2021年陜西省西安市大學(xué)英語6級大學(xué)英語六級真題(含答案)

2021年陜西省西安市大學(xué)英語6級大學(xué)英

語六級真題（含答案）

學(xué)校:班級:姓名:考號:

一、l.Writing(10題)

1.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOn

IndependentSpirit.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutline

givenbelow:

1.大學(xué)新生報道的時候，都是家長拎行李；

2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因及其不良后果；

3.培養(yǎng)獨立精神的重要性。

OnIndependentSpirit

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledMyViewonAutomobiles.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.汽車給人類帶來的益處；

2.汽車給人類帶來的副作用；

3.我的觀點。

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopicCompetitionandCooperation.Youshouldwriteat

least150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)

below:

1.現(xiàn)代社會中競爭無處不在；

2.競爭和合作的關(guān)系。

4.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTo

CurbSpending?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutline

givenbelow:

1.現(xiàn)在許多大學(xué)生花錢大手大腳

2.有人認(rèn)為社會整體生活水平提高了，大學(xué)生花錢多一些無可厚非

3.你的看法

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledOntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.人類面臨的環(huán)境問題越來越多，如氣候變化、環(huán)境污染、生態(tài)失衡等

問題

2.但許多人仍然不懂得去保護(hù)環(huán)境

3.我的看法

OntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledLeft-behindChildrenintheCountryside.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.留守兒童的現(xiàn)象在農(nóng)村非常普遍

2.這種現(xiàn)象帶來的弊端

3.我診斷該如何時處理這些問題

7.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

StudyingAbroad.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutline

givenbelow:

1.當(dāng)前出國留學(xué)的人數(shù)日益增多

2.留學(xué)的優(yōu)勢和劣勢

3你的看法

8.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealettertoyourparents.

Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowin

Chinese:

1.告訴父母你決定畢業(yè)后去西部發(fā)展

2.說明你做此決定的原因

3.希望父母給予理解和支持

ALettertoParents

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:SalaryorInterest.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowing

theoutlinegivenbelow:

1.1.如今大學(xué)畢業(yè)生面臨的職業(yè)選擇：興趣重要還是工資重要

2.你的觀點

3.結(jié)論

SalaryorInterest

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledSelf-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.大學(xué)生出去旅行經(jīng)常會選擇“自助游”

2.分析大學(xué)生選擇“自助游”的原因

3.我的看法

Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

Inmanycases,theinternallydisplacedarevirtuallythosewhoare.

12.

Manypeoplenowpreferthesaying"earlyripe,earlyrich"tothesaying"early

ripe,earlyrot."

A.YB.NC.NG

13.

Whethertheemploymentofwomenhasledtogreateregalitarianismis

14.WhycouldAdamSmithbethelasteconomistasthefaceonabanknote?

A.Noeconomicthinkercouldbemorehonorable.

B.Cashisveryversatileandenduring.

C.Wewillnotneedmoneyinthenearfuture.

D.Electronicmoneywillreplacecashinthefuture.

15.

TomSchroederis.

A.goodatdefendingthoseidentitytheftvictims

B.indifferenttoByrd'scase

C.worriedaboutByrd

D.willingtohelpByrd

16.

Webecomelessasthetechnologygetsevermoresophisticated.

17.

Withouttheprenuptialtalk,it'snotlikelythatcoupleshaveanactualplanfor

theirlivestogether.

A.YB.NC.NG

18.

Bionicsisnowdevelopedtoaremarkablelevel.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.HeartheMusic,AvoidtheMashPit

ArtistsFindTheirAudienceOnline

MusicianSuzanneVegagotherstartintheNewYorkfolkscene,butnowthe

1980sstarhasfoundafollowingincyberspace.Withfilehelpofsome

programmers,Vegacreateda3Danimatedimageofherself,calledan

avatar（化身），andsherecentlyperformedinsideaworldaccessibleonly

throughawebsite,whereotherpeoplerepresentedbyavatarsattendedthe

concert,streamedlivetocomputersailovertheglobe.

