茂名學院專插本綜英第三部分Composition課件

CompositionWritingCompositionWriting1AnalysisofModelCompositionTheImportanceofEducationTheprosperityofanationdependsonthedevelopmentofeducation.Anydevelopmentinscienceandtechnologythroughouttheworldisduetothedevelopmentofeducationwhichbringsupscientistsandinventors.Itisdifficulttoemphasizejusthowimportanttheroleofeducationis.Thereisnodoubtthatcountrieswithundevelopededucationwillremainpoor.

Educationisalsovitaltothedevelopmentofanindividual.Ofallelementsofsuccessinourcareersnoneismoreimportantthaneducation.Itisnotgeniusbuttheknowledgethatmakesthedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.Infactmostofthefamouspeopleofourtimesspentmanyyearsstudying.Canyounameanygreatmenyouadmirewhoarenotwelleducated?

Somepeople,however,arestillignorantoftheimportanceofeducation.Someparents,especiallythoseinthecountryside,thinkitunnecessarytosendtheirchildrentoschool.Someparentshavetheirchildrenworkformoneyataveryyoungage.Inviewofthis,compulsoryeducationmustbeenforcedtoseetoitthateveryyoungpeoplewillbehavethechancetoreceiveadequateeducation.AnalysisofModelCompositionT2FrameworkoftheStructureoftheAboveEssay1.IntroductionTS:Theprosperityofanationdependsonthedevelopmentofeducation.DS:①Anydevelopmentinscienceandtechnologythroughouttheworldisduetothedevelopmentofeducationwhichbringsup(養(yǎng)育;培養(yǎng))scientistsandinventors.②Itisdifficulttoemphasizejusthowimportanttheroleofeducationis.③Thereisnodoubtthatcountrieswithundevelopededucationwillremainpoor.

FrameworkoftheStructureof3FrameworkoftheStructureoftheAboveEssay2.BodyTS:Educationisalsovitaltothedevelopmentofanindividual.DS:①Ofallelementsofsuccessinourcareersnoneismoreimportantthaneducation.②Itisnotgeniusbuttheknowledgethatmakesthedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.③Infactmostofthefamouspeopleofourtimesspentmanyyearsstudying.④Canyounameanygreatmenyouadmirewhoarenotwelleducated?FrameworkoftheStructureof4FrameworkoftheStructureoftheAboveEssay3.ConclusionTS:Somepeople,however,arestillignorantoftheimportanceofeducation.DS:①Someparents,especiallythoseinthecountryside,thinkitunnecessarytosendtheirchildrentoschool.②Someparentshavetheirchildrenworkformoneyataveryyoungage.③Inviewofthis,compulsoryeducationmustbeenforcedtoseetoitthateveryyoungpeoplewillbehavethechancetoreceiveadequateeducation.FrameworkoftheStructureof5DevelopingParagraphsI.ConceptAparagraphisagroupofrelatedsentencesdevelopingonecentralidea,orexpressingoneunitofthought.II.Fundamentalfeatures1.UnityUnitymeansoneness,thecombinationofallelementstoformasingleunit.Inawell-organizedorunifiedparagraphthereisacentraltheme,andeverysentencecontributestotheexplanationofthistheme.Thethemeofaparagraphisoftensummarizedinonesentencecalledthetopicsentence.Thisusuallyappearsatthebeginning,butmayalsobefoundinthemiddleorattheendofaparagraph.Sometimesthereisnotopicsentenceinaparagraph,butitisunifiedandhasasinglefocus.2.CoherenceCoherencereferstoconnectionandorganization.Acoherentparagraphisoneinwhichthesentencesarearrangedinaclearlogicalorder,andthetransitionsaresmoothandnatural.Asaresult,thereadersfinditeasytofollowthewriter’strainofthoughtandunderstandwhatheistalkingabout.DevelopingParagraphsI.Conce6DevelopingParagraphs3.TransitionCoherenceisachievedmainlybythelogicalsequenceofideas.Sometimesitisnecessarytousepropertransitions:parallelconstructionsrepetitionofwordsorphrasestherestatementofanideaindifferentwordspronounsthatrefertonouninproceedingsentences.Transitionalwordsandphrases,likefurther,finally,nevertheless,similarly,consequently,ontheotherhand,etc.maybeusedtomaketheconnectionclear.Butthesewordsarenotbeusedtoooften,fortheymaymakeapassagesoundunnatural.4.LengthHowlongaparagraphshouldbedependsonitstopicanditspositionintheessay.Thetopicofaparagraphshouldbeadequatelydevelopedbydetails,explanationsetc,sothatthereadermayhaveaclearideaofwhatthewriterintendstosay.Inotherwords,aparagraphshouldgivethereaderafeelingofcompleteness.Aparagraphthatpresentsoneofthemainfactsorideasofanessaymaybequitelong,whileonethatservesasabeginning,atransition,oraconclusionmaybemuchshorter.DevelopingParagraphs3.Transi71.Forthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofabout120-150wordsonthefollowingtopic.

