2009年高考英語作文范文

第1頁共15頁2009年全國各省市高考英語書面表達(dá)題范文集錦完整18套（附解析及專家簡評）一、（2009全國卷I、海南、寧夏卷）假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東MrsWilson不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請給MrsWilson寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：1．外出購物2．替房東還書3．Tracy來電話留言：1）咖啡屋（BoltonCoffee）見面取消2）此事已告知Susan)盡快回電【參考范文】MrsWilson,I’mgoingoutshopping,andwon’tbebackuntilabout5:00pm.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.Atabout1o’clockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningasshehassomethingimportanttoattendto.Shefeltverysorryaboutthat,butsaidthatyoucouldsetsomeothertimeforthemeeting.Shewantedyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.ShehasalreadytoldSusanaboutthischange.LiHua【解析】作文題仍然同去年一樣，屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，要求學(xué)生就所給內(nèi)容寫一張留言條，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性，生活型的原則。應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：1）注意人稱，應(yīng)該用第一人稱的形式給房東（第二人稱）寫便條；2）注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用：從試題的內(nèi)容上可以看出在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)1和2時(shí)應(yīng)用將來時(shí)；而要點(diǎn)3中的幾個(gè)方面則需要注意時(shí)態(tài)的替換，會用到一般過去時(shí)，現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)。3）注意恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語，是各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達(dá)不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山。二、（2009.全國卷II）假定你是李華，你的美國朋友sarah打算暑期來北京旅游，來信詢問改建后前門大街的情況。請你寫封回信，簡單介紹以下內(nèi)容：簡況：長800余米、600多年歷史、300余家商鋪；位置：天安門廣場南面；交通：公共汽車17、69、59等路，地鐵2號線；特色：步行街、當(dāng)當(dāng)車、茶館、劇院等。參考詞匯：步行街pedestrianstreet當(dāng)當(dāng)車trolleycar地鐵subway【參考范文】DearSarah,ThankyouforyourletterforaskingabouttherebuiltQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.QianmenStreetisafamousstreetofover600yearsold.Alongthis800-meterstreet,therearemorethan300shops.AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing,justtothesouthofTian’anmenSquare,it’sveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakeBusesNo.17,69or59.SubwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet,buttherearetrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops,butalsotochattersandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife.I’msureyou‘lllikeit.【解析】本文是書信格式，給出四個(gè)要點(diǎn)，屬于常規(guī)文體，學(xué)生只要把四個(gè)要點(diǎn)寫全，注意上下文，句與句之間的合理過渡即可。三、（2009.北京卷）情景作文（20分）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”為題的英文稿件。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：郊區(qū)suburbs第二節(jié)開放作文（15分）請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50第一節(jié)情景作文（20分）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：騎車去植樹植樹安插提示牌照相【參考范文】GreenActioninOurClassApril12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit’sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.【解析】本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。題材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，學(xué)生只要注意理清思路按照活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容和時(shí)間來寫即可。