2024年高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)講義（新人教版）寫作規(guī)范匯編

寫作規(guī)范練（一）

I.應(yīng)用文寫作——求助信

假定你是李華，臨近高考，心理壓力特別大，于是向?qū)W校心理老師Tom寫一封信，求助

如何緩解壓力，在高考中取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.自我介紹；

2.壓力大的原因；

3.希望得到老師的幫助。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出）；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearTom,

IamLiHua,aSenior3student._______________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearTom,

IamLiHua,aSenior3student.Withthecollegeentranceexaminationapproaching,Ifeel

greatpsychologicalpressure.SoI'mwritingtoyou,askingforhelponhowtorelievethepressure

andgetexcellentresultsinthecollegeentranceexamination.

rmencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.First,Ihavetospendsomuchtime

onmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetodosports.Moreover,thehighexpectationsfromthe

teachersandmyparentsmakemeextremelystressfulbecauseIdon'twanttoletthemdown.What

troublesmemostisthatit，sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.

Facedwiththeaboveproblems,I'manxioustogetyourhelp.Couldyoupleaseofferme

someadviceonhowtosolvetheseproblems?

Yourssincerely.

LiHua

II.讀后續(xù)寫

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Mymothereyedmewithsuspicion（'懷疑）.Idarednotlookather.KnowingthatIwaslatefor

schoolfivedayscontinuously,Icouldnotofferanacceptableexplanation.!knewshedidnot

believethatIhadextraclasseseverydayandarrivedhomeafter5pm.However,realizingshehad

littlechoicebuttobelieveinme,shetoldmethatdinnerwasintherefrigerator.Shehadtorushfor

hernightshiftatthelocalclinic.

Eversincewelostourdadinanaccident,mymotherbecamethebreadwinner.Iwastheeldest

amongthefoursiblings（兄弟姐妹）anditfelluponmyshouldertoensurethattheycouldbecome

responsibleadulls.Besideshelpingmotherwiththehousework,Iregularlycoachedthemintheir

studies.Thankfully,neveroncedidIhavetoraisemyvoiceorforcethemtocompletetheir

homework.Butallofusmisseddadverymuch.Hewasamodelfatherandhusband.Lifewascruelly

takenawayfromhimataveryyoungageof42.

However,mymothermanagedtopullthroughandfoundajobattheclinic.ltwasverytough

onsomeonelikeherwhohadneverworkedbeforeinherlife.Butmoneywasscarceandtherewere

fivemouthstofeed.Daddidnotleavemuchbehind.Heneversuspectedhewoulddiesoyoung.We

stoppeddiningoutandhadourmealsmostlyathome.Webasicallylivedfromhandto

mouth.That,swhenitdawnedonmethatIhadtodomypartforthefamily.Iknewmotherwould

notagreebutIthrewcautionoutofthewindowandmanagedtogetapart-timejobatafast-food

restaurant.IworkedthreehoursadayandmanagedtobringhomemoneysothatmysiblingsandI

couldgooutforoccasionalmoviesormeals.Iwassurethatmothersuspectedsomething.Butshe

couldnotquitepointthefingertothesourceofhersuspicion.

注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Oneday,whileIwasbusyservingthecustomers,Iwasshockedtoseemotherstanding

oppositethecounter.__________________________________________________________________

Mothermademesitdown.Shewasalreadycrying,soweremysiblings.

【參考范文】

Oneday,whileIwasbusyservingthecustomers,Iwasshockedtoseemotherstanding

oppositethecounter.SosurprisedwasIthatIdarednotlookintohereyes.Sheappearedshocked

whenIclumsilytookherordersandsawherstaggeringtoatableoccupiedbymysiblings!My

supervisorsawmywoniedexpressionand,knowingaboutmyfamilysituation，quickly

volunteeredtotakeovermyduties.Slowly,Iremovedmyapronandjoinedmyfamily.

Mothermademesitdown.Shewasalreadycrying,soweremysiblings.Shecoveredmyhands

withhersandtoldmethatshewasgratefulformyhelp.Icouldnotholdbackmytearsandhugged

her.Howguilt-riddenIwas!Itoldmymotherthatcontributingfinanciallytothefamilywasthe

leastIcoulddotorelieveherburden.Tomygreatrelief,mybelovedmotherunderstoodmy

situationandreassuredmeeverythingwouldbealright.ltwasthenthatIcametorealizethatI

shouldnothavehiddensuchabigsecretfromher.

