讀后續(xù)寫The Hidden Treasure(公開課)

ContinuationWriting2021/5/91Treasurepositiveattitudefriendshipmoneyjewelryloveknowledge2021/5/92ReadingThe

Hidden

Treasure

1.Whatwasthehiddentreasure?2.Howwasitdiscovered?…2021/5/93Fastreading4.Whatisthemessageconveyedinthepassage?2.Whoarethecharactersinvolved?1.What’sthestyleofthecontext?

3.What’sthehiddentreasure?

2021/5/94Fastreading2.Whoarethecharactersinvolved?1.What’sthestyleofthecontext?

A.NarrationB.ArgumentationC.ExpositionOldManDonovan,AnnandI,andhisfamily.Narration

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（議論文）(說明文)2021/5/953.What’sthehiddentreasure?

Thesweet,kindheart.4.Whatisthemessageconveyedinthepassage?Don’tjudgeaheartuntilyouknowit.2021/5/961.Whatisthefirsttreasurementioned?2.Whatdidchildrendoabouthistreasure?3.WhatdidDonovandotothechildrenwhostolehisfruit?ReadforcomprehensionPara.1---34.Whatwasourattitudetohim?2021/5/97Readforcomprehension1.Whatisthefirsttreasurementioned?2.Whatdidchildrendoabouthistreasure?Hisbeautifulfruit.They,drawnbythefruit,stoleit.2021/5/983.WhatdidDonovandotothechildrenwhostolehisfruit?Hethrewrocksandevenshotatthem.Wewereinfluencedbythe________.4.Whatwasourattitudetohim?rumorsnegativeWehelda________attitudetohim.2021/5/991.Howdidwegobackhomethatday?2.Howdidwefeelwhenhestoppedus?Para.4--53.Howdidwefeelwhenheofferedusapples?2021/5/9101.Howdidwegobackhomethatday?Wewenthomethroughhisfarm.2.Howdidwefeelwhenhestoppedus?Wewereextremely__________.frightened3.Howdidwefeelwhenheofferedusapples?Wefeltquite_________.surprised2021/5/911Para.61.Whatdidwedotogetherastimewenton?(1)Hekepton…(2)Wetalkedtohimforhours.Wewereimpressedwithhimby_____________.communication2021/5/912wefrightened

surprised

concernedsweet,kindheartOldManrumorsmisunderstoodexperiencegottoknowcommunicationunderstoodWetooka_________attitudetowardsOldManDonovan.positive2021/5/913Whichofthefollowingsentencescanbestconveythetheme?A.Afaithfulfriendishardtofind.B.Wisdomismoretobeenviedthanriches.C.Ahumanbeingcanalterhislifebyalteringattitudes.CriticalthinkingC.Ahumanbeingcanalterhislifebyalteringattitudes.D.Themanproposes,theGoddisposes.2021/5/914Unfortunately,hisfamilyneverseemedtoenjoyourcompany.Theyneversmiledorwelcomedusin.negativeItcanbeinferredthathisfamilyhada_______attitudetowardsus.2021/5/915PredictionAdvice:Theendingshouldbepositive.Wouldthefamilychangetheirattitudetowardsusaswealteredourattitudetooldman?How?2021/5/916Paragraph7:Everysummer,wewouldvisitMr.Donovanandtalktohim._______ContinuationwritingMr.DonovanWeHisfamilyillnessParagraph8:Thenextwinter,wordgotaroundthat

OldManDonovan

haddied._____________…attitudeAdvice:makesurethestorydevelopslogicallyandreasonably.2021/5/917Possibleversion

Everysummer,wewouldvisitMr.Donovanandtalktohim.Hetoldusdifferentkindsofstorieswewerefondof.Butonesummer,weheardthathewashospitalizedbecausehewassickwithhisthroat.Findingoutthathewasdischargedfromthehospital,wewenttovisithimrightaway.Thefamilyreceivedus.Whenaskedabouthisillness,theytoldusnottoworrytoomuch.Whenweweretoleave,surprisingly,theyofferedussomelusciousfruitandaskedustovisithimasusual.2021/5/918Paragraph8:Thenextwinter,wordgotaroundthat

OldManDonovan

haddied._____________weWeHisfamilysadness…attitude2021/5/919PossibleversionThenextwinter,wordgotaroundthat

OldManDonovan

haddied.Hearingthebadnews,AnnandIcouldn’tholdbackourtears.Wewereheartbrokenanddecidedtogotothefuneral.Whenwegottothefuneral,wesawalotoffamiliarfacesfromtheneighborhood.Thefamilykindlygreetedusandsaidtheyweresogladwehadcome.AtthemomentwhenwehadtosaygoodbyetoMr.Donovan,ouroldfriend,forever,weallweptmournfully,butourwonderfulmemoriesofhimcomfortedus.2021/5/920Asuccessfulstorymessage(positive)development(reasonable)(picturesque)language

2021/5/921sadnessWecouldn’tholdbackourtears.weallweptmournfully.止不住眼淚悲傷的哭泣我們的心像針扎一樣痛Wehadpainsofneedlesstabbingourhearts.Advice:tellone’sfeelingsbyme