第二節(jié)開放作文（15分）【參考范文】Whataninterestingpicture!AWesternyoungman,sittingatatable,isreadytoeatabowlofnoodles.HeisholdingtwoforksthesamewayasweChineseholdchopsticks.Heistryingsohardtopickupthenoodlesthatheissweatingalot.Atfirstglance,Ithinkit’sabitfunny,forweChinesetakeforgrantedthatchopsticksarethetoolsforeatingnoodles.Themaninthepictureistryingtocopyus.Obviouslyheisdoingitthehardway.Maybeusingoneforkwilldoabetterjob,Inmyopinion,wedon’tneedtocopyothers’waysofthinking.Sometimesasimplerwayofdoingthingsmaybeabetterway.【解析】本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達(dá)。考生重點(diǎn)要看出這個(gè)人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。四、（2009.天津卷）61.假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會主席李華。學(xué)生會將舉辦每年一度的英語演講比賽，本年度的主題為“TheEnglishNovelILikeBest”。作為組織者，你將在演講比賽開幕時(shí)發(fā)言，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。1.說明比賽的意義，如提高英語聽說能力，養(yǎng)成讀書的習(xí)慣等；2.說明比賽的注意事項(xiàng)，如每人演講不超過5分鐘，語言流利，發(fā)音準(zhǔn)確等；3.預(yù)祝比賽圓滿成功。評分原則本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分評分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后綜合給分。詞數(shù)少于100的，從總分中減去2分。評分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。每錯(cuò)誤書寫3個(gè)單詞從總分中減去1分，原則上不超過3分，重復(fù)的不計(jì)。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號錯(cuò)誤，將視其對交際的影響程度酌情減分。如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。Goodafternoon.Ladiesandgentlemen. Welcometothisyear’sEnglishspeechcompetition.TakingpartinEnglishspeechcompetitionisahelpfulwaytolearnEnglish.Whilewefullyprepareforthecompetition,wecanimproveourabilitiesoflisteningandspeakinganddevelopagoodhabitofreadingEnglish.Intheprocessofthecompetition,youshouldpayspecialattentiontothefollowingrules.First,youshouldfinishyourspeechinfiveminutes.Second,youtryyourbesttoexpressyourselfinEnglishfluently.Finally,youshouldhaveagoodEnglishpronunciation.IhopethattheEnglishspeechcompetitionwilbeagreatsuccess!Thankyou!【解析】本題屬于提綱式作文，體裁為應(yīng)用文中的演講稿，題材內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活，給出要點(diǎn)表述較全，題的難度較小，考生注意一下幾點(diǎn)即可：1、學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯，語言不要太書面化。2、正確運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使上下文聯(lián)系更加密切，邏輯性強(qiáng)。3、注意要使所寫內(nèi)容和原文所給出的開頭、結(jié)尾處銜接自然，渾然一體。五、（2009.四川卷）假設(shè)你是李華。你的外國筆友Jane打算于七月來中國，特來信了解中國人的社交習(xí)俗。請你用英語回一封信，從以下幾個(gè)方面作具體介紹。頁面時(shí)的問候方式；對毛病伯回答方式；接收禮物時(shí)的回應(yīng)方式；餐宴禮節(jié)?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earJane,Gladtohearfromyouandyou’rewelcometoChinainJuly.ThefollowingaresomeChinesecustoms.Firstly,wegreeteachotherbysaying“Hello”oraskingsuchquestionsas“Whereareyougoing?”or“Areyoubusy?”toexpressourcare.Secondly,whenpraised,wereplywith“Oh,no!”or“I’mover-praised”toshowgoodmanners.Next,whenreceivingagift,weusuallysay“It’sunnecessary”besides“Thanks”toshowpolitenessandthenputitaway.Finally,atdinnerparties,wetalkloudlyandtouchglasseswhendrinkingtosomeone’shealthorsuccesstoshowthatwe’rewarm.Anyhow,differentcultures,differentcustoms.Ifyou“DoastheRomansdowheninRome”,you’llenjoymoreofyourstayhere.Ihopewhat’smentionedabovemightbehelpfulandwishyouagoodjourney.