中學(xué)英語(yǔ)作文-課件

中考書面表達(dá)的類型及分析

中考作文常考類型

一、看圖作文

二、話題作文

三、應(yīng)用文（書信）2020/12/21基礎(chǔ)寫作四重奏:

1.信息劃分:確定哪些相關(guān)的信息可用一句話表達(dá),確保5個(gè)句子表達(dá)完所有的信息.建議可在題目上用鉛筆做①,②,③,④,⑤的標(biāo)志(完整性)2.列出關(guān)鍵詞組和句型(準(zhǔn)確性)3.串聯(lián)句子:用正確的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)寫出準(zhǔn)確的句子,并形成篇章

(連貫性)4.檢查(準(zhǔn)確性)2020/12/22精品資料3你怎么稱呼老師？如果老師最后沒有總結(jié)一節(jié)課的重點(diǎn)的難點(diǎn)，你是否會(huì)認(rèn)為老師的教學(xué)方法需要改進(jìn)？你所經(jīng)歷的課堂，是講座式還是討論式？教師的教鞭“不怕太陽(yáng)曬，也不怕那風(fēng)雨狂，只怕先生罵我笨，沒有學(xué)問無(wú)顏見爹娘……”“太陽(yáng)當(dāng)空照，花兒對(duì)我笑，小鳥說早早早……”4句子的分類簡(jiǎn)單句:

只包含一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子.并列句:

主謂結(jié)構(gòu)+連詞(and,but,so,or……)+主謂結(jié)構(gòu)(或更多的主謂結(jié)構(gòu))復(fù)合句:引導(dǎo)詞+主謂結(jié)構(gòu),主謂結(jié)構(gòu)(從句)(主句)

2020/12/25寫一個(gè)完整的句子這幾句是正確的句子嗎?如果你認(rèn)為有誤,該怎么改?1.Themeetingwilluntil3:00.2.Workhard,youwillsucceed.

3.Ihaveabrother,whoisadoctor.4.Thereareonly4studentstakepartintheclass.lastand^^^whotaking/totake2020/12/26五種基本的簡(jiǎn)單句主語(yǔ)+不及物動(dòng)詞2.主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)Birdsfly.Busesrunfromdawntillmidnight.Wearestudyinghard.Wehavereadmanybooks.Theydoshoppingattheweekend.WearelearningEnglish.

2020/12/273.主語(yǔ)+系動(dòng)詞+表語(yǔ)4.主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+間接賓語(yǔ)+直接賓語(yǔ)5.主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)

Wearestudents.Hebecameascientist.Thatsoundsgood.HegaveTom

apresent.Heofferedmeajob.

Wemadehim

ourmonitor.Themanagerthinkstheplan

practical.

Hewillhavehisbike

repaired.Iwon’thaveyou

speakingtoyourmotherlikethat.2020/12/28并列句1.用連詞/副詞(and,but,so,for,or,notonly…butalso,either…or,neither…nor,while,both…and,however,therefore…)1)LiMingis18yearsoldandheisastudentinNo.1MiddleSchool.2)Hurryuporyou’llbelateforschool.3)Imustgonow,formysisteriswaitingforme.2020/12/292.用“;”3.用“;+adv”1)Wefishedallday;wedidn’tcatchanything.Wefishedallday;however,wedidn’tcatchanything.2)Thecarwasalmostnew;besides,itwasinexcellentcondition.

,butwe,soall…2)Lilydoeswellinstudy;alltheteachersthinkhighlyofher.

2020/12/210復(fù)合句復(fù)合句里包含兩個(gè)或更多的主謂結(jié)構(gòu),其中有一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)為句子的主體稱為主句，另一個(gè)／些主謂結(jié)構(gòu)為從句，他（們）只能充當(dāng)句子的某一（些）成分，,如:主語(yǔ),賓語(yǔ),表語(yǔ),同位語(yǔ),定語(yǔ),狀語(yǔ)等.根據(jù)他們?cè)诰渥又械墓δ芊謩e稱為主語(yǔ)從句,賓語(yǔ)從句,表語(yǔ)從句,同位語(yǔ)從句,定語(yǔ)從句,狀語(yǔ)從句等.

