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高考英語突破書面表達(dá)基礎(chǔ)講與練(一)

PartA寫作基本理論2巧妙轉(zhuǎn)換句型，輕松應(yīng)對(duì)寫作

在高考英語寫作題中，由于時(shí)間的限制，許多考生寫出的句子顯得過于單調(diào)、呆板。其實(shí)，要想在有

限的時(shí)間里寫出豐富、生動(dòng)的句子并不難。只要對(duì)所學(xué)的英語句式加以轉(zhuǎn)換，就?定能使寫出來的句子更

加準(zhǔn)確、得體、簡潔、靈活。

一、詞與詞之間的轉(zhuǎn)換

1.形容詞轉(zhuǎn)換為名詞

Thispaintingisveryvaluable.

2.動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換為名詞

Ourhometownhaschangedalottheseyears.

二、詞與從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Ashewastiredandhungry,theboywasunwillingtomoveon.

三、非謂語動(dòng)詞與從句之間的轉(zhuǎn)換

1.動(dòng)名詞和從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.

2.分詞和從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

(I)現(xiàn)在分詞與從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Ashewaslyinginthegrass,hethoughtofhisparentslivinginthecountryside.

(2)過去分詞與從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Onceitisseen,itwillneverbeforgotten.

3.不定式與從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Hespokeloudersothattheaudiencecouldhearhimclearly.

四、獨(dú)立主格與從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

(1)Ifweatherpennits,weshallgothereonfoot.

Weatherpermitting,weshallgothereonfoot.(邏輯主語+現(xiàn)在分詞)

(2)Ifeverythingisconsidered,hisplanseemstobemoreworkable.

Everythingtakenintoconsideration,hisplanseemstobemoreworkable.

(邏輯主語+過去分詞)

Whenthiswasdone,wewenthome.

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Thisdone,wewenthome.

Givengoodluck,Iwillearnmoremoneythanallofyou.

Goodluckgiven,Iwillearnmoremoneythanallofyou.

(3)Becausetherewasnothingtodo,weplayedgames.

Therebeingnothingtodo,weplayedgames.(being不可省略)

五、句與句之間的轉(zhuǎn)換

1.簡單句與復(fù)合句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.

2.一般句式與強(qiáng)調(diào)句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Igraduatedfromtheuniversitylastsummer.

3.條件句與祈使句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Ifyougothroughthegate,youwillfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.

4.賓語從句與狀語從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Iwon'tbelievewhathesays.

六、“二態(tài)”之間的轉(zhuǎn)換

1.時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換

Thebellisringingnow.

2.主動(dòng)語態(tài)變?yōu)楸粍?dòng)語態(tài)

Peoplesuggestedthatthemeetingbeputoff.

七、其他形式的轉(zhuǎn)換

1.正常語序與倒裝語序的轉(zhuǎn)換

ThoughI'mweakIwillmaketheeffort.

Theywillnevergiveupthestrugglefbrsuccess

2.陳述語氣與虛擬語氣的轉(zhuǎn)換

Theshipdidn'tsinkwithallonboardbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain.

PartB寫作必備素材意外事故、天災(zāi)人禍

>Iwaswalkingalongthestreetwhenaterribleaccidenthappenedinthestreet.

>Onedaysomethingunpleasanthappened.

AThegirlfelloffherbikeandwasbadlyhurt.

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>Fortunately,theinjuredpeopleweresenttohospitalwithoutdelay.

>Anelderlymanwashitbyacarwhilehewascrossingtheroad.

>Hefelldowntothegroundwithacty.

>Thegirlwastoofrightenedtomove.

>Itwassoonfoundoutthatthedriverhaddrunktoomuchwinebeforedriving.

>Theaccidentdelayedallthetrafficforanhourandcausedthedamageof$80,000

>Lotsofpeoplelosttheirlivesinthefloods.

>Thebigfloods,whichoccurredin1998,causedgreatlosses.

AAbigfirebrokeoutinanofficebuildinginabusystreet.Thecauseofthefirehasbeenunknown.Itisbeing

investigated.

>Thefirelastedabouttwohoursandwasfinallyputoutintheafternoon.

>Asaresult,thethree-storiedbuildingwasdestroyed,50peoplewerekilled,andmorethan200wereinjured.

>Uptothepresent,thecauseoftheaccidentisstillunknown.