寫作規(guī)范練（二）

I.應(yīng)用文寫作——介紹一次活動(dòng)

假定你是李華。4月23日是“世界讀書日”，為此，你校開展了系列活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給你的筆

友Tom寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；

2.分享個(gè)人收獲。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearTom,

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearTom,

WiththeWorldReadingDayover,Iamwritingtosharesomerelatedinformationwithyou.

It'swidelyacknowledgedthatreadingbenefitsusinmanyways.Notonlycanitbroadenour

horizonsbutitcanalsodeepenourthoughts.Therefore,aseriesofactivities,suchasReading

Salon,aSecond-handBookExchange,tookplaceonthatday.

Whatdeservedtobementionedmostwasthethemeofthereadingday—ReadingChinese

ClassicsandInheritingChineseCulture.Fromthenon,westudentsrealizedthatitwashightime

thatweshoulddomorereadingandpassonChineseculture.

HowIwishyouhadjoinedus!

Yours,

LiHua

n.讀后續(xù)寫

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Iwasasinglemotherinmy30swholiveddownandoutwithmydaughterPeggyinasmall

apartment,strugglinghardtomakeendsmeet.

Oneday,Iheadedtothedowntownforaninterview.!satdowninthestreetcar,andthere

againsttheseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrolls,

amongwhichtherewasanamecarved.

Onimpulse（沖動(dòng)）Ideterminedtofindtheownermyself.Igotoffthestreetcarintheheavy

rainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellatoprotectmyself.ThenIsearchedatelephonebookforthe

name,Ifounditimmediatelyandcalledit,waitingpatiently,andthenaladyanswered.

“Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement,"Itwasmyumbrellawhichhadbeen

stolenmorethanayearbefore.n

SoappealingwasherpleasurethatIforgotIwaslookingforajobandwentdirectlytoher

smallhouse.Shetooktheumbrella,withtearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethatthe

umbrellawasgivenbyherparents,nowdead.Herhappinessatretrieving（找回）thisspecial

possessionwassuchthattohaveacceptedherrewardwouldhavespoiledsomething,soIrefused

herofferandleft.

Thefollowingmonthswerehard.Icouldonlyobtaintemporaryemployment,forasmall

salary.Whatwasworse,IhadjustlostmylastjobbeforeChristmas,withonlyfifteendollars

left.Unlessamiraclehappened,IwouldbehomelessinJanuary,hungryandjobless.Ihadprayed

steadilyforweeks,andtherehadbeennoanswerbutthiscoldnessanddarkness.

TheairwasfullofChristmasmerriment,withthebellsringingandchildrenshoutinginthe

bitterduskoftheevening.ButthereshouldbenoChristmasforme,Iknew,nogifts,no

remembrancewhatsoever.

Thinkingofthis,Icouldn,tcontrolmytearsonmywayhome,butImanagedasmilesoI

couldgreetmylittledaughter.Sheopenedthedoorfbrmeandthrewherselfinmyarms,screaming

joyouslyanddemandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.ThereIstood,frozen,overwhelmedby

misery.

注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyrushedtoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.

Suddenly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.

【參考范文】

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyrushedtoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSanta

Claus.ThenIheardamantalkingheartilytoherandwenttothedoor.Hewasadeliveryman,and

hisarmswerefullofparcels."Thisisamistake,“Isaid,buthereadthenameontheparcelsand

theywereforme.Whenhehadgone,Ididn,tknowwhattodo.Later,PeggyandIsatonthefloor

lookingateachother.Whatasurprise!Ilookedforthenameofthesender.

Suddenly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.Ipickedupthenote,whichread

uThanksforreturningtheumbrella.MerryChristmas!”Itwassentbythelady.Holdingthenote

tightly,Iwasonthevergeoftears,withastreamofwarmthspreadingthroughmybody.Onthat

coldChristmas,IforgotIhadnomoneyfortherentandonlyfifteendollarsinmypocket.Wejust

satinoursmallapartmentunwrappingthegiftswithhappiness.Asweetpeacefloodedmelikea

blessingwhichmademehopefulagain.

寫作規(guī)范練（三）

I.應(yīng)用文寫作——報(bào)道

上星期三下午你班舉行了“勞動(dòng)最光榮”的主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為校報(bào)英文欄目寫一

篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：

1.班會(huì)目的；

2.班會(huì)過(guò)程；

3.你的感受。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

LaborIstheMostGlorious

【參考范文】

LaborIstheMostGlorious

TostimulatethestudentsJenthusiasmforlabor,ourclassheldaclassmeetingwiththe

theme—LaborIstheMostGloriouslastWednesdayafternoon.