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本文是一種常規(guī)的書信體提綱式作文，要點(diǎn)有四，學(xué)生只要把四個(gè)要點(diǎn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言，條理的句子，合適的句式，表達(dá)完整，注意過渡和復(fù)雜句使用即可。六、（2009.安徽卷）假設(shè)你正在參加全省中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，請你針對有些父母經(jīng)常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現(xiàn)象，寫一篇演講稿，陳述你的觀點(diǎn)。演講稿的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)認(rèn)為同學(xué)們不必為此苦惱；希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷；建議與父母進(jìn)行交流和溝通。注意：【參考范文】Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen.Someofusarehavingproblemswithourparents,astheyoftenlookintoourschoolbagsorreadourdiaries.Ifullyunderstandwhywearenotcomfortableaboutit,butthere’snoneedtofeeltoosad.Ourparentsarecheckingourbagsordiariestomakesurewe’renotgettingintoanytrouble.Theyhaveprobablyheardsomehorriblestoriesaboutotherkidsandthoughtwemightdothesame.Orperhapstheyjustwanttoconnectwithusbutaredongitallwrong.Mysuggestionis:Tellthemwewantthemtotrustusasmuchaswe’dliketotrustthem.Ifyoudon’tthinkyoucantalktothem,writethemaletterandleaveitlyingaround—thyareboundtoreadit.Thankyou!【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，體裁為應(yīng)用文中的演講稿，題材的現(xiàn)實(shí)性強(qiáng)，考生的話語較多，顯見這種作文，難度不大，考生應(yīng)注意基本語言和句式的運(yùn)用，以及上下文的過渡。七、（2009.山東卷）寫作（滿分30分）假設(shè)你是李華，曾在美國學(xué)習(xí)半年，現(xiàn)已回國。你想聯(lián)系你的美國老師Mr.Smith,但沒有其聯(lián)系方式。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你的美國同學(xué)Tom寫一封信：感謝Tom對你英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；詢問Mr,smith的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式；邀請Tom在春節(jié)期間來中國感受中國文化?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earTom,IamnowbackChinaandsound.InthisletterIwouldliketoconveymyheartfeltappreciationtoyouforyourkindassistanceinmyEnglishlearningwhenIwasinNewYork.Additionally,yourgeneroushelpandtendercaremademefeelwarmlywelcomedandtransformedmyfirstAmericantripintoaunforgettablememory.IhavebeenmissingourEnglishprofessor,Mr.Smithwhoseunusualcastofmind,wideandvariedknowledge,togetherwithasingularpersonalcharm,combinedtoexertastronginfluenceonme.Whatabouthimrecently?Idesiretocontacthimforsomesuggestionsonimprovingmylisteningability.However,hisemailaddressisnotavailable.Sowouldyouminddeliveringittomeviatheonlinemailbox?IammorethandelightedtoinviteyoutojoinustocelebratetheSpringFestival-ChineseLunarNewYearsothatIcanrepayyourfriendship.Youcanpartnerwithmetohaveatryinliondances,whichisextremelyexciting.Andthegrandlanternfestivalparadewillbeboundtoimpressyou.IassureyouthatyouwouldenjoyvisitinghereasIdidatyouhome.Withmybestregards!Yourscordially,LiHua【解析】本文仍屬于半開放性體裁，與書寫體結(jié)合給考生發(fā)揮的空間，考生按照三個(gè)要點(diǎn)的提示，用合適的句式，句型表達(dá)出來即可。八、（2009.陜西卷）假定你是李華。在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上,你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖（post）尋求幫助,請根據(jù)帖子內(nèi)容,寫作要點(diǎn)和要求回貼。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.告訴Grown-up要理解母親；2.給Grown-up提出解決問題的具體建議?！緟⒖挤段摹縃i,Grown-up,Asastudentofyourage,Iunderstandyoursituation.Theproblemyouarefacingiscommonamongourteenagers.However,itshouldbewisenottodoanythingthatmayhurtherfeelings.