2022-2023學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下學(xué)期期中考點(diǎn)（外研版）：書面表達(dá)專練（解析版）

專題11書面表達(dá)專練一、話題作文1．（2022·青?！そy(tǒng)考中考真題）當(dāng)今，中國(guó)正迅速發(fā)展，在各方面都取得了令人矚目的成就。請(qǐng)你以“ChinainTenYears”為題，暢想并描述十年后的祖國(guó)。要求：（1）內(nèi)容積極向上，完整連貫；（2）邏輯清晰，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，書寫規(guī)范；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名和地名；（4）詞數(shù)：80—100（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。ChinainTenYearsNowadays,ourcountryisdevelopingfast.Ithasmadegreatachievementsinmanyfields.WhatwillChinabelikeintenyears?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ChinainTenYearsNowadays,ourcountryisdevelopingfast.Ithasmadegreatachievementsinmanyfields.WhatwillChinabelikeintenyears?Iimaginemylifeintenyearswillbewonderful.IwillliveinShanghai.TheneighborhoodwhichIlivedinwillbeverycomfortable.Therewillbemanytreesandflowersaroundmyhouse.Alotofsubwayswillbebuiltinmycity.Itwillbeveryconvenientformetogoout.Asformyjob,Iwillbeadoctor.Iwillhelppeopleinneed.MaybeI’llgotoafamousuniversityforfurtherstudy.Myparentswillbetoooldtotakecareofthemselves.Sotakinggoodcareofthemwillbemyduty.IwillmakemoneytosupportmyparentsbecausetheygavemesomuchwhenIwasyoung.Inaword,mylifeintenyearswillbebetterthanitisnow.Iwilltrymybesttomakeitpossibletohaveabetterlife!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出本文主題，暢想中國(guó)未來(lái)十年是什么樣子；第二步，從生活，工作，交通等方面暢想未來(lái)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①alotof許多②asfor至于③takecareof照顧[高分句型]①TheneighborhoodwhichIlivedinwillbeverycomfortable.（which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）②Therewillbemanytreesandflowersaroundmyhouse.（therebe句型）二、材料作文2．（2023春·八年級(jí)單元測(cè)試）請(qǐng)以“Mygoodfriend”為題寫一篇短文，向你的全班同學(xué)介紹一下你的好朋友SunLei。內(nèi)容提示：1.出生年月，來(lái)自地區(qū)；2.學(xué)習(xí)；3.外貌特征；4.興趣愛好等。參考詞匯：January6th,2006,Shenyang,begantostudyEnglishat5,shorthair,glasses,music,dance,sports,makefriends要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整。2.詞數(shù)80詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

MygoodfriendHello,everyone!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MygoodfriendHello,everyone!Ihaveagoodfriend.HisnameisSunLei.HewasbornonJanuary6th,2006.

