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男孩打工供家用目錄CONTENTS1讀原文

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填表格2讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展列大綱

兩段12句法3寫句式

招招升級(jí)45寫句式

招招升級(jí)

水到渠成

范文賞析1讀原文

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填表格1Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.

Aquietman,hedidn'tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.And

hisdad,Albert,tookthemoney

mydad

earnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.I

didn'treallyunderstandhisworldeither:

He

was

alivestocktrucker,and

IthoughtthatIwouldsurpass(超過)anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.Summersinthemid-70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone(長(zhǎng)號(hào)).ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedsto2021年浙江卷6月真題原文spraywithchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpointedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb's-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,but

Ilookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn'tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.Athome,mydadsaid,"Ajob'sabigsteptogrowingup.I'mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold."Mydad'swordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowithasIwished.Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn'tinterested.IdecideditwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.

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填表格n.特點(diǎn)

（adj./v./短語）（主要）角色1highschoolstudent,didn’tunderstanddad’sworld（主要）角色2DadGeorgequiet,alivestocktruckerwithloweducationcontributetohome（次要）角色

aneighboringfarmer背景事件Ididasummerjobandearnedsomemoney.微情節(jié)

動(dòng)作(v.)/情緒(adj.)

Iwashiredtoworkinhisfield.(p4)

Ilookedforwardtothepay.

(p5)Dad’swordsmademerealizedmyearningsmaybenotmine.(p6)Iwasnotinterested.(p7)I

12讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展

Thepayarrivedatlast._______________________________________________________

Afterhearingwhathehadsaid,Ifeltembarrassed.

_______________________________________________________2

Thepayarrivedatlast.

Afterhearingwhathehadsaid,Ifeltembarrassed.P1大意Daddidn'twantmymoney.ImisunderstoodDad.P1角色續(xù)寫思路角色I(xiàn)Dad

動(dòng)作(v.)

情緒(adj.)

讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展I;

Dad①HowdidIfeelafterreceivingthemoney?②Arrivinghome,whatdidIdo?2③Whatdidhesaidtome?P2大意P2角色續(xù)寫思路角色

動(dòng)作(v.)

讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展ThistimeIundertandDadandamwillingtosharemymoney.I;

DadIDad③Howdidhefeel?Howdidhereact?2

Afterhearingwhathehadsaid,Ifeltembarrassed.①HowdidIfeel?②WhatdidIdo?

What’stheending?情緒(adj.)列大綱：兩段12句法3

列大綱：兩段12句法

1）

2）3）4）5）6）7）

8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句話中，有哪幾句是固定內(nèi)容？

3Thepayarrivedatlast..

Afterhearingwhathehadsaid,Ifeltembarrassed.

列大綱：兩段12句法1）固定

2）3）4）5）6）固定

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）固定

結(jié)局/升華主旨續(xù)寫首段首句續(xù)寫二段首句承接首段首句3Thepayarrivedatlast..

Afterhearingwhathehadsaid,Ifeltembarrassed.Thepayarrivedatlast.

Afterhearingwhathehadsaid,Ifeltembarrassed.

列大綱：兩段12句法1）

2）3）4）5）6）

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）

Ibegantounderstandmyfatherandlearnfromhim.Iwasafraidandangry.Iwasn’tangryanymore.Heletmemakethedecision.Mydadcalledme.Myheartsank.Isteppedunwillingly.Mydaddidn’ttakemymoney.Ihuggedhim.Inoticedhisgreyhair.Irealizedhowtiredhewas.Iregreted.3寫句式

招招升級(jí)4Step4.寫句式

招招升級(jí)

e.g.:1>Knowingthathewouldtalkaboutmyearnings,Ipulledalongfaceandintendedtosimplywalkpasthimandslipbacktomybedroom.2>Dad

exclaimed,wearinganaccessibleexpression.3>However,

Dadslidthepaycheckbackintomyhand,sayinginatendervoice.招式1：

非謂語動(dòng)詞常用句式：①...,doing②Doing...,.....③Havingdone...,...

寫句式

招招升級(jí)e.g.:4>Reluctantly,Iinchedforwardandsubmittedthepaycheck.5>

Isteppedcloserandhuggedhimtightly.4招式2：

動(dòng)作鏈（V1andV2）（V1,V2andV3）

將籠統(tǒng)的大動(dòng)作拆解成具體的小動(dòng)作，畫面感十足

Step4.寫句式

招招升級(jí)

e.g.:6>

Memoriesofhisusualcryofpainontheneckcamecrowdingin.招式3：無靈主語

Memoriesof...camecrowdingin.afloodof+（情緒類）n.seized/welledup/cameoversb.

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范文賞析5 WhenIbroughtmypaycheckhome--itwas$119--mydadwantedtotalktome.

Knowingthathewouldtalkaboutmyearnings,Ipulledalongfaceandintendedtosimplywalkpasthimandslipbacktomybedroom.“Comehere,son.”

Dad

exclaimed,wearinganaccessibleexpression.Myheartsank.WhatIhadbeenlookingforwardto—adreamynewfootballoutfitwouldfinallygivewayto

family

expenses.Reluctantly,Iinchedforwardandsubmittedthepaycheck.However,

Dadslidthepaycheckbackintomyhand,sayinginatendervoice,“You'vegrownup.Youhaveeveryrighttodecidewhattodowiththemoney.”

范文賞析5 Iwassurprisedthatmyd