初中生英語寫作能力培養(yǎng)

初中學(xué)生

英語寫作能力的培養(yǎng)

施志紅

2008.507年寫作無現(xiàn)成的范文可套ThingsIhatetodo

MostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.…三、了解評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

07作文分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)７＋７＋２(內(nèi)容＋語言＋組織結(jié)構(gòu))

組織結(jié)構(gòu)分

1.

內(nèi)容充實(shí)，不寫廢話；上下文連貫、用語規(guī)范、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、無或少見語法錯(cuò)誤；詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語者，可給2分.

組織結(jié)構(gòu)分2.

一般情況下，內(nèi)容和語言在13分以上者(含)，

方可得到1~2分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分.

組織結(jié)構(gòu)分3.

內(nèi)容和語言在12分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表達(dá)，可酌情考慮給1分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分.

組織結(jié)構(gòu)分

4.

通篇句型、句式單一，詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯(cuò)誤，一般亦不予給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。

07作文分析舉例

Ihatetokeeppetsandtelllies.ThethingthatIhatedoingmostissmoking.Asweallknow,smokingisnotonlybadforourselvesbutalsoharmfultoothers.Whenevermyfathersmokes,Ifeelrathersick.Besides,itisawasteofmoneytosmoke,Ithink.What’smore,smokingpollutestheair.SoIhatesmokingmost.（A擋）

07作文分析舉例

Suchasthehousework.AlthoughIsometimeshelpmymothertodosomehousework,Ireallyhateit.Idon’tlikewashdishes.Ithinkitisuncomfortablethatyoumustputyourhandsintothecoldwaterandthenwashthedirtydishes.Idon’tlikecleanmyroomaswell.Somyroomisalwaysveryuntidy.MymothertoldmethatIwasverylazy.Idon’tthinkso.ButIreallyhatedoinghousework.（B擋）(5+6+0)

07作文分析舉例

SuchasdoingmuchhomeworkandwatchingTV.Everyday,wemustdoalothomeworkanditmustspendalongtimetofinishit.Whenwefinishedit.Itwasalready11o’clockintheevening.SoIhatedoingmuchhomework.IlovedwatchingTVwhenIwasachild.IalwayswatchingTVforalongtime.Soitmakesmyeyesbad.That’swhyIhatewatchingTVnow.

(C檔)

(5+5+0)四、培養(yǎng)寫作能力

1.指出常見問題

句型單一

東拉西扯

時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

用詞不當(dāng)

2.提醒注意事項(xiàng)

圍繞中心

意思連貫

學(xué)會(huì)審題

注意文體

研究考試

3.避免指導(dǎo)缺失光給一個(gè)題目沒有任何鋪墊不考慮學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)基礎(chǔ)和生活實(shí)際

4.全面多方指導(dǎo)狠抓聽說訓(xùn)練

重視基礎(chǔ)落實(shí)

介紹寫作技巧

豐富訓(xùn)練方法

落實(shí)作文批改

小結(jié)一、明確教學(xué)目標(biāo)二、把握變化走向

三、了解評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)四、培養(yǎng)寫作能力

1.

指出常見問題2.

明確寫作要求3.

避免指導(dǎo)缺失4.

全面多方指導(dǎo)Thanksforlistening!1-1Mymotherisateacher.Sheis…Sheis…Sheis…Sheis…Ilikeherverymuch.Thisisourschool.Thereis…Thereis…Thereare…Thereare…Ilikeitverymuch.

1-2Mymotherisfortyyearsold,butshelooksyoung.Sheisadoctorandherhospitalisnotfarawayfromourhome,soshegoestoworkbybike.Sheworkshardandisalwayskindtoherpatients.Athomeshedoesalotofhouseworkandoftenhelpsmewithmylessons.IthinkmymotheristhebestmotherintheworldandIloveherverymuch.（73詞）1-3

OurschoolislocatedinthecentreofShanghaiItwasbuiltin1950.Nowthereareabout200teachersand2000studentsinourschool.Wehavealanguagelab,acomputerroomandabiglibraryinourschool.Wearegoingtobuildanewclassroombuildingnextyear.Ourschoolwillbecomebiggerandmorebeautifulinthefuture.（63詞）

2-1LastweekIgotanAinthetest.I’mveryhappyaboutitandI‘lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter.IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell.IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold.However,withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,I’vemadegreatprogress.ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup.