AsVegastrummed（彈奏）herguitarinsidearealstudio,about100luckyfans

satattheircomputersandguidedtheiravatarsintotheonlinesceneofan

outdoor'amphitheater,whereVega'savatar-youthful-lookingwithshorthair

andbangs-appearedonstage.Whenthereal-worldartistplayedandsang,her

onlinealterego（另—）我）didthesame,thoughtheavatar'slipsdidnotmove.

Fansheardtheconcertontheircomputerspeakersandcommandedtheir

avatarstosmileormovetothemusic.

Later,Vegaansweredaudiencequestions,sentasinstantmessagesvisibleto

everyoneinattendance.

TheAug.3event,organizedbyapublicradioprogram,wasoneofthefirst

attemptsbyamajorartisttointeractwithfansinacompletelycomputer-

fabricatedworld.

"Theresponsewasterrific!Iamstillhearingfrompeoplewhowereinthe

room,friendsoffriendsandpeopleallovertheworldwhowerethere,"Vega

saidinane-mail,notingthatshetookanactiveroleinpickingoutthemaroon

blouse,blackcardiganandwhitetennisshoesheravatarwore.

Marketingandrecordlabelexecutivessaywebsitesthatputusersinto

video—game—likevirtualworldsareauniquewaytoreachouttoaudiences,

whoaxeincreasinglyspendingtheirtimeandmoneyonthecomputerinstead

ofatconcertsandmusicstores.Althoughstillexperimental,suchsitesoffer

fansmorewaystointeractwithoneanotherandbandmembersdirectly.

The1980sbandDuranDuranhasreunitedandplanstoperform,aliveconcert

laterthismonthonSecondLife,theworldwhereVegaperformed,onitsown

virtualisland.Afewmonthsago,singerandpianistReginaSpektorbuiltfour

virtualManhattanloftswherefanscouldwalkaround,hangoutandlistento

streamingmusicfromhernewalbumamonthbeforeitwasreleased.Even

fansaretakingpart:AgroupoffriendscreatedavatarsofthebandU2andhas

putonseveralvirtualconcerts,usingmusicfromtheband'srealshowsand

mimickingeverydetail,downtoleadsingerBono'shairstyle,sunglassesand

clothing.

Other,lesser-knownbandsandmusicianswhotypicallyhaveusedsocial

networkingsiteMyStobuildafollowingarealsoturningupon

SecondLifeandothervirtualworlds,suchasT,toshowcasetheir

music.

"AvirtualworldbringssomethingtothetablethataWebsitedoesn't-it's

buildingamoreimmersiveexperienceYoukindofloseyourselfinit,"said

EthanKaplan,directoroftechnologyforWarnerBros.Records,whosaidhe

hasplayedaroundwithSecondLifeforyears."It'sreallycoolandalotmore

funandcreativethanjustputtingaMySpacepageup."

Musiciansareincreasinglyusingthevirtualworldtoholdliveconcerts,at

specifictimesanddates,orlisteningloungeswheretheirmusicplayswhen

anavatarpaysavisit.Thevirtualworldprovidesarichandcolorful

environmentsimilartocomputeranimatedfilmslike"ToyStory,"onlya

notchlesssophisticated.

Userscontroltheiravatarsbyclickingonarrowsormovingthemouse,but

themovementandappearanceseemahitslowattimes.Unliketherealworld,

though,avatarscanflyaroundorbeam(發(fā)射)themselvesinstantlyfrom

beachtourbanenvironment.Sevvyavatarscanevenrecordanexperienceon

SecondLi

A.YB.NC.NG

20.

WhydowecallMadagascaraDarwinianplayground?

A.Becauseofitsgeographicisolation.

B.Becauseitsnatureisstillinoriginalform.

C.Becausemostofitsplantsareendemic.