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,it’sadvisabletotalkmorewithyourmom.Hearttohearttalkshelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Theyarealsoopportunitiestoletherknowyourideasofandattitudestowardmanythings.Second,youshouldlearntodoyourownthingswell,provingtoyourmomthatyouarealreadya“Grown-up”.It’sevenbetterifyoucouldsharemoreofthehousework,suchascleaning,washingandcooking.【解析】考生在寫作中應(yīng)該注意如下幾點(diǎn)：1.文體：應(yīng)用文（電子郵件）。2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.主體人稱：第二人稱。4.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：=1\*GB3①問題介紹；=2\*GB3②建議一；=3\*GB3③建議二；=4\*GB3④我的愿望。亮點(diǎn)句式：Theproblemyouarefacingiscommonamongourteenagers.Hereareafewsuggestions.it’sadvisabletotalkmorewithyourmom.Theyarealsoopportunitiestoletherknowyourideasofandattitudestowardsmanythings.Second,youshouldlearntodoyourownthingswell.九、（2009.江西卷）學(xué)校即將舉行以“Turningabadmood（心情）intoagoodone”為題目的英語作文比賽，請按下列要求定一篇100詞左右的記敘文或議論文。好心情的重要性。產(chǎn)生壞心情的原因。應(yīng)該如何調(diào)整心情。記敘文議論文發(fā)生的具體事件。對你的心情有何影響？你如何應(yīng)對？【參考范文】議論文TurningaBadMoodintoAGoodOneItisveryimportantforustohaveagoodmoodinourdailylife.Ifyouhaveagoodmood,youwillbehappywitheverythingintheworld.Mostimportantly,youwillhaveaoptimisticeffectonthepeoplearoundyou.Weallwillliveaharmoniousandhappylife.Itisalsogoodforyourhealth.However，sometimeswhenyoumeetsomedifficulties,whenyouquarrelwithothersorwhenyoufailindoingsomething.Youmayhaveabadmood.Ifso,youshouldgetridofitassoonaspossible.Asweallknow,everythinghasitstwosides.Soyoushouldthinkmoreaboutitsbrightside.Wearesurethateverythingwillbebetterwithtimepassingby.Remember:Onlyyoucanmakeyourselfhappy.Ihopethateveryonehasagoodmoodeveryday!【解析】今年依然是開放式的作文，只提出了一個(gè)話題“Turningabadmoodintoagoodone”,并給出了體裁上的選擇和內(nèi)容上的簡要提示。話題非常切合學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，考生只要按照要點(diǎn)去寫，注意過渡即可。十、（2009.江蘇卷）鼠標(biāo)是計(jì)算機(jī)時(shí)代最佳的人機(jī)交互工具之一。它極大地方便了人們的計(jì)算機(jī)操作。但是，過分依賴鼠標(biāo)的習(xí)慣也會帶來一些不利影響。請你以鼠標(biāo)為切入點(diǎn)，根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文。鼠標(biāo)的必要性對多數(shù)人來說，操作計(jì)算機(jī)，上網(wǎng)沖浪……鼠標(biāo)的便捷性點(diǎn)擊、移動(dòng)、插入、拷貝、刪除……編輯文本，搜索信息……收發(fā)郵件，選購商品……點(diǎn)播音樂，下載電影……如果過分依賴鼠標(biāo)……（請考生結(jié)合自身感受，列舉兩到三點(diǎn)）【參考范文】Themouseisamosteffectivedeviceusedbypeopletocommunicatewithacomputer．Formostpeople,it’salmostimpossibletooperateacomputerwithoutamouse,letalonesurftheInternet.Awell-chosenmouseisreallyhandy,flexibleandconvenientincontrollingthescreen.Withthefunctionsofinserting,deleting,movingandcopying,itenablesustoedittest,browsewebpageanddownloadwhatwewant.Itcanevenbringusafloodofmusic,moviesandPCgames.Justimagine,allthiscanbedonewithacutemouse.Aconvenienttoolcancertainlymakeourworkeasier,butitdoesn’talwayshelpinapositiveway.Toomuchreadyinformationonourfingertipsleaveslittleroomforknowledgepursuing.Toomanyreadyanswersmakeuslessexcitedinfindingtruth.Relyingtoomuchonmouseclickingmakesuslazierandlesscreativebothmentallyandphysically.