讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)思維方向?qū)＞?8)- 高三英語(yǔ)一輪起航

注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好。WhentheemployeesattheDomino’spizzaplaceinSalem,Oregon,hadn’treceivedanyorderfromKirkAlexanderformorethan2weeks,theyknewsomethingwasn’tright.Kirkwasaloyalcustomerandthestaffallknewhim.Soitwasnaturalthattheygotworriedwhentheyhadnonewsabouthim.Theirconcernsavedhislife.SarahFuller,thegeneralmanagerattheDomino’sbranch,saidthatKirk,whowas48yearsold,hadbeenaloyalcustomersince2009.“Heorderseveryday,oreveryotherday,”Sarahsaid.Normally,hisordercameuponthescreenbecauseheorderedonline.Sowesawitcameacrossthescreenandwewerethinking,“Oh,Kirk’sorder.”Afterafewdayswithoutasingleorder,Sarahandthestaffstartedtoworry.AfewDomino’sdrivershadmentionedthattheyhadn’tseenhisordercomeacrosstheirscreeninawhile.Sarahcheckedthesystemandsawthatnoorderhadcomein11days.Sotheydecidedtoinvestigate.SarahdecidedtosendTracyHamblen,adeliverdriver,toKirk’splace.Whenhegotthere,heimmediatelyknewsomethingwaswrong.WhilethelightsandTVwereon,Kirkdidnotcometothedoor.Additionally,hisphonewentdirectlytovoicemail.SoTracyimmediatelycalled911.Paragraph1:Whenthepolicearrivedattheplace,Paragraph2:Afewdayslater,Kirkwasreleasedfromthehospital.【文章概要】本文講述了一個(gè)披薩店的員工，細(xì)心地發(fā)現(xiàn)近期沒(méi)有收到來(lái)自老顧客Kirk的訂單，于是派人前去查看，發(fā)現(xiàn)Kirk生病并及時(shí)報(bào)警就醫(yī)，確保了Kirk的安全。員工的善舉為披薩店贏得了更多的稱贊和訂單?！緟⒖挤段摹?Paragraph1：Whenthepolicearrivedattheplace,theyheardacryforhelpfromtheinsideofthehouse.Inside,theyfoundKirk,whowasinneedofimmediatemedicalhelp.DuetothequickactionsofTracy,KirkisinstableconditionattheSalemHospital.TheDomino’semployeesreceivedalotofpraiseonlinefortheirunbelievablethoughtfulness.Buttheysaidthatitwasjustpartoftheirjobandtheywerejustdoingtheirjob.Paragraph2：Afewdayslater,Kirkwasreleasedfromthehospital.HecametotheDomino’spersonallywithsomehomemadecookiestosaythank--youtoSarahandtheDomino’sstaff.TheDomino’smentionedthat“Caringforcustomersshouldnotbetakenatfacevalue.Weshouldrememberthatthecustomersdeterminethesuccessofourcompanyandinturnwecanalsohaveanimpactontheirlives,smallorbig.”Kirk’sstoryhasmadethispizzashopevenmorepopularinthecommunity,andithasreceivedmoreorderseversince.【詳解】續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：呼救——成功被救助——感謝——店員表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)——披薩店更受歡迎第一段：由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)警察趕到現(xiàn)場(chǎng)時(shí)，”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)警察將Kirk送到醫(yī)院的經(jīng)過(guò)。第二段：首句內(nèi)容“幾天后，Kirk出院了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)Kirk出院后去披薩店感謝員工們拯救了他的生命以及該披薩店因?yàn)樯埔馀e動(dòng)而為自己贏得更多的訂單和顧客。詞匯運(yùn)用行為類

①大聲求救：cryforhelp/shoutforhelp/screamforhelp

②受到贊揚(yáng)：receivedalotofpraise/bepraisedgreatly

③照顧，護(hù)理：caringfor/takingcareof/

情緒類

①.感謝：saythank--you/expressappreciation/showappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful

