2024屆高三英語讀后續(xù)寫-尋找失蹤的小貓 講義

一、原文閱讀下面材料,

根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,

使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。①Wemovedtoournewplace,andeverythingwasnewandunfamiliar.Ididn'thavenewfriends,somostofthetimewhenIwasfreeathome,IstayedwithSocky,mycatandfriend.Onemorninginwinter,itwasverycoldoutsideandpeoplemainlystayedindoorstokeepwarm.BeforegoingofftomyhighschoolinOuyen,Victoria,Icalledourpregnant

（懷孕的）

cattobefed,butshedidn'tcome.Ithoughtshe'dprobablyfoundsomewheretohaveherkittensandwouldturnuplater.Butshedidn't.②WhenSockystilldidn'tcomeatdinnertime,Ianxiouslyaskedmymum,"WhereisSocky?"Butshedidn'tknoweither.Thenextday,Sockystilldidn'tappearandIreallystartedtoworry.Sockyhadkeptmecompanyforyears,andshewasjustlikemyfamilymember.③Sockyhadgivenbirthtosomelovelykittensbefore.Shehadahabitofhavingherkittensinstrangeplaces,sofirstIcheckedallherhidey-holes

wheresheusedtostaybutshewasn'tinanyofthem.Ibecameextremelyanxious.Whatcouldhavehappened?"Whereareyou,dearSocky?"Havingwaitedforhoursagain,Icouldn'tsitstill.ThenextdaywasSaturdayandIhadthewholedaytosearchforher.Thinkingoverallthepossibleplaceswhereshecouldshelterherself,Irecheckedunderthehouse,theninthegarageunderandbehindoldbooks,everyplaceIcouldthinkof,butstillnoSocky.④AfterlunchItooksomefoodscraps

（剩飯）

withmeincaseIfoundher,thenbegansearchingthebackshed,whichwashugeandfilledwithcardboardboxesfullofjunkandemptytea-chests

（茶葉箱）.Afteraboutanhourofmovingcardboardboxesfromoneplaceto

anotherandbackagain,Iwastiredout.Isatdownonanupturnedtea-chesttohavearestwhenIheardfaintmewing

（喵）.

Iputmyheadupagainsteachofthetea-chests,pressingmyearagainsttheplywood

（夾板）

soIcouldcatchthefaintsounds.IhadtomoveeachonecarefullybeforeIcouldlookinside.Para1:

Finally,IfoundSockyandherthreetinykittens.Para2:

Sockywasverypleasedtoseemeandpurred

（發(fā)出呼嚕聲）

asloudlyasshecould.

二、原文難點梳理3.Garage名詞，車庫4.Shed名詞，小屋，庫房1.Sitstill坐著不動，這里stil作形容詞，靜止的2.Shelterherself動詞，為..提供庇護處三、拉波夫敘事結(jié)構(gòu)分析原文新家、新生活與尋找失蹤的貓Socky敘述了搬家到Ouyen,Victoria的新環(huán)境，以及主角與Socky的深厚情感。時間背景設(shè)定在一個寒冷的冬季早晨，為Socky的失蹤和隨后的尋找行動提供了鋪墊。明線:Socky的失蹤和主角的尋找行動。暗線:主角對Socky的擔憂和對她的情感深度。細節(jié):Socky懷孕了，她以前也曾在奇怪的地方生下小貓，主角對Socky的尋找過程詳細描述。進展---Socky的失蹤與主角的尋找高潮--主角最終在后棚的茶葉箱里找到了Socky和她的三只小貓，Socky對主角的出現(xiàn)感到非常高興，發(fā)出呼嚕聲。主題：故事通過主角與寵物Socky的情感紐帶，反映了人與寵物之間深厚的情感聯(lián)四、情緒發(fā)展：從擔憂到欣---興奮，激動心理發(fā)展：1.感受到生命的堅韌和母愛的偉大。2.體驗到人與動物伙伴之間不可動搖的愛、信任、連接四、原創(chuàng)下水文Para1:

Finally,IfoundSockyandherthreetinykittens.1)Socky

和她的小貓依偎在棚子最遠的角落里，躲在一堆布滿灰塵的舊茶柜后面。Nestling

in

thefarthestcorner

oftheshed,Sockyandherkittens

hiddenbehind

astackof

old,

dusty

tea-chests.2)盡管外面的冬天很冷，但小毛球擠在索基身邊的景象牽動著我的心弦。Thesightof

the

littlefurballs

huddlingtogether

besideSocky,

despitethebitingcold

ofthewinteroutside,

tuggedatmyheartstrings.3)這些新生兒出生僅幾天，就證明了生命的韌性以及母親與孩子之間持久的紐帶。Thenewborns,

barelyafewdaysold,were

atestamentto

life'sresilience

and

theenduringbondbetweenamotherandherchildren.4)過去幾天里纏繞在我胃里的擔憂立刻消失了，取而代之的是對這個勇敢的小家庭的強烈感情。Theworrythathad

knottedmystomach

forthepastdays

dissolvedinstantly,

replacedby

anoverwhelmingsurgeof

affection

forthissmall,bravefamily.Para2:

Sockywasverypleasedtoseemeandpurred

（發(fā)出呼嚕聲）

asloudlyasshecould.5)Socky眼中的感激之情，讓每一刻的擔心和尋找都值得。ThegratitudeinSocky'seyes

made

everymomentofworryandsearch

worthit.6)當我輕輕地伸出手去撫摸她的頭時，她用鼻子蹭了蹭我的手，她的愛和信任的姿態(tài)清晰可見。AsI

gentlyextendedmyhand

to

strokeherhead,she

nuzzledmyhand,her

gestureofaffectionandtrustclear.7)然后我拿出隨身攜帶的食物殘渣，溫柔地喂它們。IthentookoutthefoodscrapsIhadbroughtalong,feedingthem

withatenderness.8)在確定它們都吃完之后，我把它們抱起來帶回了家，我的心里充滿了一陣興奮Afterensuringtheyhadalleaten,I

scoopedthemup

andcarriedthembacktoourhome,myheart

brimmingwith

asurgeofexhilaration.9)這一刻，質(zhì)樸的情感和團聚的喜悅交織在一起，有力地提醒著人們，人類和動物伴侶之間存在著堅定不移的愛。Thismoment,

ablendof

rawemotion

and

thejoyofreunion,was

apowerfulreminderof

the

unwaveringlovethatexistedbetween

humansandtheir

animalcompanions.五．語言積累：thefarthestcorner最遠的角落hiddenbehindastackof隱藏在一堆..后面布滿灰塵的dustyThesightof...tuggedatmyheartstrings...的景象觸動了我的心弦thelittlefurballs小毛球擠在一起huddlingtogetherdespitethebitingcold盡管寒風刺骨Thenewborns新生的僅僅幾天大barelyafewdaysold是...的證明atestamenttolife'sresilience生命的韌性theenduringbondbetweenamotherandherchildren母親與孩子們之間持久的紐帶knottedmystomach使我的胃感到緊繃立刻消失dissolvedinstantly被....替代replacedbyaffection深情Made..worthit使...變得值得gentlyextendedmyhand輕輕伸出我的手strokeherhead撫摸她的頭用鼻子蹭我的手nuzzledmyhandgestureofaffectionandtrustclear表現(xiàn)出