2020/12/211判斷下面句子屬于哪種復(fù)合句1)Whenweshallhaveoursportsmeetingisstillaquestion.2)ThelettersaysthattheyareleavingonFriday.3)That’swhattheyshoulddo.4)WeexpressedthehopethattheywouldcomeandvisitChinaagain.5)ThisistheverydictionarythatIamlookingfor.6)Astimewenton,Einstein’stheoryprovedtobecorrect.

主語(yǔ)從句賓語(yǔ)從句表語(yǔ)從句同位語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句狀語(yǔ)從句2020/12/212連貫性的要求是：句子前后之間要有照應(yīng)，有銜接，思想的表達(dá)應(yīng)該有序，清楚．句子與句子之間的過渡要符合邏輯，不能造成歧義或矛盾．2020/12/213Timeorder:First,…Firstofall,…Second,…Third,…Next,…Afterthat,…Then…Finally,…2020/12/214SpaceorderOntheright,…Ontheleft,…Inthecenter,…Inthemiddle,…Nexttothe…,…Besidethe…,…Oppositethe______,…Nearthe______,…Underthe______,…Abovethe______,…Ononesideofthe______,…Ontheothersideofthe______,…2020/12/215Transitionsignals1、遞進(jìn)：besides,inaddition,what’smore2、轉(zhuǎn)折和對(duì)比：but,however,ontheotherhand,3、總結(jié)：inshort,inbrief,forthesereasons4、因果和結(jié)論：asaresult,dueto,becauseof,thus,therefore5、強(qiáng)調(diào)：really,indeed,surely6、其它插入語(yǔ)：worsestill/what’sworse,afterall,ifpossible,2020/12/216培養(yǎng)英語(yǔ)思維---詞的搭配大雨大橋大樓大錯(cuò)大寫大病大地震heavyrainlongbridgehighrise/largebuildingbig/terrible/seriousmistakecapitalletterseriousillnessmajorearthquake2020/12/217句的表達(dá)注意漢英差異：一、狀語(yǔ)e.g.她一周有三個(gè)下午在一家百貨公司做兼職。 Sheworksparttimeinadepartmentstorethreeafternoonsaweek. 在我十歲那年我和家人經(jīng)歷了一次奇妙的旅行。ItookafantastictripwithmyfamilywhenIwastenyearsold.2020/12/218二、謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞漢語(yǔ)：無(wú)動(dòng)詞或多動(dòng)詞 英語(yǔ)：?jiǎn)蝿?dòng)詞e.g.我媽媽很漂亮。Mymotherispretty.我們又唱又跳。Wesanganddanced.我們邀請(qǐng)他們到上海來(lái)玩。WeinvitedthemtocometoShanghaiforavisit.你上課常常缺席所以我想要提醒你。YouareoftenabsentfromclasssoIwanttoremindyou.

2020/12/219三、主語(yǔ)e.g.活到老，學(xué)到老。Oneisnevertoooldtolearn.很難說誰(shuí)對(duì)誰(shuí)錯(cuò)。It’shardtotellwhoisrightandwhoiswrong.昨天找到了丟失的鋼筆。Thelostpenwasfoundyesterday.上飯店吃飯很貴。 It’sexpensivetoeatout.乘飛機(jī)旅行更舒適、便捷。Travellingbyplaneisfasterandmoreconvenient.2020/12/220四、定語(yǔ)漢：常常是前置定語(yǔ)英：前置和后置定語(yǔ)e.g.我們學(xué)校的所有學(xué)生allthestudentsinourschool左邊數(shù)第五個(gè)男孩thefifthboyfromtheleft英國(guó)人的日常生活everydaylivesoftheBritish在中國(guó)騎車的人數(shù)thenumberofcyclistsinChina幾種氣體的混合物amixtureofseveralgases

介詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)2020/12/221三到六歲的孩子Childrenfrom3to6yearsofage隔壁的音像店themusicstorenextdoor用英語(yǔ)寫的信theletter(s)inEnglish晚上最晚一班返回的公交車thelastbusbackintheevening城市生活的嘈雜、臟亂thenoiseanddirtofcitylife2020/12/222玩/放松的時(shí)間timetoplay/relax當(dāng)一個(gè)音樂家的計(jì)劃planstobeamusician出國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)的機(jī)會(huì)thechancetostudyabroad供人坐著休息的安靜場(chǎng)所aquietplaceforpeopletositin/rest找到任何一個(gè)可以詢問的人findanyonetoask動(dòng)詞不定式作后置定語(yǔ)2020/12/223城市用水waterusedbycities不亂扔垃圾的習(xí)慣thehabitofnotthrowingawayrubbish我曾經(jīng)生活的村莊thevillagewhereIstayed/lived我昨晚吃的某樣?xùn)|西somethingIatelastnight到月球去的宇航員astronautswhotraveledtothemoon孩子們喜歡吃的食物food(which)childrenlike分詞、定語(yǔ)從句等作后置定語(yǔ)2020/12/224檢

查1.時(shí)態(tài)2.主謂一致3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)4.單詞拼寫5.動(dòng)詞的過去式,過去分詞6.句子是否完整2020/12/225Writingtips:時(shí)態(tài)一致必須注意所用時(shí)態(tài)符合上下文。如果用過去時(shí)敘述一個(gè)故事，就要保證通篇都用過去時(shí)，不要在作文中間變成現(xiàn)在時(shí)。同樣，如果是在談?wù)撈毡閱栴}、現(xiàn)狀或日常習(xí)慣，就要用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，而不要用過去時(shí)。e.g.YesterdayIdidmyhomework.Ittakesmethreehours.Hisfatherthoughtheisgoodatmath.Shestartedhernewjoblastweek.Shelikedit.Wedidn’tgototheparty.Wearen’tinvited.tookwaslikesweren’t2020/12/226Writingtips:2.主語(yǔ)一致應(yīng)該保持全文人稱一致，這樣讀者才能跟隨一個(gè)邏輯思維順序。否則讀者會(huì)感到困惑。e.g.Althoughyoumayfailtheexam,hecanstillbeusefultothecountry.

Itnotonlyprovidesyouwithlotsofknowledgebutalsodevelopshisinterests.youyour2020/12/227Writingtips:4.詞序/語(yǔ)序它能夠幫助準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)作者本意并并避免意義含糊不清。注意要讓句子盡量保持英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。e.g.Ialreadyhavehadlunch.ShewithhermumtraveledtoItaly.

Ialwaysbethewinnerofthepianocontest.InChina,heknewtherewerebigfloods.IjustwonderwhatdoesmyfuturelikeandwhatshouldIdo.havealreadyShetraveledtoItalywithhermum.amalwaysHeknewtherewerebigfloodsinChina.IjustwonderwhatmyfatherlikesandwhatIshoulddo.2020/12/228Writingtips:5.并列句用并列句能使文章更生動(dòng)流暢，它包含兩個(gè)獨(dú)立分句和一個(gè)連詞，如：and,but,or,so等。e.g.Theyknowwhatisbetterandtheyarealwaysright.Itwascrowded.Wewereabletoseehim.Itwascrowdedbutwewereabletoseehim.Sheisatopstudent.Sheisatalentedmusician.Sheisatopstudentandatalentedmusician.Thoughhedoesn’thavemuchmoney,buthisheartisfulloflove.

兩個(gè)分句不要重復(fù)同一個(gè)單詞。每個(gè)分句都必須有一個(gè)動(dòng)詞；每?jī)蓚€(gè)分句組成的句子只能使用一個(gè)連詞。2020/12/229Writingtips:6.復(fù)合句。它包含一個(gè)主句和一個(gè)從句，由when,after,if等連詞或who,which等關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)。e.g.She

was

very

old.

She

couldn't

stand

on

the

bus

easily.