D.Becausemostofitsanimalsareendemic.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)

21.(35)

Altstrees.

Bitsstonewalls.

C.Itsrockgarden.

D.Itspronunciation.

22.(24)

A.Becausetherearesomanyverypeopleenjoying.

B.Becauseplayerscanbuilduptheirbody.

C.Becauseitisveryfast,withlotsofaction.

D.Becausethevolleyballisinterestingtowatch.

23.

[B6]

24.(17)

A.Shedisagreeswiththeman.

B.Shedoesn'tenjoylongspeeches.

C.Shehadn'tknownhowlongthespeechwouldbe.

D.Shedoesn'thaveaspecialopinionaboutthespeaker.

25.聽力原文：I'mMr.Britain,theheadlibrarian,andtodayI'dliketo

introduceyoutothefacilitiesinouruniversitylibraryandshowyouhowto

usethem.Thefirstroomonourtouristhereferenceroom,whereyou'llfind

allsortsofreferencematerials:dictionaries,bibliographies,literatureguides,

e-yentelephonebooks.Youmayusethesebooksonlyinthereferenceroom

itself.Thenextroomistheperiodicalsroom,whereyou'llfindvarious

newspapers,magazinesandacademicjournals.Thecurrentissuesareusually

directlyavailabletoyouontheshelves.Andyoucangetanolderissueby

fillingoutaslipforthelibrarian.Theseitemsmustalsobeusedinthisroom.

Thisnextroomcontainsthecardcatalogs.Allthelibrary'sbooksarelisted

herebytitle,byauthorandbytopic.Whenyouarelookingforabookyou

mustwritethebook'scallnumber,titleandauthorontheseslipsandpresent

themwithyourlibrarycardatthedesk.Thebooksthemselvesaxekepththe

slacks,whichamopenonlytograduatestudentsfacultymembersandlibrary

staffOurlibraryhasoveramillionvolumesthesestackswhichcoverfive

floors.Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestionsaboutusingthelibrary,I'dbegladto

helpyouafterthetour.Thankyouforyourattention.

(30)'

A.Useoflibraryfacilities.

B.Libraryregulations.

C.Librarypersonnel.

D.Locationofthelibrary.

26.(36)

A.HumanBasicNeeds.

B.MaterialComfort.

C.Food:HumanBasicNeed.

D.BasicNecessitiesofLife.

27.(14)

A.Secretary-Boss.

B.Client-Lawyer.

C.Student-Teacher.

D.Patient-Nurse.

28.聽力原文：M:Lilyreallylosthertemperatthatmeeting.She'sgonnahave

tolearntobealittlemoretactfulthanthat.

W:Right,butyouhavetoadmitthattakingastandneedscourage.

Q:WhatdoesthewomanthinkofLily?

(16)

A.ShethinksLilyshouldtakeabusinessclass.

B.ShegetsangrywithLilyatthemeeting.

C.SheadmiresLilyforexpressingheropinion.

D.ShedoesnotunderstandwhatLilysaid.

29.[B3]

30.(28)

AltwasthelargestcityofAlaska.

B.Itwasacityof40,000people.

C.Therewerealotofwildanimalsaroundit.

D.Therewasnosignofhumanpresencearoundit.-

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.

Thepassageindicatesthatlitigantswholosetheircasesinthestatetrialcourt

maytakethemtoa.

A.differenttrialcourtinthesamestate

B.courtinadifferentgeographicregion

C.federaltrialcourt

D.statesupremecourt

32.

[C8]

33.Whilelearninghowtorunabakery,CordiaHarringtontriedtomakeher

effortknownby

五、5.ErrorCorrection?題）

34.[S5]

35.Let'slookbackinhistorytoanearlierwayoflife.Atone

time,peopledidn'tusemoneytogetthethingstheyneedfromS1.

theirphysicalenvironment.Wecansaythatpeopleusedto

liveoffthelandsamewaywildanimalsdo.IfpeoplewantedS2.

food,theycouldhuntanimalsorgatherplants.Iftheycouldn't

catchfood,theywoulddie.Thatwasallthereweretoit.S3.

