高中英語1Module3MyFirstRideonaTrain省一等獎

Afterthisclass,wewillbeabletoapplysomecommonstrategiestowriting,thustogainhighscoresandimproveourunderstandingoftheuseofEnglish.usepreciseandvividexpressionsuseattributiveclauseuse“non-finiteverbs”usedifferentsentencestructuresThelearningobjectivesofthislesson

假如你是李華，你的好友Smith想要來你家鄉(xiāng)旅游，希望你能為他提供建議。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容如下：1.表示歡迎；2.推薦一處家鄉(xiāng)景點及家鄉(xiāng)美食；3.提供出行建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫。DearSmith,___________________________________________________________________________________________________

Bestwishes.Yourstruly,LiHuaAhigh-scoredwritingAppropriateStructure*3-4Paragraphs*TransitionalExpressions*Pointsanditslogic?BeautifulHandwritingcontentHowtoWriteAgoodPassageStrategy1:BetterChoiceofExpressions

(accurateorprecisedescriptions)Group1Iwanttoshowmywarmwelcome.Iwantto____________mywarmwelcome.Iwantto____________mywarmwelcome.Group2Iwarmlywelcomeyou.Iwarmlyexpressmyheart-feltwelcome.Group3Youwon’tforgetthePandaBase.You__________________thePandaBase.Group4IamhappythatIcanhelpyou.Iwouldbedelightediftheabovecouldbeofvaluetoyou.expressextendwillbeimpressedwithchangeaverbverbsintorelatednounphrasesverbsintorelatedverbphrasesProperattitudeQ:Whatistheproblemwiththispassage?A:Toomanysimplesentenceshaveweakenedthelogicofthecontent.Example1Fillintheblanks1.YouwillbegreatlyimpressedwiththePandaBase.2.Andyoucanhaveclosecontactwithpandas.Sentence1YouwillbegreatlyimpressedwiththePandaBase______youcanhaveclosecontactwithpandas.Example2Itisawisechoicetobuytheticketsonline.Buyingticketsonlinewillsaveyoumuchtrouble.Sentence2Itisawisechoicetobuytheticketsonline,_______willsaveyoumuchtrouble.wherewhichTask1:MakeonechangeinFaker’swritingwithanAttributiveClause,orinyourownwritingandshare.…SoI’dliketointroduceMountEmeitoyou,whosepeakiscoveredbysnowinwinter…Strategy2

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ClauseByusingattributiveclauses,wecanalwaysaddinformation,modify(修飾)thingsvividly,explainthingsclearlyandstrengthenthelogicoftheideas.Example3Translation觀察不同學(xué)校之間的差異是很有趣的。_________interesting_____________thedifferencesbetweenschoolsindifferentcountries.2.讓這次旅行與眾不同的將會是欣賞地方戲，“川劇”。_______________________________enjoyingthelocalopera,the“SichuanOpera”.

3.這次旅行一定要去峨眉山參觀。_________totheMountE’meiisamustto

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tolookatWhatmakesthistripspecialwillbeAvisitStrategy3

ChangeofSubjectBymakingchangestothesubjectofasentence,wecanalwayshighlightthekeyinformationandbalancethesentenceastheimportantinformationshouldbeputfirst.Commonwaystochangeasubject:“It”as

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Subject”“Clauses”assubjects“todosth.”assubjects“doingsth.”Nounsassubjects…Task2:MakeonechangeofsubjectinFaker’swriting,orinyourownwritingandshare.…whatmakesthistripspecialwillbehavingclosecontactwithnaughtymonkeysalongtheroad…Example4Fillintheblanks_________(hear)thatyouarecomingtoChengdu,Istartedmakingplansforgreatfoodsandplacestovisit._____________(travel)ataspeedofover400kilometersperhour,thetraincancompletethe30-kilometerjourneyineightminutes._______(locate)insouthwestSichuan,Chengduhasattractedvisitorsworldwide.________(pay)avisittothenationalhistorymuseumprovidesuswithachancetogainmoreknowledge.HearingTravellingLocatedPayingStrategy4Makefulluseof“non-finiteverbs”“Non-finiteverbs”canserveasasubject,anobject,andevenleadanadverbialclause,etc.Theydisplaytherelationshipbetweenideasclearlyandreasonably.Task3:MakeonechangeofsubjectinFaker’swriting,orinyourownwritingandshare.…LocatedinthecenterofSichuanPlain,Chengduenjoysamildclimate,neithertoocoldnortoohot…Themoreyouknowaboutthecity,themoreyou’llloveit!----表示比較的句型，體現(xiàn)程度的加深ThereisnodoubtthatChengduisthemostpopulatedcityinSichuanprovince…----特殊句型，常用句型Itisitsspicyflavorandthewaypeopleconsumefoodthathasattractedpeopleallovertheworldtohaveatryofit.----“It’s+被強調(diào)內(nèi)容+that/who…”的強調(diào)句型?！癝killedsailorsarenevermadefromcalmwaters.”“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”“Whatdoesn’tkillyoumakesyoustronger.”----idioms(習(xí)語),proverbs（諺語）,famoussayingsandquotes(名人名言)andevenlyrics（歌詞）Ahigh-scoredwritingAppropriateStructure*3-4Paragraphs*TransitionalExpressions*PointsanditslogicContentBetterChoiceofExpressionsDiversesentencestructuresBetterHandwritingHowtoWriteAgoodPassagePractice:推薦一處家鄉(xiāng)景點touristattraction/scenicspot/；西嶺雪山是你一定要去的景點。（ChoiceofExpressions/ChangeofSubject）YoumustgoandseetheXilingSnowMountain.XilingSnowMountainisamust-seescenicspot.這里山頂積雪覆蓋，是很多瀕危動物和罕見植物的家園。(ChangeofStructure)Themainpeakismarvelouslysnowcappedanditis