2-2

IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold.IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell.ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup.However,withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,I’vemadegreatprogress.LastweekIgotanAinthetest.I’mveryhappyaboutitandI‘lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter.

3-1

MrWangusedtosmokealot.Hefeelillandgotoseethedoctor.Thedoctortoldhimsmokingisbadforhishealth.MrWangisgoingtotakethedoctor’sadvice.Hedecidedtogiveupsmoking.Hiswifeanddaughterwereveryhappy.

4-1

Dogsaremen’sbestfriends.Dogscanhelpblindmen.Theycantakethemeverywhere.Theyareveryclever.Theycanalsohelpthepolicementocatchrobbers.Theycanhelppeopletobuynewspapers.Somedogscancalculate.Dogsareourbestfriends.Weshouldprotectthem.Weshouldtakecareofthem.Don’thurtourbestfriends!

4-2

Dogsaremen’sbestfriends.Theyalwaysgiveusalotofhelp.Inancienttime,theyhelpedmenhuntanimalsandkepttheircavessafe.Now,dogshelppolicementocatchrobbersandfindlostpeople.What’smore,somedogscanevenhelpblindmen.Theyshowthemthewayanddoalotofthingsforthem.Wecallthiskindofdogsguidedogs,andtheyareblindmen’seyes!Inaword,dogsarenotonlyourpets,butalsoourbestfriends!

5-1

Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Growingpainsandgains”.Thepicturesbelowareforyourreferenceonly.(以“成長(zhǎng)的煩惱與歡樂”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。以下圖片僅供參考。)（05中考）5-2112.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“IHaveaDream”.(以“我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）Sentencepatternsforreference（以下句型僅供參考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer…Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue,…（06中考）5-3Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“ThingsIHatetoDo”.

(以“我不喜歡……”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。段文開頭已給，所給部分不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。)Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(短文須包含下列要點(diǎn))Whatarethethingsthatyouhatetodo?Whatdoyouhatedoingmost?Why?(Giveatleasttworeasons.)

ThingsIHatetoDoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.…（07中考）6-1

短文對(duì)話信件

日記

7-1寫人物寫事件寫物件寫場(chǎng)所夾敘夾議7-203年：TobealovelyShanghainese

（做可愛的上海人）04年：Leavingschool（畢業(yè)時(shí)分）05年：Growingpainsandgains

（成長(zhǎng)的煩惱與快樂）06年：Ihaveadream（我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想）07年：ThingsIhatetodo

(我不喜歡……)8-1培養(yǎng)良好書寫習(xí)慣單詞形義常抓不懈介紹基本句子成分

理清五種基本句型Whowillwin?主語+不及物動(dòng)詞主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語主語+聯(lián)系動(dòng)詞+表語主語+及物動(dòng)詞+雙賓語主語+及物動(dòng)詞+復(fù)合賓語WestudyEnglish.Thegirllookspretty.Mumgivesmeapresent.Heaskedustogothere.8-2

簡(jiǎn)單句的五種基本句型9-1

學(xué)會(huì)使用過渡詞或連接詞鼓勵(lì)使用狀語從句、賓語從句

恰當(dāng)使用英語習(xí)語、諺語9-2表示并列

and,or,also,too,aswell表示轉(zhuǎn)折

but,however,yet,while,though,otherwise表示遞進(jìn)

what’smore,besides,inaddition表示讓步

though,although,evenif,whether,nowthat,whatever,whenever表示因果

because,becauseof,since,asaresultof,thanksto9-3表示條件

if,unless表示對(duì)稱

foronething…fortheotherthing,ononehand….ontheotherhand表示解釋

thatis,thatistosay,inanotherword,inotherwords表示舉例

forexample,suchas,like表示強(qiáng)調(diào)

Aboveall,indeed,really,especially,9-4表示空間

here,there,ononeside,…ontheotherside,