Theclassmeeting,consistingofthreeparts,beganwithatouchingvideoaboutastudentbeing

avolunteerinhiscommunity.Afterthat,wetalkedaboutthetopicfreelyingroups.Finally,some

studentssharedtheirstoriesofdoinghouseworkathome.

Throughtheclassmeeting,notonlydowebetterunderstandthevalueoflabor,butwealsotry

tobuildabeautifulsocietywithourhands,

n.讀后續(xù)寫

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

ThatDecember,withChristmasapproaching,mymotherwasoutatworkwhenIletmyself

intoherbedroomoneafternooninsearchofasafetypin.Itookthekeyhiddenunderthecarpet,

unlockedthedoorandsteppedin.Standingagainstthewallwasabig,blackbicyclewithballoon

tires.Irecognizeditinstantly.ltwasthesamesecond-handbikeVdbeenadmiringinaBaltimore

Streetshopwindow.Somehowmymothermusthavescrapedtogetherenoughforadownpayment

andmeanttosurprisemewiththebicycleonChristmasmorning.

Iwasdeeplymovedbythediscoveryandyetsickenedbytheknowledgethat,burstinginto

herroomlikethis,Ihadrobbedherofthepleasureofseeingmeastonishedanddelightedon

Christmasday.Iimmediatelybackedout,putthekeybackinitshidingplace,andthoughtover

whattodo.

IdecidedthatbetweennowandChristmasImustdoabsolutelynothingtorevealtheslightest

hintofmyterribleknowledge.Nothingmustdenyherthehappinessofseeingmecompletely

amazedonChristmasday.Ievenstartedpracticingmysurprisedfaceinfrontofthemirror,testing

exclamationsofdelight:"Wow!”“Abikewithballoontires!Idon'tbelieveit.”

ThedayfinallycamewhenChristmasarrived.Mymotherwokemeandmysisterearlyinthe

morning."GoandseewhatSantaClausbroughttoyou.”

注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Heartbeatracing,Icameoutofmybedroom.________________________________________

Iwasabouttogointomyroomdisappointedlywhenmymomcriedbehindme,"Wait!

There'ssomethinginmybedroomIforgotallabout.”

【參考范文】

Heartbeatracing,Icameoutofmybedroom.Tomydisappointment,onlyafewsmallbrightly

wrappedpackageswerelyingundertheChristmastree.Nobicycle.Myheartsankasifbeing

splashedbycoldwater.SlowlyIopenedmypackage,onlytoseeashirtlyinginside.WhatIfeltwas

bitterdispleasure.Whathappenedtomybicycle?Icouldn,thelpthinkingmymomhadfoundthe

bikejusttooexpensiveandeventuallysentitback.IcouldfeeltearswellingupinmyeyesasI

clenchedtheshirt.

Iwasabouttogointomyroomdisappointedlywhenmymomcriedbehindme,"Wait!

There'ssomethinginmybedroomIforgotallabout."Shewenttoherroom,andamomentlater

camebackwheelingthebigblackbicyclewithballoontires.Ididn'thavetopretendthe

excitementandsurpriseasthebicyclecameintomysight.Iembracedmymomandkissedher

spontaneously."Thankyou,mom!ThisisthebestChristmasgiftI'veeverhad!”Abrilliant

grinbloomedonmymom,sfaceassheheldmetightly.Hidingherpleasureofseeingmy

surprisedface,shesaid，”Allrightnow,it'sonlyabicycle.”

寫作規(guī)范練(四)

I.應(yīng)用文寫作——申請(qǐng)信

假定你是李華，在澳大利亞悉尼做交換生，得知該城市會(huì)展中心(SydneyConventionand

ExhibitionCenter)近日將舉辦中國(guó)絲綢展，需要志愿者講解。請(qǐng)你寫一封信，申請(qǐng)當(dāng)志愿者。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.寫信目的；

2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；

3.表達(dá)期望。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearSirorMadam,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearSirorMadam,

rmLiHua,anexchangestudentwhoisstudyinginSydney.HavinglearnedthataChinese

SilkExhibitionwillbeheldinSydneyConventionandExhibitionCenter,I'mwritingto

recommendmyselfasavolunteer.