TheImportanceofConfidence1.Forthispart,youaretow8TheImportanceofConfidence

Whateveronedoes,oneshoulddoitwithconfidence.Ifonehadnoconfidence,thereislittlepossibilitythatonewouldeverachieveanything,especiallywhenoneisfacedwithdrawbacksorhardships.Thistruthseemstobeself-evident.However,inrealitywedoseealotofpeoplewhocomplainthattheylacktheabilitytodosomethingorthattheirdifficultiesaretoogreattoovercome.Forsomethings,thismightbetrue.Butformanyotherthings,thisonlyshowsthattheyhavelostheart.TheImportanceofConfidence

W9Whydopeopleoftenfeelfrustratedeventhoughtheyarecapableofdoingsomething?Thereare,amongothers,twomainreasons.First,thesepeopledonothaveacorrectevaluationofthemselves.Second,theyoverestimatethedifficulties.Itisposssibletobuildupfaithinoneselfbyhavingtherightattitudetowardone’sownabilities.Weshouldneverunderestimateourabilitiesbutshouldbelieveintheproverb:“Whereisawill,thereisaway.”Confidenceisthepremiseforfulfillingatasksuccessfully.Whydopeopleoftenfeelfrust10ComposingEssaysⅠ.Threemainpartsofacomposition

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3.theendComposingEssaysⅠ.Threemainp11HOwtoWritetheBeginningofanEssay文章開頭一般來說應盡量做到開門見山，用簡單明白的敘述引出文章的話題，使讀者了解文章要談論什么，一下子引起讀者的興趣。作文常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種：1．開門見山，揭示主題文章一開頭就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。下面是題為“Honesty”（談誠實）一文的開頭：Honestyisoneofthebestvirtues．Anhonestmanisalwaystrustedandrespected．Onthecontrary,onewhotellsliesisregardedasa"liar",andislookeddownuponbyhonestpeople．HOwtoWritetheBeginningof12HOwtoWritetheBeginningofanEssay2．概括性的開頭即對要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個概括性的介紹。如“TheHappinessofReadingBooks”（讀書的快樂）的開頭：Peopleoftensaythatgoldandsilverarethemostvaluablethingsintheworld.ButIsaythattoreadbooksismorevaluablethananythingelse,becausebooksgiveusknowledgeandknowledgegivesuspower.3．交待寫作目的的開頭在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的，如文章要表揚誰、批評誰或說明一個什么問題等。如“PollutionControl”（控制污染）的開頭：InthisarticleIshalldrawyourattentiontothesubjectofpollutioncontrol.HOwtoWritetheBeginningof13HOwtoWritetheBeginningofanEssay4.定義式開頭（第129頁）5.引文式開頭（第126頁）HOwtoWritetheBeginningof14開頭常用句式Recently，theproblemof…h(huán)asarousedpeople’sconcern.最近，…問題已引起人們的關注。Internethasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Ithasbroughtalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.互聯(lián)網已在我們的生活中扮演著越來越重要的角色。它給我們帶來了許多好處，但也產生了一些嚴重的問題。Nowadays，(overpopulation)hasbecomeaproblemwehavetoface.如今，(人口過剩)已成為我們不得不面對的問題了。Itiscommonlybelievedthat…/Itisacommonbeliefthat…人們一般認為…Manypeopleinsistthat…很多人堅持認為…Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology，moreandmorepeoplebelievethat…隨著科技的發(fā)展，越來越多的人認為…Alotofpeopleseemtothinkthat…很多人似乎認為…開頭常用句式Recently，theproblemof15常用句式結尾Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration，wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat…把所有這些因素加以考慮，我們自然會得出結論…Takingintoaccountallthesefactors，wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…考慮所有這些因素，我們可能會得出合理的結論…Hence/Therefore，we’dbettercometotheconclusionthat…因此，我們最好得出這樣的結論…Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫無疑問，跳槽有優(yōu)點也有缺點。Allinall，wecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.常用句式結尾16HOwtoWritetheClosingofanEssay1．重復中心思想。回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，達到再次肯定和強調的效果。

