2015江蘇高考英語讀寫類作文講評

讀寫類書面表達(dá)講評讀寫任務(wù)型寫作分為兩局部：第一局部要求用約30個詞概括所給短文的要點(diǎn)，主要以記敘文,談?wù)撐?說明文為主。其次局部以約120個詞就短文某一主題談?wù)撟约旱慕?jīng)受并發(fā)表看法。此項旨在著重考察學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語的綜合力氣，特殊是閱讀寫作以及思維的力氣。第一局部要求學(xué)生能讀懂文章，在讀懂的根底上概括文章要點(diǎn)，所以閱讀力氣和概括力氣要求較高。寫作要求分析TechniqueGuides概括敘事性(narrative)文章主要內(nèi)容一般應(yīng)包括四個方面的內(nèi)容：1.什么人？(Who)2.發(fā)生什么事情？(Whathappened)3.目的如何/緣由是什么？(Why)4.結(jié)果如何/什么啟發(fā)或教訓(xùn)？(Consequence/Inspiration/Lesson)Youmaybeginlikethese:Thepassage/storyismainlyabout(talksabout)+astory/phenomenonwhere/that+從句2.Thewritertells/shows/statesusthat…3.Asisshowninthepassage,…4.Whatthepassagetells/shows/statesusisthat…故事性閱讀材料，應(yīng)當(dāng)用最簡練的語言來說明故事表達(dá)了什么，還可以表達(dá)該故事給你的啟發(fā)(inspiration)或其中的一個道理(principle)。Transitional

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