrytohearthatyoudidn,tmakeit.

拓展句:Hearingthatyoudidn'tmakeit,Iamreallysorry.

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型l]Evenifyoucan,tcomeinperson,youcanlogontothe

officialwebsiteorappstoenjoyliveorrecordedbroadcasts,which

allowsyoutofollowtheeventsalmostinrealtime.(運(yùn)用了evenif

引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句;運(yùn)用which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

[高分句型2]What'smore,theaudienceareencouragedtosharetheir

commentsonsocialmediawhileenjoyingthegames,(while弓|導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ)從

句使用了省略句)

二、親子關(guān)系

2.

(黑龍江省大興安嶺實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)2021-2022學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期期末考試英語(yǔ)試題)

假如你是李華,了解到有些同學(xué)很苦惱自己父母總在網(wǎng)上曬他/她的照片,你向

學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)校報(bào)投稿,對(duì)此事發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。

內(nèi)容包括:1.支持或反對(duì)“曬娃照片”;

2.用2至3個(gè)理由支撐你的觀點(diǎn)。

3.幫助他們想出解決問(wèn)題的方法。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右

2.第一句已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

Whileitiscommonforparentstoposttheirchildren'sphotos

onlinenowadays,somestudentsaroundmeareanxiousaboutit.

LiHua

【答案】例文

支持:

Whileitiscommonforparentstoposttheirchildren,sphotos

onlinenowadays,somestudentsaroundmeareanxiousaboutit.Asfor

me,it'ssomethingacceptable.

Inmyopinion,postingchildren'sphotosonlineisbeneficialto

peopleandmakesachildbetterknown.Asaresult,heislikelyto

havemorechancestobesuccessfulinthefuture.Itwillalsobe

easierforparentstocommunicatewiththeirfriends,fortheyhave

moretosharewitheachother.Besides,it'sawaytostrengthenan

onlinesocialcircleandconnectwithpeoplewedon'tknowbefore.

Althoughtheremaybesomedisadvantagesthatcomewithposting

children'sphotos,it'snotnecessarytobetoocautiousaboutit.

Weshouldhaveconfidenceinoursociety.

反對(duì):

Whileit'scommonforparentstoposttheirchildren'sphotos

onlinenowadays,somestudentsaroundmeareanxiousaboutit.Ihold

thesameviewasthem.Inmyopinion,itisnotalwaysthesmartest

orsafestthingtodoso.Whatparentsviewasdelightfulphotosmay

beinterpreteddifferentlybyothersandgiveafalseimageofwhat

thechildisreallylike.Besides,someindividualsorcompanies

stealchildren'simagesandusetheminadvertisementsorother

commercialactivities.Moreover,itcanresultinthembeingre-

sharedandalteredbyotheronlineuserswithoutpermission,which

mayendupdamagingtheirschoolstatusorfuturecareerprospects.

Inshort,haveagoodtalkwithyourparentstomakesuretheyare

cautiousaboutit.

【分析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于議論文。要求考生向?qū)W校的英語(yǔ)校報(bào)投稿,對(duì)有些同學(xué)很苦

惱自己父母總在網(wǎng)上曬他/她的照片一事發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

在我看來(lái):inmyopinion->frommyperspective

因止匕:asaresult-*therefore

而且:besides-,"moreover

增強(qiáng):strengthen->enhance

2.句式拓展

并列句變復(fù)合句

原句:Inmyopinion,postingchildren,sphotosonlineisbeneficial

topeopleandmakesachildbetterknown.

拓展句:Inmyopinion,thatparentspostchildren'sphotosonlineis

beneficialtopeopleandmakesachildbetterknown.

