（江蘇專用）高三英語二輪復習 主題36“記”肢體語言

Thefirstattemptofeventhemosttalentedartists，musicians，andwritersisseldomamasterpiece.Ifyouconsideryourdraftsasdressrehearsals(彩排)，ortryouts，revisingwillseemanaturalpartofthewriting__1__．Whatisthepurposeofthedressrehearsalsandtheout-of-townpreviewsthatmanyBroadwayshowsgothrough？Theanswerisadding，deleting，replacing，reordering，—__2__，revising.AndrewLloydWebber'smusicalPhantomoftheOperaunderwentsuchaprocess.WhenLloydWebberbeganwritingin1984，hehadinmindafunny，excitingproduction.However，whenPhantomopenedinLondonin1986，theaudiencesawamovingpsychologicallovestorysettomusic.Themusicalhad__3__severalrevisionsdue，inpart，toproblemswithcostumingandmakeup(戲服和化妝)．Forinstance，LloydWebber__4__someofthemusicbecausethePhantom'smakeuppreventedtheactorfromsingingcertainsounds.Whenyourevise，youchangeaspectsofyourworkin__5__toyourevolvingpurpose，ortoinclude__6__ideasornewlydiscoveredinformation.Revisionisnotjustanafterthoughtthatgetsonlyasmuchtimeasyouhaveattheendofanassignment.__7__，itisamajorstageofthewritingprocess，andwritersreviseeverystepoftheway.Evenyourdecisionto__8__topicswhileprewritingisatypeofrevising.However，don'tmakethemistakeofskippingtherevisionstagethatfollows__9__．Alwaysmaketimetobecomeyourown__10__andviewyourdressrehearsal，sotospeak.Reviewingyourworkinthiswaycangiveyou__11__newideas.Revisinginvolves__12__theeffectivenessandappropriatenessofallaspectsofyourwriting，makingyourpurposemoreclearly，andrefocusingordevelopingthefactsandideasyoupresent.Whenyourevise，askyourselfthefollowingquestions，keepinginmindtheaudienceforwhomyouarewriting：Ismymainideaorpurpose__13__throughoutmydraft？DoIeverlosesightofmypurpose？HaveIgivenmyreadersallofthe__14__—thatis，facts，opinions，inferences—thattheyneedinordertounderstandmymainidea？Finally，haveIincludedtoomany__15__detailsthatmayconfusereaders?1．A.techniqueB．styleC．processD．career2．A.inparticularB．a(chǎn)saresultC．forexampleD．inotherwords3．A.undergoneB．skippedC．rejectedD．replaced4．A.rewroteB．releasedC．recordedD．reserved5．A.addition B．responseC．opposition D．contrast6．A.fixed`B．a(chǎn)mbitiousC．familiarD．fresh7．A.HoweverB．MoreoverC．InsteadD．Therefore8．A.discuss B．switchC．exhaust D．cover9．A.drafting B．rearrangingC．performing D．training10．A.director B．masterC．a(chǎn)udience D．visitor11．A.personal B．valuableC．basic D．delicate12．A.mixing B．weakeningC．maintaining D．a(chǎn)ssessing13．A.amazing B．brightC．unique D．clear14．A.angles B．evidenceC．information D．hints15．A.unnecessary B．uninterestingC．concrete D．final【語篇解讀】修改是作品寫作過程中非常重要且必須的步驟。本文講述了作品修改的目的和途徑。1．C2．答案B[考查介詞短語辨析。前面adding，deleting，replacing，reordering都是revising的某一方面，即revising和這些名詞同義；inotherwords表示“換句話說”，符合句意。而inparticular(尤其、特別，表強調)、asaresult(因此，表結果)、forexample(例如，表舉例說明)都不符合題意。難度適中。]3．A4.A5．答案B[考查介詞短語辨析。ina