（153words）【解析】本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內(nèi)容與我們生活相關(guān)，考生只要把所給要點(diǎn)逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯即可。十一、（2009.湖南卷）假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)新老師李紅，請給你的朋友張華寫一封信，告訴他你第一天上課的情況，主要內(nèi)容如下：1.描述一件課堂上令你印象深刻的事情；2.介紹你處理該事的方式；3.談?wù)勀愕母邢??！緟⒖挤段摹緿earZhangHua,It’sthreemonthssinceIheardfromyoulasttime.NowIwanttotellyouanimpressivestoryhappenedonmyfirstlesson.Onhearingthebell,studentsranintotheclassroomasquicklyastheycan.Butaboy,LiMing,whosefatherdiedamonthago,waslatefortheclass.Hestoodoutsidetheclassroom,silently.Ismiledtohimandlethimcamein.Afterawhile,hecriedonhisdesk.ThenIwalkedtohimandaskedwhathadhappened.Hetoldmethathismotherwasillandhehadtotakesomemedicineforher.Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness.Movedbyhiswords,Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongnamed“Mother”forthestudents.Howtimeflies!ClasswasoverbeforeIrealizedit.FromthestoryIfeltweshouldrespectourparentsanddoourbesttohelpthem.Doyouthinkso?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,LiHong【解析】本文屬于半開放性提綱式書信體，要點(diǎn)有三，選材學(xué)生熟悉，也是發(fā)生在他們身邊的故事，學(xué)生只要把握準(zhǔn)情景和要求，使表達(dá)的內(nèi)容不走題即可。十二、（2009.湖北卷）:假設(shè)你是華華，與英國網(wǎng)友湯姆約定用對方的母語通信，以提高各自的外語水平。最近你收到湯姆的電子郵件（附后），發(fā)現(xiàn)有一個(gè)成語使用不當(dāng)。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文回一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn):1．不應(yīng)使用“無所不為”，應(yīng)使用“2．說明這兩個(gè)成語的用法;3．給予鼓勵(lì)。附（湯姆的郵件）:華華，你好!近幾天在忙什么事?有什么有意思的事嗎?我們的學(xué)校放假了，所以這幾天在家無所不為，飽食終日，只好上網(wǎng)發(fā)伊妹兒。沒意思。我決定找份工作，做個(gè)自食其力的人。祝好!湯姆（以下所給內(nèi)容不得抄入答題卡）【參考范文】Hi!TomNicetoreadyoure-mailtoday.Inoticedyou’vebeguntouseChineseidiomsandusedmostofthemcorrectly.However,I’mafraidthereisonemistakeI’dliketopointout.Itis“無所不為”.Thisidiommeans“doallkindsofbadthings”.Areyoudoingallkindsofbadthingsathome?Iguesswhatyouwerereallytryingtosayisthatyou’vegotnothingtodothesedays.Inthatcase,youshoulduse“無所事事”.Weusuallyuse“無所不為”toexpresstheideathatpeopledaretodoanythingbad,and“無所事事”todescribethesituationinwhichpeoplehavegotnothingmeaningfultodo.HaveImademyselfclear?Anyway,I’mamazedattheprogressyou’vemade.Hopyou’llfindagoodjobsoon.Huahua【解析】本文題材現(xiàn)實(shí)性強(qiáng)，屬于較為保守的提綱式作文，考生只要審好題按照要點(diǎn)去表達(dá)即可。十三、（2009.福建卷）詞數(shù)：120左右Therearemanyadvantagesofsmiling.Itcannotonlymakeushappy,butalsopleaseothers.Ifwesmileatlife,lifewillsmileonusinreturn.SoIwanttosmileatallwheneverandwhereverpossible,First,Iwouldliketosmileatmyparentsbecausetheyhavegivenmelifeandtakeallthetroubletobringmeup.Theyarrangealmosteverythingforme.Withtheirhelp,Ihavemadegreatprogress.Iwouldliketosay“Thankyou”tothemwithasmile.Thenmysmileshouldgotomyself,foronlyinthiswaycanIgainmoreconfidenceinsmilingmytroublesawayandliveabetterlife.Inaword,let’sgreeteverydaywithasmile.Tomorrowisanotherday.【解析】內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：=1\*GB3①微笑的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；=2\*GB3②想對其微笑的人物（父母）；=3\*GB3③對父母微笑的理由；=4\*GB3④對自己微笑的理由；=5\*GB3⑤總結(jié)。十四、（2009.