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Theaverageweightofcitizenshasbeenincreasinginmanycountries.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?1).Therehasbeenanincreaseintheaverageweightofthegeneralpopulation.Ithinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.2).Theincreaseintheaverageweightofgeneralpopulationseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadprobleminmanycountries.Ithinkthatmodernlifestylesaretoblame.3).Thedeclininglevelofhealthisahugeproblemformanycountriestoday.Theriseinobesity,inparticular,isaworryingtrend.Ithinkthatmodernlifestylesaretoblame. Peopleknowlittleabouttheirneighbors.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?1).Thelackofacquaintanceincommunitiesseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadprobleminmanycountries.Ithinkthatfast-pacedlifeisprobablyresponsibleforthis.2).Methodsofcommunicationhavebeengreatlyincreasedandenchanted.However,peoplelivinginthesamecommunityknowlittleabouteachother.Thisessaywillexplorepossiblereasonsforthisproblemandsolutionswillbealso Somepeoplethinkthatthedevelopmentofnuclearenergyisthebestwaytosolvetheproblemofenergycrisis. Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?1).Itisarguedthatdevelo nuclearenergyisthebestsolutiontotheproblemofenergycrisis. ally,Icanhardlyagreewiththisopinion.2).Somecountrieshavebeenheavilydependentonelectricityproducedbynuclearpowerstations,likeFranceortheUS.Inspiteofthisfact,Icanhardlyagreewiththeopinionthatdevelo nuclearenergyisthebestsolutiontotheproblemassociatedwithenergyshortage.1.主動(dòng). 1).Byleavingtheircomfortzone,youngadultscangrowreallyindependentinthinkingand2).Bydevelonucleartechnology,theproblemofenergycrisiscanbehopefully2.Due 1).Duetothelackofselfcontrolordiscipline,itisimpossibletoleavechildrenaloneathomeandstudyontheInternet.2).Duetotheincreaseintheproportionofelderlypeople, ernmentofmanycountries3. 1).Despiteconcernsaboutworkingefficiency,thetrendofworkingathomewillneverbe2).Despitethegreatimprovementinthetechnologyofcleanenergy,4.Anobviousargumentinfavorof….isthatAnobviousargumentinfavorofchargingforeigntouristsisthatlocalresidentshavemadetheircontributiontoattractionsbypayingtaxes.5.Peopleagainst…….arguethatPeopleagainstgapyeararguethatitwillbedifficultforyoungadultstoreadapttoacademicstudy.6leadto錯(cuò)誤：Theemploymentofrobotswillleadtomanypeoplelosetheirjobs.正確：Theemploymentofrobotswillleadtoaconsiderableincreaseinjoblessrate.正確：Theemploymentofrobotswillleadmanypeopletolosetheirjobs.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor1.basicallyagree／truly1)2).3).4).6).InNowadays,astheincreasingconsumptionoftraditionalenergybringsaboutenergycrisis,findingoutanalternativeenergyhaseanessentialproblem intheworld.Somepeoplesuggestthatdevelo nuclearenergyshouldbethebestsolution.Icanbasicallyagreewiththisviewpoint.Sincethedayitwasdevelopedandadopted,nuclearpowerhasdemonstratedavarietyofadvantages. mostimpressiveoneisitshigh-efficiency,whichcannotbe byanyotherexistingmethodsofenergyproduction,likesolar,waterorfossilfuels.Energygeneratedwith1kilogramofuraniumcanbethousandsoftimesashuge asthatis producedby tonsoffossil Anotherargumentinfavorofnuclearenergyisrelatedtoenvironmentalprotection.Fossilfuels,bringabouthugeamountoffume,smogordirtywaterintheirprocessofburning,whichisdetrimentaltopeople’shealthy.Buttheprocessthatturnsnuclearpowertoenergygenerateslittlewastage.Thisadvantageiscriticallyimportantincountriesseverelypolluted,suchasBeijing.Finally,ashumanhistoryofexploitingnuclearresourceisrelativelyshort,thereisstillalargeamountofnuclearresourcecanbeutilized,comparedwithfossilfuel.Also,unlikeenergyresourcesofstrongseasonality,forinstance,water,nuclearresourcecanbeexploitedandutilizedatanytimearoundayear,whichprovideshumanastable,long-termenergysourceinthefuture.Thereasonagainstnuclearenergymaybetheconcernonitspotentialdisastrousconsequence,justliketheaccidenthappenedinFukushimacity,Japan.However,theproblemcanbesolvedwhilesystematictreated.Itisundeniablethatnuclearenergyisaneffective,environmental-friendlyandstablesortofenergy,whichshouldbeencouragedandwell-developed.