Shewassooldthatshecouldn’tstandonthebuseasily.Theresultwasnotthemostimportantthingforme.Theresultwouldbeknownawholemonthlater.Theresult,whichwouldbeknownawholemonthlater,wasnotthemostimportantthingforme.2020/12/230Writingtips:7.避免詞的重復(fù)。e.g.Allinall,wehadawonderfultrip.WetravelledacrossSydney,CanberraandMelbourne.WesawthebeautifulcoastofQueensland.WetouredallofPerth.WehadagreatvisitwithDan.Perhapswewillgoagainnextwinter.2020/12/231Writingtips:3.主謂一致/人稱一致確保語(yǔ)法正確。e.g.ThingsIhatetodoisdoinghomework.WhatIhatetodois…EverypeoplestarttolearnEnglish.EverypersonstartstolearnEnglish.Theactivitiescanrelaxourselves.Theactivitiescanhelpusrelaxourselves./Wecanrelaxourselvesbytakingpartintheactivities.2020/12/232看圖作文LookAndwrite2020/12/233看圖作文難度稍大，在寫作時(shí)它要根據(jù)圖畫呈現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容與所給的中英文提示相結(jié)合來(lái)表達(dá)其內(nèi)在涵義，描述圖畫內(nèi)容，使短文達(dá)意、正確、連貫?？磮D作文可采用以下幾個(gè)步驟：1、理解圖意，確立情景2、注意所給的中英文提示3、明確時(shí)態(tài)，理順?biāo)悸?、連詞成句，然后再連句成文5、反復(fù)審核，修改錯(cuò)誤2020/12/234假設(shè)下面五幅圖畫描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段親身經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)畫面內(nèi)容，寫一篇80字左右的日記。

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英文日記的格式英文日記通常由書端和正文兩個(gè)部分組成。中、英文的日記格式大致一樣。英語(yǔ)日記的書端是寫日記的日期、星期和天氣的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角寫上當(dāng)天的天氣情況，如：Sunny，F(xiàn)ine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy等。日記的正文是日記的主要部分，寫在星期和日期的正下方，可以頂格寫，也可以內(nèi)縮3至5個(gè)字母的空間。

2020/12/236今天下午我去看電影.gotoamoviegotothecinemaseeafilmIt’safinedaytoday.thisafternoonIwenttoamoviehappilythisafternoon.2020/12/237在路上,我看到一個(gè)手提箱從一輛自行車上掉了下來(lái).Ontheway,Ifound/sawacasefalldownfrom/offaman’sbike.onthewayfalldownfrom/falloffsee/find+復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)2020/12/238我撿起箱子,并向騎車人大聲喊叫,但他卻沒聽見,走遠(yuǎn)了.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtotheman,buthedidn’thearmeandrodeaway.pickupshouttorideaway2020/12/239于是,我攔了一輛出租車去追趕失主.Istoppedataxitotocatchupwiththeman.stopataxicatchupwith2020/12/240我終于追上了失主,并把箱子還給他.失主非常的感動(dòng),他拿出一些錢來(lái)感謝我,但被我拒絕了.Icaughtupwithhimatlastandgavethecasebacktohim.Themantookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.giveback/returnrefuse2020/12/241May3rd,FridayFineThisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffaman'sbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtothemantostop.Buthedidn'thearmeandrodeaway.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.

2020/12/242Usefulsentences:Sayingsandproverbs:Onself-help:Pridegoesbeforeafall驕者必?cái)?Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的開端是成功的一半。Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.自信是走向成功的第一步。Custommakesallthingseasy.有個(gè)好習(xí)慣，事事皆不難。Greathopesmakegreatman.偉大的抱負(fù)造就偉大的人物。2020/12/243Usefulsentences:Honestyisthebestpolicy.做人誠(chéng)信為本。Hopeforthebest,butpreparefortheworst.抱最好的愿望，做最壞的打算。Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上無(wú)難事，只要肯登攀。Ifathingisworthdoing,it’sworthdoingwell.值得做的是就值得做好。Wherethereislife,thereishope.生活充滿了希望。/留得青山在，不怕沒柴燒2020/12/244Usefulsentences:Onhealth: Aclosemouthcatchesnoflies.病從口入。 Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一蘋果，不用請(qǐng)醫(yī)生。 Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起身體好。Onmotherhood: Amother'sloveneverchanges.母愛永恒。2020/12/245Usefulsentences:Onfriendship: Afriendiseasierlostthanfound.得朋友難，失朋友易。 Afriendisneverknowntillamanhasneed.需要之時(shí)方知友。Onreading: Agoodbookisthebestoffriends,thesametodayandforever.一本好書，相伴一生。 Byreadingweenrichthemind,byconversationwepolishit.讀書使人充實(shí)，交談使人精明。 Chooseanauthorasyouchooseafriend.擇書如擇友。2020/12/246Usefulsentences:Onentertainment: AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只會(huì)用功不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。Onlife: Weknow