2024屆4月云南省二統(tǒng)英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫助人類-志愿者獻(xiàn)愛(ài)心幫助羅納德先生 講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。LauraMulvihillfelttheridewasprobablyveryunusualwhenshepickedup89-year-oldRonaldDembnerfromtheVeteran'sHospitalinHenryCounty,Georgia.Itwasobviousthathewasstrugglingandinbadshape.Butitwasn'tuntiltheyarrivedathishomethatherworstdoubtswereconfirmed,Expectingtobegreetedbyfamilymembers,shewasgreetedbysomethingoutofanightmare(酷夢(mèng))episodeofHoardersinstead.LauraMulvihill在喬治亞州亨利縣退伍軍人醫(yī)院接走89歲的RonaldDembner時(shí)，覺(jué)得這次騎行可能非常不尋常。很明顯，他在掙扎，狀態(tài)很糟糕。但直到他們到達(dá)他的家，她最嚴(yán)重的懷疑才得到證實(shí)。她本以為會(huì)受到家人的歡迎，卻受到了噩夢(mèng)般的歡迎(酷夢(mèng))取而代之的是《囤積者》一集。Mr,Ronald'shomewascoveredwithrubbish,Thecounters.carpets,andwallslookeddirty.Theroomsmeltabsolutelyterrible.BecauseallofRonald'sfamilymembershadpassedaway,hehadnoonetoassisthim,Eventhehomecarenurseshadstoppedcomingtovisitasaresultoftheextremelyawfullivingconditions.Hewascompletelyalone,exceptforhisdog,Homer,whohadtakentopoopinginthehouse.UnabletocleanupafterhimselforHomerbutterrifiedoflosinghishomeandhisdog,Mr.Ronaldwastooafraidtoreachoutforhelp.羅納德先生的家里堆滿了垃圾，柜臺(tái)。地毯和墻壁看起來(lái)很臟。這個(gè)房間聞起來(lái)非常難聞。由于羅納德的所有家人都去世了，他沒(méi)有人幫助他，甚至家庭護(hù)理護(hù)士也因?yàn)闃O其惡劣的生活條件而不再來(lái)探望他。除了他的狗霍默，他完全是一個(gè)人，霍默已經(jīng)開(kāi)始在家里拉屎了。羅納德先生不能在自己或霍默之后打掃衛(wèi)生，但害怕失去家和狗，他太害怕了，不敢尋求幫助。Mulvihill,however,wasnot,Horrifiedbywhatshewitnessed,shedecidedtotakemattersintoherownhands.Shespenthoursonthephone,contactingthefiredepartment,adultservicestheChamberofCommerceandHabitatforHumanity,Noonecouldofferanyhelp.“Everyonesaid,mentallyhe'sfine,he'sjustolder.Sonobodywillhelp,"shesaid.然而，Mulvihill并沒(méi)有，她被所目睹的一切嚇壞了，她決定親自處理此事。她花了幾個(gè)小時(shí)打電話，聯(lián)系消防部門、成人服務(wù)商會(huì)和人類家園，沒(méi)有人能提供任何幫助?！懊總€(gè)人都說(shuō)，他精神上很好，只是年紀(jì)大了。所以沒(méi)有人會(huì)幫忙，”她說(shuō)。Finally,withallotherresourcesrunningout,shepostedacalltoarmsonsocialmediacreatingthegroup,HelpingMr,Ronald,Sheexplainedthesituation.Shewroteinpart,“'[drovehimhomeandheaskedmetohelphiminside.Helivesaloneandcannotkeepupwithhispet.Thehouseisterrible."Shewentontoexplainthat“themainissuesaredogpoop(1dog)andgeneraldisrepair(norailingonthestairs,soiledcarpetandfurniture,etc)".Sheknewitwouldtakeanarmytomakethingsright.Luckily,shehadfoundone,2000strong.Thearmywasformed.最后，在所有其他資源都用完的情況下，她在社交媒體上發(fā)布了一條號(hào)召，創(chuàng)建了“幫助羅納德先生”組織。她解釋了當(dāng)時(shí)的情況。她寫道，“（開(kāi)車送他回家，他讓我?guī)退M(jìn)去。他一個(gè)人住，跟不上他的寵物。房子太糟糕了。”她接著解釋說(shuō)，“主要問(wèn)題是狗的糞便（1只狗）和年久失修（樓梯上沒(méi)有欄桿，地毯和家具臟了，等等）”。她知道需要一支軍隊(duì)才能把事情做好。幸運(yùn)的是，她找到了一支2000人的軍隊(duì)。軍隊(duì)已經(jīng)組建。注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dozensofvolunteerscameforwardtohelp,withadesiretomakeadifference.————————————————————————————————————————————Mr.RonaldwasdeeplymovedbywhatMulvihillandthevolunteershaddone.————————————————————————————————————————————————————解析：主題：獻(xiàn)愛(ài)心！續(xù)之分解：第一段：

