-2024屆高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)主題續(xù)寫(xiě)微情節(jié)：關(guān)愛(ài)動(dòng)物之悉心照顧課件

1主題續(xù)寫(xiě)微情節(jié)關(guān)愛(ài)動(dòng)物之悉心照顧常見(jiàn)情節(jié)初次接觸幫助陪伴溫馨結(jié)局相遇受困受傷救治幫助照顧共同生活依依惜別收獲感悟1.幾只碩大的鹿赫然佇立在他面前。2.黎明時(shí)分，我被窗外一只鳥(niǎo)的嘰嘰喳喳聲吵醒了。3.在圍欄里，她看到了那匹馬，毛柔軟油黑，有一只腳是白色的。初次接觸：相遇Infrontofhimstood

severallargedeer.Atdawn,thetwitteringofabirdjustoutsidemywindowwokemeup.Atthepen,shesawthehorsewithasoftblackcoatandonewhitefoot.4.那匹馬的眼睛里沒(méi)有了生命跡象。5.我們可以看出那只狗正遭受著酷熱的折磨。6.其中一匹馬掉了很多毛，尾巴也掉了大部分。7.很明顯那只躺在地上的熊寶寶正因?yàn)槿彼柺芗灏?。初次接觸：受困Therewasnosignoflife

inthehorse’seyes.Wecouldtellthedogwassufferingfromtheextremeheat.Oneofthehorses

hadlostmuchofhishair

whilemostofhistailwasmissing.Itwasclearthatababybearlyingonthegroundwassufferingfromalackofwater.8.那只鹿很快就喘不過(guò)氣來(lái)了。9.那頭小象內(nèi)心充滿(mǎn)了恐懼和痛苦。10.那只狗躺在地上，睜著眼睛，耳朵耷拉著。初次接觸：受傷Thedeerwasoutofbreathinaninstant.Thelittleelephant

wasfulloffearandpain.Thedoglayontheground,withhiseyesopenandearsflat.11.那只可憐的鳥(niǎo)兒傷了翅膀，努力想飛卻無(wú)濟(jì)于事。12.當(dāng)靠近湖中的鴨子時(shí)，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)它的脖子上纏著一條細(xì)鐵絲。Eventhough

itswingwas

hurt,thepoorbirdattemptedtofly,butinvain.Approachingtheduckinthelake,wefoundathinwirewrappedarounditsneck.初次接觸：受傷13.輕輕地，他纖細(xì)的手指將鉤子從小鳥(niǎo)身上拔出來(lái)。14.猴子得到了輸氧，受到了工作人員的精心照料。15.他把小鳥(niǎo)捧在手中，小心地用繃帶給它包扎傷口。幫助陪伴：救治Gently,hisslimfingersremovedthehookfromthebird’sflesh.Themonkeywasgivenoxygen,receivinggoodcarefromthestaff.Holdingthelittlebirdinhishand,hecarefullybandageditsinjury.

16.他用剪刀剪掉了鴨子脖子上的釣魚(yú)線(xiàn)。17.他日夜寸步不離小象，每隔幾個(gè)小時(shí)給它換一次繃帶。Withapairofscissors,he

cutawaythefishinglinefromtheduck’sneck.Hekeptclosetothelittleelephantdayandnight,changingitsbandages

everyfewhours.

幫助陪伴：救治18.他彎下腰，捧著小鳥(niǎo)，輕輕地把它舉起來(lái)。19.我打算在墻上釘一個(gè)架子，用于固定鳥(niǎo)巢。幫助陪伴：幫助Hebentover,cupped

thelittlebirdinhishandsandraiseditgently.Iintendedtohammerashelfintothewalltoholdthenest.20.看到狗爬到了我的腳邊，我給他蓋上了毯子讓他暖和一些。21.他給每匹馬的脖子套上韁繩，開(kāi)始領(lǐng)著它們穿過(guò)隧道。幫助陪伴：幫助Seeingthedogcrawlinguparoundmyfeet,Icoveredhimwithablankettokeephimwarm.Witharopefastenedaroundtheneckofeachhorse,hestartedtoleadthemdownthetunnel.Whilethehorsesategreedily,hepouredinsomewater.Shegavethehorsesomecarrotsandpattedhisheadfondly.