近年來高考英語書面表達(dá)中的難句

第二節(jié)：有關(guān)舉行各種活動(dòng)、晚會(huì)、講演

1.ThereisgoingtobeapartyfortheAustralianfriends.ItwillbeheldinRoom302at7:30tomorrowevening.

2.WangHao,aprofessorfromBeijingUniversity,willgiveusalectureonspacescienceattheChildren'spalace

at3:30tomorrowafternoon.

3.ThereisgoingtobeareportonthedevelopmentoftheworldcomputersattheYouthPalaceat9:00am,May

24.

4.ThereisgoingtobeanEnglishspeechcontestintheschoolmeetinghallat3:00pmMarch12.

5.TheStudentUnionwillholdanexhibitiononpaintingsinRoom402.Itwilllastaweek,thatis,fromApril9to

April15.

6.ThereisgoingtobecelebrationonTeachers9Dayintheschoolmeetinghallat2:30pm,

FridaySeptember9.

7.ThereisgoingtobeacelebrationonMarch8inordertopraisethewomenteachersofourschoolfortheirgreat

devotioninthepastyears.Itwillbeheldintheroofgardenofthemainbuildingat7:30pm,WednesdayMarch7

th.

8.InordertoimproveourEnglishstudies,thereisgoingtobeanEnglishevening.ItwillbeheldinMeetingHall

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2at7:00pm,ThursdayMay24th.

9.Thereisgoingtobeaget-togetherbetweentheCanadianandChinesefriendsattheYouthPalaceat3:00pm,

TuesdayFebruary4th.

10.ThereisgoingtobeapartyfortheoldinWanXiaHolidayVillageat9:00am,MondaySeptember28th.

11.Thereisgoingtobeaget-togetherforcelebratingNewYear'sDayontheplaygroundat2:40pm,Saturday

December31st.

12.ThereisgoingtobeacelebrationonMother'sDayinordertopraisetheirdevotionofbringingupchildrenin

thepastyears.ItwillbeheldinJinGuHolidayVillageat3:00pm,MondayMay5th.

13.Mr.Green,aprofessorfromNewYorkUniversity,isgoingtogiveusalectureonhowtoprotectusfrom

Aids.ItwillbegivenattheChildren'sPalaceat8:00amSundayAugust17th.

14.RomioandJulie,oneofShakespeare'sfamousplays,willbeputonatthecapitalTheatrefromtomorrow.

15.Titanic,aworld-famousfilm,willbeshownatthePeople'sCinemafromJune2nd.

16.Therewillbeapartycelebratingtheoldscientistonhisninety'sbirthdayinRoom103at10:00am,

WednesdayFebruary15.

17.ThereisgoingtobeafootballgamebetweenNo.20MiddleSchoolandourschoolat10:00am,SundayMay

18.AterriblefirebrokeoutatHongXinHotelat3:00am,FridayApril13.

19.MrsWhite,anexpertfromtheWorldClimateOrganization,willgiveusalectureontherapidchangesofthe

greenhouseeffect.Itwillbegivenattheschoolsciencecentreat9:00am,SaturdayMay23.

20.TheStudentUnionwillholdacompetitionofsingingontheplaygroundat2:30pm,SaturdayMay20.

PartC09年高考寫作基本功訓(xùn)練（詞組部分）

51.登門拜訪52.真相大白53.伸手去夠某物

54.緊緊抓住某人的手/衣領(lǐng)/胳膊55.詢問究竟是怎么回事

56.經(jīng)過公園/郵局/市場/廣場/電影院/體育館/學(xué)校/醫(yī)院/賓館/劇院/火車站

57.查閱字典/電話號(hào)碼/住址”網(wǎng)址58.熱情接待某人

59.認(rèn)真對(duì)待某事60.小心提防某事61.嚴(yán)格要求某人

62.嚴(yán)格對(duì)待某事63.在火車站/飛機(jī)場接人64.順道接人

65.抓小偷66.直著往前走67.把…沖走

68.破壞心情/假日69.突然轉(zhuǎn)彎70.請(qǐng)某人吃飯/喝茶

71.從口袋里掏某物72.騰空抽屜/壁櫥73.苦思冥想

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74.做大掃除75.往后/四周/上下看76.點(diǎn)燈/蠟燭