【點(diǎn)睛】

【高分句型11Itwillalsobeeasierforparentstocommunicatewith

theirfriends,fortheyhavemoretosharewitheachother.(運(yùn)用了

for引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)

【高分句型2】Althoughtheremaybesomedisadvantagesthatcomewith

postingchildren'sphotos,it'snotnecessarytobetoocautious

aboutit.(運(yùn)用了although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)

三、新冠相關(guān)

3.(2021?江西?景德鎮(zhèn)一中高一期中)為了提高人們的疫情防控意識(shí),緩解

全球疫情,你校學(xué)生會(huì)將倡議大家接種疫苗。假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華,請(qǐng)以

"Getvaccinatedandsavetheworld”為題,寫一份倡議書。內(nèi)容主要包

括:

1.接種疫苗的好處;

2.呼吁人們接種疫苗。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

【答案】例文:

GetVaccinatedandSavetheWorld

Dearschoolmates,

Overthepasttwoyears,thecoronavirushasmadeitswayaroundthe

world.Ithasastrongimpactonourlifeandstudy.Inorderto

containtheCOVID-19pandemic,ourschoolistoarrangeaCOVID-19

vaccinationcampaignfortheentirestudents.

Gettingvaccinatedmeansalot.Firstly,itwillkeepusfrom

infectionandcutoffthespreadchainofthecoronavirus.Thus,we

andourfamilieswillbeprotected.Secondly,oncegettingvaccinated,

weareunlikelytogetintosevereconditionevenifinfected.Last

butnottheleast,gettingeveryonevaccinatedwillmakethe

coronaviruslessdeadly,whichisthekeytotheendofthis

pandemic.

Westudentsshouldrespondactivelyandgetvaccinatedassoonas

possible.

TheStudentUnion

【分析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于倡議書。要求考生以"Getvaccinatedandsavethe

world”為題,寫一份倡議書,倡議大家接種疫苗。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

在……期間:overfduring

影響,作用:impactfinfluence

控制,遏制:containfcontrol

嚴(yán)重的,危急的:severeserious

2.句式拓展

原句:1Overthepasttwoyears,thecoronavirushas

madeitswayaroundtheworld.Ithasastrong

impactonourlifeandstudy.

拓展句:Overthepasttwoyears,thecoronavirushas

madeitswayaroundtheworld,whichhasastrong

impactonourlifeandstudy.

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1]Secondly,oncegettingvaccinated,weare

unlikelytogetintosevereconditionevenif

infected.(運(yùn)用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略)

[高分句型2]Lastbutnottheleast,gettingeveryone

vaccinatedwillmakethecoronaviruslessdeadly,which

isthekeytotheendofthispandemic(運(yùn)用/which

引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

四、太空探索

4.(2022?江蘇鹽城?高一期末)假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華,2021年12

月9日你和同學(xué)一起觀看了神州十三號(hào)航天員太空授課,請(qǐng)你發(fā)送一封電子郵

件給三位宇航員,內(nèi)容包括:

1.感謝宇航員們的精彩授課;

2.觀看太空授課后的收獲和感想;

3.祝愿宇航員凱旋歸來(lái)。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Dearastronauts,

I'mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchool

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】例文:

Dearastronauts,

PmLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchool.I'mwritingtoexpressmy

gratitudetoyouforyourmarveloussciencelectureinsidethespace

stationonDecember9,2021.

Afterwatchingthehour-longteleviseddemonstrations,Ihavea

betterknowledgeofspacescience.What'smore,I'mmore

enthusiasticaboutourcountry?sspaceexplorationprogram.I?mso

proudofourcountryJsadvancesinsciencethatI'mdeterminedto

beengagedinspaceindustryandmakecontributionstoourmotherland.

Wishyouatriumphantreturn.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生在和同學(xué)一起觀看了神州十三號(hào)航天員太

空授課后發(fā)送一封電子郵件給三位宇航員。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

感激:gratitude_*appreciation

極好的:marvelous->excellent

而且:what'smorefmoreover

參與:beengagedinfgetinvolvedin

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句:I'mwritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourmarvelous

sciencelectureinsidethespacestationonDecember9,2021.

拓展句:I'mwritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyour

marveloussciencelecturethatyoudeliveredinsidethespacestation

onDecember9,2021.

