主題語境下的活用（讀后續(xù)寫）

ContinuationWriting素材活用主題語境下的歷年浙江高考續(xù)寫Jane與老公吵架，森林中迷路，脫險(xiǎn)，醒悟。人與自我18年6月20年1月17年11月17年6月16年11月Mac狼口脫險(xiǎn)。人與自然（動(dòng)物）我騎馬遇兔受驚，迷路，最后根據(jù)自然的線索安全返回。人與自然我們與粗心的媽媽旅行，忘帶東西，迷路，最后卻依然享受到了旅途中的美。人與自我、人與自然Poppy（狗）、小狗和小主人之間的情感故事人與自然（動(dòng)物）人與自然:動(dòng)物人與自然：火災(zāi)救人人與自我：球類比賽素材活用素材活用：人與自然:動(dòng)物eareyenosemouth;tongueleg;pawfurwingtailCWMleg:拖著皮帶tugathisleash在我身邊蹦蹦跳跳jumpaboutme跳躍著跑bound在我腳邊搖晃cradleagainstmyfeet素材活用：人與自然:動(dòng)物nose:嗅sniff;出聲嗅snuffmouth;tongue:打鼾snore;舔我的臉lickmyfacefur:

梳理毛發(fā)brushthefurwing:猛烈撲棱：thrash拍打翅膀：flapthewings

tail：搖尾巴wagthetailpaw:

摩擦腳掌rubthepawsCWM狗吠：woof狂吠出尖銳的警告聲barkasharpwarning貓叫：meow鳥鳴：tweet鳥尖叫：screech;shriek馬嘶：whinny,neigh豬哼：oink牛哞：moo雞咯咯：cluck鴨嘎嘎：quack獅吼：growl;roarSOUNDWatchandPracticeChooseonescenethatinterestsyoumosttodescribeindetail.(14scenes)PossibleVersion【DOG】Thepuppywasthrilledtoexpecthismasteratthedoor.Atthesightofhismaster,hebarkedasagreeting,bouncedacrosstheroomandtwirledroundandroundwithexhilaration,bumpingagainsttheteatableaswellasthearmchair.Inaflash,hebroughtinhermouthapairofslippers,wagginghistailsrapidly,eagerlyanticipatinghismaster'srecognition.【CAT】Thekittenlayidlyonthematasifexpectingherownertohugher.Sureenough,theownersweptherupinherarms,strokedherfuraffectionatelyandbeamedathertenderly.Playfulandpettish,thekittensnappedatthefingerofherownerandbititslightly.Soon,shelickedthefingertamelytohowherfriendliness.Thekittenandherowner,theybothwerebathedinanatmosphereofamity.素材活用：人與自然:火災(zāi)救人Whatcanyouseeorhearbeforeenteringtheburninghouse?Whatwillmeetyouwhenyouareintheburninghouse?Howcanyousavepeoplewhenyouareintheburninghouse?WatchandDiscussWatchthevideoandanswerthequestions.素材活用：人與自然:火災(zāi)救人Whatcanyouseeorhearbeforeenteringtheburninghouse?Smokebillowedfromtheburninghouses.Thehousewasbathedinanimmensestreamofflame.Theroaringfireswallowedthewholehouse.Theairwasfilledwiththick,blacksmoke,thesoundsofsirens,peoplescreamingandglassbreaking.素材活用：人與自然:火災(zāi)救人Whatwillmeetyouwhenyouareintheburninghouse?Enteringtheburninghousewaslike“runningintoabucketofblackpaint”.Hewasmetbyintenseheat.Blindedbythe

densesmoke,hestumbledtofeelhisway.Thethicksmokecausedhimtostumbleblindlyaround,burnedhiseyes,andmadeitimpossibletobreathe.Histhroatandlungsburned

asifhe’dinhaledfireinsteadofthesmokeandashintheair.Everyblinkstunghiseyes.Allhecouldhearwasthecracklingandpoppingofburningwood.素材活用：人與自然:火災(zāi)救人Howcanyousavepeoplewhenyouareintheburninghouse?Thenasoftbutdistinctmoan

emerged.Stillunabletosee,Surrellfelltohiskneesonthehotwoodfloor.Hecrawledtowardthesound,feelingaroundforanysignofthegirl.HepulledTiaratowardshimwithfullstrength.Herbodywaslimp(柔軟無力的)andshewasn’tbreathing.Hescooped(抱起)herintohisarmsandstruggledtofeet.素材活用：人與自我：球類比賽運(yùn)動(dòng)員：player守門員：goalkeeper裁判吹哨：Therefereeblowsthewhistle.踢球：kicktheball拍球：bounce/pat/taptheball運(yùn)球：dribbletheball扔球：throw/tosstheball傳球：passtheball接球：catchtheball攔球：blocktheshot得分：score/scoreagoal保持平局：staytied以2：1獲得比賽勝利Thegameendswith2:1inourfavor.運(yùn)動(dòng)員動(dòng)作描寫：Oneofourplayersburstoutofthecrowdofplayerslikeapieceofoverheatedpopcornburstingfromapan.Withaspeedykick,shesenttheballthroughtheairandtowardsthegoal.Thegoalkeeperreachedtoblocktheshot,buttheballsoaredpastherhand.Theteam,likeasleepingcreaturethathadbeenawakened,camequicklytolife.Insecondhalf,theopposingplayeralmostscoredanothergoal,butweblockedthenetsotheballcouldnotgoin.素材活用：人與自我：球類比賽觀眾描寫：Theaudienceletoutathunderingcheer.“Score!Score!”O(jiān)urcheerleadersroaredexcitedly.Theirstormsofcheersrefueledusplayers.素材活用：人與自我：球類比賽WatchandPracticeTrytodescribethisscene.PossibleVersionTheshotwasunexpectedlycutoffatthiscriticalmoment.Withthekickfromtheopponenttowardthegoal,thefootballerdashedacrossthefieldlikeanarrowtosaveit.He

kickedtheballtoblocktheshot,theballsoaringintheopposite,narrowlymissingthegoal.Again,theopponentlaunchedanotherattackwithamightyshot.Agileandspeedy,thefootballerclearedtheballwithanimpressivekick.Thereburstathunderousapplausefromthespectatorsinpraiseofthismarvelousmoment.FinalTaskOneStory010203MyversionPlot:Oneday,Mikewonthefootball.Whenhecamehome,hefoundhishousewasburning,wherehispetPeppadogwas,soHebravelyrushedintothehouseandsaveit.PossibleVersionItwasdefinitelyanunforgettabledayforMike.Wearingaheartysmile,Mikewasheadinghomeafterheimpressivelywonhislastfootballmatchintheseasonwithfiveniceshots.Farfromhisexpectation,hearrivedathisdoorstep,onlytofindsmokebillowingfromhishouse.Whatadisaster!Hishousehadcaughtonfire!“MyPeppa!”Withouthesitation,Mikedashedthroughthedoortosav