77.生火78.開燈/電視/收音機(jī)79.關(guān)燈/關(guān)煤氣/水龍頭

80.與某人握手81.幫某人一把82.昂著頭

83.過馬路/橋/河84.收拾房間/桌子85.系鞋帶/扣扣子

86.與某人相處好87.擦汗88.組織課外活動(dòng)

89.參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐90.接到某人的電話91.完成寫作

92.在河中掙扎93.獲一等獎(jiǎng)94.得到1000元獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)

95.與某人談心96.到達(dá)現(xiàn)場97.不辭而行

98.收割小麥/水稻/莊稼99.與某人爭論有關(guān)…100.把…放歸自然

09年高考寫作基本功訓(xùn)練(句子漢譯英部分)

1)通過這次故鄉(xiāng)之行，我學(xué)到了不少東西。

2)近年來，我校越來越多的學(xué)生考上了大學(xué)。

3)在馬路上行走時(shí)，請(qǐng)記住行人靠右。如果騎車上學(xué)，你必須要有騎車許可證。

4)當(dāng)時(shí)，我還在ParkRoad道上向東走，這時(shí)一位老人從街對(duì)面的公園走出來。

5)他的爸爸仔細(xì)聽了后很高興，并表示同意他的觀點(diǎn)。

6)他說他決不會(huì)因此而影響學(xué)習(xí)的。

7)你來后請(qǐng)住在我家，我們?nèi)叶紩?huì)歡迎你。

8)下午4：00我們告別了爺爺和叔叔乘車往回走。

9)我們打算建一個(gè)小花園，供我們讀書休息。

10)大路的一旁是新建的教學(xué)大樓。

11)我最喜愛的運(yùn)動(dòng)是夏天游泳、冬季滑冰。

12)時(shí)間過得真快，不知不覺就到了我們向農(nóng)場工人說再見的時(shí)候了。

13)我打算今后每年回故鄉(xiāng)一次。

14)我們熱愛我們的學(xué)校并為它感到自豪。

15)有人認(rèn)為英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)當(dāng)從兒童時(shí)期開始，因?yàn)樾『⒆佑洃浟?，能記住許多單詞。

16)他叫了一聲便跌倒在地。那輛轎車沒有停下反而徑直向西飛快駛?cè)ァ?/p>

17)小明的爸爸鼓勵(lì)他發(fā)奮學(xué)習(xí)，爭取在考試中取得優(yōu)異成績。

18)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)有助于結(jié)交朋友，通過網(wǎng)上聊天，學(xué)生們能自由地表達(dá)思想感情，甚至得到利于外語學(xué)習(xí)

方面的幫助。

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19)如果小孩子同時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)漢語“拼音”和英語，就容易將兩者弄混。

20)李明對(duì)電腦很感興趣，而且學(xué)起來進(jìn)步很快。

PartD書面表達(dá)周周練

EX.1:假設(shè)你是李華、有一位澳大利亞朋友Rose托你在北京找一份工作.你在上看到了一則招聘廣告，認(rèn)為

對(duì)她很合適.請(qǐng)你用英文寫一封信，告知她此事.廣告原文如下：

FOREIGNTEACHERSWANTED

ThetrainDepartmentoftheLadderInstituteisrunninganEnglishcourseforchildrenand

grownups.

Requirements:

1.NativeEnglishspeaker

2.Universitydegreeineducationorrelatedfield.

3.Foreignexpertcertificate(證書)

Ifyouareinterested,pleasecontact:

Tel:o86-oio-69019433Fax:086/p>

E-mail:Lhceby@BeijingLadderInstitute,PRC.

注意：1.信的開頭已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

信的內(nèi)容必須包括廣告所有內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

詞數(shù):100左右.

DearRose,

Howareyougettingalong?