【點(diǎn)睛】

【高分句型1】What'smore,I'mmoreenthusiasticaboutour

country'sspaceexplorationprogram.(運(yùn)用了what'smore的語(yǔ)篇銜接

詞)

【高分句型2】I'msoproudofourcountry'sadvancesinscience

thatI'mdeterminedtobeengagedinspaceindustryandmake

contributionstoourmotherland.(運(yùn)用了so...that...的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句,

意思是“如此……以至于……”)

五、雙減政策

5.(2021?浙江省寧波市鄴州中學(xué)高二期中)自7月24日國(guó)家頒布雙減政策

以來(lái),節(jié)假日校外培訓(xùn)紛紛停止。與此同時(shí),9月以來(lái)各校校內(nèi)又紛紛進(jìn)行周

末補(bǔ)課。針對(duì)此現(xiàn)象,某英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)論壇版主發(fā)布了一個(gè)主題為“Shouldhigh

schoolstudentshavelessonsatweekends?n的帖子。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)回

帖發(fā)表自己的看法。

1.你的觀點(diǎn)2.陳述理由3.結(jié)論

注意:

1.詞數(shù):80左右

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

【答案】例文:

Possibleversion1:

Idon'tthinkweshouldattendclassesatweekends.Herearemy

reasons.First,weareoccupiedinheavyschoolworkonweekdaysand

weneedweekendstorelaxourselves.Otherwise,wewillbeexhausted,

whichdoesharmtoourphysicalfitness.Besides,havinglessonson

weekendswillincreasethepressureonusbothacademicallyand

psychologically,whichisagainstthegovernmentJseffortstoease

theburdenofexcessivehomeworkandimprovestudents'all-round

quality.Last,itisnotconducivetocultivatingstudents'

autonomouslearninghabits.Tosumup,thelossesoutweighthegains.

Possibleversion2:

PersonallyIaminfavorofhavinglessonsatweekends.First,

studyingtogetherwithclassmatesismoreefficientthanlearning

alone.Wecandiscussthedifficultproblemsandworkthemout.We

canalsoturntoteacherswhenwehavequestions.Second,having

lessonsatweekendsbenefitsthestudentslikeme.Inmycase,Iama

personwholacksself-discipline,andmyparentsaretoobusyto

affordtimetobewithme.Asaresult,I'11probablyindulgeinthe

Internetathomeatweekends.Sobalancingtheprosandcons,Iam

forit.

【分析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放性作文,要求考生就“Shouldhighschoolstudents

havelessonsatweekends?”帖子回帖,發(fā)表自己的看法。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

贊成:infavoroffsubscribeto

困難的:difficult-tough

缺乏:lack-*beshortof

因止匕:asaresult->asaconsequence

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句:First,studyingtogetherwithclassmatesismore

efficientthanlearningalone.Wecandiscussthe

difficultproblemsandworkthemout.Wecanalso

turntoteacherswhenwehavequestions.

拓展句:First,studyingtogetherwithclassmatesismoreefficient

thanlearningalonebecausenotonlycanwediscussthedifficult

problemsandworkthemoutbutalsoweareabletoturntoteachers

whenwehavequestions.

【點(diǎn)睛】

【高分句型11Wecanalsoturntoteacherswhenwe

havequestions.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)

【高分句型2】Inmycase,Iamapersonwholacks

self-discipline,andmyparentsaretoobusyto

affordtimetobewithme.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

六、傳統(tǒng)文化

6.(廣東省東莞市2021-2022學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期期末質(zhì)量檢查英語(yǔ)試題)為弘揚(yáng)

中華傳統(tǒng)文化,上周五你校舉辦了“國(guó)潮文化節(jié)”。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)

道,內(nèi)容包括:

1.活動(dòng)目的;

2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容;

3.活動(dòng)影響。

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

China-ChicCulturalFestival

【答案】例文:

China-ChicCulturalFestival

LastFriday,inordertodevelopandexpandtraditionalculture,the

China-ChicCulturalFestivalwasheldonourschoolplayground.