HecamefromShenyang.HebegantostudyEnglishattheageoffive.HestudiesEnglishverywell.Hehasshortblackhairandheoftenwearsapairofglasses.Helikesmusicverymuchwheneverhehastime.Helikeslisteningtomusic.Sometimes,healsolikesdancing.Helikessportstoo.Weoftenplaytogether.Heisveryfriendlytoeveryone,soIliketomakefriendswithhim.Ihopewewillbefriendsforever.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第三人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹好朋友SunLei出生年月和地點(diǎn)；第二步，具體闡述他的學(xué)習(xí)以及外貌特征；第三步，最后表達(dá)他的興趣愛好。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bebornon出生于②attheageof在……歲時(shí)③befriendlyto對(duì)……友好[高分句型]Hehasshortblackhairandheoftenwearsapairofglasses.（and連接兩個(gè)并列句）3．（2022春·內(nèi)蒙古包頭·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）沒有規(guī)矩，不成方圓。在我們的生活中，到處都有規(guī)則。同樣，家也會(huì)有家規(guī)。請(qǐng)談?wù)勀慵依镉心男┘乙?guī)，你認(rèn)為它們合理嗎？你怎么看待它們？要點(diǎn)：1.Whatareyourfamilyrules?2.Whatdoyouthinkofthem?3.60詞左右。參考詞匯：washthedishes，makethebed，playwithfriends，watchTV，playcomputergames.FamilyRules________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：FamilyRulesTherearetoomanyrulesinmyfamily.EverydayIhavetogetupat6:00inthemorning.ThenIeatbreakfastquicklyandImustwashthedishes.IruntoschoolbecauseIcan’tbelate.Ican’tplaycomputergamesorwatchTVonschooldays.Afterdinner,Ican’trelaxbecauseImustreadbooks.AndIhavetobeinbedby10:00p.m.Also,Ihavetodosomehousework.Ifeelterrible.Therulesaretoostrict.WhatcanIdo?【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：考生需根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示中的關(guān)鍵信息，談?wù)勛约杭依镉心男┘乙?guī)，是否覺得合理。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題，說(shuō)明有很多家規(guī)；第二步，介紹具體的家規(guī)；第三步，表達(dá)自己對(duì)這些家規(guī)的看法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①haveto不得不②washthedishes洗碗③playcomputergames玩電腦游戲[高分句型]①ThenIeatbreakfastquicklyandImustwashthedishes.（and連接并列句）②IruntoschoolbecauseIcan’tbelate.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）4．（2022春·廣西南寧·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）平時(shí)生活中，我們總是得到媽媽無(wú)微不至的關(guān)愛。母親節(jié)快到了，請(qǐng)你以“MyplanforMother’sDay”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)小短文，談?wù)勅绾谓o媽媽度過(guò)一個(gè)有意義的母親節(jié)。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.買禮物，制作卡片2.幫忙做家務(wù)，做晚餐3.看電影，散步4.……5.你的期待寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)；2.語(yǔ)篇完整，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得透露個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分；4.詞數(shù)70左右。（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)）MyplanforMother’sDayI’mhappytheMother’sDayiscoming.Ihavesomeplansforit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：MyplanforMother’sDayI’mhappytheMother’sDayiscoming.Ihavesomeplansforit.Firstofall,Iwilltalkwithher,becauseIneedtoknowwhatherfavoritethingsare.ThenIamgoingtobuyhergifts.Afterthat,I’llmakeacardandwritesomewordsonit.Mymotherwasreallytired,soI’llhelpherwiththehousework.IntheeveningI’llcookdinnerformymom.Afterdinner,wewillgotothecinema.ThenIwilltakeawalkwithmymom.Ofcourse,Ialsowanttohaveapartyforher.Ireallyhopeshewillbehappyonthatday!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)；注意適當(dāng)發(fā)揮、補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)，使文章的內(nèi)容更加豐富。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題，即針對(duì)母親節(jié)有一些計(jì)劃；第二步，具體介紹自己的計(jì)劃；第三步，總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)自己的希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①talkwithsb.與某人交談②helpwithhousework幫忙做家務(wù)③gotothecinema去看電影④takeawalk散步[高分句型]①Firstofall,Iwilltalkwithher,becauseIneedtoknowwhatherfavoritethingsare.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Ireallyhopeshewillbehappyonthatday!（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）5．（2022春·四川廣安·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，“網(wǎng)購(gòu)”已經(jīng)非常流行。越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)的群體中，根據(jù)你對(duì)網(wǎng)購(gòu)的看法寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求：1.適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容或說(shuō)明理由。2.字跡工整，書寫規(guī)范。70詞左右。Advantages足不出戶不受時(shí)間限制，節(jié)約時(shí)間Disadvantages在網(wǎng)上看不到實(shí)物網(wǎng)上支付不安全_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Onlineshoppingisanewwayofshopping.It’sverypopularwiththeyoungpeople.Onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First,youcanbuysomethingsathome.Itcansavelotsoftime.Second,youcancomparethepricesofthesameproductandsavemoney.Butonlineshoppinghassomedisadvantages,too.Youcanonlyseepictures,butcan’tseetherealproducts.AndpayingovertheInternetisn’talwayssafe.Iloveonlineshopping,butIalsogotothesupermarkettobuysomethinginmyfreetime.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)表格中已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，但要突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，直入主題，簡(jiǎn)單介紹網(wǎng)購(gòu)。第二步，具體介紹網(wǎng)購(gòu)的利弊?？筛鶕?jù)表格中已給信息，從“利”和“弊”兩個(gè)方面客觀地介紹網(wǎng)購(gòu)；第三步，表達(dá)對(duì)網(wǎng)購(gòu)的看法。根據(jù)自己的情況，表達(dá)自己對(duì)網(wǎng)購(gòu)的看法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bepopularwith受……歡迎②comparethepricesof…比較……的價(jià)格③savemoney省錢④inmyfreetime在我的空閑時(shí)間[高分句型]①Youcanonlyseepictures,butcan’tseetherealproducts.（連詞but表轉(zhuǎn)折）②AndpayingovertheInternetisn’talwayssafe.（動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)）6．（2018·四川瀘州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）暑期將至，我們都應(yīng)該制定合理的假期計(jì)劃。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“MySummerVacationPlan”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)提示：1.放松自己：聽音樂(lè)，看電影，鍛煉身體等；2.陪伴家人：旅行，散步，與父母交流等；3.做志愿者：看望老人，贈(zèng)送禮物，為他們唱歌等；4.努力學(xué)習(xí)：閱讀書籍，復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)，為以后學(xué)習(xí)做準(zhǔn)備等；5.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：……。要求：1.詞數(shù)110詞左右（短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)提示均須涉及，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；3.字跡工整，卷面整潔，文意連貫，語(yǔ)言流暢；4.不用真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。參考詞語(yǔ)：relaxmyself,spendtimewith…,volunteer,review,prepareforMySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,I