￡X.2;卜面是有關(guān)英語演講比賽的消息,請(qǐng)據(jù)此用英語寫一通知。(100詞左右)

活動(dòng)英語演講比賽(English-speakingContest)

目^的提高英語口語

組織者學(xué)生會(huì)

參加范圍高中(senior)學(xué)生

報(bào)名時(shí)間5月25日以前

報(bào)名地點(diǎn)學(xué)生會(huì)辦公室

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比賽時(shí)間6月9日下午4：00

比賽地點(diǎn)教學(xué)樓五樓禮堂(auditorium)

評(píng)講前五名優(yōu)勝者獲獎(jiǎng)

參考答案

巧妙轉(zhuǎn)換句型，輕松應(yīng)對(duì)寫作

在高考英語寫作題中，由于時(shí)間的限制，許多考生寫出的句子顯得過于單調(diào)、呆板。其實(shí)，要想在有限的

時(shí)間里寫出豐富、生動(dòng)的句子并不難.只要對(duì)所學(xué)的英語句式加以轉(zhuǎn)換，就一定能使寫出來的句子更加準(zhǔn)

確、得體、簡潔、靈活。

一、詞與詞之間的轉(zhuǎn)換

1.形容詞轉(zhuǎn)換為名詞

Thispaintingisveryvaluable.

Thispaintingisofgreatvalue.

2.動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換為名詞

Ourhometownhaschangedalottheseyears.

Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowntheseyears.

二、詞與從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Ashewastiredandhungry,theboywasunwillingtomoveon.

Tiredandhungry,theboywasunwillingtomoveon.

三、非謂語動(dòng)詞與從句之間的轉(zhuǎn)換

1.動(dòng)名詞和從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.

Onhearinghisarrival,pleasegivemeane-mail.

2.分詞和從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

(1)現(xiàn)在分詞與從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Ashewaslyinginthegrass,hethoughtofhisparentslivinginthe

countryside.

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Lyinginthegrass,hethoughtofhisparentslivinginthecountryside.

(2)過去分詞與從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Onceitisseen,itwillneverbeforgotten.

Onceseen,itwillneverbeforgotten.

3.不定式與從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Hespokeloudersothattheaudiencecouldhearhimclearly.

Tomakehimselfheardclearly,hespokelouder.

四、獨(dú)立主格與從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

(1)Ifweatherpermits,weshallgothereonfoot.

Weatherpermitting,weshallgothereonfoot.(邏輯主語+現(xiàn)在分詞)

Shewateredtheflowersandherhusbandfedthebirds.

Shewateredtheflowers,herhusbandfeedingthebirds.

(2)Ifeverythingisconsidered,hisplanseemstobemoreworkable.

Everythingtakenintoconsideration,hisplanseemstobemoreworkable.

(邏輯主語+過去分詞)

Whenthiswasdone,wewenthome.

Thisdone,wewenthome.

Givengoodluck,Iwillearnmoremoneythanallofyou.

Goodluckgiven,Iwillearnmoremoneythanallofyou.

(3)Becausetherewasnothingtodo,weplayedgames.

Therebeingnothingtodo,weplayedgames.(being不可省略)

五、句與句之間的轉(zhuǎn)換

1.簡單句與復(fù)合句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.

Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.

2.一般句式與強(qiáng)調(diào)句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Igraduatedfromtheuniversitylastsummer.

ItwaslastsummerthatIgraduatedfromtheuniversity.

3.條件句與祈使句的轉(zhuǎn)換

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Ifyougothroughthegate,youwillfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.

Gothroughthegate,andyouwillfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.

4.賓語從句與狀語從句的轉(zhuǎn)換

Iwon*tbelievewhathesays.

Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon'tbelievehim.

六、“二態(tài)”之間的轉(zhuǎn)換

1.時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換

Thebellisringingnow.

Theregoesthebell.

2.主動(dòng)語態(tài)變?yōu)楸粍?dòng)語態(tài)

Peoplesuggestedthatthemeetingbeputoff.

Itissuggestedthatthemeetingbeputoff.

七、其他形式的轉(zhuǎn)換

1.正常語序與倒裝語序的轉(zhuǎn)換

ThoughPmweakIwillmaketheeffort.

WeakasIam,Iwillmaketheeffort.

Theywillnevergiveupthestruggleforsuccess.

Neverwilltheygiveupthestrugglefbrsuccess.

2.陳述語氣與虛擬語氣的轉(zhuǎn)換

Theshipdidn*tsinkwithallonboardbecausethereweretheeffortsofthe

captain.

Butfbrtheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunkwithallonboard.