Therewasnoneedtoplaceavalueoncertainobjectsanddecide

whatthingswereworthyinrelationtoeachotherIfyouwereS4.

hungry,thenfoodwasthemostvaluablething.Ifyouwere

cold,thenawarmplacewasthemostimportantthing

BackinthoseprimitivetimesitwasnecessarytohaveaS5.

specialform,ofexchangevalueforeverythinglikeaprice.In

thosetimeswhentheonlythingsthatwerereallyvaluableS6.

weretheskillstosurvive.Butassocietybecamemore

complexpeopledependedmostonotherswhowerelivingfarS7.

awayandthenitbecameimportantforpeopletodevelopsome

methodforexchangingvaluewithouthavingtoexchangethe

actualgoods

ThisneedtodevelopamethodforexchangingvaluewasS8.

ledtotheuseofmoney.MoneywasameaningofexchangingS9.

valuewithouthavingactuallyexchangedthespecificthingsyou

wanted.Beforetheuseofmoney,peoplehadtotrade

thingsforeachother,anditwasusuallyverydifficulttoS10.

decidethecomparativevalueofanitem.Withtheintro-

ductionofmoneyallthingscouldbegintohaveacommon

valuethateverybodycouldknowabout.

[SI]

36.

[sio]

六、6.ErrorCorrection?題）

37.Technically,anysubstanceotherthanfoodthataltersourbodilyor

mentalfunctioningisadrug.Manypeoplemistakenbelievethetermdrug

[SI]

refersonlytosomesortofmedicineoranillegalchemicaltakenwithdrug

[S2]______

addicts.Theydon'trealizethatfamiliarsubstancessuchasalcoholand

tobaccoarealsonotdrugs.Thisiswhythemoreneutraltermsubstanceis

now[S3]

usedbymanyphysicianandpsychologists.Thephrase"substanceabuse"is

[S4]

oftenusedinsteadof"drugabusive"tomakeclearthatsubstancessuchas

[S5]

alcoholandtobaccocanbejustasharmfullyusedasheroinandcocaine.We

[S6]

liveinasocietywhichthemedicinalandsocialuseofsubstancesispervasive

[S7]

:anaspirintoquiteaheadache,somewinetobesociable,coffeetoget[S8]

goinginthemorning,acigaretteforthenervous.Whendothesesocially[S9]

acceptableandapparentlyconstructiveuseofasubstancebecomemisuses?

Firstofall,mostsubstancestakeninexcesswillproducepositiveeffectssuch

[S10]______

aspoisoningorintenseperpetualdistortions.Repeateduseofasubstance

canalsoleadtophysicaladdictionorsubstancedependence.

[SI]

38.

[S4]

39.

[S2]

參考答案

l.OnIndependentSpiritWhenthereceptiondaycomesforcollegefreshman

wecanseemanyparentstakingcountlessluggagesfortheirchildrenand

someevenbuylotsofunnecessaryarticlesfordailyuse.Itisoftensaidthat

theyounggeneration(1)lacksindependentspirit.AsIseeit.thisphenomenon

istruly(2)notrareinfact.Therearereasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.