廣東卷）第一節(jié)基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況:時(shí)間:上周末對象:眼科醫(yī)生（eye-doctor）王教授主題:我國中小學(xué)生近視（short-sightedness）問題基本信息:（1）發(fā)生率:略高于50％（2）人數(shù):世界第一專家解讀:（1）原因:很復(fù)雜（2）治療:沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視（3）建議:不要過度用眼；多參加戶外活動(dòng)（4）特別提示:如何握筆也和近視有關(guān)[寫作內(nèi)容]根據(jù)以上情況寫一篇采訪報(bào)道，并包括如下內(nèi)容:Lastweekend,Ihadaninterviewwitheye-doctorProfessorWangaboutourcountryprimaryandmiddlestudents’short-sightedness.Itissaidthatslightlymorethan50%students,whichrankstheNo.1intheworld,areshort-sighted.ProfessorWangsaidthereasonofshort-sightednessiscomplicatedandthreeisstillnocureforshort-sightedness.Hesuggestedthatweshouldnotoveruseoureyesanddomoreoutdoorexercises.What’smore,sincetheholdingofpenhassomethingtodowiththeshort-sightedness,weneedtopayattentiontousingthepen.【解析】本文題材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，這個(gè)話題真正的做到“話題來源于學(xué)生實(shí)際生活”。近視眼是每個(gè)校園所必不可少的現(xiàn)象，是學(xué)生校園生活得隱形熱點(diǎn)。因此今年的基礎(chǔ)寫作題目讓每個(gè)學(xué)生都有話可說?？忌⒁馊笠c(diǎn)和表格內(nèi)容，恰當(dāng)表達(dá)即可。第二節(jié)讀寫任務(wù)（共1小題，滿分25分）閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。Jackieisperhapsthemosteasilyannoyedkoala（考拉）attheFeatherdaleWildlifeParkinsouthernAustralia.Allthekoalasthereareunhappyandcomplaining.Youwouldbetooifyouwereusedtonightactivitiesandsomeonekeptwakingyouupalldaywhileyouweretryingtosleepitoff.That’sright—sleepitoff.Theaveragekoalaisalwayshalfasleepbecauseitfeedsontheleavesofaspecialkindthatmakesitsleepy.ThereasonJackieandherfellowkoalasarerepeatedlyawokenfromtheirdeepsleepissotheycanbehuggedandphotographedbytourists，whomakethetripstoFeatherdaleandanincreasingnumberofothernationalparksforjustthatspecialexperience.WhateverdepartmentintheAussiegovernmentinchargeofsuchthingsisnowmovingtomakethepracticeillegal，whichisunderstandable.Howwouldyoureact，myfriend，ifyouweretryingtosleepoffadozentimesandsomeround，furrycreaturesmellingofgrasskeptwakingyou?*考拉即樹袋熊[寫作內(nèi)容]1.以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；2.然后以約120個(gè)詞就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括:（1）人們在參觀動(dòng)物園時(shí)為什么喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照；（2）假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境，你會有什么反應(yīng)；3）你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。【參考范文】Thepassagenarratesthatkoalaswhoarerepeatedlyawokenfromtheirdeepsleepareunhappyandcomplainingfortouriststakingphotos.Theauthorappealstoustobemorekindtoanimals.Thereasonswhytouristsliketakingphotosoftheanimalsinthezooperhapsvaryfrompeopletopeople.Somethinkitahappyreminderoftheirvisittothezooortheanimals,whileothersmayconsideritjustsortoffuntohave.Butanywaytheymaynotsharethedeepfeelingsoftheanimals.IfIwereinthesamepositionastheanimalinthezoo,myreactionwouldbeveryseverestronglyagainstbeingphotographed.Nohavingpeacefulsurroundingstosleep,don’tyousufferrestlessandfidgets.Nodoubtwedoandsodotheanimals.Ithinkitnecessarytobantourists’takingpictureswithanimals,makingacomfortableenvironmentforthemtoliveandregardingthemasourfriends,soastofoundharmoniousrelationswithanimals.【解析】今年的讀寫任務(wù)讓學(xué)生就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”展開議論。