上海中考英語作文專題指導(dǎo)

上海中考英語作文專題指導(dǎo)一、中考英語作文寫作模式——“四審四注意”寫作法“四審”：一審標(biāo)題文體格式。這樣可以為下面的寫作，如人稱、時態(tài)、內(nèi)容、格式等奠定基礎(chǔ)；二審人稱。如是以第一人稱I或we為主還是以第二人稱you或第三人稱she,he,it或they為主；三審時態(tài)。一般而言，寫作時文章應(yīng)多以現(xiàn)在時（包括一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時、現(xiàn)在完成時和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時）或過去時（一般宜用一般過去時和過去進(jìn)行時）為主，切忌時態(tài)混亂；四審內(nèi)容。如有提示，應(yīng)盡量按照所給提示來寫，不可偏題亂發(fā)揮，可將有關(guān)內(nèi)容提煉分解成幾句展開敘述，不可遺漏，這是很重要的一點(diǎn)，一般文章按who，when，where，what，how，why等要素展開?！八淖⒁狻保阂蛔⒁馊绻恼聸]有給出開頭結(jié)尾，一定要寫開頭結(jié)尾。當(dāng)然，開頭和結(jié)尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一兩句即可，結(jié)尾要點(diǎn)題，有所立意；二注意句式要富于變化，不能通篇只有一種句式或句式過于單調(diào)，否則即使無語言和內(nèi)容錯誤也難得高分，如可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用if,when,although等狀語從句，Ithink/Ihope/Ibelievethat等賓語從句，如用定語從句必須有絕對把握；三注意適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連接詞，如ononehand,ontheotherhand;what’smore;however等，這樣使文章更有層次、更富邏輯性，若語言和內(nèi)容沒問題,做到第二、三項“注意”就很有希望拿組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。四注意善于運(yùn)用有把握的詞匯和句型，盡量運(yùn)用課本所學(xué)詞句，堅決避免不正確的“中國式英語”，更不能亂“發(fā)明”,一般一篇文章能用8個左右的好短語或句式已很不錯。最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分,詞數(shù)不能太少也不能太多,筆者覺得,以80詞左右為宜。另外，書寫一定要認(rèn)真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。二、中考英語作文常見語言錯誤調(diào)查分析1.時態(tài)錯誤2.時間狀語錯誤3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤4.動詞誤用5.語態(tài)錯誤________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.關(guān)于計劃Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Myplanforsummerholiday”.（以“我的暑期計劃”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下內(nèi)容供參考)●Whatareyougoingtododuringthecomingsummerholiday?●Giveatleasttwopoints.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.關(guān)于朋友Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mygoodfriend”.（以“我的好朋友”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下內(nèi)容供參考)●Whoisyourgoodfriend?●Whatdoyouoftendowithhimorher?●Whydoyouregardhimorherasagoodfriend?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.關(guān)于寫人Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“MyEnglishteacher”.（以“我的英語老師”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下內(nèi)容供參考)●WhoisyourEnglishteacher?●Doyoulikehimorher?●Whydoyoulikehimorher?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.關(guān)于英語Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“IchangedmywaysoflearningEnglish”.（以“我改變了我學(xué)習(xí)英語的方式”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下內(nèi)容供參考)●HowdidyoulearnEnglishinthepast?●WhydoyouchangeyourwaysoflearningEnglish?●HowdoyoulearnEnglishnow?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.關(guān)于旅行Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Anunforgettabletrip”.(以“一次難忘的旅行”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下內(nèi)容供參考)●Wheredidyougo?●Whatdidyoudoduringthattrip?●Whydoyouthinkitisunforgettable?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.關(guān)于動物Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Myfavouriteanimal”.（以“我最喜歡的動物”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下內(nèi)容供參考)●What’syourfavouriteanimal?●Whydoyoulikeitsomuch?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10.關(guān)于網(wǎng)上購物Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Onlineshoppingischangingthewayofourlife”.（以“網(wǎng)上購物正在改變我們的生活方式”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下內(nèi)容供參考)●What’syourviewononlineshopping?●Whatareitsadvantagesanddis-advantages?●Pleasegiveoneortwosuggestionstoyourfriendsiftheyloveonlineshopping.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11.關(guān)于學(xué)科Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Myfavouritesubject”.