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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原題目：WhenIwasinmiddleschool,myfamilymovedtoSeatle,wheremyparentsstartedtheirnewbusinessasmallgrocerystoredownstairsmyhouse.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadtotakeafreshstarttofitintothesophisticatedcitylife.Onesunnyday,myschoolannouncedanexcitingevent,atalentshowforthelocalfoodbank.StudentswereencouragedtoshowcasetheiruniquetalentsinfrontofthepublicinthecityhallonNationalDay.Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheschoolaseveryonebeganpreparingforthebigday.Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesiretoparticipate.However,myselfdoubtheldmeback,“Idon'thaveanyspecialskillstoshare.”Daysturnedintoweeks,andthetalentshowdrewcloser.Icouldn'tshaketheupsettingfeelinguntilonedayEmma,oneofthemostpopulargirlsinmyclass,cametomewhileIwashelpinginthegrocerystoreafterclass.“Howaboutsingingtogetherinthetalentshow?”Shegrinned,“Iheardyousingingatune,alongthewaybackhome.Ican'thelpfollowingyouhere.Gosh,Icouldn'tbelievemyears.Emma,withpersonalityandpopularity,acknowledgedmylittletalent.SinceEmmahadtheworld'sprettiestvoice,Ifeltlikebeingfavouredbyfortune.“Youtwo?Thetalentshowforthefoodbank?”Mymumbenttowardsusandherfacelitup.“Abigoccasion.Thenalightbulbseemedtogoinherhead.“Whynotpractiserightnowupstairs?Ibetyou'llbeaperfectmatch.”Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwewerethinkingalike.EmmaandIembarkedonrehearsingalmosteverysingledayafterschool.Webrainstormed.exchangedideasandrehearsedthescene.Asthedaysrolledby,Iwasfeelingprettygoodaboutouract.Butthedaybeforetheperformance,Emmacalledthatshehadanacutestomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.Paragraph1:Iwaspletelyknockedoutbythenews.Paragraph2:Finallycamethebigmoment.【重難點(diǎn)詞匯解析】1.Abuzzofexcitement：buzz此處的意思是(愉快、興奮或成就的)強(qiáng)烈情感。這個(gè)短語(yǔ)描述了在學(xué)校中彌漫的一種興奮和期待的氛圍。在文章中，當(dāng)學(xué)校宣布了即將舉辦的才藝秀時(shí)，學(xué)生們興奮不已，蠢蠢欲動(dòng)，期待著參與這個(gè)令人激動(dòng)的活動(dòng)。這個(gè)短語(yǔ)突顯了學(xué)生們的熱情和期待，為文章中的情節(jié)增添了活力和緊張感。2.Asparkofcuriosityandadesire：spark此處的意思是(指品質(zhì)或感情)一星，絲毫，一丁點(diǎn)。這個(gè)表達(dá)形象地描述了主人公內(nèi)心的變化。在文章中，“我”一開(kāi)始對(duì)參加才藝秀感到懷疑和猶豫，但內(nèi)心深處卻有一絲好奇和渴望。這種好奇和渴望的火花象征著潛在才能和愿望，最終激發(fā)了勇敢參與的決心。3.Grinned：grin是一個(gè)動(dòng)詞，意味著咧嘴笑。我們這里主要補(bǔ)充各種“笑”的表達(dá)，chortlevi.咯咯笑；sniggervi.吃吃竊笑；暗笑；beamv.笑容滿面；smirkv.自鳴得意地笑；gigglev.咯咯地笑；cacklev.嘎嘎笑。在文章中，當(dāng)Emma提議和主人公一起參加才藝秀時(shí)，她露出了燦爛的笑容。這個(gè)詞語(yǔ)傳達(dá)了Emma的友好和開(kāi)朗，同時(shí)也表現(xiàn)出她的鼓勵(lì)和支持，使“我”感受到被接納和認(rèn)可。4.Thenalightbulbseemedtogoinherhead：lightbulb是燈泡的意思，這個(gè)表達(dá)形象地描述了主人公的母親突然有了靈感或者想法。在文章中，“我”的母親立刻意識(shí)到兩人的潛力，建議我們立即在樓上進(jìn)行排練?！厩楣?jié)梳理】主要人物：“我”：性格害羞、內(nèi)向；Emma：的同學(xué)，校園里受歡迎的女生，擁有美麗的聲音。視角：第一人稱(chēng)視角情節(jié)線:搬遷和自我懷疑：搬到西雅圖，“我”因性格內(nèi)向而在適應(yīng)新環(huán)境時(shí)感到困難，開(kāi)始懷疑自己是否有足夠的才華參加才藝秀。Emma的鼓勵(lì)：Emma鼓勵(lì)“我”參加才藝秀，并提議兩人一起表演。排練和期望：“我”和Emma開(kāi)始為才藝秀排練，在排練中充實(shí)了自己，期望在活動(dòng)中表現(xiàn)出色。意外挫折：才藝秀前一天，Emma因胃痛無(wú)法表演，使“我”面臨突如其來(lái)的挑戰(zhàn)。線索(協(xié)同點(diǎn))：內(nèi)向和自我懷疑：影響了是否參加才藝秀。Emma的鼓勵(lì)和支持：為“我”找到了勇氣，是“我”走出困境的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)。才藝秀的準(zhǔn)備過(guò)程和最后的意外事件：構(gòu)成了緊張的情節(jié)線索，增加了故事的戲劇性。主題：勇氣與自我發(fā)現(xiàn)。“我”在自我懷疑中發(fā)現(xiàn)了自己的潛力，通過(guò)勇敢面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)，學(xué)會(huì)了相信自己并克服內(nèi)心的不安。友誼和支持。Emma的鼓勵(lì)為“我”提供了支持和信心。【下水作文】Iwaspletelyknockedoutbythenews.