Asisannounced,theterm"China-Chic〃characterizestheriseof

China,snativefashiontrends.Ithasexpandedtheconceptof"Made

inChina,“whichisusuallyregardedastheassuranceofthequality

ofproducts.Thefestivalwasmadeupofmanykindsofmeaningful

activities,includingfashionshow,Hanfudesignandsoon,which

wereallaimedatraisingthestudentsJsenseofnationalpride.

Havingfiredourpassion,theeventbecameasuccess.

Afterthefestival,allthestudentswereproudofbeingaChinese

andlivinginsuchapeacefulcountry.

【分析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生對(duì)學(xué)校上周五舉辦的“國(guó)潮文化節(jié)”,為校英文報(bào)

寫一篇報(bào)道。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

弘揚(yáng):developandexpand->promote

由...組成:bemadeupofconsistedof

各種各樣的:manykindsoffvarietiesof

活動(dòng):activities—events

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句:LastFriday,inordertodevelopandexpandtraditionalculture,

theChina-ChicCulturalFestivalwasheldonourschoolplayground.

拓展句:LastFriday,inordertodevelopandexpandtraditional

culture,theChina-ChicCulturalFestivalwasheldonourschool

playground.,whichhadanimportantimpactonus.

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1]

Ithasexpandedtheconceptof“MadeinChina,“whichisusually

regardedastheassuranceofthequalityofproducts.(運(yùn)用/which

引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

[高分句型2]

Havingfiredourpassion,theeventbecameasuccess.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞

作狀語(yǔ))

七、可持續(xù)向未來(lái)

7.(2021?重慶巴蜀中學(xué)高三階段練習(xí))假定你是李華,你校學(xué)生會(huì)準(zhǔn)備開展

“低碳生活,從我做起”的活動(dòng),現(xiàn)面向全校征集活動(dòng)方案。請(qǐng)你給學(xué)生會(huì)主

席寫信提出建議,要點(diǎn)包括:

1.寫信目的;

2.具體建議;

3.希望建議被采納。

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80詞左右;

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯:低碳生活alow-carbonlife

DearPresident,

Sincerelyyours,

LiHua

【答案】例文:

DearPresident,

Knowingthatacampaignaimedatpromotingalow-carbonlifewillbe

launchedonourcampus,Iammorethandelightedtocontributemy

ideas.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

Firstofall,therewillbeanexhibitionfeaturingthebeautyof

natureandthenegativeeffectsofhumanactivities.Besides,aclass

meetingcenteredonhowtolivealow-carbonlifewillbeheld,where

studentscanbrainstormvariouswaystogogreeninourdailylife.

Moreimportantly,studentsareencouragedtopracticegreenliving,

likeusingclothbagsinsteadofplasticbagsandtakingpublic

transportation.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsinto

consideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Sincerelyyours,

LiHua

【分析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。學(xué)生會(huì)準(zhǔn)備開展“低碳生活,從我做起”的征文活動(dòng),要求

考生寫信給學(xué)生會(huì)主席提相關(guān)方面的建議。

【詳解】

L詞匯積累

高興的:gladfdelighted

建議:advice-*suggestion

影響:influencefeffect

聚焦,以...為中心:focusedonfcenteredon

各種各樣的:avarietyoffvarious

而非,而不是:ratherthaninsteadof

把...考慮在內(nèi):oaccount-*oconsideration

2,句型拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句:Firstofall,therewillbeanexhibitionfeaturingthebeauty

ofnatureandthenegativeeffectsofhumanactivities.

拓展句:Firstofall,anexhibition,whichfeaturesthebeautyof

natureandthenegativeeffectsofhumanactivities,willbeheld.