詞組翻譯

51.callat/dropinatone'shouse52.cometolight/comeout

53.reachfbrsth/holdoutone'shandfbrsth54.catch/seizesbbythearm/hand/collar

55.askaboutwhatisthematter

56.passthepostoffice/park/market/square/cinema/stadium/school/hospital/hotel/theater/railway

station/shoppingmall/concerthall

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57.refertothedictionary/lookupthetelephonenumber/one^address/webaddress

58.receivesbwannly/kindly59.takesthseriously/becarefulwithsth

60.becarefulofsth61.bestrictwithsb

62.bestrictinsth63.meetsbattherailwaystation/airport

64.picksbupbytheroadside65.stopthethief/catchthethief

66.go/walkstraightahead67.washsthaway

68.ruintheholiday/one^heart69.makeaquickturn

70.treatsbtocoffee/tea/ameal(invitesbtodinner)71.drawsthoutofthepocket

72.emptythecupboard/drawer73.thinkhard/twice

74.dothethoroughcleaning75.lookbehind/around/upanddown

76.lightacandle/lamp77.makeafire

78.turnonthelight/radio/TV79.switchoffthetap/light/gas

80.shakehandswithsb81.givesbahandwith...

82.holdone'sheadhigh83.crosstheroad/street/river/bridge

84.clearup/tidyup/douptheroom85.doupone'sshoes/buttons

86.getalong/comealongwellwithsb87.wipeoffone'ssweat

88.organizetheout-of^classactivities89.takepartinthesocialpractice

90.receiveatelephonecallfromsb91.getthroughthecomposition

92.struggleinthemiddleoftheriver93.getthefirstplacein...

94.get1,000dollarsasareward95.haveaheart-to-hearttalkwithsb/awordwithsb

96.arriveatthespot97.leavewithoutsayinggood-bye

98.getin/harvestcrops/wheat/rice99.arguewithsbaboutsth

100.setsthfreetonature

PartD書面表達(dá)周周練

DearRose,

Howareyougettingalong?:1knowyouwanttofindajobinBeijing.Ireadanadintoday's21st

Century,whichsaidthatBeijingLadderInstitutehasanEnglishcourseforchildrenandgrown-ups,andthat

theyneednative-speakerEnglishteachers,whomusthaveauniversitydegreeineducationorotherrelated

fieldsandaforeignexpertcertificate.Ithinkyouaretherightpersontheywant.

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Ifyouareinterestedinit,pleasedirectlycallorwritetotheInstitute.Thetelephonenumberis

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com.

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PartA寫作基本理論3對(duì)比類寫作要點(diǎn)

對(duì)比類寫作已成為英語書面表達(dá)中一個(gè)非常重要的形式。1999年高考題要求學(xué)生根據(jù)所給圖畫介紹

學(xué)校三年間的新變化；2001年高考題要求學(xué)生比較減負(fù)前后的學(xué)習(xí)情況；2002年高考題要求學(xué)生比較“公

園要不要收門票，，的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)；2004年北京春季高考要求學(xué)生根據(jù)所給圖畫比較過去和現(xiàn)在的生活變

化情況。不管在工作學(xué)習(xí)中還是在日常生活中，對(duì)比是人們分析問題和解決問題的重要方法和手段，這就

不難理解為什么對(duì)比類寫作是高考寫作中的一個(gè)重要形式。

對(duì)比類寫作一般有兩種方式：一是集中比較或?qū)Ρ龋姓f明一個(gè)對(duì)象的諸種特征）；二是逐點(diǎn)比較

或?qū)Ρ龋ㄒ粭l一條地說明兩者的異同）。

對(duì)比類寫作可以大致分為以下幾種：

一、今昔對(duì)比

在作今昔對(duì)比時(shí)，要注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化。談到過去的情況要用過去時(shí)態(tài)（主要是?般過去時(shí)），談到現(xiàn)

在的情況要用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)（主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）。

今昔對(duì)比的寫作格式是：開頭（提出什么事情發(fā)生了變化）一對(duì)具體事例作對(duì)比一結(jié)論。寫作方式既

可采用集中比較，也可采用逐點(diǎn)比較。在寫作時(shí)可用以下句型來組織完成整篇文章:

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1.開頭常用句型

(1)Greatchangeshavetakenplace.發(fā)生了巨大變化。

Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthelastfiveyear.

QuiteafewchangeshavetakenplaceinmyschoolsinceyouleftChina.

Overthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.

(2)Thingshavebeguntoimprovesince...自從..以來，事情有了好轉(zhuǎn)/改善。

Thingshavebeguntoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.

2.對(duì)比常用句型

(1)...usedto...,butnow...過去?！乾F(xiàn)在

(2)...inthepast,butnow...在過去……，但是現(xiàn)在.