Everyday,theytalkedtothehorseswhilefeedingandwateringthem.22.當(dāng)馬兒們狼吞虎咽時(shí)，他倒了一些水進(jìn)去。23.她給馬喂了一些胡蘿卜，憐愛(ài)地拍了拍他的頭。24.每天給馬喂食喂水時(shí)，他們都會(huì)和馬兒們說(shuō)說(shuō)話(huà)。幫助陪伴：照顧25.每頓飯后，我都把桌布上的食物殘?jiān)菇o麻雀。26.我把火雞帶到我們建的窩棚里，給它留了一些食物和水。27.這頭鹿努力地抬起頭來(lái)，舔著男孩手上的水。幫助陪伴：照顧Aftereverymeal,Ifedtheleftoversfromthetableclothtothesparrows.Havingtakentheturkeytotheshelterwehadbuilt,Ileftitwithsomefoodandwater.Withgreateffort,thedeerlifteditsheadandlickedthewaterfromtheboy’shand.28.小貓默默地陪伴著我。29.盡管我們生活得很艱難，但這只狗的陪伴讓日子過(guò)得有了意義。溫馨結(jié)局：共同生活Thekittenkeptcompanywithme

inhersilentway.Thoughwe’dhadatoughlife,thedog’scompanymadethedayscount.30.每天，小雞都會(huì)跟著我們?cè)谠鹤永镒邅?lái)走去，發(fā)出清脆的叫聲。Everyday,thechickwouldfollowusaroundtheyard,

makingcrispsounds.溫馨結(jié)局：共同生活31.在掙扎著做出決定后，他最終還是把小鳥(niǎo)放生了。32.他紅色的眼睛直視著我們，舒展開(kāi)身體，在湖面拍打著翅膀。溫馨結(jié)局：依依惜別Afterstruggling

tomakeadecision,heeventuallyletgoofthebird.Withhis

redeyesfixedonus,he

stretchedhisbodyandbeathiswings

onthelake.33.猴子一跳到樹(shù)頂上就消失在森林中了。34.當(dāng)狼朝森林跑去時(shí)，他回頭看了看，臉上露出了感激的表情。溫馨結(jié)局：依依惜別Nosoonerhadthemonkeyjumpedontothetopofthetreethanitdisappearedintotheforest.Asthewolfranoffintotheforest,

helookedbackwithathankfulexpressiononhisface.35.這只快樂(lè)的狗讓我內(nèi)心的沮喪化為了生命力。36.兒子的努力讓我感動(dòng)。我從來(lái)沒(méi)有像現(xiàn)在這樣為他感到驕傲。溫馨結(jié)局：收獲感悟Thehappydogreplacedmydepressionwiththestrengthoflife.Theeffortsmysonhadmadetouchedmyheart.NeverbeforehadIbeenprouderofhim.37.隨著我對(duì)這些雞越來(lái)越多的關(guān)注和照顧，我和它們建立起密切的關(guān)系。這些小動(dòng)物教會(huì)我尊重和珍惜生命，感恩節(jié)也因此更加有意義。溫馨結(jié)局：收獲感悟Withtheincreasingattentionanddevotiontothechickens,Iformeda

closebondwiththem.Thelittlecreaturestaughtmetorespectandtreasurelife,forwhichThanksgivingmademoresense.

19PART03ExerciseConsolidationCompletethefollowingsentences1.我們聽(tīng)到的只有遠(yuǎn)處鳥(niǎo)兒的嘰嘰喳喳聲。Weheardnothingexceptthedistant

__________________.2.那只可憐的小狗正遭受著酷熱的折磨，發(fā)著高燒。Thepoorpuppythat_____________________________hadahightemperature.3.很明顯躺在地上的那匹馬喘不過(guò)氣來(lái)了。Itwasclearthatthehorse_________________was____________.4.她立刻帶它進(jìn)屋，用繃帶包扎傷口。Sheimmediatelytookitintothehouseto_________________.twitteringofbirdswassufferingfromextremeheatlyingonthegroundoutofbreathbandageitsinjuryCompletethefollowingsentences5.她雙手捧著鴨子，輕輕地把它舉起來(lái)。She___________________________andraiseditgently.6.在我家，這只老狗一直陪伴著我的兒子和女兒。Atmyhome,theolddog____________________________________________.7.他們一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地把烏龜身上的漁網(wǎng)剪掉了。Littlebylittle,they_______________________fromtheturtle’sbody.8.雖然他非常想把這只鳥(niǎo)養(yǎng)作寵物，但他知道他必須把它放生。Althoughhewantedverymuchtokeepthebirdasapet,___________________________.cuppedtheduckinherhandskeptcompanywithmysonanddaughtercutawaythefishingnetheknewhehadtoletgoofitCompletethefollowingsentences9.我給這位“不速之客”喂了一些剩菜剩飯，并倒了一些水給它喝。I______________________________________and__________________forittodrink.10.望著它們飛來(lái)飛去，我感到內(nèi)心的沮喪化為了生命力。Seeingthemflyingaround,