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1]Knowingthatacampaignaimedatpromotingalow-carbon

lifewillbelaunchedonourcampus,Iammorethandelightedto

contributemyideas.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ),和that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)

[高分句型2]Besides,aclassmeetingcenteredonhowtolivealow-

carbonlifewillbeheld,wherestudentscanbrainstormvariousways

togogreeninourdailylife.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

八、學(xué)榜樣向未來(lái)

8.(2021?福建?莆田第二十五中學(xué)高二期中)你校準(zhǔn)備在新建的“名人長(zhǎng)

廊”中為每一位名人畫像配上英語(yǔ)介紹,以便讓同學(xué)們有更多的機(jī)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)英

語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇80詞左右介紹張桂梅的短文。

1.張桂梅,云南省麗江華坪女子中學(xué)的創(chuàng)辦人和校長(zhǎng)。2021年6月29日,她

被授予中國(guó)共產(chǎn)黨黨內(nèi)最高榮譽(yù)-------七一勛章。

2.1957年出生在黑龍江,17歲時(shí)來(lái)到云南支教,經(jīng)過(guò)努力她于2008年建立了

第一所免費(fèi)女子高中。40多年來(lái),她累計(jì)將1800多名貧困女孩送入了大學(xué)。

3,堅(jiān)韌、倔強(qiáng),有決定心的她傾盡全力地付出,為貧困地區(qū)的教育做出了巨大

的貢獻(xiàn)。

4.她是人人稱頌的英雄,是時(shí)代的楷模。

Notes:華坪女子中學(xué)HuapingHighSchoolforgirls;

中國(guó)共產(chǎn)黨黨內(nèi)最高榮譽(yù)------1一勛章thehighesthonorofCPC----the

Julylslmedal;

【答案】例文:ZhangGuimei,founderandprincipalofHuapingHigh

SchoolforgirlsinYunnanProvince,wasawardedthehighesthonorof

CPC---theJuly1stmedalonJune29,2021.

hewasborninHeilongjiangprovincein1957.ShecametoYunnanasa

volunteerteacherattheageof17.Throughhardwork,she

establishedthefirstfreehighschoolforgirlsin2008whereshe

hashelpedmorethan1,800poorgirlstocollegeinthepastover40

years.Tough,stubbornanddetermined,shegaveherbestandmade

greatcontributionstoeducationinpoorareas.

Sheisauniversalheroandamodelofhertime!

【分析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說(shuō)明文。學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備在新建的“名人長(zhǎng)廊”中為每一位名人畫

像配上英語(yǔ)介紹,現(xiàn)要求考生撰寫一篇關(guān)于張桂梅的人物介紹。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

建立:foundfestablish

幫助:assist->help

有決心的:purposeful->determined

貢獻(xiàn):contributeto—makecontributionsto

2.句式拓展

合并簡(jiǎn)單句

原句:ShewasborninHeilongjiangprovincein1957.Shecameto

Yunnanasavolunteerteacherattheageof17.

拓展句:BorninHeilongjiangprovincein1957,shecametoYunnanas

avolunteerteacherattheageof17.

【點(diǎn)睛】

【高分句型1]Throughhardwork,sheestablishedthefirstfreehigh

schoolforgirlsin2008whereshehashelpedmorethan1,800poor

girlstocollegeinthepastover40years.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從

句)

【高分句型2】Tough,stubbornanddetermined,shegaveherbestand

madegreatcontributionstoeducationinpoorareas.(運(yùn)用了形容詞作

狀語(yǔ))

九、"數(shù)字化“撞上“老齡化”

9.

((上海押題)2021屆上海市高三英語(yǔ)秋考押題密卷04)Directions:Write

anEnglishcompositionin120一150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)高三張華,在某報(bào)紙上看到一則報(bào)道,寒冬臘月,一名老人

因不會(huì)使用手機(jī)掃描通信大數(shù)據(jù)行程碼,被公交車司機(jī)呵斥要求其下車。互聯(lián)

網(wǎng)的發(fā)展便利人們生活的同時(shí),卻讓很多老年人無(wú)所適從,就如何讓銀發(fā)族跨

越“數(shù)字化”鴻溝的問(wèn)題報(bào)社征集現(xiàn)廣大讀者的建議。請(qǐng)你寫一封信給該報(bào)。

在信中,你必須:

1.你對(duì)老年人“數(shù)字化”鴻溝的看法;

2.就如何幫助老年人跨越“數(shù)字化”鴻溝提出建議。

【答案】例文:Towhomitmayconcern,

Readingthereportthataseniorcitizenwasdeclinedfromridingbus

duetobeingunabletodisplayhishealthcodeswithsmartphone,I'm

sotouchedthatI'mwritingtovoicemyopinions.