(3)once...,butnow...曾經(jīng)…….，但是現(xiàn)在….

(4)Thingsaredifferentnow.情況已大不同了。

(5)Butnow,everythinghaschanged.但是現(xiàn)在全變了

Wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuilding---ourlibrary.

Iusedtohavetoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.NowIhave

morefreetime.

Myparentscontactedothersmainlybysendingthemlettersinthepast,butnowwecalllongdistanceat

home.

Oncemyparentslistenedtotheradiofornewsandotherinformation,butnowwewatchthenewsandother

programsonTV.

Whentheygotmarriedabouttwentyyearsago,myparentslivedinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture,but

nowwehavemovedintoabignewthree-roomapartment.

在作對(duì)比時(shí)，為避免句型重復(fù)，可適當(dāng)變換一些句式，比如：

(1)Anotherchangeis...再有一個(gè)變化是..

Anotherbigchangeisinthehousingconditions.

(2)What'smore,...還有..

What'smore,Icangotobedearlierthaninthepast.

3.結(jié)尾常用句型

Inshort,changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtuscomfortandconvenience.

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2004年北京春季高考題范文

ChangesInOurLife

Overthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifb（主題句）.Takemyfamilyfor

example（過渡句）.Myparentscontactedothersmainlybysendingthemlettersinthepast,butnowwecalllong

distanceathome（對(duì)比Andoncemyparentslistenedtotheradiofornewsandotherinformation,butnowwe

watchthenewsandotherprogramsonTV（對(duì)比二）.Anotherbigchangeisinthehousingconditions（過渡句）.

Whentheygotmarriedabouttwentyyearsago,myparentslivedinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture,butnow

wehavemovedintoabignewthree-roomapartment（對(duì)比三）.Inshort,changesinourlifeinthepasttwenty

yearshavebroughtuscomfortandconvenience（總結(jié)句）.

在寫這類文章時(shí)，首先要寫好主題句。同學(xué)們在審題時(shí)要把握全局，把全文要說明的主題在第一句交

待清楚。然后根據(jù)所給材料，展開今昔對(duì)比。對(duì)比時(shí)不要單調(diào)地使用同一句型，要稍有變化，并中間要有

恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡句。最后寫好總結(jié)句，即你對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象作出自己的理解或判斷。

二、正反觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比

對(duì)同一件事情，人們常有不同的看法，即正反兩種觀點(diǎn)。在寫作時(shí)，常使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作格式一

般是：提出問題一兩種不同觀點(diǎn)一對(duì)兩種不同觀點(diǎn)的論據(jù)（理由）逐項(xiàng)作對(duì)比。有時(shí)題目會(huì)要求說出自己

的觀點(diǎn)，可在結(jié)尾段加上自己的觀點(diǎn)并簡要說明理由，最好不要重復(fù)前面的一談到的理由。寫作方式一般

采用集中比較。在寫作時(shí)可用以下句型來組織完成整篇文章：

正反觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比常用句型

（1）Wehaveadiscussionabout...我們對(duì)....進(jìn)行了一次討論。

We'vehadadiscussionaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.

（2）Wehavehadasurveyon...我們對(duì)....開展了?次調(diào)查。

We'vehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedtocarrymobilephonestoschools.

（3）Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.在這個(gè)問題上意見有分歧。

（4）Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.有兩種不同意見。

（5）Othershavedifferentopinions.其他人有不同看法。

（5）Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefortheidea,whilefortypercentofthestudentsthinkotherwise.有60%

的學(xué)生支持這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，然而有40%的學(xué)生則不這樣認(rèn)為。

（6）Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto...,butfortypercentofthestudentsdon'tthinkso.60%

的學(xué)生認(rèn)為……是必須的，而40%的學(xué)生則不這樣認(rèn)為。

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（7）Ontheonehand,...Ontheotherhand,...一方面...，另一方面....

在對(duì)某一觀點(diǎn)作進(jìn)?步論證時(shí)，可用下列句型：

（1）Whafsmore,...還有就是..

What'smore,wecangetagoodknowledgeofthecultureandsocialcustomsofthecountrywherewestudy,

aswellasimproveourEnglish.

（2）Besides,...除此之外..