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor2.canhardly y1)2).順著題目里的觀點(diǎn)稍作解釋-503).轉(zhuǎn)折反駁（內(nèi)容過(guò)多的話就分出兩段4).Foreignvisitorsshouldpaymorethanlocalvisitorsforculturalandhistoricalattractions.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?1).Itissometimesarguedthattouristsfromoverseasshouldbechargedmorethanlocalresidentstovisitimportantsitesandmonuments.Icomple ydisagreewiththis2).Theargumentinfavourofhigherpricesforforeigntouristswouldbethatculturalorhistoricalattractionsoftendependonstatesubsidiestokeepthemgoing,whichmeansthattheresidentpopulationalreadypaysmoneytothesesitesthroughthetaxsystem.3).However,Ibelievethistobeaveryshortsightedview.Foreigntouristscontributetotheeconomyofthehostcountrywiththemoneytheyspendonawiderangeofgoodsandservices,includingfood,souvenirs,modationandtravel.The ernmentsandinhabitantsofeverycountryshouldbehappytosubsidizeimportanttouristsitesandencouragepeoplefromtherestoftheworldtovisitthem.4).Iftravelersrealizedthattheywouldhavetopaymoretovisithistoricalandculturalattractionsinaparticularnation,theywouldperhapsdecidenottogotothatcountryonholiday.TotaketheUKasanexample,thetourismindustryandmanyrelatedjobsrelyonvisitorscomingtothecountrytosee ceslikeWindsorCastleorSaintPaul’sCathedral.Thesetwositeschargethesamepriceregardlessofnationality,andthishelpstopromotethenation’sculturalheritage.Ifoverseastouristsstoppedcomingduetohigherprices,therewouldbeariskofinsufficientfundingforthemaintenanceoftheseimportantbuildings.5).Inconclusion,Ibelievethateveryeffortshouldbemadetoattracttouristsfromoverseas,anditwouldbecounterproductivetomakethempaymorethanlocalresidents.1.改寫(xiě)原題所給介紹－一定不能帶上below2.主體段可以安排2－31.第一段改寫(xiě)第一幅圖+2.第二段改寫(xiě)第二幅圖+1).Thepiechartcompares5countriesintermsoftheir.......2).Thetableshowsthecausesofland1).Thegraphshowsthechangesin2).Thebarchartshowshow......changed1.介紹改寫(xiě)：這些圖表對(duì)比了三種不同的2.顯而易見(jiàn)，在所有音樂(lè)中， 3.從分組來(lái)看，rock和popmusic有非常相似的pattern和data.(打開(kāi))classicalmusic4.Overall,對(duì)音樂(lè)的 1)主語(yǔ)sawaTheproportionofelderlypeoplesawaconsiderableincreaseduringthe20-yearperiodfrom5%to17%.Boththepopularityofbeefandlambsaw/showedanincreasingTheUKsawaremarkableincreaseintermsofthenumberoftouristsfrom2)動(dòng)詞+Theuse phonesincreaseddramatically,risingfrom55%to3Therewasa形容詞+名詞2.特殊變化—1).Theproportionofelderlypeopleagedover65almostdoubled/tripled,risingfrom9%in2000to16%in2005.–成倍增長(zhǎng)2).ThenumberofwildbirdsintheUKhalved,decliningfrom5millionto2.5million.---減少3).Between1995and2000,theamountofgoodstransportedbyroadremainedrelativelystable,atapproxima y70milliontons.31).先…..再Thecostofbookshadincreasedto23%by1991beforedecreasingtoonly9%bytheendoftheperiod.2).