BorninZhejiangProvince,IlearnedmoreaboutChinesesilk,whichmakesiteasyformeto

recognizetheextraordinarybeautyhiddenbehindsilk.What?smore,whatmakesmefitforthejob

ismyoutgoingpersonalitycombinedwithmygoodcommandofEnglishthatwillgeneratesmooth

communication.Moreimportantly,IampassionateaboutspreadingChineseculture.

Ihopethatmyapplicationwillmeetwithyourapproval.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

n.讀后續(xù)寫

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

IcouldfeeltheexcitementrisinginmeasIheldthebeautifullywrappedpresentinmyhands.I

wasunabletocontainmycuriosityanylonger.Iopenedit.ltwasabrandnewlaptop（筆t己本電腦）.I

hadscoredstraightAsformyO-levelexaminationandthiswasmyreward.Ihadalwaysenviedmy

friendswhowereexchangingnewsaboutchatrooms,instantmessagingande-mailing,allofwhich

Iknewnothingabout.NowIwasgoingtofindout.

Itstartedoutsimplyenough.IwassearchingforsomeinformationonlinewhenIcameacrossa

socialnetworkingsite.SoonIbecameaddictedtochattingwithmynew-foundfriendonthe

Internet.IbegantospendmoreandmoretimeonYouTubeandbecameenslavedbyFacebookand

Twitter.Ihadneverimaginedthatthedaywouldcomewhen1wouldbestuckbytheglowingscreen

beforeme.WheneverIdicin'tsurfthesesocialnetworkingsites,Iwouldbegoingthrough

conversationaboutboringthingsorfashionwebsites.

Astimepassed,IrealizedthatIwasaddictedtotheInternet.Duringweekends,whenIhad

moretimeonmyhands,Icouldeasilyspendafewhoursonmylaptop.ltcametoapointwhereI

chosetolockmyselfinmyroom,refusingtocomeoutandtakepartinfamilydiscussions.I

preferredtostayconnectedtothepeopleIbefriendedontheInternetalthoughIhadnevermet

them.SoonIwasspendingtheearlyhoursofthemorningsurfingtheIntemet.Sleepwasreplaced

bynaps（打盹）andmygradesatschoolalsodroppedquickly.

Itwasaboutthistimethatmyparentsstartedvoicingtheirdisapproval.ltbecameobviousto

themthatIwasspendingtoomuchtimeontheInternet.Iwasaskedtodecreasemyusageofthe

laptop.Yet,howeverhardItried,Iwasunabletopullmyselfaway,unabletoendmychatsessions,

andunabletoconcentrateonmylessons.Iwasdesperateforjustanotherclick,justanotherlookat

mye-mailormessageboard.

注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Thenoneday,myfathertookawaymylaptop.

IpromisedmyparentsthatIwouldturnoveranewleaf.

【參考范文】

Thenoneday,myfathertookawaymylaptop.Ibeggedandevenquarreledwithhim.Ifought

foralongtime,butwhateverIdid,itwasnouse.Dadhadmadeuphismind-hewouldn'tallow

metouseit.Overtime,IrealizedthatDadandMumhadalwayswantedthebestforme.ltwasthen

thatIdecidedtotakethebigstep-toconquermyInternetaddiction.QuittingwasharderthanIhad

expected.Butwithgreatdetermination,IknewthatIwouldbeabletodoit.

IpromisedmyparentsthatIwouldturnoveranewleaf.SoImadeadetailedplanfbrmy

everydaylife.Imanagedtochangemydailyroutine.AfterIgotup,thefirstthingIdidwasrunfor

halfanhour,whichcouldhelpmeforgetaboutgoingonline.Afterschool,Iwouldplaybasketball

withmyclassmates,whichmademehealthierandstronger.Allthishelpedmeconquermy

addiction.Nowmylifehasreturnedtonormalandmygradeshavegoneupagain.

寫作規(guī)范練（五）

I.應(yīng)用文寫作——感謝信

假定你是李華，父親節(jié)即將來(lái)臨，在父親節(jié)這天，需要說(shuō)哪些話語(yǔ)來(lái)感謝自己的父親呢？

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給父親寫一封感謝信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.感謝養(yǎng)育之恩；

2.感謝父親在你遇到挫折時(shí)給予鼓勵(lì)和安慰：

3.感謝父親在你成功時(shí)以你為榮；

4.表達(dá)對(duì)父親的愛(ài)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearFather,

WithFather,sDayapproaching,_____________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

Dea】Father,

WithFather'sDayapproaching.Iwanttoexpressmygratitudetoyouforbringingmeup

fromthebottomofmyheart.NeverwillIforgetthetimelyencouragementandcomfortyougave

mewheneverIwasfacedwithdifficultiesandtheprideinyoureyeswhenIachievedmy

goals.Withoutyou，Iwouldnotgofurtherconfidentlyandbravely.