Somestudentscannotdisciplinethemselves.Besides,it'sfartooexpensivetostudyabroad,whichisaload

tothefamily.

當(dāng)然在提出多個(gè)論據(jù)時(shí)，也可用First,...Second,...Third,…來列舉論據(jù)。

2002年高考題范文

DearEditor,

I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedfor

parks（提出問題）.

Opinionsaredividedonthequestion（過渡句）.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefee.They

believeapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge（觀點(diǎn)一）.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoy

themselves.Changingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway（論據(jù)）.Whatismore,itwillbecome

necessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity（論據(jù)二）.

Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbecharged（觀點(diǎn)二）becauseyouneedmoneytopay

gardenersandotherworkers（論據(jù)一），andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees（論據(jù)二）.Theysuggest,however,fees

shouldbechargedlow.

Yourstruly

LiHua

可以看出，這類文章的寫作，首先要提出問題，即雙方討論的問題。接下來提出觀點(diǎn)一，并用一系列

論據(jù)進(jìn)行闡明。說明完觀點(diǎn)一之后，再提出觀點(diǎn)二，繼續(xù)用論據(jù)進(jìn)行說明。如果需要說明自己的觀點(diǎn)，可

接下來說明自己的觀點(diǎn)。

三、數(shù)據(jù)分析比較

此類題目要求考生通過對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)的分析比較得出某一結(jié)論或說明某一現(xiàn)象。在寫作時(shí)不要對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行簡

單的列舉，而是要通過對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行分析，得出某?結(jié)論。即應(yīng)該通過對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)比較得舟某物增長了多少或減

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少了多少，而不是簡單的寫成今年是多少去年是多少。時(shí)態(tài)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。寫作方式最好

采用逐個(gè)比較而不宜采用集中比較。寫作格式般是：說明現(xiàn)象一數(shù)據(jù)比較一得出結(jié)論。在寫作時(shí)可用以

下句型來組織完成整篇文章：

常用句型：

1.Wecanseefromthechartthat....我們可以從圖表中看出..

2.Wecanseefromthetablethat...我們可以從表格中看出..

WecanseefromthechartabovethattheenvironmentintheYellowRiverValleyisgettingworseand

worse.

3.AhasincreasedbyX%.A增長了X%。

4.Ahasdoubledinthepastfiveyears.A在過去五年里增長了兩倍。

范文

北京近年來交通工具發(fā)生了很大變化。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表和所給提示，用英語寫一篇短文，以便刊登在某家對(duì)外發(fā)行的英語雜志上。

年份'交通工具自行車出租車私人汽車公共汽車

20011,000,000125,000250,70017,600

20021,650,000273,000390,80018,900

特點(diǎn)方便，健身快捷，便宜富有慢，臟，擁擠

Alongwiththecitydevelopment,thetransportsystemisalsochanging（主題句）.Wedidasurveyonthe

differenttransportations.

Accordingtotheresult,peoplemoreandmorepreferconvenienttransportations,liketaxi,whichdoubledin

thepastyear（比較Besides,privatecarshavebeenincreasingrapidlywiththehighlivingstandard（比較二）.

Whilepublicbus,whichwasconsideredthemaintransportinthecity,nowisthoughtbymostpeopledirtyand

crowded（比較三）.Butontheotherhand,bicycle,asanothertraditionaltransportation,isstillwidelyaccepted

fbritsconvenienceandbenefittopeople'shealth（比較四）.

Inaword,peopleareenjoyinganeasierandmoreconventionallift（總結(jié)句）.

數(shù)據(jù)比較類文章通常也要求先提出主題句，即通過數(shù)據(jù)比較要說明的問題。接下來對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行比較。

在邊進(jìn)行比較時(shí)邊說明問題，在進(jìn)行多項(xiàng)比較時(shí)，要注意句與句之間的過渡與銜接。最后要寫好總結(jié)句，

即你對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象作出自己的理解。

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>Withoutthinkingaboutherownsafety,sherushedoutandpulledhimback.

>Hehurriedtoschool,reachingtheschoolyardquiteoutofbreath.

>Shetoldtheteacherwhathadhappenedtoheronthewaytoschool.

>Theblindmanwasoutofdanger,butshelostherlife./gotinjured.

AHewaspraisedfbrwhathehaddone.

>Sheofferedussomegifts,butwerefusedtoacceptthem.

>Theyallthankedhi