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AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.

LiHua2021/5/915附圖12342021/5/916At7:15onthemorningofFebruary8,2000,

Isawawomandrivingacarhitthemaninthestreet.2021/5/917第二步抓要點(diǎn)一幅圖，一要點(diǎn)時(shí)態(tài)直達(dá)語(yǔ)態(tài)到位介/副詞緊隨抓要點(diǎn)，配動(dòng)詞2021/5/918第三步擴(kuò)展成句把要點(diǎn)變成完整的句子。注意使用介/副詞2021/5/919第四步連句成文增加細(xì)節(jié)呼應(yīng)首尾句與句相連詞與詞搭配2021/5/920第五步查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò)主謂一致嗎？時(shí)態(tài)正確嗎？時(shí)態(tài)正確嗎？有“半截話”嗎？2021/5/921第六步謄寫卷面整潔不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！2021/5/922作業(yè)選評(píng)要改進(jìn)嗎？為什么？2021/5/923精彩范文賞析2021/5/924①At7:15a.m.

onthemorningofFeb.8th,2000,Iwasheading

eastonthesouthsideoftheParkRoad,takingmymorningwalkasusual.②IsawanoldmanontheothersideoftheroadoutsidethegateoftheCityPark.

精彩范文賞析2021/5/925③Hewasjustcrossingthestreetwhenacaronthe3rdStreet

made

asuddenrightturnatthecrossing.

精彩范文賞析2021/5/926④Thecarwas

sofastthattheoldmaneven

didn’thavetimetododge

andthecarhittheelderlyhard.精彩范文賞析2021/5/927⑤Ithoughtthedriverwouldhavestoppedtohelp,butshedidn't.⑥Instead,shejust

droveoff,leavingtheoldmanstilllying

ontheground

inpain.

精彩范文賞析2021/5/928⑦Fortunately,

I

noteddown

thedetails:

it

was

ayellowcar,

theplatenumberof

which

was

AC864,

and

thedriver

was

ayounglady.

⑧Afterthat,

I

wentoverto

checkout

theoldman.精彩范文賞析2021/5/929AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarand

tooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.

LiHua精彩范文賞析2021/5/930圖12021/5/931圖22021/5/932圖3年輕婦女顏色：黃