YourlovecanneverberepaidbutIamdeterminedtoworkhardandnevermakeyou

disappointed.!loveyou，F(xiàn)ather!

Yours,

LiHua

II.讀后續(xù)寫

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

AGirlwithStageFright

Itwasobviouslygoingtobeoneofthosedays.Studentswerepreparingforasingingcontest

actively.Paul,amusicteacher,madecommentsonthestudentsJperformanceattheendofa

rehearsal（彩排）.AgirlnamedLisadidthepoorestpreparation.Paulwasveryannoyedandentirely

frustratedwithher.Hedoesn,trecallhowheclosedtherehearsal,buthe'ssurethewordshe

chosewerenotwordsthatwouldliftthegirl'sspiritsbutrathersatisfyhisselfishneedtopunish

herforthepoorperformance.

ThemomentPauldismissedthestudents,Lisa,theveryreservedfreshmangirl,madeapath

straighttowardhim.Shelookedhimrightintheeyeandsaid,“Ihateyou!”Paulwastaken

abackandfrightenedbythepassionandhonestyinhervoice.Thoughentirelyshocked,hewas

somehowabletocollecthimselfandstaycalm.Helookedherrightintheeyeandsaid,"Well,

that'sashame,butit'smydutytoremindyouandinspireyou.”Shedidn'treact,butrather

stormedaway，herangerunchanged.

Severaldayslater,theyhadtheoccasiontospeakinprivate.LisaaskedifPaulrememberedthe

timewhenshetoldhimthatshehatedhim.Howcouldheforget?Shewentontoadmitquiteopenly

andhonestlythatitwasherself,nothim,whoshehated.Themomentgotheavyandshebeganto

tellhimofherfearandpressurewhenstandingonthestage.Shebelievedthatnomatterhowwell

sheprepared,shewouldperformterriblyonthestage.Paulbecameawarethatshehadseriousstage

frightandalsorealizedthatmaybehehaddonesomethingimproperseveraldaysago.Thenhe

talkedtoherpatientlyandsincerely,hopingtohelpherbuildtheconfidence.

注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Thedaybeforethecontest,shewaspracticingforthesingingcompetitionalone.

However,thenextmorning,whenshestoodonthestage,herfaceturnedpale.

【參考范文】

Thedaybeforethecontest,shewaspracticingforthesingingcompetitionalone.Shethought

abouthowtosingeverykeyandpracticedittimeandtimeagain,sothatshecouldprepareherself

wellenough.Atthatmoment,Paulcametoherandtoldherthatactuallyhehimselfwasalsoa

personwithstagefrightwhenhewasyoung.Buthebelievedthataslongashepracticedhard,he

wouldwin.Finaily,hedidbeatthestagefright.Hearingthat,Lisaknewthatshewouldbeanother

Paul.

However,thenextmorning,whenshestoodonthestage,herfaceturnedpale.Looking

around,shesawPaulsittingintheaudience,smilingather.LisarememberedwhatPaulhadtold

her,andshebelievedthatshehadgotwellprepared.Gradually,shefoundherselflostinsingingher

songandforgotallthebadfeelings.Afterherperformance,thewholeaudienceapplaudedfor

her.Shewon.

寫作規(guī)范練（六）

I.應(yīng)用文寫作——道歉信

假設(shè)你是李華，你本來(lái)計(jì)劃周六下午要去參加好朋友Tom的生日晚會(huì)，但你因故不能赴

約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件：

1.表示歉意；

2.解釋原因；

3.祝福他生日快樂(lè)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearTom,

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearTom,

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?

rmterriblysorrythatI'mnotabletogotoyourbirthdaypartythisSaturday

afternoon.TminBeijingnowbecausemymotherisseriouslyillandwillhaveanoperation

here.Sheisbadlyinneedofmycarethesedays,soTmstayingheretotakecareofherinthe

hospital.