(例1)Asenseofhumorisreallyoneofthekeystohappiness.Itgiveszesttolifetomakeitworthliving.

(例2)Withallthesebenefits,itisnowonderthatsportsandgameshavenowbecomemorepopularwithpeoplethanever.HOwtoWritetheClosingofan17

2．作出結論。文章最后用幾句話概括全文內容，并進一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的觀點。

(例1)Inconclusion,agoodteacher-studentrelationshipcanbemutualbeneficial.Thestudentsgainknowledgeeagerlyandenjoyably,andtheteachergainssatisfactionfromhisjob.

(例2)OnthewholetherearemoreadvantagesthandisadvantagesintheuseofTV.YetdifferentpeoplemayhavedifferentattitudetowardTV.Butwemustrealizethattelevisioninitselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itsvaluetopeopleandsocietydependsonhowwelookatit.

2．作出結論。183．應用引語:用格言、諺語或習語總結全文，既言簡意賅又有更強的說服力。

(例1)Ifyouhaveanythingtodo,trytodoityourself,forthatisthesafestwayto

permanentsuccess.Rememberthefamoussaying."Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves."

(例2)Ifwesticktostudiesdayafterday,thereisnothingthatcan'tbeachieved.Asanoldsayinggoes:"Constantdroppingofwaterwearsawayastone."3．應用引語:用格言、諺語或習語總結全文，既言簡意賅又有更194．用反問結尾:雖然形式是問句，但意義卻是肯定的，具有明顯的強調作用，引起讀者思考。

(例1)Therefore,listeningskillsmustbeconsciouslyimproved.Sinceitissuchanimportantmeansoflearningandcommunication,whyshouldwenotdevelopthisabilityasfaraspossible?

(例2)So，whatcanwebenefitfromwealthifwedonothavehealth?5．提出展望或期望:表示對將來的展望或期待讀者投入行動。

(例1)IamsurethatChinesewillbecomeoneofthemostimportantlanguagesintheworldinthenextcentury.AsChinawillopenfurthertotheoutsideworldthelanguageissuretobespreadworldwidely.

(例2)Ifeveryonehasdevelopedgoodmanners,peoplewillformamoreharmoniousrelation.Ifeveryonebehavesconsideratelytowardsothersandsocialethicspeoplewillliveinabetterworld.Withthegeneralmoodofsocietyimproved,therewillbeaprogressofcivilization.4．用反問結尾:雖然形式是問句，但意義卻是肯定的，具有明顯20TheimportanceofhavingagoodCV2.CompositionWriting