Whilethemajorityofthepopulaceenjoystheconvenienceofdigital

technologies,however,seniorcitizensareexperiencinggreaterand

greaterdifficultieswiththedigitaldivide.Thisisrather

disappointing.Measuresshouldbetakentobridgethedigitaldivide

forseniorcitizens.

Tobeginwith,weneedtostrengtheneducationandtrainingfor

seniorcitizens.Manyofthemhavelittleknowledgeofnew

technologies.Thereforwe'dbetterhirespecializedandpatient

coaches,selecteasy-to-understandteachingmaterials,andhelpthe

seniorcitizenstobecomeliterateintechnology.Then,weshould

launchmoresenior-friendlyproducts.Forexample,thetaxi-hailing

platformofShanghaihasenabled“onebuttonhailnand“bigletter

mode“sothatseniorswithpooreyesightcansendtheirlocation

informationwithasingleclick.Moreimportantly,seniorcitizens

arenotpassivelytakinginhelpfromothers.Wemustencouragethem

toacttogether,toovercomefearofnewtechnologies,andstickto

thebeliefof“nevertoooldtolearn".

Inanutshell,tohelpseniorcitizensbridgethedigitaldivide,we

needjointeffortsfromthegovernments,companies,andthewhole

society.Hopethatmysuggestionswouldbetakenintoconsideration.

Yours,

ZhangHua

【分析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文,要求考生寫一封信給該報(bào)就如何讓銀發(fā)族跨越“數(shù)字

化”鴻溝的問(wèn)題提出自己的建議。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

表達(dá)我的看法:expressmyopinions-*voicemyopinions

不懂:knowlittleof—havelittleknowledgeof

接受幫助:accepthelp-takeinhelp

被考慮:beconsidered-*betakenintoconsideration

2,句式拓展

合并簡(jiǎn)單句

原句:Tobeginwith,weneedtostrengtheneducationandtrainingfor

seniorcitizens.Manyofthemhavelittleknowledgeofnew

technologies.

拓展句:Tobeginwith,weneedtostrengtheneducationandtraining

forseniorcitizens,manyofwhomhavelittleknowledgeofnew

technologies.

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1]Readingthereportthataseniorcitizenwasdeclined

fromridingbusduetobeingunabletodisplayhishealthcodeswith

smartphone,PmsotouchedthatI'mwritingtovoicemyopinions.

(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))

[高分句型2]Forexample,thetaxi-hailingplatformofShanghaihas

enabled“onebuttonhail"and"biglettermodevsothatseniors

withpooreyesightcansendtheirlocationinformationwithasingle

click.(運(yùn)用了sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ))

十、北京冬奧與中國(guó)元素

10.

(江蘇省泰州市姜堰中學(xué)2021-2022學(xué)年高二下學(xué)期期初考試英語(yǔ)試題)假定

你是學(xué)生李華,在觀看了2022年北京冬奧會(huì)開幕式之后很是震撼,請(qǐng)你寫一封

電子郵件向你的國(guó)外朋友Sam分享開幕式中關(guān)于中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的元素。

主要內(nèi)容包括:

1.開幕式2月4號(hào)恰逢第一個(gè)節(jié)氣立春;

2.開幕式以24秒倒計(jì)時(shí)開始,24秒用二十四個(gè)節(jié)氣,每個(gè)節(jié)氣都配上一句詩(shī)

詞。

參考詞匯:二十四節(jié)氣solarterms立春BeginningofSpring倒

計(jì)時(shí)countdown

注意:1.詞數(shù)80詞左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

DearSam

Yourssincerely

Lihua

【答案】例文:Onepossibleversion:

DearSam

TheopeningceremonyofBeijing2022OlympicWinterGamesfilledmy

heartwithsomuchexcitementandpridethatIcan'twaittoshare

itwithyou.