Dozens

ofvolunteerscameforwardto

help,withadesiretomakeadifference.志愿者來(lái)了，那么來(lái)做什么了？（說(shuō)個(gè)123）1：清理垃圾，打掃狗糞；刷墻漆，鋪地板.......2：修繕樓梯扶手，（原文中：房子年久失修）3：物質(zhì)的解決了，精神關(guān)懷，送溫暖，化孤獨(dú)設(shè)計(jì)思路：回扣原文，層層遞進(jìn)續(xù)之分解：第二段：

Mr.RonaldwasdeeplymovedbywhatMulvihillandthevolunteershaddone.感動(dòng)，表達(dá)，升華1：（老人）無(wú)縫連接的感動(dòng)：止不住的眼淚，停不下的感謝，握緊不放的手2：（志愿者和Mulvihill）：贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手有余香！改變別人，也重拾自己3：升華：伸出手，獻(xiàn)出愛(ài)?。ㄈ碎g自有真情在）下水：

Dozensofvolunteerscameforwardtohelp,withadesiretomakeadifference.IttookthemdaystocleanouttherubbishandthewasteofHomer,paintthewallsandinstallthenewflooring.Theyalso

builtarailingforthestairs

toensureMrRonaldo'ssafety.Thevolunteersevenorganizeda

scheduletotaketurns

to

visitMrRonaldo,makingsurehewasnotaloneagainandoffering

himwhatheneededinthishardtime.

Mr.RonaldwasdeeplymovedbywhatMulvihillandthevolunteershaddone.

Hewasoverwhelmedwithgratitude,tearsrollingdownwithoutcontrol.Hekeptthankingalltheguysfortheirkindness,squeezingtheirhandstightlyonebyone.While

Mulvihill

andherarmyofvolunteersmayhavemadealife-changingdifferencein

MrRonaldo

world,

itmadeadifferenceintheinherworldaswell.Whenweextendourhandtoliftothersup,weareraisingourselvesuptoo!參考范文：Dozensofvolunteerscameforwardarmedwithcleaningsupplies,tools,andanoverwhelmingdesiretomakeadifference.Withinaweek,Mr.Ronald'shomewasstrippedapartanddeep-cleanedfromtoptobottom.Volunteersremovedallofthegarbage,theoldfurniture,andtheold,moldycarpet.Itwasjustthebeginning.Helpcontinuedtopourin.Onehusband/wifeteamprovidedfreefencing,aveterinariansawtoHomer'srabiesshotsandfleatreatment,andalocalcatererofferedupfreemeals.Additionally,numeroustradespeoplespenttheiroff-hoursworkingforfree;installingnewflooring,paintingthewalls,andrebuildingthedeck,allwithdonatedsuppliesfromcommunitymembersandareabusinesses.Inadditiontothestructuralimprovements,Mulvihillalsosetupappointmentsfornursesandhealthcaresupporttostartcomingtothehomeagain.Mr.RonaldwasdeeplymovedbywhatMulvihillandthevolunteershaddone.“Heissothankful,hecracksmeup.Hekeepssaying,‘Idon’tknowwhatIdidtodeserveallofthisfromallyouguys,’”saidMulvihill.“It’sgivinghimhopethathewillbetakencareof.”WhenWeTransformTheLivesOfOthers,WeAlsoTransformOurOwn.WhileMulvihillandherarmyofvolunteersmayhavemadealife-changingdifferenceinMr.Ronald'sworld,shesaysitmadeadifferenceinherworldaswell."Iwillneverforgettheirhelp,theirlove,fortherestofmylife.Iwillneverforgetit,"shesaid."Wewillneverforgetyoueith