讀后續(xù)寫：搭便車者 講義 高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ineverpickuphitch-hikers(搭便車者)asarule.Idon'tknowwhatmovedmetodosotoday.IwasheadingfromNorthPlattetoBradyandhewasjustoutsideofNorthPlatte.Hejumpedinandsaid,“Thanksforstopping."Isaid,“Noproblem,I'mgoingtoBradyabout23milesuptheroad,andI'lltakeyouthatfar.”Aswewereconversing,Inoticedhesmeltofalcohol.Ialsonoticedhiswrinkled,sundarkenedandunshavenface,hismessyhairandclothes.ButwhatInoticedmostwashisclear,large,blueeyes.Theysaytheeyesarethewindowtothesoul,andIbelieveit,ifyoulookclosely,youcanprettymuchtellthekindofsoulapersonhasthroughtheireyes.Hiseyeswerealmostindescribable.Theyweresospellbinding,notabitofhateinthem.Lookingathisveryroughappearance,Icouldtellhe'dbeendownaveryhardroad.Somehow,despitetheroadhehadbeendown,therewasnohateinhiseyes,onlylove.Iaskedhimifhewantedasmoke,andhesaidyes,soIgavehimone,thenIlethimkeepthewholepack,forwhichheseemedgenuinelygrateful.Istartedaskinghimwherehewasfrom,wherehewasheading,whetherhehadafamily,etc.Hetoldmehehadbeenontheroadforsixdays,comingfromArizonawherehehadrecentlyhadaheartattackandheartsurgery.Hewasprettymuchhealedupbutcouldn'tfindwork.HewasheadingbacktohisbirthplaceofKansasCity,whichiswhereIwasbornaswell.Hesaidhelosthiswifetoabraintumortenyearsago,andthatheneverhadkidsbecausehiswifecouldn'thaveany.Wetalkedtherestoftheway,andIhadafeelingthattherewassomethingaboutthisguythatIcouldn'tputmyfingeron,butitwassomethingspecial.1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:SowegottoBradyandIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline."Paragraph2:AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.文本分析：Themainideaofthestory:Oneday,theprotagonistmadeanexceptionandcarriedahomelessmantocommunicateonthewaytothedestinationbycar.Throughthecommunicationalongtheway,theprotagonistlearnedthatalthoughhislifeexperiencesweredifficult-heartsurgery,strugglingtofindajob,thedeathofhiswife,andhavingnochildren-therewasnohatredintheeyesofthehomelessman,andtheprotagonistalsohadaspecialviewofhim.Thearticleemphasizestheimportanceoftolerance,empathy,andhumanitybydescribingtheinteractionbetweentheprotagonistandthehitchhiker.Itshowsthatbeneaththesurfaceandappearance,everyonehasaheartandstoryworthrespectingandpayingattentionto.Nomatterhowdifficulttheexperiencesofothersmaybe,thepowerofloveandkindnesscantranscendtheboundariesofappearanceandbackground,bringingsincereconnectionsbetweenpeople.Topic:Journey;Strangerinteractions五要素分析--Where--inthecarfromNorthPlattertoBradyWho--I&ahitch-hiker(he)What--helpapoorhitch-hikerWhy--thehitch-hikerwaspoorHow--Itransportthehitch-hikertoBrady,andlearnedsomepersonalexperienceabouthimthroughdiscussion.故事山：開端--Ipickedupahitch-hikerfromNorthPlattetoBradythroughmycar,whichIseldomdidbefore.發(fā)展--Duringtheconversation,Inoticedhisspellbingeyes.Hiseyeswerefilledwithlove,withouthate.高潮--Throughconversation,realizedthatmisfortunedidn'tcomealonetohim.Hesaid&toldtome.Somethingoccurredinmyheart.結(jié)局--SowegottoBradyandlsaid.“Well,thisistheendofmyline.AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.情感線：我--curious,concerned,sympathetic他--calm續(xù)寫第一段要回答的問題：Whatdidhedo?(words,action...)Whatwasmyresponse?Whatwasthefeeling？WhatdidIsay&do?(money&help...)續(xù)寫第二段要回答的問題：Whatdidhereacttomyhelp?Whatwasmyfeelingafterhisresponse?anyaction?Ending:whatdidIlearnfromthisexperience?語料積累：笑:Grin:AwidesmilethatusuallyshowsteethHegrinnedfromeartoearwhenhesawthesurprise.2.Beam:Aradiantandjoyfulsmile.露齒笑、咧嘴笑喜笑顏開、面露喜色Shebeamedatheraccomplishment.3.Smirk:Aself-satisfiedorsmugsmileHesmirkedathiscleverremark."傻笑得意笑、Twinkle:Asmilethatisaccompaniedbyasparkleintheeyes.Hereyestwinkledasshesmiledatthejoke.欣喜、閃爍5.Crackingasmile:Tobeginsmiling,usuallyinresponsetoafunnyoramusingsituation.Thecomedianfinallymanagedtocrackasmileoutofthestoicaudience.面帶微笑6.Smilingfromeartoear:Tosmileverybroadly,almosttotheextentthatitreachesbothears.Thelittlegirlreceivedasurprisegift,andshewassmilingfromeartoear.下水文：SowegottoBradyandlsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline.”Uponhearingwhatlsaid,heshowedhisgratitude,accompaniedbyasoftsmile.Turningtolookathiminthebackseat,Imethiscapturinggaze,somehow,loadedwithahintofremorse.Worsestill,lwasabletograspwhathehadendured,whichwastransformedintothespecificpicturesthatcamefloodingmymind.Withouthesitation,stretchedouthandstoseizehiscloth,claiminginaresolutevoice,"Well,maybelcanoffersomenecessaryhelpifneeded.AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.Hisinitialshockgraduallysubsidedreplacedbyaradiantsmilethatspreadacrosshisface,afterbeinginformedthatlwouldprovidehimwithsomefinancialsupport.“Thankyou.Hereplied,hiseyesglisteningwithasilentmessageofinnerjoy.Nestingagainsttheseatbackrest,hewhisperedgently,“Everythingwillgowell,sodon'tworry.”Whatheutteredfellperfectlywithintherealmofmyanticipation,whileapangofadmirationwelledupfromtheinnermostpartofmyheart.Ashesteppedoutofthecar,myeyesremainedfixatedonhim.Eventothisday.thememoryofhisevesfilledwithloveandgratituderemainsvividlyimprintedinmymind,actingasaneverlastingwellspringofinspiration,propellingmetolendahelpinghandtothoseinneed.語料積累:Imethiscaptivatinggaze,somehow,loadedwithahintofremorseclaiminginaresolutevoice,Hisinitialshockgraduallysubsided,replacedbyaradiantsmilethatspreadacrosshisfacehiseyesglisteningwithasilentmessageofinnerjoyWhatheutteredfellperfectlywithintherealmofmyanticipationactingasaneverlastingwellspringofinspiration參考范文：

SowegottoBradyandIsaid,”Well,thisistheendofmyline."

Helookedatmewithgratitudeinhiseyesandthankedmeagainfortheride.Ashesteppedout