Emma’ssuddenillnessleftmeinastateofutterdisbelief.Panicsurgedthroughmelikeatidalwave,threateningtodrownmyconfidence.AsIenvisionedmyselfstandingaloneonthestage,facingtheseaofexpectantfaces,myheartpoundedagainstmychest.However,aglimmerofdeterminationsuddenlyflickeredwithinme,“Icouldn’tletEmmadown,ourshareddreamhanginginthebalance.”Withtremblinghands,IpickedupthephoneandcalledEmma,reassuringherthatIwouldgivetheperformancemyall,evenifitmeantsteppingintothespotlightsolo.Finallycamethebigmoment.

AsIstoodbackstage,thevibranthumofthecrowdechoedthroughthecurtains.Itookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmmyracingheart.ThestagelightsdazzledasIsteppedintothespotlight,feelingtheweightoftheaudience’santicipation.Thenmyfingerscaressedthemicrophone,myvoicetentativeatfirst.Yet,witheverynote,Ifoundmyconfidencesoaring.Themelodyresonatedthroughthehall,weavingaspellthatsilencedtheroom.EachwordIsangcarriedtheessenceofourshareddreams,andIcouldalmostfeelEmmabesideme,supportingmefromafar.Asthefinalchordsfaded,thunderousapplauseerupted.Inthatmoment,IrealizedIhadnotjustfoundmyvoice,butthestrengthtooveremyinsecurities.——詞句賞析’ssuddenillnessleftmeinastateofutterdisbelief.

…處于（某種狀態(tài)、某地等）；utter這里是作形容詞，完全的；徹底的。2.AsIenvisionedmyselfstandingaloneonthestage,facingtheseaofexpectantfaces,myheartpoundedagainstmychest.

當(dāng)我想象自己獨(dú)自站在舞臺(tái)上，面對(duì)著無(wú)數(shù)期待的面孔時(shí)，我的心砰砰直跳。envisionv.想象，和imagine/picture差不多。pound這里是心跳的一種表達(dá)，其他還有thump/flutter/hammer等。3.However,aglimmerofdeterminationsuddenlyflickeredwithinme,“Icouldn’tletEmmadown,ourshareddreamhanginginthebalance.”

然而，一絲決心突然在我心中閃爍，“我不能讓艾瑪失望，我們共同的夢(mèng)想懸而未決?！眊limmern.微弱的跡象；一絲，也可以表達(dá)一線希望aglimmerofhope；flickerv.(情緒、思想等)閃現(xiàn)；一閃而過(guò)。4.Themelodyresonatedthroughthehall,weavingaspellthatsilencedtheroom.

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