Unit+4+Why+dont+you+talk+to+your+parents+寫作微策略與指導 人教版英語八年級下冊+

OREO寫作原則介紹Recently,ParentsMagazine

interviewedCathyTaylor

andotherMoms.They

sharedtheiropinionsabout

after-schoolclasses.Herearethetop3opinions.01"

After-schoolclassescanhelpkidsgetinto

agooduniversity.”02

"Iwantmychildtobeasuccessful

person.”

03"It'sgoodforchildrentostartlearning

fromayoungage.”Whatdoyouthinkofthese

opinions?Agreeordisagree.

Why?Today,let'stry

a

very

effective

waytoshow

ouropinions:

OREO

writingmethod(奧利奧寫作法)Opinion-Tellyourreaders

howyoufeelaboutsomething.（告訴你的讀者你對某事的感受）Reason-Tellyourreaderswhy

youfeelthatway.

（告訴你的讀者你為什么這樣想。）Examples-Giveyourreaders

examplesofwhyyoufeelthat

way.（給你的讀者舉例說明你為什么有這種感覺。）

Opinion-Tellyourreadersone

moretimeaboutyouropinionand

yourfeeling.（再一次告訴你的讀者你的觀點和感受）Whatistheboy'sproblem?Hisproblemisthathecan'tgetonwithhisfamily.Relationsbetweenhisparentshavebecomedifficult.2.Hiselderbrotherisnotnicetohim.Brainstorm如果你贊同：Agree:O（觀點）:Kidsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassestocompeteandwin.R（理由）:After-schoolclassescanhelpstudentsimprovetheirgradesanddobetterinstudysothattheycanbemorecompetitive.E（例子）:Ourneighbor'ssongotbadgradesatfirstinmiddleschool.Hisparentsthensenthimtoafter-schoolclassestolearnexamskills.Finally,hegotintoagoodhighschoolanduniversity.O（觀點）:Soafter-schoolclassescanhelpkidsbemoresuccessfulinstudy.如果你不贊同：Disagree:O（觀點）:Toomanyafter-schoolclassesarenotgoodforkids'development.R（理由）:Toomanyafter-schoolclassescouldmakestudentsstressedout.E（例子）:Theydon'thavetheirowntimetorelaxsuchaslisteningtomusicorwatchingamovie.Theydon'thavetimetothinkforthemselves,either.O（觀點）:After-schoolclassesisnotgoodforkids'mentalandphysicalhealth.Brainstormmorereasons，你還能想到更多贊同或反對的理由嗎？Agree01learnexamskills02getintoagoodhighschool03getintoagooduniversity04developthehobbies05makemorenewfriends06begoodforfutureDisagree01toomuchpressure02causealotofstress04notgoodforkid’shealth05shouldspendmoretimeonexercise

擴寫

怎樣才能使語言更豐富呢？我們可以使用擴句技巧。那怎樣巧妙擴句呢？1.Parentsshouldletkidsbekids.擴寫:說明原因。Parentsshouldletkidsbekidstoletthemhaveahappychildhood.Afterall,theyhavetocompetewhentheygrowolder.2.Parentscareaboutusmostintheworld.擴寫:描寫人物多用定從Parentsaretheoneswhocareaboutusmostintheworld.3.Manystudentsdon'thavetimetorelax.擴寫:舉例子Manystudentsdon'thavetimetorelax,suchaslisteningtomusicorwatchingamovie.Theydon'thavetimetothinkforthemselves,either.4.After-schoolclassesmakekidsmore

competitive

instudy.擴寫:說結果After-schoolclassesmakekidsmore

morecompetitive

in

studysothattheycanwininimportant

examsandgetintoagooduniversity.寫作要求Writealettertothemagazinetoexpressyouropinionsonafter-schoolclassesforchildren.結構開頭、主體和結尾要清楚。內(nèi)容包括三個主要內(nèi)容:主題句、支撐句、結論句。語言運用豐富的表達，打動讀者。書寫書寫要優(yōu)美整齊。

范文賞析

DearSir:

Inmyopinion,it'snecessaryforustotakeafter-schoolclasses,

becausetheseclassesaregoodforourdevelopment.Inthefirstplace,after-schoolclassesaregoodforthechildren'sfuture.Theycanhelpchildrengetintogoodschoolsanduniversities.What'smore,someclasseshelpchildrenlearnimportantskillsnottaughtatschool.Theseskillsmayactuallyhelpchildrenrelax,suchasplayingsportsorplayingamusicalinstrument.Lastbutnotleast,peoplelearnbetteratayoungerage.Childrenhavemoretimethanadults,sotheyshouldlearnasmuchastheycanbeforetheygettoobusytolearnnewthings.

Inaword,ifchildrenaregladtohavetheseafter-schoolclasses,theywillgetalotfromthem.Yourstruly,Linda這篇文章采用了奧利奧的寫作方法：觀點-理由-例子-觀點，結構清楚，內(nèi)容全面。運用了豐富的表達方式，能夠打動讀者。且使用了合適的連接詞，行文流暢。下水文1：DearSir/Madam,Iagreethatchildrenshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesbecauseit'simportantfortheirfuture.Ihaveseveralreasonsforthis.Firstly,someclasseshelpchildrentolearnimportantskillsnottaughtatschool.Theseskillsmayhelpchildrenrelax.Secondly,Ibelieveitisbetterifparentstrytoreallyunderstandtheirchildren'sinterestsandabilitiesfirstsothattheywillmaketheirchildrentakeclassestheyneed.Perhapsparentscouldletchildrendecideforthemselves.fchildrenareallowedtotaketheclassestheychooseforthemselves,theywillbesuccessfulandhappy.Yourstruly,Linda下水文2：DearSir/MadamIdon'tagreewiththeideaofsendingkidstoafter-schoolclasses.Becausealltheseactivitiescancausealotofstressforchildren.It'snotgoodforachild'sdevelopment.Ithinkit'sbetterthatparentsshouldn'tcomparetheirchildrenwithotherchildren.It'scrazyandunfair.Perhapsparentsshouldlettheirkidsbe