2023學(xué)年完整公開課版（Writing）HelpfulSchoolmates

Unit4HelpfulSchoolmatesWritingWritingaDiaryTeachingaimsHowtowriteadiary?Howtoimprovethestudents’writingskill?高考原題：(2010北京卷)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二（1）班的學(xué)生李華，利用上周末的時(shí)間幫助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，敘述你從準(zhǔn)備到送行的全過程。注意：1.周記的開頭已為你寫好。

2.詞數(shù)不少于60。范文：July25,SundaySunnyLastweekend,IhelpedmygrandparentspreparetheirtriptoBeidaihe.OnSaturdaymorning,togetherwithmygrandparents,IsearchedtheInternetforthetrainschedule,theweatherinBeidaile,andsomehotelinformation.Intheafternoon,Iwenttothetrainstationandmanagedtobuytwoticketsformygrandparentsalthoughtherewasalongqueue.Afterdinner,Ipackedintothesuitcasethethingsmygrandparentswouldneed,suchasclothes,glasses,anumbrella,andamap.Thenextmorning,Iwenttothestationtoseethemoff.Wavinggoodbyetothemontheplatform,Ifelthappyforthemandwishedthemasafejourney.Revision如何寫英文日記[格式]日記是用來敘述一天生活中發(fā)生的事情或感受的文體，它所記述的內(nèi)容應(yīng)是最有趣或感受最深的一些事情。寫英文日記要注意格式、時(shí)態(tài)和和人稱的正確使用。英文日記的格式為：日期(Date),星期(Day)天氣(Weather)_________________________________________________________正文_______________________________________________________________________________________________[寫作指導(dǎo)]1.通常是在左上角寫出當(dāng)天的日期和星期，在靠右的部分寫上當(dāng)天的天氣情況。正文可有標(biāo)題，也可不要。要注意正確書寫月份和星期的名稱。天氣多用形容詞表示，首字母通常要大寫。星期和月份的表達(dá)：SundayMondayTuesdayWednesdayThursdayFridaySaturdayJanuaryFebruaryMarchAprilMayJuneJulyAugustSeptemberOctoberNovemberDecember如：Clear(晴),Fine(晴),Sunny(晴),Shining（晴）；Rainy（雨）,Raining（雨）；Snowy（雪）；Windy（風(fēng)）；Cloudy（多云）；Overcast（陰）；Stormy（暴風(fēng)雨）；Shower（陣雨）等。2.寫日記時(shí)應(yīng)該選擇一些最有意義、最有趣或感受最深的內(nèi)容來寫。日記一般是按事情發(fā)生的先后順序來記述的，所以常用atfirst,then,lateron,soon,atlast等單詞或詞組使整篇文章通順連貫。[寫作過程]1.審題確定格式、體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等寫作要點(diǎn)。2.列出提綱，確定開頭句、擴(kuò)展句和總結(jié)句，選擇好適宜的句型。3.利用一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞或者過渡句把句子有機(jī)地連接起來，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。4.仔細(xì)檢查，適當(dāng)修改，保證句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，人稱時(shí)態(tài)主謂一致。5.認(rèn)真謄寫，卷面整潔。[常用過渡語]“啟”first,firstofall,firstly,atpresent,tobeginwith,inthebeginning,generallyspeaking,now,recently“承”afterawhile,also,atthesametime,besides,certainly,forexample,forinstance,fromnowon,inaddition,second,what'smore,afterafewdays,infact,inotherwords,inparticular,indeed,then,meanwhile,moreover,obviously,ofcourse,so,still,secondly“轉(zhuǎn)”anyway,afterall,especially,but,nevertheless,onthecontrary,otherwise,perhaps,unfortunately,atthesametime,ontheotherhand,luckily,inotherwords,however,fortunately,inparticular,yet“合”finally,consequently,aboveall,inbrief,inconclusion,inshort,inaword,asaresult,atlast,therefore,thus,frankly[常用句型]1.Thereareseveralreasonsforthis.

對于這個(gè)問題有幾個(gè)原因。2.Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.

弊大于利。3.Itisharmfultous.

這對我們有害。4.Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.

我們應(yīng)該采取有效的措施。5.Weshouldtryourbesttoovercomethedifficulties.

我們因該竭盡全力克服困難。6.Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatwearefacedwith.

我們應(yīng)該解決我們面臨的問題。7.Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecancometotheconclusionthat...

從以上提及的我們可以得出結(jié)論……行文要連貫流暢語句要嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)要簡明、清楚句型結(jié)構(gòu)要有變化語言使用適當(dāng)?shù)皿w牢記書面表達(dá)概要PracticeWritingSupposeyouwereJames,thinkaboutthefollowingquestions.Writeadiaryaccordingtoyouranswerstothequestionsbelow.1.Whydidn’tyoupreparefortheexam.2.Whatdidyoudobeforetheexam.3.HowdidyoufeelwhenBrianrefusedtohelpyou?4.Whatdidyoudoaftertheexam?Oct.18,ThursdaySunnyWehadanEnglishexamthismorning.ItriedtocheatduringtheexambecauseIhadn’tpreparedforthetest.Beforetheexam,Ifeltverynervous.Duringtheexam,Iwantedtocopytheanswersofmydesk-mate,mygoodfriend.Butlater,henoticeditandcurledhisarmaroundtheanswerssothatIcouldn’tseethem.IwasquiteunhappyaboutthatandIdidn’twanttobehisfriendanymore.Aftertheexam,mydesk-mate,Jacksaidsorrytome,toldmethatcheatin