Direction:Forthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofabout80wordsonthefollowingtopic.Theimportanceofhavingagoo21Well,inmyopinion,youcanneverunder-estimatetheimportanceofhavingagoodCV.Inthemajorityofcases,yourCVistheemployer’sfirstimpressionofyou,yourfirstchancetoimpressyourpotentialemployer,let’ssay.Itistheessentialillustrationofyoursuitabilityforthejob,showinghowyourskillsandexperiencematchyouremployer’srequirements.Butmorethanthat,itshowsyourabilitytosummarize,prioritize(按重要性排列)andpresentinformationeffectively,essentialskillsintoday’sjobmarket.Italsoshowsyourlinguisticandcommunicativeabilities.Eventhoughemployersuseavarietyofselectiontechniquesthesedays,suchasanalyzingyourhandwriting,agoodCVisstillthesinglemostimportantpartofanyapplication.Well,inmyopinion,youcann22Theimportanceofethics(道德規(guī)范

)intoday’sbusinessworld3.CompositionWriting

Direction:Forthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofabout90wordsonthefollowingtopic.Theimportance3.Composition23Well,today’sglobalizationisallowingcompaniestosourcefromevergreaterdistances.Thisenablesacompanytoexploittheeconomicadvantagesoflowlaborcostsinonecountryandhighmarketvalueinanother.Ofcourse,theyhavetobecarefulnottobeseentobeexploitingtheworkers.Consumersarebecomingevermoresensitivetotheexploitationstoriesandindeedenvironmentalissues.ThisisbecauseasconsumersbecomericherandbecomeusedtospendingmoreonaWell,today’sglobalizationis24product,theyalsofeelthattheyshouldbespendingethically.Thisisbackedupbymediastoriesandpressitems,andexploitationstoriesreceiveverygoodpress.Andofcourse,theycancausegreatdamage.Thebiggerthebrand,thehighertheriskofaPRdisaster.AlsocompaniesarenowhavingtoworryaboutPRamongtheirownemployees.Afterall,recentstoriesaboutfatcat(闊佬，大亨)executivesalariescaneasilyaffectmorale(士氣)andthusworkers’productivity.product,theyalsofeelthatt254.SampleComposition

TheImportanceofAwardsAprizeoraward,whetheritistheNobelPrize,theAcademyAward,orBestHandwritingPrize,isimportant.Suchprizescanhaveeconomic,personal,andsocialeffectsthatenrichthelifeoftherecipient.

Firstly,prizesliketheNobelPrizecanbeacashaward.Butevenforprizesthatdon'tgivemoneyliketheAcademyAwardcanbeprofitable.AnactresswhowinsBestActresswillbeofferedmorerolesandahigherpaythanactresseswhodon'twintheaward.Evenfortheelementarystudentwhoreceivedtheschool'sBestHandwritingawardmaygetacongratulationsgift.

Secondly,thepersonalbenefitsofreceivinganyawardareevident.Anyawardwinnerispleasedthatheorshehasbeenrecognizedforhisorherwork.WhenpeoplereceivetheAcademyAward,theyoftencrytheyaresohappy.Finally,everyonelikestobewithawinner.Apersonwhogetsaprizeoftenhasmanynew,bestfriends.Awinner'ssociallifeismuchbetterthanaloser'ssociallife.

Awardsserveaveryusefulpurposeinthattheireconomic,personal,andsocialbenefitsaddtotherecognitionthatitismoregoodthanbad.4.SampleComposition

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TheImportanceofPhysicalExercise

Everyonehopestolivehappilyintheworld.Physicalexerciseisindispensabletoahappylife.Thereisafamoussaying:"Lifeliesonexercise."Althoughyouwillnotnecessarilydiewithoutregularphysicalexercises,they'IIcertainlyhelpyoulivelongerandmorehealthily.Exerciseisgoodforustobuildourbodies.Ithelpsco-ordinatethedifferentpartsofourbodieswhenwehavesports.Forexample,wemusttryourbesttoco-ordinatethemovementsofthearmsandlegswhenweplaybasketball,orwewon'tbeabletoshootthebasket.Exercisealsobenefitsourorgans.Itletstheheartbeatfasterthanusual,andthenhelpsenlargethebloodvesselstoprotectusfromheartattacks.Exercisecanalsocontributetothedevelopmentofourabilitytoresponseagilely.Forinstance,whenyouplaytable-tennis,youmusttrytoreflectasquicklyasyoucansothatyoumayfightbackattherightpositionatthefightmoment.4.SampleComposition

