建議信 全國獲獎

HowtowritealetterofsuggestionByCherryContents12345WritingpracticePresentation&FeedbackSummary&HomeworkLeadinginDiscussion&ExplanationPart11LeadinginWhatkindofletteryouwillwriteifyourfriendsaskforsuggestion?Howtowriteit?文體概述

建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法、主張，解決有關問題。建議信不是投訴信，觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌當先。同時，建議信要簡潔明確、理由充足，具有合理性和說服力。通常包括：1.說明寫信目的;2.提出建議與改進措施并解釋原因;3.表達希望采納建議并表達祝愿。Part22Discussion&ExplanationHowtowritealetterofsuggestion?DiscusswithyourpartnersaboutthefollowingpointsAletterofsuggestionStructure,Sentencepatterns,linkingwordsWhatHowStructurePara1開門見山交代寫信目的Para2提出建議并解釋原因Para3美好祝愿誠摯邀請Beginning&Ending

writingpurpose

Havingknownthatyouare…,I…

Iwouldappreciateif...

Iwishyousuccessin..

Tostartwith;What'smore;Lastbutnotleast;Greeting:Dear...Signature:YoursLiHuaSentencepatternspara1

1.Icannotbetoogladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon…2.Iamwritingwiththepurposeofexpressingmyviewsconcerning…3.HavingKnownthatyouhavetroublein…,I’dliketogivesomesuggestionswithregardtoit.4.Youhaveaskedmeforsomeadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrymybesttomakesomeconductivesuggestions.5.Havingknownthatyouhaveakeeninterestin...,IammorethandelightedandIwouldliketotellyousomethingwithregardtoit.開門見山交代寫信目的Sentencepatternspara2Howtogivesuggestionsincompletesentences?1.It’sofgreatimportanceto…2.Itwouldbeagoodideato…3.Iwouldliketosuggestthat…4.AsfarasIamconcerneditwillbemorebeneficialifyoucan…5.IfIwereyou,Iwould…6.Youmayconsiderdoing…7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactionS.8.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Ithinkyouhadbetter…9.Itisalsonecessary/importantforyoutodo...10.Whatismostimportantisthat…提出建議并解釋原因Sentencepatternspara31.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.3.I'msureifyoutakemyadvice,youwill…4.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeyourimprovementsinthisregard.5.Intheend,Iwillbegladifmysuggestionsmeetwithyourapproval.美好祝愿(誠摯邀請)Linkingwords01

表達建議順序First,/Firstly,/Secondly,Tobeginwith,/what'smore,/LastbutnotleastInthefirstplace,/Secondofall,/Mostimportantly/Furthermore02表達觀點Ithink,/inmyopinion,/frommypointofview/AsfarasIamconcerned,/Personallyspeaking,Isronglybelieve,/inmyview,/asto(for)me,/AsfarasIcantell寫作模板Dear...:

開頭：HavingKnownthatyouhavetroublein…,I’dliketogivesomeconductivesuggestionswithregardtoitasfollows.Frommypointofview,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.Tobeginwith,Iwouldliketosuggestthat______________________.What'smore,it’sofgreatimportanceto_______________________________.Lastbutnotleast,itwillbemorebeneficialifyoucan______________________________.結尾：IwouldappreciateitifyouwillfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwillbemorethanhappytoseeyourimprovementsinthisregard.Yours,LiHuaPart33Writingpractice課堂練習假如你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的美國朋友Jim對于漢語產生了興趣，來信向你咨詢。請給Jim寫封回信，內容包括：內容涵蓋：1.學習漢語的好處

2.提出學習漢語的建議3.預祝學習成功，并邀請來北京玩Writeyourcompositionin15minuteswritingpracticeApossibleversionDearJim,

Havingknownthat

youhaveakeeninterestinlearningChinese,IammorethandelightedandIwouldliketotellyousomethingwithregardtoit.HereIwouldliketogiveyousomeconductivesuggestions.

Tostartwith,itwillbeofgreathelpifyoucantakesomeChinesecourses,whichcanensureyouanadequateamountofinputinChinese.What'smore,youcanmakesomeChinesefriends.BeingabletocommunicatewithnativeChinesefrequentlyishowyouimproveyourspokenChinese.Lastbutnotleast,youcansetachievabletargets,suchaslisteningtoChinesesongsandreadingChinesenewspapersormagazinestogetgreatercomprehension.

IwouldappreciateifmysuggestionsmeetwithyouapprovalandIwishyousuccessinChineselearningandhopeyoucancometoBeijingsoon.Iamwillingtobeyourguide.Yours,LiHuaPart44Presentation&FeedbackWhatarerequirementsofagoodwritingcompostion?內容完整性，涉及題目要求所有要點，80-120詞內容三段式：beginning，mainbody，ending結構語言使用準確得體，句式多樣化，語法錯誤少語言使用恰當的銜接詞，條理清晰，有邏輯行文邏輯字母勻稱、大小適宜、連筆規(guī)范、間距合理、標點正確、修改無痕卷面Presentation&FeedbackShowtimeHaveasummary:writingstructurePara1開門見山交代寫信目的Para2提出建議并解釋原因Para3美好祝愿誠摯邀請Beginning&Ending

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Havingknownthatyouare…,I…

Iwouldappreciateif...

Iwishyousuccessin..

Tostartwith;What'smore;Lastbutnotleast;Greeting:Dear...Signature:YoursLiHuaHomework

假如你是李華，你的的朋友王偉已經在美國留學三年，現在正面臨著畢業(yè)后是留在美國還是回到中國的問題。請你用英語給他寫一封信，給出你的建議并寫清原因。要求：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearWangWei,IhearyouarehesitatingwhetheryouwillstayinAmericaorgobacktoChinaaftergraduation.SoI’dliketogiveyousomeadviceasfollows.Isuggestyoucomebackhomeaftergraduation.Tobeginwith,itisnoteasytomakealifeintheUS,especiallyforagraduate,andyoushouldworkhardtoliveonwellinabigdevelopedcountry.W