（以“我最喜歡的學(xué)科”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下內(nèi)容供參考)●What’syourfavouritesubject?●Whydoyoulikeitbest?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12.關(guān)于變化Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Changesinmyself”.（以“我的變化”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下問題可供參考）●Haveyouhadanychangesinyourselfsinceyoucametothemiddleschool?●Whicharethemostimportantchanges?(Giveatleast2examples)●Whatdoyouthinkofthechanges?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13.關(guān)于節(jié)日Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“TheLanternFestival”.（以“元宵節(jié)”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下內(nèi)容供參考）●DoyouliketheLanternFestivalandwhydoyoulikeit?●WhatdopeopleusuallydoontheLanternFestival?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B.提示性作文每個人都有自己的夢想，努力堅持終能實現(xiàn)。請根據(jù)下圖及表格中所提供的信息寫一篇文章?！疽蟆?.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.介紹Tom，談?wù)勀愕膲粝氩⒆詳M兩點(diǎn)實現(xiàn)夢想的途徑；3.文章不少于90詞；4.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2015年中考英語總復(fù)習(xí)專項訓(xùn)練題（六）參考范文A.1.HowtolearnEnglishwellEnglishisveryimportantforus.Everyonewantstolearnitwell.Doyouknowhowtolearnitwell?Herearemyways:Firstly,Ilistentotheteacherandmakenotescarefullyinclass.Ireview/goovermyoldlessonsandpreparemynewlessonsafterclass.Secondly,IlikespeakingEnglishwithmyclassmates,notonlyinclassroom,butalsoontheplayground.It’simportanttoimprovemyspokenEnglish.Thirdly,IkeepadiaryeverydaytopractisemywrittenEnglish.Besides,IoftenreadEnglishnewspapersandmagazinesinordertoenrichmyknowledgeonEnglishculture.2.MyinterestIhaveawiderangeofinterestsandenjoydoingmanythingsinmyfreetime.Iamaloverofreading.Ioftenreadinmysparetime.Ireadmanykindsofbooksandnewspaper.Ilikethestoriesandnewsinthemverymuch.Therearealotofknowledgeandinterestingthingsaswell.Iamalsoamusiclover.Ilikeallkindsofmusic.Ioftenlistentothemusicprogrammesonradio.AlthoughIcan’tsingEnglishsongswell,Ilikethemalot.Ilikesportsaswell.Ioftenplaybadmintonafterclassesintheafternoon.Ioftenruninthemorning.WhenIamdoingsports,Iforgetallmytroubleandworry.Ofcourse,sportscanalsohelpmeinbuildingmybody.Inshort,Ienjoymylifehereinschool.Readingbooks,listeningtomusicanddoingsportsareveryhelpfultomyhealthandmystudies.3.UnforgettablememoriesHowtimeflies!Threeyearspassedinablink.Lotsofmemoriesleftinmyhead.Teachers,classmates,hardworkandaboveallfriendshipstayinmind.Lookingback,Ihavegonethrougheitherthejoyofsuccessorthepainsoffailure.Teachersarefriendlytousinlifeandalwaysstrictwithusinstudy.Classmatesandfriendshelpmesomuch.WiththeirhelpI’vemadegreatprogress.ButI’macarelessboy.AndIalwaysmakemistakeswhichcanbeavoided.Seniormiddleschoollifeisanewbeginninganditgivesmeachancetoovercomemyshortcomings.Asitissaid,“Itisnotourabilitiesthatshowwhatwetrulyare,itisourchoice.”Thetwo-monthholidaywillalsoprovidemethefreedomtothinkoverandmakeupmymindtodoitbetterinthefuture.AndIbelieveIcandoit.4.MyplanforsummerholidayThesummerholidayiscoming.Wewillhaveplentyoftimetoenjoyourselves.ButIthinkweshouldplanthetimecarefully.Wehadbettermakealistofallthethingswewishtodoandtryhardtokeepabalancebetweenworkandplay.Intheholidaywecandomanyactivities.Forexample,wecanplaywithfriends.Wecandodifferentsports.Itisalsomeaningfulforustoworkasvolunteers.Besides,wecandosomereading.Itcanhelpgetuspreparedforthenewterm.Ihopeallofuswillhaveawonderfulholiday.5.MygoodfriendIhaveagoodfriend.HernameisSusan.Sheis14yearsold.She’sfromAmerica.She’satallgirlwithblueeyesandshehaslonggoldenhair.Shelikesdoingsports,especiallyswimmingandrunning.Sheenjoysreadingbooksandlisteningtomusic.What’smore,sheisveryinterestedinChinesehistoryandculture