Unit4JourneyacrossavastlandUsinglanguage寫作課件高中英語(yǔ)人教版(2019)選擇性

Unit4Journeyacrossavastland

Ane-mailofjourneythePrairieSeeingthetruenorthviarail:VancouverandtheheartofCanada

Seeingthetruenorthviarail:TorontoandMontrealWhatwillthepassageprobablytalkabout?Itwillprobablytalkaboutthenextlegoftheirtrip.onepartofajourneyorrace

What’sthetypeofthepassages?TraveljournalWhatarethefeaturesofatraveljournal?The

type

ofthe

passageisThe

majorcontentsofthepassageareTraveljournal.whointimeorderduring

their

first

day；the

next

day；after

another

day

on

the

train；night

came

again；when

they

woke

up

the

next

morning;after…wherewhatscenery/activitieshowfeeling/routewhen——people——time——placesInadditiontospectacularmountainpeaksandforests,onehighlightoftheirtripwasbeingabletoseemanydifferentcreatures....thebluewaterliterallytooktheirbreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.Thebushesandmapletreesoutsidetheirwindowswerered,gold,andorange,andtherewasfrostontheground....Montrealisacitywithwonderfulsightsandsounds.MostofusspeakbothEnglishandFrench,andthecityhasuniqueQuebeccultureandtraditions.Therearefantasticrestaurantsandclubsaround,too.Q3:Howcanwemakethedescriptionofthetravelappealing?languagefeatures?—descriptivelanguageUseaccurateandpicturesqueadjectives...thebluewaterliterallytooktheirbreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.Thetrainthunderedon,throughtherollinghills.Thegirlssawhundredsofskyscrapersofglassandsteel,andold-fashionedcarsrollingby.ThatnightthetrainwasspeedingalongtheStLawrenceRiver.Usevividverbsdescriptivelanguage

accurateandpicturesqueadjectives

vividverbs

todescribethecharacteristicsorstateofthesubjectortoshowsubjectivefeelingtodescribeactivitiesandactionsWritingTaskImaginethatyouareLiDaiyu.Usingthemapandyournotes,writeanemailtoyourparentstellingthemaboutthetrip.Beforeyouwrite,pleasethink:StructureHowmanypartsdoyouplantowrite?Whataretheirfunctions?Whatorderwouldyoufollowwhendescribingthejourney?ContentWhatdoyoulearnaboutCanadafromthejourney?WhatimpressedyoumostinLiandLiu’sjourney?Howdoyoufeelaboutthejourney?Whichexperiencesareyougoingtowriteabout?Why?Westartedin...Thenextday...Wearoseearlythenextmorning...Then...Now...

love,LiDaiyu

DearMumandDad,beginning

body

ending

greeting+purposewho,when,where,what,howcommunicativesentence+signatureCanadamajorcitiesgeographyweathercultureagriculturetransportationlanguageWhatdoyoulearnaboutCanadafromthejourney?DearDadandMum,___para.1_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________para.2_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________para.3__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,DaiyugreetingpurposebodywhatwhenwhohowendingsignatureStructure：Attention:1.mainlyinpasttense2.usediscoursemarkers3.acoherentemail4.vividdescriptions5.trytoreducemistakeswhere審題1.確定文體：這是一篇電子郵件，向朋友介紹一次難忘的旅游經(jīng)歷。2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。景物描寫用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.主體人稱：人稱應(yīng)該以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。謀篇第一段：開門見(jiàn)山，介紹本次旅行的目的地和想?yún)⒂^的景點(diǎn)。第二段：自己的游覽經(jīng)歷，時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物及交通方式等如描述旅游中的所見(jiàn)所聞等。另外，可適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的內(nèi)心感受，把敘事、寫景、抒情相結(jié)合。第三段：旅游的心得體會(huì)，總結(jié)全文，發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。審題謀篇核心詞匯1.景色

_______2.讓人驚嘆

______________________3.在黃昏

_______4.返回

____________________5.一定會(huì)

___________6.參觀，拜訪

___________scenerytakesb.’sbreathawayatduskmakeone’swayback遣詞造句beboundtopayavisitto1.七月七日，我和表妹劉倩乘飛機(jī)去了加拿大，一個(gè)以楓葉聞名的地方。OnJuly7，mycuisionLiuQiangandItookplanetoCanada，where

.2.這是目前為止最棒的旅行，我真的太愛(ài)它了。

andand

I

really

love

it!3.第二天，我們從溫哥華出發(fā)，在這里購(gòu)物，然后徒步旅行。Thenextday，started

in

Vancouver,

where

we

went

shopping

for

gifts

and

then

went

hiking.Thebeautifulsceneryonthemountain

.isfamousforthemapletreesIt

has

been

a

wonderful

trip

so

far

tookourbreathaway4.接下來(lái)，我們乘火車去洛基山脈的路易斯湖，然后乘坐長(zhǎng)途汽車穿過(guò)洛基山到賈斯伯。Then

we

took

a

train

to

Lake

Louise

in

the

Canadian

Rockies,

then

a

coach

through

the

Rockies

to

Jasper.5.這里景色壯觀-大片森林山脈，碧綠的湖，各種動(dòng)物。甚至看見(jiàn)灰熊The

scenery

was

spectacular—massive

forests

and

mountains,

beautiful

blue

lakes,

and

all

kinds

of

animals.We

even

saw

a

grizzly

bear!