plan

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myself,

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to

music,

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movies

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so

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I

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our

health

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play

sports.Then,

I

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going

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my

parents,

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traveling,

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a

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with

them.Third,

I’m

going

to

be

a

volunteer.

I

want

to

visit

the

old

people,

give

them

gifts

and

sing

for

them.At

the

same

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I’ll

read

some

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open

my

eyes.I

also

plan

to

review

knowledge

to

prepare

for

future

study.

I

think

I’ll

have

a

good

summer

vacation.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)及詞語(yǔ)，寫出自己的暑假計(jì)劃，從不同的方面描寫，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的開頭融合起來(lái)，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來(lái)介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般將來(lái)時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。7．（2018·新疆烏魯木齊·統(tǒng)考中考真題）“建設(shè)美麗新疆，共圓祖國(guó)夢(mèng)想”，所有新疆人正以此為目標(biāo)全力以赴建設(shè)大美新疆。作為生于新疆、長(zhǎng)于新疆的中學(xué)生，我們又能為此做些什么呢？請(qǐng)從以下提示中選擇至少2點(diǎn)，寫一篇題為“WhatcanwedotohelpbuildXinjiang?”的英語(yǔ)短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。1.出行方式；2.環(huán)境保護(hù)；3.節(jié)約意識(shí)；4.與人相處。要求：1.80詞左右；2.文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.語(yǔ)法正確，語(yǔ)義連貫；字跡工整，書寫規(guī)范。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:WhatcanwedotohelpbuildXinjiangAsisknowntousall,peoplearedoingtheirbesttomakeXinjiangstrongerandmorebeautiful.AsstudentsbornandgrownupinXinjiang,whatcanwedotohelpbuildit?Firstly,wecanavoidthetrafficjamsandreduceairpollutionbyridingbikesorwalkingifwedon’tlivefarfromourschool.Secondly,weshouldn’tspitorlitterhereandthere.Inordertoprotecttheenvironment,wecanalsoplanttreesaroundourcity.Thirdly,wearesupposedtostopwastingresources.Inourdailylife,weshouldsavewater,electricityandpaperandsoon.Forexample,remembertoturnoffthetapandreusewater.Lastbutnotleast,it’simportantandnecessarytogetalongwellwithothers.Whenpeopleareintrouble,wehadbettergivethemahandandtrytohelpthemout.Inshort,ifeveryone,includingusstudents,makescontributions,ourhometownwillbebetterandbetter.Let’stakeactionnowtodowhatwecantohelpbuildXinjiang.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，從不同的方面描述如何讓新疆變得更美，包括出行方式、環(huán)境保護(hù)、節(jié)約意識(shí)以及與人之間的相處等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱、第三人稱來(lái)介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，提出建議可以多用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。三、電子郵件8．（2022春·貴州畢節(jié)·八年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）假設(shè)你叫李華，你的筆友Tom發(fā)郵件說(shuō)他打算暑假來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)畢節(jié)旅游。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歡迎；2.詢問(wèn)到達(dá)時(shí)間；3.你的接待安排(如參觀名勝古跡等)。注意：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給信息；2.詞數(shù)80左右；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)信息。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearTom,I’mgladtohearthatyou’lltraveltoBijieduringyoursummervacation.WelcometoBijiefortraveling.WhenareyougoingtoarriveinBijie?Whenyoucomehere,I’llshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinterest.I’lltakeyoutoBailiDujuanNaturalPark.Youcanenjoydifferentcolorfulflowersthere.Iwillalsoshowyouaroundourcity.It’sconvenienttogetaroundourcity.Therearemanykindsoftransportherelikebuses,taxisandtrains.Andyoucantastedifferentkindsoffood.Alsothepeopleherearesofriendly.Lookingforwardtomeetingyouhere.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏已給出的內(nèi)容提示，寫郵件歡迎湯姆來(lái)畢節(jié)并詢問(wèn)到達(dá)時(shí)間，談?wù)勛约捍蛩阍趺唇哟?。[寫作步驟]第一步，歡迎湯姆來(lái)畢節(jié)；第二步，詢問(wèn)湯姆何時(shí)到達(dá)畢節(jié)并介紹自己將如何招待湯姆；第三步，表達(dá)期待和祝愿。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①summervacation暑假②arrivein到達(dá)③showsb.around帶某人參觀④placesofinterest名勝古跡⑤lookforwardtodoingsth.期待做某事[高分句型]①I’mgladtohearthatyou’lltraveltoBijieduringyoursummervacation.（that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）②Therearemanykindsoftransportherelikebuses,taxisandtrains.（therebe句型）9．（2022·上?！そy(tǒng)考中考真題）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）你校將增設(shè)一間學(xué)生活動(dòng)室（studentactivityroom），現(xiàn)有以下六種關(guān)于活動(dòng)室用途的設(shè)想：讀者之家（Readingcorner）

