Unit3ConservationWritingWorkshop課件-高中英語北師大版2019選擇性

新北師大版高中英語選擇性必修一Unit3Conservation

WritingWorkshopWarmupBrainstorm.Farmanimalskept:cows,sheep,pigs,deer,donkey,rabbit,poultry(chickens,ducks,geese),fish…Others:feed,fodder(飼料),onalargescale,automatic,havenofreedom,cruel(cruelty),kill/slaughter,market,highproduction,meat(pork,beef,mutton,chicken,etc.),environmentalproblems…Warmup1Whatcanyouseefromthevideo?2Howdoyoufeelafterseeingthem?3Areyoufororagainstfactoryfarming?Why?PairWork:watchingthevideoclip,discussthequestions.ReadforWriting：FocusonStructureReadtheessayagain.Matchthefunctionstoeachparagraph.Para.1______ Para.3______Para.2______ Para.4______aconclusion(youropinion)bargumentsagainstthetopiccintroductiontothetopicdargumentsforthetopiccdbaPara.1IntroductiontothetopicPara.2ArgumentsforthetopicPara.3ArgumentsagainstthetopicPara.4Conclusion(youropinion)Argument+supportingdetailsArgument+supportingdetailsConclusion+youropinionReadforWriting1Whatisthemaintopicoftheessay?Theprosandcons(advantagesanddisadvantages/forandagainstopinion)offactoryfarming.Readtheessay.Answerthequestions.

Factoryfarminginvolveskeepingfarmanimalsinsidebuildingstoincreasetheproductionofmeatoreggs.Accordingtoaninstitute,“74%oftheworld’spoultry,43%ofitsbeefand68%ofitseggsareproducedinthisway.”ReadforWriting2Whatarethemainargumentsandsupportingdetailsused“for”and“against”factoryfarming?Themainargumentforfactoryfarming:apartfrombeingalotcheaperthantraditionalororganicfarming,itprovidesmorefoodforaworldpopulationthathasalreadyreachedsevenbillion,accordingtotheUnitedNations.Supportingdetails:notusemanyworkers,lowcosts,highproduction;sufferfromfewerdiseases.Themainargumentforfactoryfarmingisthat,apartfrombeingalotcheaperthantraditionalororganicfarming,itprovidesmorefoodforaworldpopulationthathasalreadyreachedsevenbillion,accordingtotheUnitedNations.Asfactoryfarmsdon’tusemanyworkers,thecostsarelowandtheproductionishigh.Moreover,factory-farmedanimalssufferfromfewerdiseasesthanthoselivingoutside.ReadforWriting2Whatarethemainargumentsandsupportingdetailsused“for”and“against”factoryfarming?Themainargumentagainstfactoryfarming:opponentsoffarmingsaythatitiscrueltotheanimals.Supportingdetails:bekeptinsmallplaces,sufferterriblestress,haveanegativeimpactontheenvironment(wasteproducts,chemicalstocontrolinsects,drugstotreatdiseases).

Ontheotherhand,opponentsoffactoryfarmingsaythatitiscrueltotheanimals.Forinstance,manyfarmanimalsarekeptinsmallspaceswheretheycanhardlymove.Peoplewhofightforanimalrightsclaimthattheseanimalssufferterriblestress.Inadditiontothis,factoryfarminghasanegativeimpactontheenvironmentbecauseitcreatesalotofwasteproducts,andusesalotofchemicalstocontrolinsectsanddrugstotreatdisease(UKFarmingToday,2013).ReadforWriting3Whatisthewriter’sopinionaboutfactoryfarming?Weshouldtrytoreducethiskindoffarming,althoughwewouldhavetopaymoreforoureggsandmeat.