(3)Theforemostoneisthatborninthe1990'smostofthenewcollege

studentsarethe(4)onlychildinthefamilyreceivingendlesscarefromtheir

parentsgrandparentsandevenrelatives.Oneoftheconsequencesofthisis

thattheyoungmaylosetheindependentspirit.(5)What'smorewithparents

undertakingthewholethingmanyyoungpeopleareeasytobetiredwith

everythingwhencomingacrosswithan(6)intractableproblemtheymayfind

itdifficulttocopewithontheirown.(7)Inmyviewcollegestudentsshould

formagoodhabitofindependencefortheyhavetofacethefiercecompetition

andthegreatpressureinreallifebythemselvesoneday.Parents'loveand

carecannotbewiththemforever.Besidesparentsneedtorealizethe

importanceoftheirchildren'sindependenceandgivethemmoretimeand

spacetogrowup.Asthesayinggoes(8)selfhoodbeginswithwalkingaway

andloveisprovedinthelettinggo.OnIndependentSpiritWhenthereception

daycomesforcollegefreshmanwecanseemanyparentstakingcountless

luggagesfortheirchildren,andsomeevenbuylotsofunnecessaryarticlesfor

dailyuse.Itisoftensaidthattheyounggeneration(1)lacksindependentspirit.

AsIseeit.thisphenomenonistruly(2)notrareinfact.Therearereasons

accountingforthisphenomenon.(3)Theforemostoneisthatbominthe

1990's,mostofthenewcollegestudentsarethe(4)onlychildinthefamily,

receivingendlesscarefromtheirparents,grandparentsandevenrelatives.

Oneoftheconsequencesofthisisthattheyoungmaylosetheindependent

spirit.(5)What'smore,withparentsundertakingthewholething,manyyoung

peopleareeasytobetiredwitheverything,whencomingacrosswithan(6)

intractableproblem,theymayfinditdifficulttocopewithontheirown.(7)

Inmyview,collegestudentsshouldform,agoodhabitofindependence,for

theyhavetofacethefiercecompetitionandthegreatpressureinreallifeby

themselvesoneday.Parents'loveandcarecannotbewiththemforever.

Besides,parentsneedtorealizetheimportanceoftheirchildren's

independenceandgivethemmoretimeandspacetogrowup.Asthesaying

goes,(8)selfhoodbeginswithwalkingawayandloveisprovedintheletting

go.解析：(1)lackindependentspirit”缺乏獨立精神”

⑵notrare"不罕見”

⑶theforemostone"最重要的—

(4)onlychild“獨生子女”

(5)What'smore"而且,，

(6)intractable“棘手的”

(7)inmyview提出自己的觀點

(8)selfhoodbeginswithwalkingawayandloveisprovedinthelettinggo”父

母放手孩子才能長大”

2.MyViewonAutomobilesAutomobilesastheproductofmodern

civilizationhavebeenplayingavitalpartinthedailyactivitiesofhuman

society.Firstofallcarsofferconvenienceandmobility.Wecannowdriveto

workgoshoppingvisitfriendsandeventravelacrossthecountry.Fastand

laborsavingautomobileshavebecomesoessentialandindispensabletous

thatitisnoexaggerationtosaythatourmodernsocietyismovingonfour

wheels.Butautomobileshavealsogivenrisetoaseriesofproblems.Pollution

trafficaccidentsandenergyconsumptiontonamejustafewarefollowingin

theworkofautomobiles.Howevertheseproblemsareoffsetbythe

advantagesderivedfromautodevelopment.Obviouslyautomobileslike

anythingelsehavemorethanoneface.Whiletakingadvantageof

automobileswemusttrytofindwaystoreducetheirdisadvantagestoa

minimumsoastoletthemserveourpurposesbetter.Withthenumberofcars

inourcountrytheeraoftheautomobilelikeanyothertechnologicalagewill

come.MyViewonAutomobilesAutomobiles,astheproductofmodern

civilization,havebeenplayingavitalpartinthedailyactivitiesofhuman

society.Firstofall,carsofferconvenienceandmobility.Wecannowdriveto

work,goshopping,visitfriends,andeventravelacrossthecountry.Fastand

laborsaving,automobileshavebecomesoessentialandindispensabletous

thatitisnoexaggerationtosaythatourmodernsocietyismovingonfour

wheels.Butautomobileshavealsogivenrisetoaseriesofproblems.Pollution,

trafficaccidents,andenergyconsumption,tonamejustafew,arefollowing

intheworkofautomobiles.However,theseproblemsareoffsetbythe

advantagesderivedfromautodevelopment.Obviously,automobiles,like

anythingelse,havemorethanoneface.Whiletakingadvantageof

automobiles,wemusttrytofindwaystoreducetheirdisadvantagestoa

minimumsoastoletthemserveourpurposesbetter.Withthenumberofcars

inourcountry,theeraoftheautomobile,likeanyothertechnologicalage,

willcome.