勞技工坊（Miniworkshop）

藝體天地（Artsandsportscentre）義賣集市（Charitymarket）

科創(chuàng)小屋（High-techlab）

心靈驛站（Heart-to-heartroom）學(xué)校正通過(guò)校報(bào)了解學(xué)生的意向。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)給校報(bào)張老師寫封郵件，表明你最喜歡的一種設(shè)想，并說(shuō)明理由。（注意：1.郵件中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2.照抄閱讀語(yǔ)篇不得分。）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMrZhang,

Iamwritingtoyoutosharemyideasabouttheuseofthestudentactivityroom.Iprefertomakeitaheart-to-heartroom.

Forsomestudents,theymayfeelhelplessanddepressedwhentheymeettroublesinlife,especiallythosewhoareshy.Theycanturntothisplaceforhelpifthereisone.Besides,studentsarelikelytosufferfrommentalproblems.Iftheseproblemsaren’tsolvedwell,theymaybringbadresults.Theheart-to-heartroomcanofferhelptothesestudentsintime.

Thankyouforreadingmye-mail.

Yours,

LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：首先選擇其中你最喜歡的一種設(shè)想，發(fā)郵件給校報(bào)張老師，并說(shuō)明理由。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明主題，介紹自己喜歡的設(shè)想；第二步，介紹喜歡的理由；第三步，表示感謝。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①prefertodo更喜歡做某事②turnto求助于③sufferfrom遭受[高分句型]①theymayfeelhelplessanddepressedwhentheymeettroublesinlife,especiallythosewhoareshy.（含有when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)和who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）②Theycanturntothisplaceforhelpifthereisone.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）四、書信作文10．（2022春·廣西欽州·七年級(jí)浦北中學(xué)?？计谥校┘亦l(xiāng)是我們最親切的地方。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，向你的朋友Tony介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)。提示：1.位置：欽州市2.一座古老的城市，每年很多旅游者來(lái)參觀。3.有很多鮮花和綠樹，可以享受新鮮空氣。每天可以聞到花香和鳥叫。4.當(dāng)?shù)厝撕苡押谩?.周末有很多好玩的地方可以去。我父母去看電影，我喜歡去體育中心跟朋友踢足球……注意：可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，字?jǐn)?shù)70詞左右。DearTony,I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometown._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearTony,I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometown.MyhometownisChinzhou.Itisanoldcityandthousandsofvisitorscomehereeveryyear.Therearealotofflowersandgreentreeshere,sowecanenjoyfreshair.Andwecansmellthefragranceofflowersandthesingingofbirdseveryday.Thepeoplehereareveryfriendly.Whenyouneedhelp,theywillvolunteertohelp.Therearemanyinterestingplacestogoonweekends.Myparentsgotothemovies,andIliketogotothesportscentertoplayfootballwithmyfriends.Wearebothveryhappy.I’msureyouwilllikehere.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)題干中的提示要點(diǎn)介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容詳細(xì)介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①thousandsof數(shù)千的②volunteertodosth.自愿做某事[高分句型]①Therearealotofflowersandgreentreeshere,sowecanenjoyfreshair.(so連接的并列句)②Whenyouneedhelp,theywillvolunteertohelp.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)五、講稿11．（2021·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你是李華，你所在的學(xué)校