Iwishyouahappybirthdayandhopeeverythingwillgowellwiththeparty.Bytheway,I

havesentyouthelatestCDofXuSong.Ihopeyou'11likethisbirthdaypresent.

rmlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

II.讀后續(xù)寫

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

They'dbeenplanningthisforever.Fromherbirth,mostlikely.Mya,smother,Helenaloved

hostingparties.AndAuntBeatricelovedbirthdays.Together,they'dmakeherSweetSixteena

hundredtimesbigger,bolder,andbrighterthanitneededtobe.Theyselectedathemeeveryyear

andstucktoit.Herfourteenthhadbeenthe“SnowWhile”andherninthhadbeenthe

“Frozen”.Theynevertoldherwhatthethemewasthedaybefore.Sheydjustwakeupher

birthdaymorning,abrand-newbirthdayoutfit(一套月艮裝)laidneatlyonherdresser(anoutfit

relatedtothetheme,ofcourse)andshewouldopenherdoortoseetheadventurethatlayaheadof

herthatday.

Myahadafewguessesastowhatthisyear'sthemewouldbe.AplayonthewordsuSweet

Sixteen,,waslikely—acandythemedparty,perhaps?Butshe,dhadabakingpartyafewyears

before-andHelenawasanythingbutrepetitive.Myadidn,thaveanyinterestincars,soshe

doubtedasports-carpartywasonthemenu.She,dtriedtolookthroughhermother'spurchase

historyonline,buthermotherhadbeencarefulenoughtodeleteeverythingrecent.Sotheonlyclue

leftwasthebirthdayoutfitshewouldreceivethenextmorning.

May1st,Myawoke.Thebrightsunlightbeggedhereyestoopenandshelovedthedaythat

herbirthdaytookplace.ltwasalwaysniceoutonMay1standitneverrained.Thismorningwasno

differentthanherpreviousbirthdays.Shesatupinherbedandlookedtoherdresserbeforeslipping

outofbedandinspectingtheoutfit.Sheunfoldeditandhelditagainstherbody,seeinghowitwas

like.ltreacheddown,justabovetheankle.Myadressed,eyedherselfinthemirrorandfounditwas

notsomuchaprettyoutfitasshehadreceivedbefore.ltwastotallyoneforblue-collarworkers!

注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.

Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.

【參考范文】

Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.Helenawalkedin,"Whatismybirthday

themethisyear,Mum?”Myaasked.Labor!”Helenaansweredinafirmvoice.uButIwas

expectingaparty!”hervoicesoundedshaky.Oh,howcouldsheforgetshewasbornonLabor's

Day!Mya'sfeetbroughthersmallstepstofollowHelenatothevan.Onarrivingatafarm,she

noticedthevastlandofwheatspreadingoverthehorizonthatmadeasplendidviewitself.Theirjob

wastoremovetheweeds.

Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.Severaldropsofsweattracedapath

onherredandpinkcheeksandsheturnedtoHelena：”Thisisnotbad,MumandIfeelI've

grownupenoughtohelpyouwithsomething.vHelenapulledMyaintoherarmsandplantedabig

kissonherfbrehead.ThesuninMaywasshiningbrighterthaneverlikeafireball.Picturingthe

goodharvestofthisyear,theyhittheroadwithahappybirthdaysongechoinginthevan.

寫作規(guī)范練（七）

I.應(yīng)用文寫作——祝賀信

假設(shè)你是李華，來(lái)自美國(guó)的交換生Peter在你班學(xué)習(xí)半年，并與你成為好朋友。目前,

他即將完成學(xué)業(yè)回國(guó)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一篇臨別贈(zèng)言。要點(diǎn)包括：

1.祝賀Peter學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)取得的成績(jī)；

2.取得成績(jī)的原因；

3.你們的友誼和對(duì)他的祝愿。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearPeter,

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearPeler,

Ifeeldelightedthatyouhaveachievedyourgoal.Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulations

onyourachievement.

ItisexcellentofyoutogetsuchahighmarkintheChinesetest,forafterallyouhavejust

beenstayingwithusforonlysixmonths.Youarealwaysdiligentandactive,whichisvitalfor

Chineselearning.Moreover,yourgreatinterestinreadingenablesyoutohaveagoodmemoryfbr

Chinesecharacters.Soyoudeserveit.

StillIknowit'stimeforustosaygoodbye.Iwillrecallthosebeautifuldayswespent

togetherandwhenwehelpedeachother.Ihavethousandsofblessingsforyou.Wishyouall

possiblejoy!

Yours,