writing高中英語寫作

決勝高考Writing1.要求考生根據(jù)提示進行書面表達，考生應能清楚、連貫的傳遞信息，表達意思。2.有效地運用所學語言知識。高考作文要求高考評分標準第五檔(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。2.覆蓋所有內容要點。3.應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。4.語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。6.完全到達了預期的寫作目的。StructureLanguageStructureGoodbeginningandending(好的開頭結尾)Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(結構合理,行文流暢)NOUN:ChanceDifficultyOpinionPerspective…….…….Verb:ChanceDifficultyOpinionPerspective…….…….adj:ChanceDifficultyOpinionPerspective…….…….高級詞匯短語同義詞一、肯定不如雙否好二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動不如被動巧四、從句不如分詞傲要強化“語法、修辭”兩個概念

四個“不如”修辭的使用在書面表達中算作很大的亮點，在高中階段很少有學生會注重修辭的應用。雙重否認也是種修辭，而且對于考生來說，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中設計雙重否認的句子。就變成了亮點句，起到強調作用。一、肯定不如雙否好Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.

Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.1.Hecamehereat5.(一般句式)

2.Hedidnotcomehereuntil5.Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.

倒裝是一種最簡單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點的方法。在高中階段只需掌握倒裝的四種形式，足以應對書面表達，如何應用倒裝，有很多方法和技巧。1.Onlywhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectioncanwesolvetheproblemofpollution.2.Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.3.Diligentashewas,hefailedinpassingtheexam.4.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.二、陳述不如倒裝妙NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.Iwillnevermarryyou.NeverwillImarryyou.1.否認詞開頭：2.Notuntil/till5pm.didhecomehereyesterday.3.Itwasnotuntil/till5pm.thathecamehereyesterday.1.Hedidn’tcomehereuntil5pm.yesterday.把地點狀語放在句首后面主謂倒裝。這樣做的好處之一是倒裝本身就是高級結構，第二是倒裝后把真正的主語放到了句子的末尾，后面還可以繼續(xù)加從句，使整個句子再呈現(xiàn)更多的亮點。Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary，whichisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding.

2.地點狀語開頭Ourlibraryisinthecenterofourschool.Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary.Onthebankstandsomeflowers.Intheskyhanglittlestars.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.3.Only+介詞短語：OnlyinthiswaycanIimprovemyEnglishOnlybytakingexercisescanwekeephealthy4.形容詞+as+主語+be動詞：1.YoungasIam,Icanmanageit2.Richasourcountryis,wehavealotofproblems3.Badlyinjuredashewas,hemanagedtotakedownthecar’snumber.4.SogladamItohearfromyou.三、主動不如被動巧英語是一門客觀的語言，而漢語是主觀的語言，具體表達在英語中經常用被動語態(tài)，漢語經常用主動語態(tài)；英語中經常用是事物或形式主語開頭，強調一件事發(fā)生在什么人身上，而漢語經常用人稱開頭強調一個人發(fā)生了什么事。所以使用被動語態(tài)符合英語的習慣，如果能將整個文章中兩個句子變成被動語態(tài)，就會呈現(xiàn)句型的變化，使整篇文章句型豐富。例如在2006年的高考中，很多學生在表達我們每次可以借五本書最多借十天時：Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.哪種表達法分數(shù)會更高？幾乎所有的狀語從句都可以變成獨立主格或分詞結構，時間狀語從句，原因狀語，條件狀語等。例如條件狀語從句：Ifsuchisthecase,youshouldapologizetoher.如何變成獨立主格或分詞結構呢？學會下面的口訣，如果你的作文中有狀語從句，馬上可改成獨立主格或分詞結構這個最大的亮點。四、從句不如分詞傲口訣：一去，二看，三改。一去：去連詞；二看：看主語；三改：改分詞。

第一步，去掉連詞if；Ifsuchisthecase,youshouldapologizetoher.第二步，看前后兩句話的主語，前后主語不一致，所以要改成獨立主格；第三步，改分詞，is變成分詞是being最后變成Suchbeingthecase,youshouldapologizetoher如果前后兩句話主語一致，就變成分詞結構。[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.[原文]

Ifeverythingistakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.[修正]Everythingtakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.

高三學生學習緊張，考試壓力大，因此，做一些戶外運動時很有必要的。請你以“HealthandSports”為題完成一篇短文。可以圍繞主題適當展開，詞數(shù)100~120。

范文評講:

Somestudentssaythattakingsportsisjustawasteoftime.Atschool,therearesomanysubjectstolearnandsomuchhomeworktodo

thattimeisprecioustothem.Tousseniorthreestudents,everyminutecounts.Asa

consequence,thereisnotimeavailable,especiallyforstudentstotakeoutsidesports.However,Ishouldutterasonorousvoicethatsportsareessentialtous.As

anoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy.”Concentratingonstudyforalldaylong

withoutanyrelaxationisnoteffectiveanddoharmtoourhealth.Takingsomeexercisesafterclasscanrelivethepressureoftakingexaminations.Ofcourse,itisimproperforstudentstooverdosports.

Asawhole,weshouldmakeabalancebetweensportsandstudy.HealthandSports

Themajorityofstudentsholdtheviewthattakingsportsisjustawasteoftime.Atschool,therearesomanysubjectstolearnandsomuchhomeworktodothattimeisprecioustothem.Asforusseniorthreestudents,everyminutecounts.Asa

consequence,thereisnotimeavailable,especiallyforstudentstotakeoutsidesports.However,Ishouldutterasonorousvoicethatsportsareessentialtous.As

anoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy.”Concentratingonstudyforalldaylong

withoutanyrelaxationisnoteffectiveanddoharmtoourhealth.Takingsomeexercisesafterclasscanrelivethepressureoftakingexaminations.Ofcourse,itisimproperforstudentstooverdosports.

Asawhole,onlybymakingabalancebetweensportsandstudycanwebenefitalotfromitandkeepfitforever.09年湖北高考英語作文假設你是華華,與英國網友湯姆約定用對方的母語通信,以提高各自的外語水平.最近你收到湯姆的電子郵件(附后),發(fā)現(xiàn)有一個成語使用不當.請根據(jù)以下要點,用英文回一封電子郵件.要點:1.不應使用“無所不為”,應使用“無所事事”;2.說明這兩個成語的用法;3.給予鼓勵.HiTom,Nicetoreadyoure-mailtoday.Inoticedyou’vebeguntouseChineseidiomsandusedmostof