TheImpo27Exercisecanalsocontributetoimprovingourmood.Whenyoudoexercise,youmovealot,andyouhavetobemoreactive.Ithelpsyoubecomemoreoptimistic.Exercisewillfillyourlifewithvariouscontentsandmakeitmorecolorful.What'smore,exercisewillhelpyougetridofyourinertia.Ifyoukeepdoingexerciseregularly,youwillneverbealazyperson.Therefore,exercisehasgreateffectonone'scharacter.Inaword,exerciseishelpful,importantandabsolutelynecessary.Exercisecanalsocontributet28Literatureisacknowledgedasthemostpreciousproductofhumancivilizationandwisdom,especiallybyourteachers.Sotheyalwaysasktheirstudentstoreadasmanyliteraryworksaspossible.4.SampleComposition

TheImportanceofReadingLiteratureLiteratureisacknowledgedas29Itisofgreatsignificanceforustoappreciateliteratureduetothefollowingreasons.Firstly,agoodliteraturecangetyoutoknowalifeexperiencethroughtheeyesofsomeoneotherthanyourself.Themoreexperienceyougain,themoreknowledgeableyouare.Secondly,agoodliteratureallowsyoutolearnabouthistoryinapersonalizedway.Thestoriestoldintheworkscanactasmirrorsandhelpyouadjustyourownbehaviors.Lastly,agoodliteratureisaneffectivewayforrelaxation.Thebeautifulandmovingscenesshownintheliteraturearehelpfulforone’smentalhealth.Inshort,literatureisindispensableinourlife.We,students,shouldcatchourtimetoreadmoreliteratures.Itisofgreatsignificancefo304.SampleComposition

TheImportanceofReading

Itiswidelyacknowledgedthatbookswhichpresentthepreciousaccumulationofwisdomandknowledgebeyondthelimitationofspaceoftimeareoneofthefewthingsmencherishdeeply.Readingbooksplaysanimportantpartinthecharacterdevelopmentandpersonalgrowth.Firstofall,readingcanbroadenoureyes.Asweallknow,booksrevealtoamysteriouswonderlandinwhichwewillobtainvariousexperiencewewouldneverdreamofconfrontinginthereallifesuchastravelingaroundtheglobe,interactingwithotherpeople’slife.Welearntolookbeyondourimmediatesurroundingstothehorizonandalandscapefarawayfromhome.4.SampleComposition

TheImpo31Secondly,readingmakesitpossibleforustobeknowledgeable.Chinahasaproverb,knowledgemakesagentleman.Wearestimulatedtouseourbraintoseekoutmanymysticalthingswhilereading.Reflectingontheotherliveswewillmeetoncewebegintoreadhasadeepinfluenceontheformationofcorrectoutlookonlife,value,worldview.Inthemeanwhile,readingprovidesuswiththesuitablewaytocatchotherknowledgeanddealwithproblems.However,moreandmorepeoplebecomesickofreadingwhoalwaysneglecttheimportanceofreading.Wecan’tdenythatreadinghelpsuswithstandstressesandstrains,cleanupthemisconceptions.Secondly,readingmakesitpos324.SampleComposition

TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMoodWiththedevelopmentofmodernscience,technologyandeconomics,ourlivingstandardhasreachedaneverhigherlevel.Butmoreandmorepeoplearelivingundergreaterpressurethaneverbefore.Asaconsequence,peopleareincreasinglysufferingfromvariousdistortions(扭曲)bothphysicallyandmentally.Tohelpout(幫助解決困難),itisimportantthateveryonekeepagoodmoodtoday.

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TheImpo33Thereareseveralreasonsformyargument.First,agoodmoodcancreatehighefficiency.Whenyouworkwithagoodmood,youwillfeelhappyandbewillingtodosomeworkwhichusedtobeboring.Onthecontrary,abadmoodcanmakeyoupassiveanddothingswithreluctance.Second,agoodmoodisbeneficialtoyourhealth.Ifyouf