Tosumup,despiteproducingcheapfood,factoryfarmingisbadfortheplanetandfortheanimalsthemselves.Inmyopinion,weshouldtrytoreducethiskindoffarming,althoughwewouldhavetopaymoreforoureggsandmeat.ReadforWriting4Howdoestheauthorpresent“for”and“against”factoryfarming?Para.1IntroductiontothetopicPara.2ArgumentsforthetopicPara.3ArgumentsagainstthetopicPara.4Conclusion(youropinion)Argument+supportingdetailsArgument+supportingdetailsConclusion+youropinionFocusonLanguageaccordingtoAccordingtoaninstitute,“74%ofworld’spoultry…areproducedinthisway.”moreoverMoreover,factory-farmedanimalssufferfromfewerdiseases…ontheotherhandOntheotherhand,opponentsoffactoryfarmingsaythatitiscrueltotheanimals.forinstanceForinstance,manyfarmanimalsarekeptinsmallspaceswheretheycanhardlymove.inadditiontoInadditiontothis,factoryfarmingasanegativeimpactontheenvironment.inmyopinionInmyopinion,weshouldtrytoreducethiskindoffarming,althoughwewouldhavetopaymoreforoureggsandmeat.LinkingExpressionsFocusonLanguageWhichofthelinkingexpressionsintheSentenceBuilderhasthefollowingfunction?1summarizinginformation2addingnewinformation3givingexamples4providingsourcesofinformation5contrastingstatementsSentenceBuilderFocusonLanguageaccordingtoAccordingtoaninstitute,“74%ofworld’spoultry…areproducedinthisway.”moreoverMoreover,factory-farmedanimalssufferfromfewerdiseases…ontheotherhandOntheotherhand,opponentsoffactoryfarmingsaythatitiscrueltotheanimals.forinstanceForinstance,manyfarmanimalsarekeptinsmallspaceswheretheycanhardlymove.inadditiontoInadditiontothis,factoryfarmingasanegativeimpactontheenvironment.inmyopinionInmyopinion,weshouldtrytoreducethiskindoffarming,althoughwewouldhavetopaymoreforoureggsandmeat.2addingnewinformation5contrastingstatements3givingexamples2addingnewinformation1summarizinginformation4providingsourcesofinformationLinkingExpressionsWriting:Outlining.CompletetheoutlineofyouressayonthestatementyouhavechosenbasedonActivity3.體裁話題時(shí)態(tài)人稱文章架構(gòu)議論文ArgumentativeWriting以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；以第三人稱為主第一段：提出論點(diǎn)：主題是青少年出國留學(xué)第二段：陳述贊成與反對的理由第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)FocusonLanguageMoreusefulexpressionsTointroducepoints/argumentsfor&against:FocusonLanguageinaddition(tothis),furthermore,moreover,besides,apartfrom,whatismore,aswellas,nottomention(thefact)that,also,notonly…butalso/aswell/both…and,thereisanothersidetotheissue/question/argumentof…ontheotherhand,however,still,yet,but,nonetheless,nevertheless,evenso,although,though,eventhough,while,whereas,despite/inspiteof(thefactthat),regardlessofthefactthat…Toaddmorepointstothesametopic:Tomakecontrastingpoints:FocusonLanguageGivingreasons,examplesandfacts:Drafting.

UseyouroutlineandtheWritingHelptowriteyourfirstdraft.WritingHelpWritinga“For”and“Against”EssayIt’simportantto:haveaclearargumentstatement;include“for”and“against”opinions;supportyourownopinionwithexamplesandotherdetails;sumupyourargumentinthefinalparagraph.Editing.

Edityouressayinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.Doesthewritergiveaclearstatement“for”or“against”theissue?Doesthestructureflowwell(statement,mainargumentwithsupportingdetails,otherargumentsandconclusion)?Doesthewriteruseavarietyoflinkingexpressions?Doyoufeelthatthewriterhasastrongbeliefintheargumenthe/sheispresenting?EditingSheet1.Weshouldonlyhaveorganicfarming.

organic:relatingtofarmingorgardeningmethodsofgrowingfoodwithoutusingartificialchemicals,orproducedorgrownbythesemethods

adj.不使用化肥的，有機(jī)的，綠色的egOrganicfarming

isbetterfortheenvironment.

有機(jī)耕作對環(huán)境較為有利。organicfood/vegetables/milketc有機(jī)食品/蔬菜/牛奶等egTheshopsellsorganicfood.這家商店出售有機(jī)食品。organicwine有機(jī)葡萄酒2.Factoryfarminginvolveskeepingfarmanimalsinsidebuildings…

involve:

ifanactivityorsituationinvolvessomething,thatthingispartofitoraresultofitvt.包含，需要egWhatwillthejobinvolve?

這份工作包括什么？vt.

牽涉，牽連；（使）參與，參加involvein使?fàn)窟B；使陷入；使聚精會神egTrytoinvolveasmanychildrenaspossibleinthegame.盡量讓多一些孩子參與游戲。Iseemtohave

involvedmyselfinsomethingIdon'tunderstand.我似乎卷入了一件我并不知情的事情當(dāng)中。根據(jù)括號內(nèi)的漢語提示補(bǔ)全下面句子。1)Therewasaserioustrafficincident___________________________(涉及一群年輕人).2)Paintingtheroom___________________________(就需要把鋼琴搬出去).3)Tom___________________________(熱衷于集郵).4)________________________(家務(wù)事包括做飯),washingdishes,sweepingandcleaning.involvingagroupofyouthsinvolvedmovingoutthepianoisinvolvedincollectingstampsHouseworkinvolvescooking3.Forinstants,manyfarmanimalsarekeptinsmallspaceswheretheycanhardlymove.

forinstance:

forexample例如egLetyourchildmakesomeofthesmalldecisionsconcerninghisdailyroutine.For

instance,allowhimtochoosewhatclotheshewearsattheweekend.

讓孩子在日常生活中作一些小決定。比如，讓他自己決定周末穿什么衣服。4.Peoplewhofightforanimalrightsclaimthat….

claim:tostatethatsomethingistrue,eventhoughithasnotbeenprovedvt.聲稱;斷言;主張

eg

Theproductclaims‘tomakeyouthinwithoutdieting’.

該產(chǎn)品聲稱“不節(jié)食也可讓你瘦”。n.聲稱；（根據(jù)權(quán)利而提出的）要求egCanyougiveanyevidenceto

support

your

claim?你能提供證據(jù)支援你的說法嗎？【拓展】

haveaclaimonsb.

對某人有……的要求權(quán)makenoclaim（表示不能做某事）自認(rèn)為不