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01試題原題

第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Inhighschool,Iwasastraight

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Astudent,amemberofmanyschoolclubs,andareceiverofmanyrewards.However,Ihadbeensubjectedto（受到......折磨）peerpressure.Wantingtobe“cool!”，Istartedgoingtopartiesanddrinking,drunkbeyondrecognition.Mylifetookaturnfortheworse.However,theexperienceinonesummerprogramtaughtmealesson:neverdosomethingyoubelieveiswrongjusttogaintheapprovalofothers.

InJune,Iworkedpart-timeatarestaurant.ThedaybeforeIleftfortheprogram,oneco-workerofferedmehisdriver’slicense,tellingmetohavefuninQuebecsincewetwoalmostlookedthesame.I’dseenfriendswalkintoliquor（酒）storeswithfakelicensesandcomeoutcarryingatwelve-packofbeer,smilingproudly.SoItookthelicense,butIpromisedmyselfthatIwouldn’tuseit.However,Ieasilygotcarriedaway.

Onthefirstnightoftheprogram,whilewalkingaround,mynewfriendsandIcameacrossaliquorstore.Kai

askedifanyonehadafakelicense.Aftereveryoneshookhishead,Iclearedmythroatanddeclared,

“IDo.”

Witheveryone’sadmirationandKai’stwentydollarsandinstruction,Iboldlyagreedtotakeonthetaskwithoutthinking.

Imanagedto

buyacaseofbeer.Theboyscheeredandgavemepatsontheback.“You’retheman,”

someonesaidto

me.Thepraiseboostedmyself-confidence.

Thelast

nighttherewasaparty.Afewofmyfriendsinsistedthatwedrinkbeforethedance.Theyaskedme,

the

“IDman”

tobuyalcohol.Toearntheiradmiration,Itookthecashandboughtwhattheywanted.Laterthatnight,

IwasenjoyingmyselfwhenKaisaidnervously,“Cristianisn’tokay.”

Worriedformyfriend,Iwenttoassessthesituation.Clearly,Cristianwasoverlydrunkandalmostunconscious.注意：1.

所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.

Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.

02試題分析線索：astraight-AstudentsubjectedtopeerpressureWantingtobe“Cool”neverdosomethingthatyoubelieveiswrongjusttogaintheapprovalofothers.（主題句）“You’retheman,”someonesaidtome.Thepraiseboostedmyself-confidence.情節(jié)：Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.Cristian的情況（趴在地上；顫抖；流血）；我們的反應（恐懼，驚慌；叫911）；送醫(yī)院搶救Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector’soffice.我的反應（羞愧，告訴真相）；我接受的懲罰；我的感悟（主題）二、翻譯填空Version1:（下水文）Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.三個場景：Cristian的情況（趴在地上；顫抖；流血）；我們的反應（恐懼，驚慌；叫911）；送醫(yī)院搶救①Hewas

falling

flatontheground,body

trembling,bloodflowing/oozing.(趴在地上，四肢抽搐，血往外流)②Thescenedid

shock

me./Thesightleftus

rooted

toground.(嚇傻了)Kai

knelt

besideCristian,desperatelytryingtostopthebleeding,

exclaiming

inpanic,"Quick,call911!"Ittookamomentformeto

compose

myself,andIimmediatelydialedforhelp.(跪，喊道，冷靜)③Theseconds

ticked

byworryingly.After

what

feltlike

forever,theemergencyworkersfinallyarrivedand

rushed

himtothenearbyhospital.Thatnight,weanxiouslypacedoutsidetheemergencyroom,only

breathing

asighofreliefwhenthedoctor

assured

usthatCristianwasoutofdanger.（滴答，很長時間，送，呼吸，確保）Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector’soffice.三個場景：我的反應（羞愧，告訴真相）；我接受的懲罰；我的感悟（主題）

①Withmyhead

bowed,cheeks

burning,I

stumbled

throughthewholesituation.IwaswellawarethatIwastheone

responsible

foreverything.（低著頭，面紅耳赤，結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地）②Theprogramdirector

cast

aserious

eye

atme,sayingthatIhadtowithdrawfromtheproject.IwishedIcouldfinda

hole

tohidein;I

deserved

thepunishment.（嚴厲看；鉆地洞；罪有應得）③Walkingoutoftheoffice,Ifeltmyheart

sank

witheachstep,asifa

voice

insidewarnedme:compromisingmyvaluesunderpeerpressureforothers'approvalisnotjustfoolishbutcomeswithahigh

price!（心情沉重；內(nèi)線的聲音；代價）Version2:(官方）Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.

①Hisfacewaspale,hisbodywaslimp(軟弱的）,hiseyesrolledback,andhisbreathswerefrighteninglyslow.

②Panicspreadthroughtheroomaswerealizedtheseverityofthesituation.Wegatheredaroundhim,desperatelytryingtofigureoutwhattodonext.Quickly,someonecalled911andCristianwasrushedintothehospital.

③LaterIwastoldCristian’sconditionwasserious,butfortunatelyhedidn’tsufferanypermanentdamageasaresultoftimelyrescue.Thewholenightfoundmetossingandturning,uneasyaboutthemessIhadcaused.Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector’soffice.

①Iknewthattherewasnopointindenyingthetruth.SoIadmittedeverything.Likeacaughtcriminal,Iwasovercomewithguilt,droopingmyheadinshame.

②ThencamethepunishmentthatIlostthechancetojoinintheprogram,whichwaslessseverethanwhatI’dexpected.

③Backhome,IrealizedthatIcouldn’tcontinuedownthispathofseekingapprovalatanycost.ItwastimetoprioritizemyvaluesandIvowednottoletpeerpressurecloudmyjudgmentandleadmeastrayagain.三、必須掌握的短語檢測1.清了清嗓子2.不加思索地接受了任務3.鼓勵性地拍了拍我4.平撲在地上5.把我們嚇得呆住了6.驚慌地大叫

7.使自己鎮(zhèn)定下來8.擔心地度過每一秒9.匆忙把他送到附近的醫(yī)院10.松了口氣11.低著頭，臉頰發(fā)燙12.支支吾吾得告知整個情況13.嚴肅地看著我14.找個洞躲起來15.每走一步，我的心都跟著下沉16.內(nèi)心的聲音警告我17.他的眼睛翻白18.他的呼吸可怕地緩慢下來19.恐慌在房間里蔓延開來20.整夜我輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)21.就像被抓住的罪犯22.充滿內(nèi)疚23.羞愧地低下頭24.不要讓同齡人的壓力影響我的判斷25.把我引入歧途Key:1.clearedmythroat2.takeonthetaskwithoutthinking3.gavemepatsontheback4.fallflatontheground5.leftusrootedtoground6.excl