貓叔gamt包語(yǔ)法GMAT改錯(cuò)精解

第一篇GMAT句子改錯(cuò)題在筆考時(shí)，一般有22道題，限時(shí)25分鐘完成，其基本要求如下：Direction：Ineachofthefollowingsentences，somepartofthesentenceortheentiresentenceisunderlined．Beneatheachsentenceyouwillfindfivewaysofphrasingtheunderlinedpart．Thefirstoftheserepeatstheoriginal；theotherfouraredifferent．Ifyouthinktheoriginalisthebestoftheseanswerchoices，chooseanswerA；otherwise，chooseoneoftheothers．Selectthebestversionandfillinthecorrespondingovalonyouranswersheet．Thisisatestofcorrectnessandeffectivenessofexpression．Inchoosinganswers，followtherequirementsofstandardwrittenEnglish；thatis，payattentiontogr r，choiceofwords，andsentenceconstruction．Choosetheanswerthatproducesthemosteffectivesentence；this—swershouldbeclearmadexact，withoutawkwardness，ambiguity，redundancy，orgr 在實(shí)行CAT16～18題。二、GMAT改錯(cuò)題的正確選項(xiàng)的特征GMAT中，改錯(cuò)題與其他英語(yǔ)考試中的改錯(cuò)題并不太一樣，它更強(qiáng)調(diào)表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性和有以下3個(gè)特征：3．5個(gè)中的最優(yōu)。而并非最完美的表達(dá)。 BeatrixPotters，inherbookillustrations，carefullycoordinatingthemwithhernarratives，capitalizedonherkeenobservationandloveofthenaturalworld.BeatrixPotters，inherbookillustrations，carefullycoordinatingthemwithherInherbookillustrations，carefullycoordinatingthemwithhernarratives，BeatrixInherbookillustrations，whichshecarefullycoordinatedwithhernarratives,Beat—rixPotter(D)Carefully000rdinatedwithhernarratives，BeatrixPotter，inherbookillustrations,(E)BeatrixPotter，inherbookillustrations，carefullycoordinatedthemwithhernarra—tivesand題解：A、B之所以錯(cuò)，是因?yàn)樗艘馑紗我辉瓌t，其中的coordinating分詞短語(yǔ)的修BeatrixPorrer改變了句意。而E中，由于其將coordinate與capitalize并列作為主要謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞改變了本屬于從屬地位的coordinating短語(yǔ)從而改變了句子重心(coordi-nate與capitalize兩個(gè)動(dòng)作毫不相關(guān)，并列起來(lái)不恰當(dāng))。C意思單一，which從句限定修飾illustrations，主從 三、GMAT解題方法F—2ThespeculativefeveroftheRoaringTwentiesinfectedrichandpooralike;vasttiesofpeopleweredangerouslyoverextended，creditwasabsurdlyeasytoobtain,andmostbroderagehousesrequiredonlytenpercentcashforstocksboughton“margin.”richandpooralike；vasttiesofpeopleweredangerouslyrichandpooralike；greatnumbersofpeopleweredangerouslyoverextendedthem—bothrichandpooralike；vastamountsofpeopledangerouslyoverextendedthem—bothrichandpoor；greattiesofpeopleweredangerously題解：看完劃線部分后，我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)明顯的錯(cuò)誤，即：A中用ties來(lái)修飾可數(shù)名B、Damountpeople，這同樣是B,DC可選。B,D、E中：bothrichandpooralike的之前并未加the，也可表示一類人的含義。答案：CF3Withouthearingawordof—whatisbeing—saidorshouted，anexperiencedtraderonthefloorofthestockexchangecanlistentothehumofvoicesaroundthemandlwhatishappening．Withouthearingawordofwhatisbeingsaidorshouted，anexperiencedWithouthearingawordofwhatisbeingsaidorshouted，experiencedEventhoughthe hasnotheardawordofwhatisbeingsaidorshouted，anexperiencedtraderEvenwhen hasnotheardawordthatisbeingsaidorshouted，experiencesInspiteofnothearingawordofwhatisbeingsaidorshouted，anexperienced題解：根據(jù)下一篇所講的內(nèi)容，我們會(huì)很容易排除C,D、E(此處排除這三個(gè)選項(xiàng)的原因由大家在學(xué)完第二篇內(nèi)容后自行解決)。對(duì)于選項(xiàng)A、B，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)兩者都說(shuō)得通，只不過(guò)AB中某一個(gè)必對(duì)而另一個(gè)必錯(cuò)的線索。