②.體貼：thoughtfulness/beingconsiderate高分句式Inside,theyfoundKirk,whowasinneedofimmediatemedicalhelp.(由關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞Kirk。)

Weshouldrememberthatthecustomersdeterminethesuccessofourcompanyandinturnwecanalsohaveanimpactontheirlives,smallorbig.(that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句作remember的賓語(yǔ)。)注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好。Twentyyearsago,Iwasataparty,talkingtoamanwhosenameIhavelongsinceforgotten.SometimesIthinkthismancameintomylifefortheuniquepurposeoftellingmethisstory,oneabouthowbrave,creativeandtrustinghisbrotherwas,whichhasdelightedandinspiredmeeversince.Forthepurposeofthisstory,let'scallthelittlebrotherLittleBrother.LittleBrother,ayoungpainter,wenttoFrancetosurroundhimselfwithbeautyandinspiration.Helivedonthecheap,paintedeveryday,visitedmuseums,traveledtopicturesqueplaces,bravelyspoketoeveryonehemet,andshowedhisworktoanyonewhowouldlookatit.Oneafternoon,hestruckupaconversationatacafewithagroupofcharmingyoungpeoplewhoturnedouttobesomefancynobles.TheytookalikingtoLittleBrotherandinvitedhimtoapartythatweekendinacastleintheLoireValley.Theysaidthiswasgoingtobethepartyoftheyear.ItwouldbeattendedbytherichandfamousandbyseveralcrownedheadsofEurope.Bestofallitwasamasqueradeball(化妝舞會(huì))wherenobodywouldhesitateintheirspendingonthecostumes.“Dressup,”theysaid,“andjoinus!”Excited,LittleBrotherworkedallweekonacostumethathewascertainwouldbehighlyimpressive.Heheldbackonneitherthedetailsnortheimaginationofthiscreation.Thenherentedacaranddrovethreehourstothecastle.Hechangedintohiscostumeinthecarandwentupthecastlesteps.LittleBrotherenteredtheballroom,headheldhigh.Uponarrival,heimmediatelyrealizedhismistake.Thiswasindeedacostumeparty—hisnewfriendshadnotmisledhimthere—buthehadmissedonedetailintranslation:Thiswasathemedcostumeparty.Thethemewas“amedieval(中世紀(jì)的)court”.AndLittleBrotherwasdressedasalobster(龍蝦).Allaroundhim,thewealthyandbeautifulweredressedinfancyclothes,wearingsparklingjewels.Paragraph1:Allaroundhim,thewealthyandbeautifulweredressedinfancyclothes,earingsparklingjewels.Paragraph2:Hetookadeepbreathandwalkedontothedancefloor.【文章概要】作者從朋友口中得知LittleBrother的一次舞會(huì)經(jīng)歷。LittleBrothe,一位年輕畫(huà)家不怕出丑，扮成搞笑龍蝦，參加富人的化妝舞會(huì)，勇敢地調(diào)侃幽默，化尷尬為快樂(lè)的故事?！緟⒖挤段摹縋aragraph1：Allaroundhim,thewealthyandbeautifulweredressedinfancyclothes,earingsparklingjewels.LittleBrother,ontheotherhand,waswearingaredcoat,redtights,redballetslippers,andgiantredclaws.Also,hisfacewaspaintedred.Hestoodatthetopofthestepsforonelong,frightfulmoment.Runningawayinshameseemedliketheeasiestresponse.Buthedidn'trun.Somehow,hefoundhisdetermination.He'dcomethisfar,afterall.He'dworkedreallyhardtomakethiscostume,andhewasproudofit.Paragraph2：Hetookadeepbreathandwalkedontothedancefloor.Ashemovedintothecrowd,asilencefell.“Iamthecourtlobster,"LittleBrotherboweddeeplyandannounced.Then:laughter.Notridicule--justjoy.Theylovedhim.Theylovedhissweetness,hisweirdness(怪誕)，hisgiantredclaws,andhisskinnylegsinhisbrighttights.Hemadetheparty.Sometimesitslikethat.Whatyouabsolutelymustnotdoiswalkout;o