6.從這出發(fā)，我們坐長(zhǎng)途火車到多倫多，被加拿大大草原的空曠和寬廣所驚訝。From

there,

we

took

a

long-distance

train

to

Toronto.

We

were

amazed

by

how

empty

and

wide

the

Canadian

Prairie

was.

…7.目之所及的盡量延伸。路過(guò)溫尼伯格后是湖和山，如此美麗。It

just

stretched

on

and

on,

as

far

as

the

eye

could

see.

But

then

after

we

passed

Winnipeg

we

were

in

a

land

of

lakes

and

hills.

It

was

all

so

beautiful.8.我們登上國(guó)家電視塔，看到令人吃驚的景色，瀑布上方水霧繚繞We

went

to

the

CN

Tower

and

were

surprised

because

we

could

see

misty

clouds

rising

from

the

Niagara

Falls

across

the

lake.

9.我們到蒙特利爾老城區(qū)購(gòu)物From

there

we

travelled

to

Montreal

where

we

went

shopping

in

the

old

town.

10.我們?cè)诓宛^吃飯遇到一個(gè)男孩攝影師，他告訴我蒙特利爾及其文化Then

we

stopped

at

a

restaurant

where

we

met

a

cool

guy

named

Jean-Philippe.

He’s

a

photographer.

He

told

us

all

about

Montreal

and

its

culture.

11.這里的大多數(shù)人說(shuō)法語(yǔ)，也說(shuō)英語(yǔ)。最后，我們到了哈弗里克斯Did

you

know

that

nearly

everyone

there

speaks

French?

Luckily,

many

of

them

speak

English

as

well.

Finally,

we

caught

the

train

to

Halifax.12.這是一場(chǎng)美好的旅行，有很多美好的回憶。我們計(jì)劃下周結(jié)束旅程飛回家。It

has

been

a

great

trip,

filling

us

with

so

many

happy

memories.

We

plan

on

spending

about

a

week

here

getting

rested

up

from

our

journey,

and

then

we’ll

fly

home.Timetowrite.

Dear

Mum

and

Dad:

Thank

you

so

much

for

allowing

me

to

go

on

this

journey!

It

has

been

a

wonderful

trip

so

far,

and

I

really

love

it!

We

started

in

Vancouver,

where

we

went

shopping

for

gifts

and

then

went

hiking.

Unfortunately,

it

rained

the

first

day

we

were

there,

but

then

it

became

clear

after

that.

…Then

we

took

a

train

to

Lake

Louise

in

the

Canadian

Rockies,

then

a

coach

through

the

Rockies

to

Jasper.

The

scenery

was

spectacular—massive

forests

and

mountains,

beautiful

blue

lakes,

and

all

kinds

of

animals.

We

even

saw

a

grizzly

bear!

From

there,

we

took

a

long-distance

train

to

Toronto.

We

were

amazed

by

how

empty

and

wide

the

Canadian

Prairie

was.

…It

just

stretched

on

and

on,

as

far

as

the

eye

could

see.

But

then

after

we

passed

Winnipeg

we

were

in

a

land

of

lakes

and

hills.

It

was

all

so

beautiful.

Toronto

was

amazing.

We

went

to

the

CN

Tower

and

were

surprised

because

we

could

see

misty

clouds

rising

from

the

Niagara

Falls

across

the

lake.

Then

we

had

dinner

in

Chinatown

with

Lin

Fei

(she

says

“Hi!”).

…PossibleVersionFrom

there

we

travelled

to

Montreal

where

we

went

shopping

in

the

old

town.

Then

we

stopped

at

a

restaurant

where

we

met

a

cool

guy

named

Jean-Philippe.

He’s

a

photographer.

He

told

us

all

about

Montreal

and

its

culture.

Did

you

know

that

nearly

everyone

there

speaks

French?

Luckily,

many

of

them

speak

English

as

well.

Finally,

we

caught

the

train

to

Halifax.

It

has

been

a

great

trip,

filling

us

with

so

many

happy

memories.