當(dāng)讀到句末的aroundthem時(shí)，我們的目光會(huì)為之F4Atgroundlevel，ozoneisaharmfulpollutant，but．inthestratosphereitshieldsthefromthemostbiologicallyharmfulradiationemittedbytheSun，radiationintheultravio-letbandofthespectrum．intheitisinthestratospherein、inthestratosphereitisinthestratosphere以薄弱環(huán)節(jié)作為切入點(diǎn)：在GMAT改錯(cuò)中，劃線部分中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤就是代詞F5TheGorton—Doddbillrequiresthatabankdisclosetotheircustomershowlongtheywilldelayaccesstofundsfromdepositedchecks.thatabankdisclosetotheircustomershowlongtheywilldelayaccesstofundsfromdepositedchecks． abanktodisclosetotheircustomershowlongtheywilldelayaccesstofundsfromadepositedcheck．thatabankdisclosetoitscustomershowlongitwilldelayaccesstofundsfromdeposited abankthatitshoulddisclosetoitscustomershowlongitwilldelayaccesstofundsfromadepositedcheck。thatbanksdisclosetocustomershowlongaccesstofundsfromtheirdepositedcheckistobedelayed．題解：劃線中出現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)代詞：they和their，首先需要確認(rèn)其指代對(duì)象。在their之前未出我們可判斷their屬誤用，應(yīng)用its替代；同理第--4"they也應(yīng)用it替代。由此我們可排除含和之后的adepositedcheck在數(shù)上是不一致的而C中：require+that從句(帶虛擬語(yǔ)氣動(dòng)詞)的用法正確，itscustomers和之后的checks在數(shù)上一致。 F一6Thetechnicalterm”pagination”isaprocessthatleaveseditors，insteadofprinters,assemblethepageimagesthat ethemetalorstictesusedinprinting．isaprocessthatleaveseditors，insteadofreferstoaprocessthatallowseditors，ratherthanprinters，toisaprocess1cavingtheeditors，ratherthanprinters，toreferstoaprocesswhichallowseditors，butnottoprinters，theassemblyhasreferencetotheprocessleavingtoeditors，insteadofthe現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)差異：(1)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用系動(dòng)詞is，還是用行為動(dòng)詞referto。(2)that從句中：謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)“前者句意模糊，不易理解。斷定此點(diǎn)后，我們就排除A、C。同理，把差異(2)代入。allow明顯要比leave更適合與aprocess搭配。由此排除E。B、D比較，D有3個(gè)缺陷：(1)allow用法不當(dāng)，應(yīng)使用allowsb．todosth．的結(jié)構(gòu)；(2)butnottoprinters不如B中用ratherthanprinters準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。(3)公理中，我們提到過(guò)，除非先行詞為介賓，which不引導(dǎo)限制性從句，此處D了此原則。(詳看緊接著的公理部分) 這是一個(gè)case-by-case，對(duì)有些題大家完全可以采用其他更快捷、更準(zhǔn)確的方法來(lái)解題。四、GMAT公理GMAT改錯(cuò)中，存在一些不言自明、經(jīng)過(guò)實(shí)踐總結(jié)的規(guī)律，它們對(duì)我們的解題有100％的正確性，而有些竟，GMAT改錯(cuò)是一種對(duì)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的有效性、簡(jiǎn)潔性的考核，是有靈活性的，而不像平面GMAT公理在解題中所起到的巨大貢獻(xiàn)(2)therebesth．done(3)therebeing+名詞詞組(4)therewassth．(抽象性表動(dòng)作的名詞)，如wolf，stone，starconversion，relation等。(其中done代表過(guò)去分詞。)在表示有某種能力做某事的意思，最佳答案的選擇依據(jù)是，cando>beabletodo>has(have)abilitytodo>has(have)acapabilityofng…。(其中“>”指“優(yōu)先于"cando就beabletodocandobeableto的選項(xiàng)，依此which(it)絕對(duì)不可指代前面的整個(gè)句子，而此用法在一般語(yǔ)法書(shū)中均是可以require、demand等表“建議，命令"that從句，要求用虛擬語(yǔ)氣絕不可以單獨(dú)使用this，these來(lái)指代前面出現(xiàn)的單數(shù)或復(fù)數(shù)名詞，而絕對(duì)要通過(guò)換sth．ofthiskind，likethis／thesesuch+n．(nthis，these所指代的對(duì)象)來(lái)取代，意為“這些…”。另外，在"such．that”結(jié)構(gòu)中，such只修飾具體名詞，而不修飾抽象名詞(女Irapidity，severity)。構(gòu)指代或換用其他表達(dá)方式。(it／they，one／ones，that／ttx~指代的區(qū)介詞短語(yǔ)：onaccountof，beca