.SosheoftenreadsbooksaboutChina.She’slovelyandfriendly.Shegetsonwellwithherfriends.She’salsohelpful.SheoftenhelpsmelearnEnglish.Withherhelp,ImademuchprogressinEnglish.I’mluckytohavesuchagoodfriend.6.MyEnglishteacherOurEnglishTeacherMsHuang,cametoourschooltwoyearsago.ShehasbeenanEnglishteacherformorethan30years.Sheworkshardandhasbeenamodelteacherformanyyears.Sheiskindandfriendlytousafterclass,butsheisratherstrictwithusinclass.ShealwaysencouragesustospeakandreadmoreEnglish.Sheoftensays,“Practicemakesperfect.”Sheisgoodatteachingandtriesherbesttomakeeverylessonlivelyandinteresting.Sheoftengivesusslideshows,teachesusEnglishsongsandhelpsusputonshortEnglishplays.Sheisnotonlyourteacherbutalsoourfriend.Weallrespectandloveher.Tomorrowsheisgoingtoattendanimportantmeeting,atwhichshewillbegivenamedalforheradvanceddeeds.7.IchangedmywaysoflearningEnglishAsaninternationallanguage,Englishplaysagreatcharacterinourlife.Englishhasbecomemoreandmoreimportanttous.Therefore,IchangedmywayoflearningEnglishsothatIcanimprovemyEnglishability.Inthepast,Ididn’tlistentoEnglishnewsoften.SoIchangedit.IbegantolistentoEnglishsongs.AndIlistenedtothewordsofthesongcarefullyinordertolearnmorewords.EverytimewhenImetthewordswhichIdidn’tknow,Iwouldlookeditupinthedictionary.AndIalwaystriedtorememberitafterlookingitup.Afteramonth,IfoundthatIknewmorewordsthanmyclassmates.IusedtowriteasfewwordsasIcould.Nodoubt,Ichangedit.Withthehelpofmyfriendsandmyteacher,Itriedtowritemorearticles.Finally,Isucceeded.ItookupwritingasahobbyandIwillneverforgetit.I’mgladthatIchangedmywayoflearningEnglish.AndeverythingIchangedwillmakememoreandmoreinterestedinEnglish.8.AnunforgettabletripIwenttoChongqinginJuly22.Itisacitywhichwasbuiltnearmountains.SopeoplecallitMountainCity.InChongqing,IwenttotheRedStoneCentre,toseetheplaceswhichtheprisonerslivedinthepast.Itisaterribleandawfultrip.Therewerealotofdogs,andsoldierswithgunsneartheprisons.Andmostoftheprisonersweregoodmen.Theydidn’twanttotellthebadpeoplewheretheotherpeoplewere.Sotheywereputintotheprison.Theylivedinverysmallhouses.Nogoodfoodtoeat,nogoodwatertodrink.Theyhadonlytwentyminutestostayoutsideperdaybuttheystillsaidnothing.Ithinktheyaretheheroesinthatcentury.Iwillfollowtheirspirit.9.MyfavouriteanimalMyfavouriteanimalisdog.Ilikeitbecauseitcanhelppeopleinmanydifferentways.Many,manyyearsago,dogswerealreadypeople’spets.Theylivedincaveswithpeople.Dogswereverygoodhelpers.Theyguardedthecavesandkeptpeoplesafefromdanger.Nowadays,dogsarealsopeople’spets.Butsomepeopleareunkindtotheirdogs.Theydonotlookafterthemandleavetheminthestreet.Weshouldbekindtodogs.Theyareourfriends.Theycanhelpusdomanythings.Theyhelpthepolicecatchthievesandfindmissingpeople.Theyalsohelpblindpeoplecrosstheroadsafely.10.OnlineshoppingischangingthewayofourlifeAsweallknow,onlineshoppinghasbecomemoreandmorepopularamongpeopleespeciallytheyoungpeople.WecanbuynearlyeverythingontheInternet.Inmyview,onlineshoppinghasalreadychangedthewayofourlife.PeopletendtosurftheInternettobuywhattheyneed.Ithinktheadvantageofonlineshoppingisitsconvenience.Peopleonlysitinthesoftandclickthemouseathometobuywhattheywant.Itcansavepeoplealotoftimeandmoney.Thedisadvantageisthatonlineshoppingisnotalwayssafe.Sometimesyourprivateinformationwillbeletout.Soifyouloveonlineshopping,pleasebecarefulwithyourpersonalinformationandthewebsitesothatyoucanbenefitfromonlineshopping.11.MyfavouritesubjectEnglishismyfavouritesubjectbecauseEnglishisusedwidelyintheworld,especiallyinShanghai,acitywithsomanyforeigners.What’smore,IlikeitbecausemyEnglishteacheriskindandfriendlytome.InordertolearnEnglishwell,IreadEnglishaloudeverymorningandlistentotheteachercarefullyinclass.Afterclass,IoftenwatchEnglishprogrammesandkeepanE