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讀后續(xù)寫復習：品德故事

品德故事類讀后續(xù)寫常見思路：一、陷入道德困境的緊張，焦慮，猶豫，憂愁1.

Sb.

isconfrontedwith

atoughissue.

某人面臨著一個棘手的問題。2.

Sb.lookedupset,anxiousanddistressed某人看上去心煩意亂、焦慮不安、痛苦不堪3.

Sb.

scratcheshis/herhead

astohowtosolvesth.

某人對如何解決某事摸不著頭腦。4.

Sb.is

onpinsandneedles/

Sb

hasantsinthepants某人如坐針氈/坐立不安5.

Confrontedwith

thetoughnuts,sb.is

atalossforwords面對棘手的問題，某人無話可說6.

Cuppinghisfaceinhands,sb.

sankintodeepthought.

雙手捧著臉，某人陷入了沉思。7.

Sb.wasinlowspirits

due

to

thelossof...

某人由于失去……而情緒低落。8.

Walking/Wandering/Pacingbackandforth,sb.was

ponderingover

whattodonext.來回走/徘徊/踱步著，某人正在沉思下一步該做什么。二、主人公做出的思想斗爭正確觀點與錯誤觀點的交鋒1.

Shewantedto

takepossessionof

itbutsomethingdidn'tfeelrightaboutit.2.

Itflashedthrough/across/inhermindthat

theownerwouldbesoanxiousatthelossof..3.

Herheartwasbeating/poundingfastandherhands/palmswere

trembling/sweating...4.

Tornbetween...and...,shehadarestlessnight,

tossingandturningonbed（輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)）.5.

Sheistornbetweenthedesiretoshowherremarkabletalentandtheanxietyofbeingteasedbyherpeers.

一方面，她渴望展示自己非凡的才能，另一方面，她又擔心被同齡人取笑。6.

She

wasoverwhelmedwith

mixedfeelingsandcouldnotconcentrateon...7.

Sb.

istrapped/caught/tornbetweenAandB8.

Sb.isstanding

atacrossroads

betweenAandB

某人正站在一個十字路口9.

Itseemstwolittlemenwerefightinginhishead.Onewas...Theotherwas10.

Itseemstwothoughtswerehavingatugofwar（拉鋸戰(zhàn)）.Onewas...Theotherwas...正義戰(zhàn)勝邪惡1.

Afterstrugglingagainsthisselfishideaforalongtime,hedecidedto

dotherightthingandgiveitback.

在與自私的想法斗爭了很長一段時間后，他決定做正確的事，把東西還回去。2.

Ultimately,

itwas

good

that

triumphed/defeatedevilinthisconflict.

最終，在這場沖突中，是正義戰(zhàn)勝了邪惡。3.

Finally,sb'sconscience

triumphedover

his/herevilthought.

某人的良心戰(zhàn)勝了他/她的邪惡思想4.

Eventually,honesty/integrity/fairnesswonover.

最終，誠實/正直/公平贏得了勝利。5.

A'swordsrang/echoed/soundedbyB'sear,remindingBoftheimportanceof…(honesty/integrity/aclearconscience)

A的話在B耳邊回響，提醒B(誠實/正直/問心無愧)的重要性。三、做出正確抉擇后(心態(tài)+升華)1.

Asurgeofpridewelledupinhermind

forsheknewhadmadearightchoice.2.

Handingback...andseeingtheowner'sradiantsmile,sherealizedthathonestywasindeedthebestvirtue/policy.

退還……看到店主燦爛的笑容，她意識到誠實確實是最好的美德/政策。3.

Withtheloadfinallytakenoff

hermind,shegrinnedwithrelief,awaveofpridefloodingoverher.

她終于放下了心頭的負擔，輕松地笑了，一陣幸福的喜悅涌上心頭。4.

Shereturnedhome

withalightenedheart,enjoyingthesweettasteofbeinghome.

她心情輕松地回到家，享受著回家的甜蜜。5.

It's

alifelessoninscribed/imprinted/carvedinsb'smind

thathonestyisthebestpolicy.

誠實為上策，這是銘刻在某人心中的人生教訓。6.

It'saninvaluablelessonIkepttillthisdaythatweshouldalways

sayaresolutenoto

dishonesty.

這是一個寶貴的教訓，我一直保留到今天，我們應該永遠對不誠實說堅決不。微技能之動作描寫

一、動作+情緒：五官神態(tài)①

獨立主格：身體部位+固定動詞非謂語，sbdosth,(with+情緒名詞/聲線)Tearswellinguphiseyes,hethankedthepolicewithatremblingvoice.②

定語從句：主句，whose+五官/情緒/神態(tài)描寫...Motherhuggedthetwinstightly,whosefaceswereglowingwithexcitement.二、動作+分解：動作鏈①

Ving，主句

|

②

主句，Ving

|

③

Havingdonesth,

主句Consideringthethreatofthebear,westayedfarawayfromit.

考慮到熊的威脅，我們離它遠遠的。④

Ved(情緒形容詞),

主句,Ving

（前加情緒）Relievedandoverjoyed,weyelledatthehelicopter,tryingtocatchitsattention.

我們?nèi)玑屩刎?，喜出望外，對著直升機大喊，試圖引起它的注意。⑤

Todosth,

主句（前加目的）Todistractthebear,wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.

為了分散熊的注意力，我們把一片面包扔到很遠的地方。⑥

V1,V2,andV3

（分解動作）

(可換成：Vding,sbdosth,Ving)Werosefromtheseat,walkedoutofthehall,andleftthecinema.三、動作+時間狀語從句：場景轉(zhuǎn)換①

主賓分離（加動作/加地點）：Sbdosth>

改成：Whensth...,sbdosthWhileMarywasthinking,shecaughtsightofanitemonthetable.Shewalkedtowardsitandfoundanote.②

加五感：Sbdosth>

改成：Whensbsaw/thought/heard...,sbdidsth③

加情緒

：情緒/無靈主語句子+as/themoment/whensbdosth品德故事類續(xù)寫典例解析01閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother,Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyinhertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphoneonthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.

ShequicklytoldKeith,“Keith,thegirlleftbehindherhandphone.”Keithlookedatthehandphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthemarket.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,“Youdon’tneedone.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone.”Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword,“Iwanttotakethehandphone.”Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother.“Youcan’t!Whatiftheownerestolookforit?”Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.Then,hetookMary’shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetook

outthepieceofbeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewaspolishingithappily.ButMarytoldhim,“Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatheraboutthis?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone.”Keithsaidquickly,“Iwillsayafriendlentittome.”Marysaid,“Nowyouarelyingtoo.”O(jiān)hdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone.“Thisisthegirl’sphonenumber.Whydon’twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertoeandtakebackherhandphone.”Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Marywasveryhappytohearthat.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.

Hehaddifficultysleeping,uncertainaboutwhatheshoulddo.Ofcourse,helikedthenewhandphone.However,hewasfeelingsorryfortheowner.Whenhethoughthowsadtheyoun