議論文的寫作有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生正確的價(jià)值觀，糾正不正確的價(jià)值觀。今年的讀寫任務(wù)暗中旨在培養(yǎng)學(xué)生保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的觀念、把多一點(diǎn)的空間還給動(dòng)物的觀念、與動(dòng)物和諧共存的觀念。如果考生從“應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”這一觀點(diǎn)入手的話就迎合了閱讀材料，同時(shí)也能夠受到改卷老師的青睞。十五、（2009.遼寧卷）假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會請你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。要點(diǎn)時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00至11：00內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前提示：帶帽子、手套注意：第二節(jié)：一、評分原則本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。評分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。詞數(shù)少于80和多余120的，從總分中減去2分。評分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。如書寫較差以至影響交際，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00至11：00內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前提示：帶帽子、手套歡迎踴躍參加【參考范文】Dearneighbors,Weareveryhappyannouncethatourcommunityisgoingtoorganizeanactivityforallthecommunitymembers.NextSaturday,wegoingtopickapplesinavillage20kilometersawayfromourtown,andallarewelcome.Wewillmeetat8:00amatthegate,whereabluebuswillbewaiting.Ouroutdooractivitywilllast3hours,andwe’llbebackatabout11o’clock.Ifyouareinterested,pleasesignupattheofficebefore5:00pmnextThursdaysothatwewillmakenecessaryarrangements.Wesuggestthatyoubringwithyouahatandapairofgloves.Wearelookingforwardtoyourjoiningus.CommunityOffice【解析本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見的提綱式作文。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說。第一步：審題看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，這樣格式應(yīng)該已經(jīng)給出，審題的重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)和要求上：要點(diǎn)有五項(xiàng)，注意有三項(xiàng)，但注意的第一項(xiàng)是重要的一項(xiàng)。理思路：調(diào)整要點(diǎn)，講清本次活動(dòng)的安排。可以先將活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，要求、注意事項(xiàng)表達(dá)出來；然后再寫5和3要點(diǎn)，這樣邏輯清晰表達(dá)合理。第二步：寫作可以先在草紙上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語去表達(dá)，要嘗試最簡單的復(fù)雜句，如用定語從句、賓語從句等，但句式不易過于復(fù)雜，要用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間、段與段之間過渡自然。第三步：檢查作文寫完后，最后要進(jìn)行檢查。重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)寫全了嗎？時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、動(dòng)詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫對了嗎？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號、大小寫用對了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔。十六、（2009.浙江卷）5月1日，高二（3）班的學(xué)生志愿者LiYue和ZhangHua去陽光敬老院（SunshineNursingHome）開展志愿者活動(dòng)（送水果.打掃.聊天等）。假如你是校英語報(bào)的記者，請按下列要點(diǎn)用英語寫一則100-120個(gè)詞的新聞報(bào)道。s5【參考范文】StudentVolunteersBroughtSunshinetotheElderlyOnMayDay,LiYueandZhangHua,studentsfromClassThree,GradeTwo,wenttoSunshineNursingHomeanddidsomevoluntarywork.Upontheirarrival,LiYueandZhangHuawerewarmlywelcomed,andrespectfully,theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits.Then,theystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor.Everythingdone,theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.Whenitwastimeforthevo