TheopeningceremonybeganattheNationalStadiuminBeijingon

Friday,whichcoincideswiththe“BeginningofSpring”,thefirst

ofthe24solartermsoftheyear.Bytheway,the24solarterms

guidedancientChinesepeopleintheiragriculturalconducts.Asthe

ceremonystarted,thelightsdimmedanda24-secondcountdown

followed,eachpairedwithasentencefromChinesepoems,which

sharesthebeautyofChinesetraditionalculturewiththewholeworld.

I'mherewaitingforyoutocometoChina.

Yourssincerely

Lihua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給國(guó)外朋友Sam寫一封電子郵件,分享

2022年北京冬奧會(huì)開幕式中關(guān)于中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的元素。

【詳解】

L詞匯積累

開始:start-*begin

弓|導(dǎo):lead-guide

跟隨:goafterffollow

整個(gè)的:total~*whole

2,句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句:Bytheway,the24solartermsguidedancientChinesepeoplein

theiragriculturalconducts.

拓展句:Bytheway,the24solartermsguidedancientChinesepeople

intheiragriculturalconducts,whichwasveryusefultothem.

【點(diǎn)睛】

【高分句型1】TheopeningceremonyofBeijing2022OlympicWinter

GamesfilledmyheartwithsomuchexcitementandpridethatIcan't

waittoshareitwithyou.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

【高分句型2]TheopeningceremonybeganattheNationalStadiumin

BeijingonFriday,whichcoincideswiththeuBeginningofSpring”,

thefirstofthe24solartermsoftheyear.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限

制性定語(yǔ)從句)

【高分句型3】Astheceremonystarted,thelightsdimmedanda24-

secondcountdownfollowed,eachpairedwithasentencefromChinese

poems,whichsharesthebeautyofChinesetraditionalculturewith

thewholeworld.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

十一、電動(dòng)自行車

11.(2020?江蘇鎮(zhèn)江?高二期中)《江蘇省電動(dòng)自行車管理?xiàng)l例》已于2020

年7月1日起正式實(shí)施。請(qǐng)你寫一封倡議書,呼吁市民在騎電動(dòng)自行車時(shí)佩戴

頭盔。

【寫作內(nèi)容】

L騎行者安全意識(shí)薄弱,車禍頻發(fā);

2.佩戴頭盔的好處:

3.呼吁市民在騎電動(dòng)車時(shí)佩戴頭盔.

【寫作要求】

1.詞數(shù)80左右:

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3.開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù):

4.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Dearfellowcitizens,

StandingCommitteeofJiangsuProvincialPeople'sCongresshas

recentlyissuedaregulationthatallcitizensshallwearahelmet

whileridinganelectricbicycle.

【答案】例文:

Dearfellowcitizens,

StandingCommitteeofJiangsuProvincialPeople'sCongresshas

recentlyissuedaregulationthatallcitizensshallwearahelmet

whileridinganelectricbicycle.

Itisasadbutcommonphenomenonthattrafficaccidentshappen

frequently,whichposesagreatthreattopeople,ssafety,electric

bicycleridersinparticular.Asforthepossiblereasons,thelack

ofsafetyawarenessisamajorone.Therefore,toppriorityshouldbe

giventowearinghelmetsifwearetoguaranteeourlife.Helmetscan

undoubtedlyprotectusfrompossibleblowwhenaccidentshappen.

I'mappealingtoallelectricbicycleriderstoabidebythe

regulationandmakeeveryendeavortoputsafetyinthefirstplace

bywearinghelmets.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封倡議書,呼吁市民在騎電動(dòng)自行車時(shí)

佩戴頭盔。

【詳解】

第一步:審題

體裁:應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu):總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō),把支持句作為分說(shuō),并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)

容。

要求:

1.騎行者安全意識(shí)薄弱,車禍頻發(fā);

2.佩戴頭盔的好處:

3.呼吁市民在騎電動(dòng)車時(shí)佩戴頭盔。

第二步:列提綱(重點(diǎn)詞組)

pose*“to…;inparticular;lackof;awareness;protect*"from…;

appealto;inthefirstplace

第三步:連詞成句

1.Itisasadbutcommonphenomenonthattrafficaccidentshappen

frequently,whichposesagreatthreattopeople'ssafety,electric

bicycleridersinparticular.