3.CompetitionandCooperationCompetitionisacommonphenomenoninour

sociallife.Wecompetewhenweplaygames;wetrytodobetterthanothers

inourstudyandthereisconstantcompetitionforjobscustomersmoneyand

soforth.Wecansaytosomeextentcompetitionisoneofthemotiveforces

ofthedevelopmentofsociety.Wecanalsofindcompetitionandcooperation

atthesametime.Takeabaseballgameforexample.Oneteamiscompeting

againsttheother.Alltheplayerswanttotrytheirbesttodefeattheiropponents

andwinthegamebutthesingle-handedeffortofoneplayerislimitedand

eachmemberoftheteamhastocooperatewithhisorherteammates.Inmost

caseswecannotwininthecompetitionwithoutcooperation.Thus

competitionandcooperationareequallyimportant.Whileweareadvocating

competitionwecannotforgetcooperation.Pureandexclusivecompetition

leadstoconflictsandfailures.Onlycooperationincompetitioncanhelpus

reachourgoalsandsatisfyourneeds.CompetitionandCooperation

Competitionisacommonphenomenoninoursociallife.Wecompetewhen

weplaygames;wetrytodobetterthanothersinourstudy,andthereis

constantcompetitionforjobs,customers,money,andsoforth.Wecansay,to

someextent,competitionisoneofthemotiveforcesofthedevelopmentof

society.Wecanalsofindcompetitionandcooperationatthesametime.Take

abaseballgameforexample.Oneteamiscompetingagainsttheother.Allthe

playerswanttotrytheirbesttodefeattheiropponentsandwinthegame,but

thesingle-handedeffortofoneplayerislimitedandeachmemberofthe

teamhastocooperatewithhisorherteammates.Inmostcases,wecannot

wininthecompetitionwithoutcooperation.Thuscompetitionand

cooperationareequallyimportant.Whileweareadvocatingcompetition,we

cannotforgetcooperation.Pureandexclusivecompetitionleadstoconflicts

andfailures.Onlycooperationincompetitioncanhelpusreachourgoalsand

satisfyourneeds.

4.ToCurbSpending?Themonthlyexpendituresofcollegestudentshavebeen

ontheriseinthepastfewyears.Somearguethatifthestudentsearnthe

moneythemselveshowtheyspenditisnoneofotherpeople'sbusiToCurb

Spending?Themonthlyexpendituresofcollegestudentshavebeenonthe

riseinthepastfewyears.Somearguethatifthestudentsearnthemoney

themselves,howtheyspenditisnoneofotherpeople'sbusi

5.[1]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmentalproblemsnowadays

suchasclimatechangeenvironmentalpollutionandecologicalimbalance.

Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohumanbeings.Seriousasthe

situationismanypeople[l]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmental

problemsnowadays,suchasclimatechange,environmentalpollution,and

ecologicalimbalance.Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohuman

beings.Seriousasthesituationis,manypeople解析：本文標(biāo)題是“淪環(huán)境

保護(hù)的重要性”，所以盡管。utline中提到環(huán)境惡化、很多人不注意環(huán)境

保護(hù)等內(nèi)容，但這些內(nèi)容似乎都不應(yīng)該作為重點，而只能是不可缺少的

“引子”，作文論述的重點應(yīng)該還是正面闡述“重要性”。

環(huán)境保護(hù)問題當(dāng)然是“老生常談”，但動筆具體寫的時候，卻讓人為難，

可能總是轉(zhuǎn)不出“環(huán)境保護(hù)對人類的生存至關(guān)重要”這么一條理由。如何

闡述理由，使這些理由相互關(guān)聯(lián)卻又截然不同，顯得層次分明，是考生

寫作思路訓(xùn)練的重點。

Analysis

[1]第一段可以把outline中相應(yīng)內(nèi)容簡要介紹一下。

[2]前一句中的讓步結(jié)構(gòu)(seriousasthesituationis)運用巧妙，而這一句

就給出主題句。

[3][4]關(guān)于環(huán)保的重要性，能夠給出什么理由呢?這里只列了兩條：環(huán)

保可以拯救地球——我們生存的家園；只有環(huán)保才能讓我們擁有健康生

存所需要的資源。理由只列兩條時，可以使用foronething…foranother

的套話引出。注意，這里的兩條理由之間沒有重復(fù)交叉。如果舉出四五

條理由，只不過分別說環(huán)保使我們得到干凈的水、空氣、土壤、糧食等

等，雖然不算錯，但內(nèi)容上是重復(fù)的，說服力就不夠。

[5]結(jié)尾段重復(fù)一遍主題是必要的，注意語言上要有變化。本文用到

important,importance,significant和vital等不同的詞表示"重要"，所以

語言就富有變化。

6.Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideEveryyearmillionsofpeoplefrom

ruralareas①pourintocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-

behindchildrenisprevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesof

problems.Theyarenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthe

distance.Thereforemanyofthemareratherweakphysicallyand

psychologically.Besidestheyareeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceof

parentalloveandguidance.③Inmyopinionmeasuresshouldbetakento

solvetheproblem.FirstlybothpeopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshould

endeavortoofferloveandconcerntothesechildren.Theparentsinparticular

shouldnotmakemoney(3)atthesacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.

Secondlypoliciesshouldbeimplementedsothatchildrenfromcountryside

canalso③haveaccesstoeducationalopportunitiesmedicalcareandother

servicesinthecity.Finallyitisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareas

sothatpeoplecangetwell-paidjobsneartheirhomes.Left-behindChildren

intheCountrysideEveryyear,millionsofpeoplefromruralareas①pour

intocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-behindchildrenis

prevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesofproblems.They

arenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthedistance.Therefore,

manyofthemareratherweakphysicallyandpsychologically.Besides,they

areeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceofparentalloveandguidance.③In

myopinion,measuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.Firstly,both

peopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshouldendeavortoofferloveandconcern

tothesechildren.Theparentsinparticularshouldnotmakemoney③atthe

sacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.Secondly,policiesshouldbe

implementedsothatchildrenfromcountrysidecanalso③haveaccessto

educationalopportunities,medicalcareandotherservicesinthecity.Finally,

itisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareas,sothatpeoplecangetwell-

paidjobsneartheirhomes.解析：［寫作點撥］①審題及布局。根據(jù)提綱，

這篇作文的第一段闡述現(xiàn)象，第二段闡明此現(xiàn)象的弊端，第三段提出解

決辦法。這三個部分的論述要有側(cè)重點，我們可以把重點放在第二段或

第三段。第一段闡明留守兒童現(xiàn)象是隨著大批進(jìn)城務(wù)工者的出現(xiàn)而出現(xiàn)

的。第二段闡述留守兒童所遭遇的問題：缺少父母的關(guān)愛，他們的身心

都很有可能得不到健康的發(fā)展。第三段可以根據(jù)弊端的根源即缺少關(guān)愛

人手，提出一系列建議，讓他們感受到關(guān)愛，得以健康成長。②語言。

這篇文章討論的是當(dāng)前的情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時即可。在第二、三段的論

述中，為了達(dá)到表意清晰，邏輯性強，要使用各種關(guān)聯(lián)詞，同時注意用

詞的鮮明、準(zhǔn)確。

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nearyouworryalotaboutmyjob.HereI'mwritingtotellyouthatI'mdeA

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