總體來(lái)看……，盡管Ingeneral,thesharepricesawadramaticincreasefrom35dollarsin1996to80dollarsin1998,despiteanoticeabledecreasein1997.3).ThenumberofprisonersintheUSfluctuatedwildly,rangingbetween80,000in1950and120,000in1980.4).Thisrisewasparticularlynoticeablebetween1990and1995,duringwhichtimetheuseof phonestripled.Barchart（變化類(lèi)型ThechartsshowhowmuchaUKschoolspentondifferentrunningcostsinthreeseparateyears:1981,1991and2001.Inallthreeyears,thegreatestexpenditurewasonstaffsalaries.Butwhileotherworkers’salariessawafallfrom28%in1981toonly15%ofspendingin2001,teachers’payremainedthebiggestcost,reaching50%oftotalspendingin1991andendingat45%inExpenditureonresourcessuchasbookshadincreasedto20%by1991beforedecreasingtoonly9%bytheendoftheperiod.Incontrast,thecostoffurnitureandequipmentsawanoppositetrend.Thiscostdecreasedtoonly5%oftotalexpenditurein1991butrosedramaticallyin2001whenitrepresented23%oftheschoolbudget.Similarly,thecostofinsurancesawarisingtrend,growingfromonly2%to8%byOverall,teachers’salariesconstitutedthelargestcosttotheschool,andwhilespendingincreaseddramaticallyforequipmentandinsurance,therewerecorrespondingdropsinexpenditureonthingssuchasbookandonotherworkers’Thetablegivesinformationregardingthenumbersoftouristsfrom6differentcountriesin1975and2005respectively.In1975,thetotalnumberoftourists8.8million,withJapanhavingthelargestnumber(3.2million),closelyfollowedbySouthKorea(2.9million).Asfor ,theUSandBritain,thenumberoftouristswaslowerthan1million,respectively0.3,0.4and0.9million.Therewere1.1millionpeoplefromEurope,accountingfor12.5%ofthetotal.Whenitcomesto2005,withthenumberofJapanesetouristssoaringto12million,thisfigureremainedthelargest.ThenumbersfromSouthKorea,theUSAandBritaintripledmoreorless,respectivelyreaching9.1,1.1and2.9million.Despiteanincreaseof0.5million,thenumberfromwasstillthesmallestwithonly0.8million.TherethespeediestincreaseinthenumberofEuropeantouristswhichroseto4.5million.Overall,allthecountrieslistedsawanupwardtrendintermsofthenumberoftourists. 2.女性就業(yè)率－95年對(duì)比，然后變化到3.在所有年份，所有地區(qū) Thesetwomapsindicatethesituationanddevelopmentofanislandbeforeandafterbuildingseveraltouristfacilitiesonit.Fromthefirstmapwhichshowstheislandwithabout250metersseashorebeforeconstruction,therewasasmallrangeofbeachonthewestsideofthisisland,withnohouse,roadoranyotherfacilitiesbutonlysometreesdistributingonthewestandnearthecenteroftheisland.Thesecondmapdemonstratesthegreatchangeoftheislandaftertouristfacilitiesbeingconstructedonit.Theislandwitnessedthattwomodationgroupsemergedonitwithfootpathconnectingwithineachgroup.Intermsofthebeach,ithadbeenbuilttoaswimmingspotwithfootpathbetweenitandoneofthemodationgroups.Arestaurantwasbuiltnearthenorthernshorewhileareceptionwhichwassurroundedbyvehicletrackappearednearthecenteroftheisland.Itcanalsobeseenthattherewasapieronthesouthernshoresothatpeoplecouldgoforsailingoverthere.Therewasalsovehicletracklinkingtherestaurant,receptionandthepier.Tosumup,themapsindicatethedramaticchangewhichhappenedontheislandevidently.Thelandoftheislandhadbeenexploitedcomprehensively.果你有幸的話，先冷靜下來(lái)，然后準(zhǔn)1.A1-B1A2-B2A3-2.先后對(duì)比Thefirstpictureshowsthelayoutofanartgallery,andthesecondshowssomeproposedchangestothegalleryspace.Itisclearthatsignificantchangeswillbemadeintermsoftheuseoffloorspaceinthegallery.Therewillbeacomple ynewentranceandmorespaceforexhibitions.Atpresent,visitorsenterthegallerythroughdoorswhichleadintoalobby.However,thenistomovetheentrancetotheParkinsonCourtsideofthebuilding,andvisitorswillwalkstraightintotheexhibitionarea.In ofthelobbyandofficeareas,whichareshownontheexisting n,thenewgallerynshowsaneducationareaandasmallstoragearea.Thepermanentexhibitionspaceintheredevelopedgallerywillbeabouttwiceaslargeasitisnowbecauseitwilloccupytheareathatisnowusedfortemporaryexhibitions.Therewillalsobeanewroomforspecialexhibitions.Thisroomisshowninredontheexisting nandisnotcurrentlypartofthegallery.Thediagramsshowhowhousedesignsdifferaccordingtoclimate.Themostnoticeabledifferencebetweenhousesdesignedforcoolandwarmclimatesisintheshapeoftheroof.Thedesignsalsodifferwithregardtothewindowsandtheuseofinsulat