2.Asforthepossiblereasons,thelackofsafetyawarenessisa

majorone.

3.Therefore,toppriorityshouldbegiventowearinghelmetsifwe

aretoguaranteeourlife.

4.Helmetscanundoubtedlyprotectusfrompossibleblowwhen

accidentshappen.

5.1'mappealingtoallelectricbicycleriderstoabidebythe

regulationandmakeeveryendeavortoputsafetyinthefirstplace

bywearinghelmets.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步:連句成篇(銜接詞)

1.表因果關(guān)系:therefore

2.表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系:but

連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范

清晰,

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1]Itisasadbutcommonphenomenonthattrafficaccidents

happenfrequently,whichposesagreatthreattopeople'ssafety,

electricbicycleridersinparticular.句中使用了that引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句,

對(duì)phenomenon進(jìn)行解釋;which引導(dǎo)非限制定語(yǔ)從句。

[高分句型2]Therefore,toppriorityshouldbegiventowearing

helmetsifwearetoguaranteeourlife.句中使用了if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從

句。

[高分句型3]Helmetscanundoubtedlyprotectusfrompossibleblow

whenaccidentshappen.句中使用了when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。

十二、北京冬殘奧會(huì)與雪容融

12.

(2022?山東?及第中學(xué)高一開學(xué)考試)假如你是中學(xué)生李華,隨著冬奧開

幕,冰墩墩和雪容融上了熱搜。你的外國(guó)朋友Michael寫信詢問(wèn)你北京冬奧會(huì)

吉祥物的情況,能否幫他購(gòu)買一個(gè)吉祥物禮品。你電郵告知這里的境況。

內(nèi)容包括:

1.介紹吉祥物“冰墩墩”和“雪容融”;

2.告知現(xiàn)在“冰墩墩”缺貨,但已訂購(gòu);

3.希望來(lái)華游玩。

參考詞匯與相關(guān)文化:“冰墩墩”(BingDwenDwen以熊貓為原型,“墩墩”

代表健康、活潑。)和“雪容融”(ShueyRhonRhon以燈籠為原型,代表著

收獲、溫暖和光明,“雪容融”這個(gè)名字則代表寬容和融合。)

注意事項(xiàng)

[詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

【答案】例文:DearMichael,

HereareourOlympicandParalymiclogos,BingDwenDwenandShuey

RhonRhon.

BingDwenDwen,whosenameisacombinationofseveralmeaningsin

theChineselanguage,with"Bing"theChinesewordfor"ice”,and

“DwenDwen"meaningstoutandlively.TheParalympicmascot,Shuey

RhonRhon,isthechoiceofthelantern,whichisaculturalsymbol

associatedwithharvest,celebration,prosperityandbrightness.The

nameShueyRhonRhonlexpressesthewellwishesthattherecouldbe

moreembraceandunderstandingforthepeoplewithdisability.

BingDwenDwen,themarketableOlympicmascot,istemporarilyoutof

stock,butitisonorder.

WelcometoChinaforatouratyourconvenience!

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文,要求考生給外國(guó)朋友Michael寫信告知北京冬奧

會(huì)吉祥物的情況。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

選擇:choice-*option

與...有關(guān):beassociatedwith-^berelatedto

擁抱:embrace->hug

暫時(shí)地:temporari1y—momentarily

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句:BingDwenDwen,themarketableOlympicmascot,istemporarilyout

ofstock,butitisonorder.

拓展句:BingDwenDwen,whichisthemarketableOlympicmascot,is

temporarilyoutofstock,butitisonorder.

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1]

BingDwenDwen,whosenameisacombinationofseveralmeaningsin

theChineselanguage,with〃Bing〃theChinesewordfor〃ice〃,and

“DwenDwen"meaningstoutandlively,(whose引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

[高分句型2]

ThenameShueyRhonRhonlexpressesthewellwishesthattherecould

bemoreembraceandunderstandingforthepeoplewithdisabi

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