_____________________________________________________.fedsomeleftoverstotheunexpectedguestpouredinsomewaterIfeltmydepressionwasreplacedbythestrengthoflifeCompletethefollowingblanksSuddenly,Gracestoppedwalkingandpulledherbrothertowardsthefence.Nearthefenceonthegrasslayalittledog.Itseemedtobeinjuredandsufferingfromgreatpain.Iwentovertoseehowmykidswoulddealwiththedog.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withthedaygettinglate,wehadtoleave.Thetwokidskeptbeggingmetotakethedoghome.Touchedbytheirkindness,Inoddedinagreement.Wildwithjoy,Graceheldthedoginherarmsaswestartedgoinghome.Gracepickedupthecreatureandputitgentlyonherlap.Havingremovedtheribbonfromherhair,shewrappeditaroundthedog’sinjury.Thinkingitmightbethirsty,Jackfetchedsomewaterforit.Theypettedthedogfondly,whisperingsomesoftwordstocomfortit.24PART04TopicExtensionReadthepassageandgettoknowthedetails

MyhusbandErikandIhadpromisedthekidsaLabradorpuppy.I’dseenanadvertatthelocalhardwarestore,sayingsomedogswereavailable.“Therewerethirteenpuppiesinall,”Sally,theowner,saidwhenIcalled.“Now,thereareonlythreeleft.”IsaidI’dpayheravisitthenextday.TheboysjumpedandshoutedexcitedlyasIcopieddowndirectionsandhungupthephone.Earlythenextmorning,stilldiscussingpossiblenamesforadog,ErikandIwoundourwaythroughthemountainstomeetourfamily’snewbestfriend.Ourboyshadsimplenames:Ike,Sam,Ben,andDom,sotheywantedasimplename,likeRosy,fortheirpet.ReadthepassageandgettoknowthedetailsFinally,wemetthesweetlittledog.“Rosy,”theboyssaidtoitsoftly.Ourlittlepuppycockedherhead.“Shelikesit,”theycheeredandsetaboutmakingRosycomfortableforthelongdrivehome.Theyofferedherachewtoyandliftedherupsoshecouldseeoutofthewindow.Theytookturnslovinglyholdingherintheirarmsandofferedherasnack.Thoughsmall,Rosygrewstrongandhealthybeneathhershinyblackcoat.And,justasI’dhoped,shewasacalmingadditiontoourhousefulofnoisyboys.Butsomethingwaswrong.“It’slikeshedoesn’tknowhowtoplay,”Samcommentedonedayafterschool.“Dogshavedifferentpersonalities,justlikepeople,”Isaid.“Besides,she’sstillveryyoung.”Readthepassageandgettoknowthedetails“Butherlegsaren’tverylong,andoneeyeissmallerthantheother,’’Ikeadded,tryingtomakesenseofwhyRosywasdifferentfromotherpuppieshe’dmet.IlookedacrosstheroomtowhereRosysatbetweentheboys.Thelastgoldenraysofautumnsunshineshonebrightlyonherface.Sureenough,oneeyewasmisshapen.Notonlythat,itdidn’tglintintheafternoonlight.Itookadeepbreath.Rosy,ourpuppywithanameasshortasherfourlittlelegs,wasblindinoneeye.Micro-plotdesignAccordingtotheabovepassage,pleasedesignamicro-plotaboutourreactionandwhatwedidwithRosy.Remembertousewhatwehavelearntinthisperiod.Micro-plotdesign發(fā)現(xiàn)小狗不正常以后，我們_______,我看到孩子們的失望，為了彌補(bǔ)，我可能_____________________________,但是善良的孩子們_________________________.很失望想歸還小狗，換一只健康的小狗拒絕，認(rèn)為這對(duì)小狗不公平Micro-plotdesi