We

plan

on

spending

about

a

week

here

getting

rested

up

from

our

journey,

and

then

we’ll

fly

home.Love,Daiyu篇一：加拿大之旅DearMumandDad,

親愛(ài)的爸爸媽媽，

I’minthecityofMontrealnow,readytocatchthetraintoHalifax.Don’tworry.Iamhavingawonderfultime

我現(xiàn)在在蒙特利爾市，準(zhǔn)備乘火車去哈利法克斯。

別擔(dān)心。

我在這里玩得很開心。here.Youknow,whatimpressedmemostwashowdiverseCanadais.Tobeginwith,Canadaissovastthatyou’reableto你知道嗎，給我印象最深的是加拿大的多樣性。

首先，

加拿大幅員遼闊，你可以在這里experienceavarietyofsightshere.Forinstance,notonlycanyouenjoytheexceptionalbeautyofmountainsandforests體驗(yàn)各種各樣的風(fēng)景。

例如，

你不僅可以欣賞到加拿大落基山脈獨(dú)特的山脈和森林之美，intheCanadianRockies,butyoualsohaveachancetoseegreatlakeslikeLakeLouiseandLakeHuron.What’smore,還可以有機(jī)會(huì)看到路易斯湖和休倫湖等大湖。

此外Canadaisacountrywithmulticulture.HereinMontreal,mostpeoplespeakEnglishandFrench.Andweevenhad加拿大是一個(gè)多元文化的國(guó)家。

在蒙特利爾，

大多數(shù)人說(shuō)英語(yǔ)和法語(yǔ)。我們甚至吃了中國(guó)菜，ChinesefoodbecauseChinesepeoplehavebeencominghereformorethanahundredyears.因?yàn)橹袊?guó)人來(lái)這里已經(jīng)有一百多年了。

IhavelearnedalotaboutCanada.Thankyousomuchforgivingmethechance.IplantoflybackhomenextFriday.我對(duì)加拿大了解了很多。非常感謝你給我這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)。我計(jì)劃下周五飛回家。Love,LiDaiyu(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases1.______________利用2.________________如下3._______________游覽

4.________________出發(fā)5.________________七日游

6.________________欣賞風(fēng)景7.____________動(dòng)身去某地

8._____________名勝古跡takeadvantageofasfollowstakeatoursetout/offaseven-daytripenjoythesceneryleaveforplacesofinterest9.________________和……一起10.________________即將來(lái)臨

11________________乘公共汽車12._________________旅游景點(diǎn)13._________________度假14.__________________15.____________________(了解)當(dāng)?shù)匚幕?6._____________________拓寬知識(shí)面aroundthecornertakeabustogetherwithtouristattractionbeonholiday/vacation入?。灭^）/退房checkin/outunderstandthelocalculturebroadenone’sknowledgeStep2

Listphrasesandsentences.①________________vt.網(wǎng)上預(yù)訂②________________登記③________________提前

④________________同時(shí)⑤________________四天的旅行

bookonlineinadvanceatthesametimeafour-daytripcheckin參考范文DearRichard,ThankyouforyourletteraboutyourtripinXi'an,

whichisamazing.Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyplansforthecomingholidays.

WiththeNationalDaycoming,IamgoingtotraveltoHainanIslandtoseeitsbeautifulscenerywithmyfamily.Wewillspend6daysthere,fromOct.1thtoOct.6th.

It’sbecauseofitsbeautifulscenerythat

wechoosetotraveltoHainanIsland.Otherthanhikingontheisland,wehaveplanedmanyotheractivitieslikesurfinginthewater,spendingthenightsinthetents.Iamsurewewillhaveawonderfulholiday.Inmyopinion,travelcannotonlyenrichmyknowledge,butalsobroadenmyhorizons.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua

1.我聽說(shuō)它是一個(gè)令人驚嘆的景點(diǎn)，我迫不及待的想去。2.對(duì)于我來(lái)說(shuō)，兵馬俑的故事幾乎令人難以置信。3.我們還計(jì)劃去西安的其他幾個(gè)地方。I'veheardthatitisanamazingsight,andIcan'twaittogo.Tome,thestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.We'realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi'an.4.我爸爸和我都期待去陜西歷史博物館，因?yàn)椤璏ydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,because……5.我們將坐火車，十月假期開始前一天離開。We'retakingthetrain,leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.1.七月七日，我和父母乘車去了四川樂(lè)山，一個(gè)以大佛聞名的地方。OnJuly7，myparentsandItookabustoLeshan，SichuanProvince.Leshan

.2.當(dāng)我抬頭看到巨大的佛頭，低頭看到巨大的佛腳時(shí)，我感到自己是多么的渺小。

anddownatthelargefeet，IfeltIwassosmall.3.第二天，我們登上了峨眉山，那里的美景讓我們驚嘆。Thenextday，weclimbedMountEmei.Thebeautifulsceneryonthemountain

.4.如果我有時(shí)間，一定會(huì)再來(lái)游覽樂(lè)山。IfIhavetime，I

Leshanagain.isfamousfortheGiantStoneBuddhaWhenIlookedupatthelargeheadtookourbreathawayamboundtopayavisitto句式升級(jí)1.用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句改寫句1。________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)改寫句2。______________________________________________________________________3.把句3改成以關(guān)系副詞引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。_______________________________________________________________________________OnJuly7，myparentsandItookabustoLeshan，Sichu